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| wolfprincess2007 | May 17 2008, 02:50 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Mayonaka (Midnight) Kaiju Type: Pure Kaiju, Mammal, Deity Story Appearances (if any): Mayonaka, Mayonaka II: The Untold Prophecy, Modra III: The Joining of Forces, The Spirit of Biollante, Mothra and Godzilla: Future Destiny ~Stats~ Kaiju Type: Good Kaiju Height: 70 Meters (SHRINK - 1 meter) Length: 120 Meters (SHRINK - 2.25 Meters - Nose to Tail Tip) Weight: 33,000 tons (100 Pounds) Wingspan: 176 Meters (SHRINK - 5.5 Meters - Wing tip to Wing Tip) Maximum Flight Speed: Mach 2.5 Powers/Abilities: ~ Kinetic Blast - Shoots powerful blasts of energy from her eyes that has a kinetic effect to it. It can knock enemies backwards/push them away, as well as slow enemies for a short period of time. The beams are of a black hue. ~ Sonic Howl - High pitched howl that unbalances an enemy Kaiju. It causes a loss of hearing and dizzyness, increasing Mayonaka's stealth. The sound is enough to be heard miles away, shatter windows and shake buildings ~ Max Flight - 2.5 Mach Speed is her maximum speed she can fly. She is quick to turn and has acrobatic aerodynamics. She is slender, which allows her to maneuver rather quickly, much like that of a hummingbird or dragonfly. ~ Claws and Teeth - Being a wolf, she has very sharp and strong teeth and claws. She can rip through some of the toughest things given the chance. She can pierce metal and crush bones with her jaw and her claws. ~ Tail - Her tail is big, giving it a huge amount of power behind a direct hit. It has the ability to knock an enemy several steps backward. She uses it for flying as well. Her tail can cause huge gusts of wind when swung. These winds can be up to 90 mph. She uses it to help her maneuver and balance when she runs and when she flies. One strong whip of her tail can create a gust of strong winds as well as knock over large buildings and opponents. ~ Night Shade - She can fly into the sky and blend in with the night sky. Her wings turn see through, causing only her black body and her stars to show against the sky, hiding her from view to the untrained eye. When she flies in this undercover mode, she can be seen as a shooting star. If she is in stealth mode, she is nearly untraceable and her shooting star appearance is not in effect. ~ Diminish/Accrue - She can shrink to a normal sized wolf when she needs to. She uses this mostly to fit in with other wolves so she can learn their ways and better watch the world around her. This is also to prevent intimidation when she meets up with humankind. When at her full size, she is 70 times bigger than when in her diminished size. When she is in her wolf form, she has no wings, her stars dissipate into black fur and her eyes are amber in color. No one would know it was her unless they truly knew who she was. She uses this ability to attack small portions of the kaiju she is fighting. When in her smaller state, her attacks are 70 times more powerful, though they hit a smaller area. She also uses this tactic to make herself harder to hit. ~ Acute Audits - She has very good hearing and can hear things from miles away. This helps her to better protect what is in need of protection. She is not easily sneaked up upon. ~ Silky Fur - Her fur is very soft and water resistant. It is also very thick, which allows her to adapt well to a wide variety of weather conditions. It consists of two layers, like any wolf coat. The top layer consists of the 'guard hairs' which repel water and dirt, as well as some of the force of some attacks. The second layer is more for insulation and is very water repellant. This gives her a slight armor and protects her from some attacks. It allows her to keep fighting longer. If the battle were to involve or move to water, she wouldn’t be hindered due to these characteristics. ~ Barking - When she barks, vibrations occur in everything around her. It has the effect of knocking things off balance and makes it difficult to stand properly. It can cause up to a magnitude 9.5 earthquake. ~ Moon Beam - The white markings upon her body will glow with an immense light and she will fire a seemingly black beam with various sized white stars inside it and crescent moons surrounding it at an enemy. Upon a closer look, the beam is seen to be various shades of Dark Blues and Dark Purples. This has the effect of knocking even the largest of enemies down. It can cause much damage and leave scars on some (Scars in all if she does it in her diminished form). This is a celestial power, bestowed upon her at birth. Since this attack has immense power to it, if she over-uses it, she may become too weak to fight. She has to let it recharge before using it again extensively to avoid damage. The recharge time is varied whether it is night or day. During the day, the recharge time is up to 5 minutes (Cloudy days its 3-4, etc.), but at night, the recharge time could be as little as one or two minutes, considering she draws energy and strength from the earth and the moon. Since this attack has immense power to it, if she over-uses it, she may become too weak to fight. She has to let it recharge before using it again extensively to avoid damage. When she uses it in her large size, it is wider, but does not pack as much power behind it as if she were to use it in her diminished size. If she uses it in her diminshed size, it packs more of a punch, but only attacks a small area, so she has to make sure her aim is good as well as her accuracy. In her larger size, she doesn't have to worry as much about this because it is a bigger beam that spreads over a larger amount of area. ~ Mayonaka is psychic, which includes all of the above for what she can do. She mostly uses it for communication between