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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 20 2005, 11:31 PM (403 Views) | |
| godzilla 5000 | Nov 20 2005, 11:31 PM Post #1 |
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In tokyo japan, everything was normal until,"Godzilla, Godzilla!" cried a man. Godzilla was making his way through tokyo. The japenese self defense force was unable to stop him. But a bunch of plasma balls fired at godzilla and crashed into a building. It was gamera, he came to save the day! Godzilla was angered and shot his atomic ray at gamera. Then he went to go attack gamera but gamera countered the attack and punched godzilla and godzilla punched back. Gamera used his shoulder blades to slice godzilla. Godzilla writhered in ageny then he bit gamera's arm. Then gamera blasted godzilla in the face with a plasma ball. Then the nuculear menace fell down. To be contuined... |
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| godzilla 5000 | Nov 21 2005, 12:01 AM Post #2 |
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Chapter 2 Gamera thought he had beaten godzilla but when he flew away. A blue beam hit gamera. Gamera fell down into a building. A child was falling of but gamera caught the child. Gamera put the child down and went to godzilla. Godzilla was looking away. Gamera went to sneak on Godzilla. But Godzilla know Gamera was behind him. So he lifted up his tail and swacked Gamera down on the ground. He kept bashing him but Gamera rolled away and started to fire plasma balls on godzilla but Godzilla fliped Gamera in front of him and shot his atomic ray right in front of gamera but Gamera shot one plasma ball on godzilla which stopped his attack. Then gamera sliced godzilla's head. Godzilla cried in pain. Then he bit gamera's neck. Then gamera punched Godzilla's gut and Godzilla punched Gamera's gut. It hurt them both. Gamera was in pain because of all he has hit with godzilla. The two were exchangining blows. A news heliocopter went to catch the fight live." This will get us a big promotion!" Said carlos the camera man.His wife miki was on board."listen! I don't care if your from Canada! This is suicide!" While Godzilla and Gamera were fighting, little did they know that a terror far worse than godzilla was about to come. To be contined... |
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| godzilla 5000 | Nov 21 2005, 10:49 AM Post #3 |
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Chapter 3 Godzilla and gamera were still at it. Gamera couldn't belive what he's fighting. This was his worst battle yet. He rither fight irys than Godzilla. Godzilla was geting angry. He used his necualer punch and Gamera used his shouleder blades. When they both hit, they cried in agony. The battle raged on to nighttime. Godzilla couldn't belive what he was fighting, No kaiju had last this long. He respected gamera and he hoped gamera would die honorbley. " We need to know what thre saying. Send in super x4." oredered the prim minister of japan. "The super x4 is off!" cried a soldier. The super x4 transleated the monters talking. "Why are you doing you doing this!?" cried gamera. "Because I can!" cried godzilla. " What do you have aginest humans! They've done nothing to you!" said gamera. " They killed my mother with something called the oxygen destroyer!" Said godzilla. " Maby it's because your mother was attacking them!" cried Gamera. " Well...They've build wepons to kill me!" said Godzilla. " Well maby it's because you are attacking them!" said gamera. Godzilla never thought about that. " Shut up and fight!" said Godzilla."If I can't convince you, I have to kill you." Gamera was charging his mana blast and godzilla was charging his ray.they both fired and the area was surronded by light. To be contined... |
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| Quantum Deconstructor | Nov 21 2005, 11:39 AM Post #4 |
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The Furonic,Atomic,Bubonic,Ruronic Bomb
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Okkk...That's short but please make it longer,it will be very entertaining more if the length was longer but try to make it longer. |
| I'm the Furonic Bomb known as the quantum deconstructor and I hate monkeys in my way cause I'm a Kaiju Master. | |
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| Darkside Rejekt | Nov 21 2005, 03:08 PM Post #5 |
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Molon Labe!
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Wow, theres NO paragraph breaks and barely a page worth of writting.... |
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| Quantum Deconstructor | Nov 21 2005, 05:05 PM Post #6 |
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The Furonic,Atomic,Bubonic,Ruronic Bomb
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yep could we close this? |
| I'm the Furonic Bomb known as the quantum deconstructor and I hate monkeys in my way cause I'm a Kaiju Master. | |
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| godzilla 5000 | Nov 21 2005, 07:57 PM Post #7 |
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The last part is very long. |
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| Ghostwalker2061 | Nov 21 2005, 09:30 PM Post #8 |
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The Girl Who Put Hair on Mechagodzilla
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My stuff is long, this is two short to even have any meaning. First off, suggestion, Word Perfect or Microsoft Word. Learn how to use these programs. Next suggestion, go to KP and read my little thread on how to do proper and thrilling dialog in fanfiction. Kedzie-Chan's Crash Course in Good Dialog Next read this one. Plot Holes: Go back and Rewrite it! When you learn this, you'll see what we see. |
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| godzilla 5000 | Nov 21 2005, 10:19 PM Post #9 |
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Alright! I'll try to make the way you want me to! |
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| EternalMothra | Nov 21 2005, 10:57 PM Post #10 |
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The Mothic Administrator
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Don't forget there's a kaiju writing class here and on KP, if you need any help, we'd be happy to help you there. |
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Click my signature to read my latest fan fiction in progress, picking up where Godzilla vs. Destoroyah left off: ![]() Signature a courtesy from Kiryu. | |
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| godzilla 5000 | Nov 21 2005, 11:17 PM Post #11 |
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I'll join! |
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