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| Terri's Kaiju; My two entries. | |
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| Terrichance | May 22 2008, 08:45 PM Post #1 |
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This is my one chance for my kaiju to go up against someone else's. So here I go. Name: PARATRON Kaiju Type: Living fossil, a gigantic proto-avian. Story Appearances (if any): Appears in my comic attempt, 'Hollywood Kaiju'. ~Stats~ Height: 85 meters Length: 40 meters (tail) Weight: 43,000 tons Wingspan: 150 meters Maximum Flight Speed: Mach 1. Powers/Abilities: STATIC STRIKE: Paratron is able to manipulate electrical energy, mainly that caused by static force. He can generate this naturally via his plumage, or in a storm, he can reach into the clouds above him and direct the lightning's flow. Either way, when his charge is ready, he mentally directs the strike towards his opponent. TALONS: Paratron, being a proto-avian, has huge, sharp talons on not only his feet, but his hands as well. A swipe or claw usually suffices to scratch away armor, or draw blood. HORNED BEAK: One of Paratron's favorite manuvers is to dive-bomb beak-first directly into his opponent. The beak is extremely hard, almost like obsidian, and can withstand repeated beatings. PRESSURE CRACK: Parrots are well-known for their nut-cracking capabilities. It's no different with Paratron, who is capable of not only breaking through titanium plates with his beak, but also of biting a non-armored part of a kaiju straight through to the bone. DISCHARGE: This can work one of two ways. Paratron can give off a sudden all-around burst of Electromagnetic energy, essentially an EMP pulse. This momentarily stuns the enemy, and as a side-effect, fries most electronic machinery in the area. Usually takes 2 minutes to charge. DIRECT CURRENT: The way this works is if Paratron has his opponent IN his grip. Eletrical energy is injected into the foe's system, electrocuting them. Not a one-move killing blow, but will usually leave the opponent unconcious. The drawback to this move is that Paratron needs significant energy built up before he can perform it, resulting in a charge time of 3 to 6 minutes, depending on the amount of damage he wants to cause. *Opponent should be unconcious for around 10 minutes, although for kaiju with regen, this can be shorter.* FLIGHT: The feathers on Paratron's arms are long enough to support him in prolonged flight. His bone structure is also like that of today's birds, light enough to fly, yet strong enough to withstand heavy blows. Strengths/Weaknesses: STRENGTH: While other types of energy may give him trouble, he is absolutely immune to all forms of Electricity, instead absorbing it into his own system, for use later in the battle. WEAKNESS: Paratron hates water. While he WILL go diving in it for food, in a battle, water is not wanted. It tends to draw away his electrical attacks, and whenever he is knocked into it, it saps him of his energy. The same can be said for anything made out of copper. One more thing. Paratron usually does not like to fly during a clear and sunny day. He perfers storms, as they provide a ready source of lightning, and decreases his charging time by half. ~Descriptions~ ![]() Physical Description: Paratron's hide is blue, while his plumage is a striking orange/red. I might color the picture above at a later time, so you'll all see. Personality Description: Paratron is a 'herder'. He sees humans as something to be protected, but should they step out of line, he will not hesitate to end the problem with overwhelming force. I would equate his intellegence level as something close to Gamera's. He's no mental giant, but he IS capable of moral thought. Fighting Style: In battle, Paratron will begin at range, circling above the enemy and raining Static Strikes down on him. Once he believes the target is either softened up enough, or that the blasts are having no effect, he will close in for hand-to-hand combat. In close quarters, he will use his talons in any way he can, but will only use his beak and his other powers when his ire has REALLY been peaked. Origin/History: Ages ago, on the island country of Tarmankish, Paratron was hailed as the local thunder-god. The people feared, but respected him, as he would protect their land from threats, but punish those who wanted to start wars. One day, a hurricane threathened to wipe out the island, and Paratron went to absorb the storm's power. The hurricane subsided, but the energy was too much for even Paratron to contain, and he went berserk. The isle of Tarmankish was eventually saved by a lone hunter, as he shot an arrow made