humans (Specifically her Cosmique Fée) and herself. If needed, though, she will use other powers. She is also capable of speaking several different languages. Her mind is very difficult to penetrate and she is not easily distracted from her main purpose. Her mind is very complex compared to most living organisms. She can also maneuver attacks rather well, though this requires more concentration. She has all psychic abilities known, though she rarely uses them all in battle. ~ Like any wolf, she has a very high stamina. She is persistent and will not easily give up. She has all the features of any normal wolf. She can run quickly and for long distances without having to stop and breathe. ~ Healing - Mayonaka has mild regeneration, though it is nothing like Godzilla. She can take energy from the Earth and use it to help her stop bleeding and to give her strength and energy. This does not heal her wounds, only stops the bleeding until she can physically mend her wounds. This basically allows them to stop bleeding and scab over or something to that effect. She uses this energy from the Earth to ease any pain she may be in, which allows her to battle on, given the fact she may have potentially lethal or terrible wounds. She can use the elements of the Earth to heal the Earth when it is needed. She cannot bring things back from the dead, but she can give strength to things that are feeble, such as dying plants and animals. This also helps with her stamina. Strengths/Weaknesses: Strengths: ~ High Stamina: She is not easily tired out in battle. She will push herself to her limits. She can fight for long periods of time without tiring or weakening, unless weakened by a part of the battle. ~ Psychic: Mayonaka has telepathy of her own and is not effected by attacks on the mind of other psychic opponents. Only physical psychic attacks may be used against her. ~ Water: Anything dealing with water is useless against her because of her silky fur. ~ Acute Audits: Considering she has her sonic howl that should effect her hearing, she has immunity to any attacks that are meant to deafen or hinder her hearing in any way. ~ Intelligent Mind: Mayonaka possesses intelligence beyond the human comprehension. She cannot be easily tricked or fooled. She is a quick and logical thinker. She isn't easily distracted or misled. ~ Agility: She is rather swift in most cases due to her slender build and intelligence and reflexes. Weakness(es): ~ Armor: She doesn’t have much armor, aside from her fur. It will protect her from most physical blows, but any attacks with claws, teeth, fangs or the like would pierce her fur and into her skin. ~ Recharge: When she uses her moon beam, her recharging is not the fastest. She can take her energies from the earth, but overuse of her moon beam can cause her to become weaker quicker. ~Descriptions~ Physical Description: Pure black with white stars going up and down her legs. She has light blue and purple wings that match along with her light purple eyes. When she needs to blend in with the night sky, her wings will become clear to help her to camoflage herself and be uneseen to those who wouldn't know what to look for. Her appearance in the night sky would be that of a Shooting Star. ![]() Personality Description: Mayonaka is a kind hearted and loving Kaiju that will defend humanity and Earth at all costs. She is willing to talk to any kaiju and will resort to battle at a last extent. Mayonaka has an intelligence higher than most humans, which gives her an upper hand when facing opponents as well as in strategy making. She is rather confident about herself, though when she fails, she often questions herself and her abilities. Fighting Style: Mayonaka’s fighting style changes with each battle. She quickly analyzes, without much effort or time, how she could best fight the battle she is going into. She will not give up easily and she will always push herself as far as her body will let her, even if it harms her in the long run. She doesn’t give up and will keep fighting until she can fight no more. Mayonaka’s first choice of combat is melee or up close combat. However, if it would prove better for her in the long run, she will start combat with ranged. Mayonaka is more of a thinker. She will wait until the last second to attack or provide a counterattack. If a monster were to charge at her, she would wait until the creature was too close to change course and then she would make her attack. She uses her offensive, defensive and range attacks about equally, depending on her opponent and the situation. She carefully analyzes all situations and all possibilities before she makes her move, though she does this very quickly. She mainly uses her beam and ranged attacks when she absolutely needs to. She is more of a defensive Kaiju and she attacks when she sees opportunity or openings. With her agility and her strength, she uses this tactic to her advantage. Mayonaka will not give up easily, despite any injuries upon her. She is careful to keep her limbs in tact. She will fight to no bitter end to keep the Earth and its inhabitants safe. She will ignore any attacks upon her. When her anger increases, she will attack with brute force, going for already tender spots or finding new spots that have their own weaknesses. Mayonaka tries to teach a lesson and she will only have the first strike if she feels what she protects is threatened. Once she goes into her full out attack mode, she is relentless and she will scratch, gouge, bite and attack every open area of her opponent to inflict maximum damage. She will continue her attacks until she feels she has made her point or until the creature she is attacking is no longer capable of harming anything. She will attack the most vital places first, such as main arteries, organs, limbs and