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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 20 2012, 02:14 AM (238 Views) | |
| Itachi Uchiha | Nov 20 2012, 02:14 AM Post #1 |
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Story Type: Fan Fiction Language: Indonesia Rating: T Genre: Romance Summary: Ken , Sorang Anak Berumur 14 Tahun Bersama Temannya , Shinku , Mendatangi Sebuah Kuil Di Sebuah Daerah Terpencil Dekat Kotanya , Sialnya ,.. Sang Pemilik Kuil Menjebak Ken Dan Shinku Dengan Berbagai Tipuan Yang Dia Miliki Apakah ken Dan Shinku Akan Selamat ?? WARNING!! Pengenalan TOkoh Ken : Bocah Biasa Berumur 14 Tahun ,.. Tetapi Ia Memiliki Semangat Yang Tinggi Dan Sangat Pantang Menyerah , Tokoh Laki Laki Utama Di Fict Ini Shinku : Gadis Yandere Berumur 14 Tahun , Berpakaian Merah Dan Selalu Ingin Melindungi Seorang Ken , Dia Bagaikan Mesin Pembunuh Jika Dibutuhkan Akira : Teman Ken Yang Ditahan Oleh Pemilik Kuil Sebagai Sandera ,.. Sebenarnya Ia Adalah Orang Yang Sangat Bersemangat ,.. Tetapi Karena Ia Stress , Dia Menjadi Pendiam Dan Agak Tertutup Bagaimana ? Ada Yang Tertarik ? Jika Ya ,.. Akan Saya Buat Fic Nya =.=
Edited by Itachi Uchiha, Nov 20 2012, 04:19 AM.
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"Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ![]() Set Request Available WO Bar Request Open Sig And Ava Have Made By Myself ![]() ![]() ![]() Elesis Fanbar By Me , The Others By Daikyo-san Sebuah Cerita Gajelas Chapter 1 (Part 2 : Dating) < UPDATED | |
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| JiidoIRL | Nov 20 2012, 05:11 AM Post #2 |
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So, I am confused with Dead Apple
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Wah...berarti fict ini itu versi lainnya Mirai Nikki gitu? ada diarynya tidak? Saya mau baca ceritanya hahaha ^^ |
![]() Fanfiction: FFn site Twitter: Twitter CA I did say I'm willing to die for one man but, turns out its like a dozen of them. And most importantly, two women stood on top of 'em all. | |
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| Itachi Uchiha | Nov 20 2012, 05:18 AM Post #3 |
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@^ You Will Know That Later ,.. Senpai ,.. XD Ada Sih Kalo Diary Gitu,.. Cuma ya Gak Terlalu Mirip Sama Mirai Nikki |
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"Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ![]() Set Request Available WO Bar Request Open Sig And Ava Have Made By Myself ![]() ![]() ![]() Elesis Fanbar By Me , The Others By Daikyo-san Sebuah Cerita Gajelas Chapter 1 (Part 2 : Dating) < UPDATED | |
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| JiidoIRL | Nov 20 2012, 05:27 AM Post #4 |
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So, I am confused with Dead Apple
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Wah..jangan panggil saya senpai ^^"... hehehe Ah ya, saya tunggu ceritanya. Btw, dipublish di sini atau di fanfiction.net?
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![]() Fanfiction: FFn site Twitter: Twitter CA I did say I'm willing to die for one man but, turns out its like a dozen of them. And most importantly, two women stood on top of 'em all. | |
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| tungpangtungjes | Nov 20 2012, 06:47 AM Post #5 |
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yawda senyumin yes kk
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Perasaan saya atau ini kayaknya mirip Mirai Nikki, yah? Hahaha. Anyway, lanjutin dong~ hmm nanti kalau bisa coba ketik fanficnya lebih rapi ya
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![]() "mereka yang mereka-reka, tuan dan puan, kepala macam kelapa tanpa air, beriaklah tanya tanpa esensi: jatuh cinta atau cinta jatuh?" Instagram | FFn (1) | FFn (2) | tumblr | |
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| Itachi Uchiha | Nov 20 2012, 07:31 AM Post #6 |
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Saya Gatau ,.. Kok Malah Isinya jadi Percakapan Yang Tiada hentinyaa Prologue Kritik Dan Saran Segera Edited by Itachi Uchiha, Nov 20 2012, 07:33 AM.
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"Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ![]() Set Request Available WO Bar Request Open Sig And Ava Have Made By Myself ![]() ![]() ![]() Elesis Fanbar By Me , The Others By Daikyo-san Sebuah Cerita Gajelas Chapter 1 (Part 2 : Dating) < UPDATED | |
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| Mocca-Marocchi | Nov 22 2012, 12:47 PM Post #7 |
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Art by @moa810 on twitter
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Akhirnya kau bikin fic, susutuna. Saya terharu... Untuk kritik, saya rasa kamu perlu lebih memperhatikan penggunaan huruf besar dan tanda baca. Pakailah huruf besar seperlunya dan gunakan tanda baca secara tepat. Ini penting kalo kamu mau membuat cerita yang bagus. Berikutnya, saya bingung soal entry diary yang tiba-tiba muncul. Maaf, saya nggak tahu banyak soal Mirai Nikki. Mungkin bisa dijelaskan dengan lebih jelas bagaimana cara kerja diary itu di cerita ini. Selebihnya sudah oke, kok. Lanjutkan yaa~ Semangat! Maaf kalau kritikan saya agak sakit, btw... (˘̩̩̩_˘̩ƪ) |
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| Itachi Uchiha | Dec 24 2012, 04:15 PM Post #8 |
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Ini DIa Part 2 nyaaaa!!!! tapi agak aneh sih , saya mencampurkan antara Ao no exorcist dan mirai Nikki Akan Ada Perubahan Karakteristik pada karakter Part 2 sumpah , saya ini emang gak bahkat bikin fanfic , ujung ujungnya pasti ancur ,... *nangis di kamar mandi* tapi yaudah lah , saya telah termotivasi bikin fanfic ini SEKIAN , Jangan lupa kritik dan sarannya!! Edited by Itachi Uchiha, Dec 24 2012, 04:17 PM.
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"Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ![]() Set Request Available WO Bar Request Open Sig And Ava Have Made By Myself ![]() ![]() ![]() Elesis Fanbar By Me , The Others By Daikyo-san Sebuah Cerita Gajelas Chapter 1 (Part 2 : Dating) < UPDATED | |
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| Mocca-Marocchi | Dec 30 2012, 02:49 PM Post #9 |
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Art by @moa810 on twitter
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Bagus, susutuna. Penulisannya udah lebih rapi dan pemakaian tanda baca plus huruf kapitalnya udah lebih baik! Keep up the good work! Aphua? Ken nggak pacaran sama Shinku? Saya shock.... Btw, udah mulai masuk battle, nih. Cukup menegangkan! Ternyata Ken ada hubungan dengan satan, ya... Terus dia berubah jadi binatang apa itu? Ato cuma muncul ekor aja? Keep writing! |
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| Itachi Uchiha | Dec 30 2012, 03:26 PM Post #10 |
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@MOcca : Mirip Okumura Rin DisiniHa--Ha--Ha Aslinya Namanya Ken Itu Shiro , Jadinya Itu OC Saya Namanya Okumura Shiro XD |
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"Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ![]() Set Request Available WO Bar Request Open Sig And Ava Have Made By Myself ![]() ![]() ![]() Elesis Fanbar By Me , The Others By Daikyo-san Sebuah Cerita Gajelas Chapter 1 (Part 2 : Dating) < UPDATED | |
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