of copper into the beast's forehead. The energy escaped, and Paratron collapsed into a vally, in a coma that would last for centuries. The people buried him into the walls of the vally, and a temple was erected above his head. Soon, the story would vanish into legend. Sample Battle Scene: On the beaches of the isle of Kookamonga, a slithering horror appeared. A gigantic cephlapod, with a huge serrated beak, made herself known. It was the monster SYLYRA. She slithered forward, and proceeded to destroy beachfront property with the flailing of her mighty tentacles. She was caught off-guard however, when one of the huts next to her was struck by lightning. She flinched, and looked skywards. PARATRON soared above, looking down at the giant octopus creature. It was a clearn, moonlit night, and so Paratron was out of luck for a quick recharge. He bellowed his challenging warble, and mustered together enought energy in his feathers for one more strike. His eyes glowed bright yellow, before a bolt of lightning left his body, and collided with Sylyra. The cephalopod cried out with a shrill gurgle *I'm sorry, but that's the only way to describe her cry,* as she felt her flesh being cooked alive. The onslaught lasted only a second more, and then she was left to collapse. Defiant however, she rose to her tentacles, and gurgled at her attacker. Paratron warbled back, and angled himself for a nose-dive. His arms folded in, and he plummeted beak-first towards his opponent. However, before he impacted, Sylyra let loose a nasty surprise. A fountain of ink suddenly came forth from her beak, and Paratron flew right into it, blinding him! He crashed into the ground, and the octopus kaiju pounced upon him, tangling him up in all her tentacles. He clumsily got to his feet, and blindly waved his talons about, trying to connect with the creature on his back. He tried to take a step, but tripped over a tentacle and fell over. The avian then decided to roll around on the beach, bruising his attacker as he did so. It wasn't long before Sylyra let go and backed off a few meters. Paratron could move freely now, but his eyes were still blinded by the ink. He turned around in place, trying to get a reading on his opponent. The cephalopod snuck up behind him, and slammed a hit on his back, tossing him out into sea! Paratron felt the jolt as the water sapped away his electricity. On the plus side however, the same water had washed away the ink from his eyes! He stood up once more, and turned to warble at Sylyra, before lighting into her with all four limbs slashing. Bruised and battered, not to mention missing a tentacle or two, Sylyra finally decided to retreat. She leapt into the ocean, and was soon swimming away to safety. Paratron watched her flee. He had no interest in persuring her. He had defended his territory, and the people within it, and that was all that mattered to him. ================ Now for my second critter. Name: BERGONDA Kaiju Type: Genetically engineered snake monster. Story Appearances (if any): Appears in the same comic as Paratron, Hollywood Kaiju. ~Stats~ Height: He's a snake. His length can easily translate into height. Length: 220 meters Weight: 40,000 tons Wingspan: Hood width= 80 meters Powers/Abilities: GORGON GRAB: Unlike some snakes who have many heads, Bergonda has multiple prehensile tails at the end of his body length. Using these, he can grab, strangle, and manipulate anything he wants. CONSTRICT: His genetic makeup includes pythons and boa constrictors. Should he be able to get a hold of his opponent, he will wrap around them, and attempt to squeeze the life out of them. VENOM: Also included in his DNA are the genes of rattlesnakes, vipers, and king cobras. One bite to an elephant-sized creature will mean instant death. To a kaiju, it will definetely mean intense pain and in some cases, swelling of the bite area and unconciousness. *After the first bite, it will take 5 minutes for a kaiju of equal weight to Bergonda, to succumb to unconciousness. Monsters with Regen will possibly be able to fight it off completely, but it will still make them uncoordinated. Once unconcious, a foe should stay like that for twelve minutes, longer or shorter depending on weight.