other things that might cause more harm to the creature or to herself. With her ranged attacks, she will use them to help convey her point or give warnings, though she will continuously use them if she needs to. She often likes to aim her beams into tender/weaker spots, such as open wounds, vital areas or even open areas of the other creature. She uses her Moon Beam when she feels it will be most effective, such as when she finds a good, tender spot or an open wound that would provide maximum damage. Her kinetic blasts are used in more minor wounds as well as for aiming to soft, weak, or pressure point spots. She will often attack vital organs. She will use her ranged attacks to fend off other attacks or to deflect blows and attacks coming from her opponent. Mayonaka doesn't like to see the innocent harmed in any way. She would defend the weaker should the time come, though she would also try to find a way to defeat the threat to them. She hates to see innocent killed or harmed and it infuriates her when one such thing does happen. Origin/History: Yaku Island; She was born in a close to normal wolf pack. Her mother was a beautiful she-wolf named Kiera, who had pure white fur and a black sun and a crescent moon on her thigh. Her father was a pure black brute with gold angel wings and gold eyes. She disappeared from her home for a few months, unsure of what happened within that alloted time. When she came back to her family, she found she was more unique in some aspects of them. For one, she could change her size at will. She didn't have a history of that in her family at all. The Moon Beam and her celestial markings are given... Her mother is Goddess of the Celestial Realm and her sister, Luna, is Princess of the Celestial Realm. Mayonaka is the Guardian of the Celestial Realm, as well as a Guardian of the Earth. She searches in her past to discover what had allowed her to become one of the great Guardians of Earth. She now resides on Yaku Island since her home was destroyed by humanity. She doesn't know if any of her family besides her survived. Though she is a young Kaiju of only 3 years, she has vowed to live on and fight for the Earth until her death. She had to call upon 3 teenagers, Sahra Ward, Donny Winter, and Diana Vyner to help her save her Island, the source of Earth's Mana in 1987. She destroyed part of Tokyo in the process, trying to convey her point as the trio went straight to her island to save it. Should you want a deeper look to this happening, please ready my FanFic, Mayonaka! In Mayonaka II, you will read more about Mayonaka and who she is. Sample Battle Scene: (First battle scene I have ever written, so please don't be too harsh I'll gladly edit what needs to be edited with it. If something is thrown at me randomly, I am better at creating her reaction, rather than writing about it. This is the same battle scene I used for the last tournament. I will have a new battle scene when I finish Mayonaka II.) The light fades on the horizon as thunderous roars erupt from deep within the city of Tokyo. A shrill howl echoes across the starlit sky as a wolven Deity comes to the defense of the city. Godzilla turns his head to face the sound of the wolven guardian, roaring again at the sight of her. Mayonaka stares at the beast and lands gently upon the rubble of the fallen buildings Godzilla had attacked. Godzilla blasts his atomic ray towards Mayonaka. Sighting the beam, she waits until the last second before darting out of the way and using her agility to knock herself into Godzilla. The beast topples over into a couple of nearby buildings as Mayonaka's violet eyes begin to glow. Godzilla roars angrily as the kinetic beams hit his body, knocking him back a few steps. He tries to charge towards the Deity, but he finds his movement has been slowed. Mayonaka then charges at the beast and attacks him, latching her strong jaw onto his neck and biting hard. She uses her paws and her nails to dig into the skin of the beast, creating deep gouges and scratches. She releases him as he roars in agony. He glares at Mayonaka for a second before firing his Atomic Ray again towards her. Mayonaka barks loudly, creating an earthquake of a 7.3 magnitude, causing Godzilla to miss his target and struggle to stay upright. She howls at him, causing him to become even more unsteady and takes to the sky, slowly fading into the stars and circles the monster. She slowly shrinks in size as she charges her Moon Beam. She carefully takes aim at Godzilla and fires her beam, hitting him right in his neck where she had previously bit him. Godzilla roars in agony as his wound is attacked. His eyes close as he falls to the ground. ((Can be edited if needed. I’m trying to get my Kaiju stats set up so I can reserve my spots.)) |
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| EternalMothra | May 17 2008, 02:56 PM Post #2 |
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Looks pretty good my friend. There is one thing I would add though, and I would add a few weaknesses to Mayonaka. Compared to her strengths, Mayonaka barely has any weaknesses. And I know that the rest of the Council will probably agree. So try to think of another weakness Mayonaka might have, or a weakness of more importance so it can logically be weighed against her multitude of strengths. |
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| wolfprincess2007 | May 17 2008, 03:08 PM Post #3 |
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Wow, it's hard to come up with weaknesses.. I added one just now... |
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| EternalMothra | May 17 2008, 03:13 PM Post #4 |
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Yeah weaknesses are often the most difficult. But I'll let the rest of the Council weigh in on it.
I would be a bit more precise on the recharge/charge time. I recall doing Cyrstle Ghidorah, I was asked to be more specific on it. So put like seven minutes...or however many minutes you intend. Since several can be a very broad number when you think about it lol. |
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| wolfprincess2007 | May 17 2008, 03:16 PM Post #5 |
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Edited. Again. EDIT: I put that she is a Good Kaiju. |
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| wolfprincess2007 | May 20 2008, 02:50 PM Post #6 |
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Name: Kuragari (Darkness) Kaiju Type: Neutral Kaiju, Mammal, Deity Story Appearances (if any): Mayonaka II: The Untold Prophecy, Mothra and Godzilla: Future Destiny ~Stats~ Kaiju Type: Neutral Height: 72 Meters (SHRINK - 1 meter) Length: 100 Meters (SHRINK - 2 Meters - Nose to Tail Tip) Weight: 52,000 tons (150 Pounds) Wingspan: 176 Meters (SHRINK - 5.5 Meters - Wing tip to Wing Tip) Maximum Flight Speed: Mach 3 Powers/Abilities: ~ Weather Manipulation - Since his most used ability is ice, he can create very cold temperatures in the area around him, causing weather patterns to change. He can create storms and hail when he mixes his cold air with warm fronts. He can cause ice hurricaines and many other odd weather patterns because he does have power over the elements and weather. ~ Paralytic Blast - Shoots powerful blasts of energy from his eyes that has a paralyzing effect. The target is paralyzed for about 3-5 minutes before they can fully regain their movement. During this time, they are nearly motionless and are unable to do much, if anything at all. ~ Max Flight - 3 Mach Speed is his maximum speed he can fly. He is quick to turn and has acrobatic aerodynamics. ~ Rumbling Howl - Very low in pitch. It can cause earthquakes and topple buildings within a one mile radius. It allows Kuragari to knock enemy kaiju off balance and give him the upper hand. Vibrations from this how will confuse any Kaiju that uses supersonic waves or relies on the ground to track kaiju. ~ Claws and Teeth - Being a wolf, he has very sharp and strong teeth and claws, though his claws are much sharper and longer than any normal wolf. He can rip through some of the toughest things given the chance. He makes sure to keep his claws very sharp. They can easily pierce the toughest armor and slash through the flesh of any kaiju without armor. He can leave deep gouges in concrete and even steel. ~ Tail - His tail is strong and considerably thinner than Mayonaka's. This allows a more direct and powerful hit with more force. The force of a hit with is tail is equal to a cannonball amped up to 100 times it’s force shot at something in point blank range. ~ Scenery Manipulation - Kuragari is a master of blending in with the scenes around him to give him cover and raise his element of surprise. It’s much like a chameleon, but even better. He can blend in with anything and everything and become “invisible” in a manner of speaking and nearly untraceable. ~ Acute Audits - He has very good hearing and can hear things from miles away. He uses it mostly to track others. He is not easily sneaked up upon or fooled. ~ Thick Fur - His fur is water resistant. It is also very thick, which allows him to adapt well to a wide variety of weather conditions. It consists of two layers, like any wolf coat. The top layer consists of the 'guard hairs' which repel water and dirt, as well as some of the force of some attacks. The second layer is more for insulation and is very water repellant. This gives him a slight armor and protects him from some attacks. It allows him to keep fighting longer. If the battle were to involve or move to water, he wouldn’t be hindered due to these characteristics. He can handle cold conditions with no problem at all. It makes it harder for those attacking him to get to his flesh because of how thick it is. His attacker would get a mouthful of fur before they would even get near to his flesh. ~ Barking - When he barks, vibrations occur in everything around him. It has the effect of knocking things off balance and makes it difficult to stand properly. It can cause up to a magnitude 9 earthquake. ~ Diminish/Accrue - He can shrink to a normal sized wolf when he needs to. He uses this mostly to fit in with other wolves so he can learn their ways and better watch the world around him. This is also to prevent intimidation when he meets up with humankind. When at his full size, he is 72 times bigger than when in her diminished size. When he is in his wolf form, he has no wings, his markings dissipate into white fur and his eyes are blue in color. No one would know it was him