* ACID MIST: An entirely new ability, Bergonda can spit his venom in a vaporized form. The mist will eat away rapidly at skin and armor, and will cause burning and blindness in the eyes, not to mention gagging if breathed in. Only Bergonda himself is immune. HOOD GLIDE: Using his hood, Bergonda can spring from a coiled position, into the air, allowing him to glide a fair distance to a different location. SLIPPERY SCALES: Most snakes in the world have smooth scales, allowing them to escape from dangerous situations. Bergonda is no different, using his slippery hide to easily slide out of the grip of most kaiju. The scales are also somewhat reflective, dissapating damage from beam-based attacks. Strengths/Weaknesses: STRENGTH: Bergonda is the culmination of an experiment, to combine the DNA of every snake in the world, into one creature. Anything that any snake can do, Begonda can do it. You might could say that he is naturally experienced in the art of 'Snake-Fu'. WEAKNESS: Begonda is SLOW. Sure, when he strikes to bite, that's quick, but otherwise, his movements are quite sluggish, even by kaiju standards. He's not the sharpest knife in the toolshed either. ~Descriptions~ ![]() Physical Description: Begonda is predominately green, with a yellow underbelly and red striping. I'll upload a colored version of the picture at some point. Personality Description: Bergonda, for all of his strengths, is a mean-spirited wuss. He'll fight dirty, if it means less damage to his own person. To be honest, he'd rather be left alone, but if bullied into a fight, he'll fight all right. Is confused rather easily Fighting Style: He'll start out low, taking any cover that he can find. As he slithers around for a vantage point, he might use his multiple tails to trip up his opponent. If caught in a corner, his usual defense is an Acid Mist right in the enemy's face, followed by either a leap to safety, or a grab to constrict the foe. Origin/History: In the year 199X, multiple scientists were issued by the US goverment to create a bioweapon that could be used in the event that the nation was ever attacked by kaiju. A team of three scientists decided to create a 'supersnake' that could easily decapacitate any giant threat. The result was the giant snake Kaiju, Bergonda. The beast proved too unreliable however, as it would try to escape any opponent that out-muscled it. He was sentenced to humane decommissioning, but escaped in the process. He has wandered free ever since. Sample Battle Scene: In the city of Orlando, people fled for their lives as a wall of scales plowed down Orange Ave. The monster BERGONDA had arrived in Orange County. It soon found itself on Orange Blossom Trail. *Orlando has a lot of oranges, have you ever noticed?* There was another wave of shouting as a new monster appeared on the horizon. As it swiftly came in, it was realized that the creature was none other than the giant pteranodon, RODAN. Rodan swooped over the city ad mach speed. Glass shattered, buildings fell, and Bergonda was buffeted backwards. Pulling his head low to the ground, the snake kaiju retreated deeper into the streets. The dinosaur kaiju flew in, and perched atop a building to survey his surroundings. It saw no sign of the snake monster from before, unaware that Bergonda was slowly climbing up that same building. There was a crash of debris, and Rodan looked. Before the snake knew what had happened, a Uranium Ray was blasted into his face. He fell away and opened his hood, catching the wind and gliding to another building. Rodan was onto him. The giant pterasaur pecked at his back the whole way. What he didn't expect however, was for Begonda's many-tailed end to rear up and grab him by the head. The two fell to the ground, the both of them emitting shreiks of pain as they landed. Begonda, his hood wide, opened his mouth and spat out a cloud of Acid Mist in Rodan's direction. The monster took one breath and gagged, but then proceeded to blow the mist away with a few beats of his mighty wings. The two closed in, and Begondra struck! His fang found Rodan's left wing, and sunk in, ripping membrane and injecting venom. The pteranodon pecked at the snake monster's eye to get free, before taking to the air. Bergonda was in no hurry now though. He only had to wait and watch. Rodan, in the sky, was suddenly stricken with a feeling of dizzyness. His stomach churned, and his vision swam. It wasn't long before the sonic terror of the skies, plummeted to the earth below, knocking him into blissfull unconciousness. Bergonda hissed, his tongue tasting the air. 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| TyrantisTerror | May 22 2008, 09:05 PM Post #2 |
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I don't see any problems. Approved. |
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| EternalMothra | May 22 2008, 10:33 PM Post #3 |
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I approve as well. Great to see you participating.
Btw, Terrichance, could you bold, italicize, and underline all the necessary items required in the stat template? It'd make our jobs so much easier.