unless they truly knew who he was. He uses this ability to attack small portions of the kaiju he is fighting. When in his smaller state, his attacks are 72 times more powerful, though they hit a smaller area. He also uses this tactic to make himself harder to hit. ~ Ice Beam - When he charges his ice beam, his ice blue markings, including the frames of his dragonic wings will begin to glow very brightly, illuminating the area around him. He then opens his mouth as an ice blue beam, similar to his colorings, soars from his mouth. Snowflakes are melded within it as well as ice fragments. Upon impact, it can cause temporary freezing and the ice fragments can pierce some skin. The snowflakes cause the ground to become slippery. His beam can freeze water and create giant ice crevices. He can keep his footing upon the frozen land he may create, where-as other kaiju who are not adapted to walking upon beyond slippery surfaces will be unable to keep their footing. ~ Kuragari is Telepathic and Telekinetic. These are his only psychic abilities, though he uses them often. They are used as his sheild as well as an offensive attack. He often uses these in battle. ~ Like any wolf, he has a very high stamina. He is persistent and will not easily give up. He has all the features of any normal wolf. He can run quickly and for long distances without having to stop and breathe. He can withstand hours upon hours of running and vigorous workout and still be able to go more. ~Healing/Regeneration – Kuragari can heal and regenerate at a mild rate. If he gets a deep gouge in him, he can heal it over quickly (In about 3-5 minutes) and be completely healed, fur and all. Strengths/Weaknesses: Strengths: ~ High Stamina - He is not easily tired out in battle. He will push himself to his limits. He can fight for long periods of time without tiring or weakening, unless weakened by a part of the battle. ~ Telepathy - Kuragari has strong shields within his mind and other kaiju cannot penetrate it without exhausting effort. ~ Water/Rain/Draught/Etc - Anything dealing with water, rain, draught and the like is useless against him because of his weather manipulation and ability to withstand all temperatures. ~ Camouflage - He is a master when it comes to blending in with surroundings and the world around him. He is nearly untraceable when in his camouflage state. ~ Intelligent Mind - Kuragari possesses intelligence beyond the human comprehension. He cannot be easily tricked or fooled. He is a quick and logical thinker. Weakness(es): ~ He doesn’t have a large amount of armor. He can take more damage than Mayonaka before it begins to hurt him, but even with that, he doesn’t have a hard shell or metallic armor to protect him. ~ His fur is thick and he has a lot more than Mayonaka, which makes it more conducive to fire. If he gets hit with fire, it will singe his hair, which will easily catch fire. ~Descriptions~ Physical Description: Pure white with ice blue circles curving off of a silvery-gray ice snowflake shape that goes across his back under the bottom of his wings. He has ice blue dragon wings and the material within the wings fades from a black towards the frame to a purple then to a blue. His tail is flamed in blue and is outlined in a silvery-gray color. His eyes are dark blue in color. ![]() Personality Description: Kuragari is strong willed and stubborn. He doesn’t like humanity, but protects the Earth, hence why he is neutral. He could almost care less what happens to any humans, but he will defend nature with all he his and more. He doesn’t easily give up, nor does he take lightly to losing. He will tolerate humans, but he would much rather just let them be. He is only kind to a select few humans, some of which are his Elémentaire Fée. Fighting Style: Kuragari’s fighting style changes with each battle as he, much like Mayonaka, anaylzes the best way to attack. He does, however, before going into battle, remain hidden in camouflage until he can figure out what best to do in each situation. Kuragari has no preference when it comes to battle. He will gladly fight ranged or melee, but often uses a combination of both. He can paralyze his enemies or opponents with one shot of his paralytic blast, immobilizing his opponent and allowing him to get close enough to dig his claws and teeth in to cause damage. If his opponent should choose to range, he will still use his paralytic blast to immobilize his opponent, though he may toy with his opponent a bit before battling because he is fast and quick and doesn’t tire easily. Origin/History: Before Mayonaka was born, Kuragari was a part of the Astral Plains pack. Shortly before the mother gave birth, he left the pack, only to watch over it from afar.. a sort of guardian, so to speak. This is where his first connections to the Earth were established. He watched from afar as Mayonaka grew up, noticing that she, too, would be destined to protect the Earth, which gave all the more reason for him to protect her. After disaster struck the pack, Kuragari watched over Mayonaka as she grew and moved on to Yaku Island. He would aide her, without her knowledge, in her missions and deeds needing to be done. After a while, Kuragari realized she could handle her own and he began to travel on his own to search for who he was. He finally ended up in the deep realms of Antarctica where he found who he was and what he was destined to do. Having similar characteristics to Mayonaka, he knew that he was to help the earth from it's evils that tread upon it. From that time forward, he vowed to himself to keep the Earth in the shape it was and try to better it, rather than allow the humans to destroy it. Thus, this is where his deity aspects come. Sample Battle Scene: The town was a mess. Godzilla had tore through it in an angry rampage. Kuragari stood back, hidden within his surroundings, and watched for a moment before leaping with a great bound in front of Godzilla. Godzilla was surprised, but only for a moment, before he lunged at Kuragari in an attempt to grapple him. Kuragari was barely grazed by Godzilla before he lashed out and bit the beast. Godzilla roared in pain as he attempted to shake Kuragari off of him. Kuragari let loose his grip and leaped a few feet back. Godzilla then took this opportunity to roar as his dorsal fins upon his back began to glow. He shot his corona beam at Kuragari. Kuragari moved at the last instance before his wings and his markings began to glow bright blue. He launched his ice beam toward Godzilla, who caught the full blow of it. The ground around Godzilla became frozen as well as the beast tried to keep his footing, but began to slide and slip around, unable to stay standing. Kuragari watched, a wolfish grin sitting upon his face. He was laughing inwardly as he watched Godzilla stumble. He had glinting shards within his body, pieces of ice that had pierced his skin after Kuragari’s ice beam. Godzilla finally managed to make his way off the ice, lunging once more at Kuragari. Kuragari grinned and watched the beast approach before his eyes began to glow and his paralytic beam soared from his eyes and hit Godzilla full on. Godzilla was rendered motionless and Kuragari took this opportunity to lunge at him and bite down hard upon his neck, digging his long, sharp claws into his shoulders and ribcage. Godzilla roared in agony before he was rendered motionless and still. ((I'm not the best at battle scenes with characters that aren't my own. I hope this works.)) |
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| EternalMothra | May 20 2008, 04:31 PM Post #7 |
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Ok, it looks pretty good, although I'd like to see a bigger origin/history. lol. And like with Mayonaka, I think he needs another weakness that compares to his multitude of strengths. I'll let the others weigh in too and see what they think. |
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| wolfprincess2007 | May 20 2008, 05:31 PM Post #8 |
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Origin Edited. There's not much to his history... so it's kind of hard to come up with stuff. |
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| TyrantisTerror | May 20 2008, 06:29 PM Post #9 |
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Hmm, they both look pretty balanced, so I'll tenatively add my approval. |
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| LordNidhogg | May 20 2008, 07:30 PM Post #10 |
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I think they look ok. The weaknesses leave a little to be desired, but really they're not too bad. But, Tyrantis approves and I don't see anything glaringly wrong with them. So, think they're good to go. |
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| EternalMothra | May 20 2008, 08:35 PM Post #11 |
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Hooray for Maya and Kuragari! *hugs Sahra*! |
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| wolfprincess2007 | May 20 2008, 08:42 PM Post #12 |
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Woot! Thanks you guys! I worked forever on them.. X_X |
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| EternalMothra | May 20 2008, 08:54 PM Post #13 |
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We may have it approved, but I'd still work on the weaknessess a bit, like LordnidHogg pointed out earlier.
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