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| Terrichance | May 22 2008, 11:03 PM Post #4 |
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Okay, done. Sorry about that. |
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| LordNidhogg | May 23 2008, 11:56 AM Post #5 |
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I'll put in my approval for both as well. Although, in all honesty, I can actually say these are the first kaiju I think could actually use just a little beefing up. Right now, none of their attacks or powers or particularly spectacular, and while they're perfectly fine for entry into the tourney and balanced in their own right, I feel obligated to say that there are much less balanced kaiju that have been approved. Terrichance, if you want, I would take the opportunity to add just a little oomph to your kaiju. It's your choice, obviously, and both have been approved as is, but honestly they could get approved being stronger than they are. You could probably add one to three powers/attacks each, depending on their strength and effectiveness, and maybe one more weakness for balance's sake and get them in just as easily. You don't need to, and don't feel obligated to, I'm just letting you know that you could. |
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| Terrichance | May 23 2008, 09:22 PM Post #6 |
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Well, after reading through the rest of the profiles in this forum, I have to say I AM worried about Paratron. Bergonda I think, is still capable of going toe-to-toe with most of the contenders here, but is it really allright if I added a few more abilities to Paratron, such as an EMP pulse, or shell-cracking bite? |
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| LordNidhogg | May 24 2008, 06:42 PM Post #7 |
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Honestly, I think I would still approve him if you added both of those even without any additional weaknesses. I mean, I've looked at his competition too, and that's why I felt i could tell you you'd be safe pumping both up. As for Bergonda, you really could add one or two things to him too. Since he's slow, apparently not too bright, and his venom isn't that powerful compared to the main weapons (I'm assuming that's his main weapon) of a lot of other kaiju. I mean it's your choice, but think both could be pumped up without any problems |
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| Terrichance | May 25 2008, 12:24 AM Post #8 |
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Okay then, I've edited my kaiju again. I've added two new powers to Paratron, the bite, and two kinds of 'Discharge'. I also re-worded some of the sentences, specifying things like charge times. For Bergonda, I definetely pumped up some of his existing attacks, and added a beam-resistant hide. Are these changes permissible with the Tourney overviewers? |
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| EternalMothra | May 25 2008, 12:28 AM Post #9 |
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I think they look pretty good so far. I'll let Lord continue to weigh in. |
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| LordNidhogg | May 25 2008, 01:30 AM Post #10 |
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Ok, they look fine, I just would like a little clarification on a couple things. For Paratron, when he shocks his opponent, about how long will they stay unconscious? And for Bergonda, pretty much the same thing: how long will his venom knock them out? I'd just like some times so we know when it comes match time. Other than that, they look good. |
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| Terrichance | May 25 2008, 03:34 AM Post #11 |
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Okay, on Paratron. You know that electrocution usually fries the nervous system, right? For Monsters with regen, unconciousness should be the length specified in that kaiju's bio *using Tyrantis as an example.* Otherwise, unconciousness should last like... five, ten minutes? It's a big blow to a kaiju, but I don't want to make it really cheap. For Bergonda, unconciousness is a slow process, due to his venom taking time to come into effect. I know somebody posted venom times-to-body ratio in another profile, but this is how I see it. After the first bite, it will take 5 minutes for a kaiju of equal weight to Bergonda, to succumb to unconciousness, that is, if they're weak to it. Monsters with Regen will possibly be able to fight it off completely, but it will still make them uncoordinated. Once unconcious, a foe should stay like that for ten minutes, longer or shorter depending on weight. Wanna hear opinions on these, before I re-edit profiles to include this info. |
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| TyrantisTerror | May 25 2008, 01:38 PM Post #12 |
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I still think they're both approvable. The instant KO aspect of Paratron's discharge attack could be solved by giving it a longer charging time than the normal EMP pulse attack as opposed to having it hold a kaiju in its grip. |
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| Terrichance | May 25 2008, 10:55 PM Post #13 |
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Okay, I've edited the profiles yet again, including the unconciousness specifications. Hopefully, that will be all that's needed. |
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| LordNidhogg | May 25 2008, 11:18 PM Post #14 |
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Looks good. I appreciate the times, thanks very much. |
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| Zardac the Great | May 26 2008, 08:43 PM Post #15 |
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Just a joke here...and sorry if we're not supposed to do this. It would be funny for Bergonda and Chimerus to both blow their toxins on each other at the same time... |
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