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| Fredrex00 | Jun 15 2008, 11:06 PM Post #1 |
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Well, my first Kaiju...well...more like Mechanoid... Name: GaoMazinGar Kaiju Type: Genesic Mechanoid/Deity Story Appearances: Yuusha Kuchiku Tenshu: GaoMazinGar Height: 79 meters Weight: 2,000 tons Wingspan: 50 meters Flight Speed: Mach 2 Powers and Abilities Hell and Heaven: The destructive powers of Hell combining with the right hand and the protective powers of Heaven combining with the left hand, GaoMazinGar can fuse these two powers by putting his hands together, created a temporary vortex between him and his opponents (which is caused by the combination of powers). If one is to be sucked into this vortex, their bodies begin to instantly compress if they were to force themselves against the combined powers of Hell and Heaven. GaoMazinGar then will fly towards his opponent; hands clasped, and with force his hands straight into the body of the foe. The compression rate of the opponent increases heavily as GaoMazinGar closes in on their body and once GaoMazinGar has forces his hands into the chest/stomach area of the foe; he can do the following effect: -Release all of the powers of Hell and Heaven into the body and cause the body to erupt into the air/sky. A beam of red/black and yellow/white energy is also emitted from the hands and adds additional force against the foe’s body. **This move is only used as a finishing move.** Kaiser Inferno: The chest panels on the sides of the Trinity Galeon’s head (located on the chest of GaoMazinGar) burst out more, revealing another set of chest panels like Mazinkaiser’s. They burn at intense degrees of heat and will fire a wave of red beam of energy that can melt through most armors and metals. Organic forms of life can survive the attack of this sort but are really damaged. And example of its power is like Godzilla's Atomic Ray. Final Kaiser Divider: Falling from the Heavens, a gigantic blade like weapon attaches to GaoMazinGar’s arm and secures itself. The blade of the weapon is a fusion of Trinity Galeon’s Mugen Blade and the Final Kaiser Blade of Mazinkaiser. The blade has the power to cause dimensional rips. For example, if GMG were to slice through the earth in a city, the city would push back and cause a gigantic pit that is used as an area. The surrounding area isn’t destroyed by this kind of rip, but if it isn’t used for protection purposes, it can slice through dozen of feet of earth. Armor and tough skin are easily broken, if not heavily damaged, by a slash from this gigantic blade. Also note that the blade cannot cut an opponent and create a dimension and suck them straight in. In Melee combat, it is like any normal blade. Broken Phantom Smasher: GaoMazinGar puts out his fist which spins rapidly. A golden ring forms around the arm of the machine which has strange markings on it much like the language of the Green Planet. GaoMazinGar fires his fist straight at his opponent which will cause massive damage. This attack can also be infused with the energies of Hell and Heaven for additional damage. Koushiryoku Beam: A powerful beam shot from the eyes. These lasers are yellow in color and can cut through most metals. Spiral/Straight Drill: The drills on the knees of GMG will spin with rapid success and can drill straight through thick armor and skin. Not the most powerful of attacks, but on that can break through an opponent’s defenses. Will Knife: The Will Knife is a short blade, but is housed in something like a foil's handgrip, completely covering the hand. It is created from the 1st section of GadgetGao, consisting only of the Head which transforms to become the Knife. Protect Shade: Just like original GaoGaiGar, the left hand is held forward and a protective barrier appears to defend (and redirect if desired) offensive strikes and ordinance. GMG's left arm also has an array of 'fins' that open around the wrist area when Protect Shade is used. Genesic Aura: An aura of pure power that surrounds GaoMazinGar. The aura doesn't do much, but can block some small spells here and there. Strengths and Weaknesses: Genesic Armor Z: The armor plating that surrounds GaoMazinGar is a special created alloy fused with the alloy of Mazinkaiser and the G-Stone created armor. This almost divine armor is incredibly tough. The only fault is on the right side of the machine's body is easily damaged (Since the GaoMachines that make up the side are called BrokenGao and SpiralGao which mean that they aren't perfect defenses). Courage, Bravery, Valor: GaoMazinGar’s pilot, Koji Kabuto, is fueled by the positive forces of the human feeling. A line that Koji commonly states during his battles “Only the ones with Courage are the victors!” Semi Slow: GaoMazinGar’s weight can hold him down during battle. Sometimes his attacks are slow, thanks to all the armor he has. Pilot Required: For GaoMazinGar to fully work, a pilot is needed. That is where Koji Kabuto comes into play. Once he activates Mazinkaiser, he can fuse with Trinity Galeon to form into Kaiser GaiGar. After that, Kaiser GaiGar can enter “Final Fusion” and GaoMazinGar can fully activate then. Losing Function: Since Kouji Kabuto is only human, he can't always control GaoMazinGar, a god of destruction. At times, Kouji will try to attack or defend against an attack and GMG will not move. Since Trinity Galeon has its own mind, and Mazinkaiser has a mysterious ability to control itself, GaoMazinGar has actually three minds clashing together and will cause the machine to act on its own or even not move an inch. The fighting style will also change depending on which mind is in control. Physical Description: GaoMazinGar’s basic design is very much like Genesic GaoGaiGar (shown Here). There are some minor differences though. For example, the lion head on GMG’s chest is Trinity Galeon instead of regular Galeon. Trinity Galeon, looking like this, has his head instead placed on the chest of GMG. The helmet design is also much similar to Genesic GaoGaiGar’s, with, again, minor details. The horns on the forehead are sharper and broader. The tusks are more brought out more with a second set above the longer tusks. On the sides of the eyes, are teal-green slits like on GaoFighGar’s. Overall, the reason why GaoMazinGar looks so much like Genesic GaoGaiGar is because of the GaoMachines that fuse with the machine’s body. They are the same machines that combine to form Genesic GaoGaiGar. Personality Description: Since GaoMazinGar is just a machine, he cannot convey emotion. Therefore, Kouji Kabuto does the talking. Kouji’s personality is hot-blooded, ready for battle at anytime, any where. Sometimes, though, Kouji can get over his head in battle and accidentally allow the enemy to get on top. But like most heroes, Kouji somehow gets the victory and saves the day. The young man is hardly ever brought down into a bad mood, unless his friends or family is hurt. Kouji has also been known to have a violent rage inside of him that he sometimes will bring out into battle….with dangerous consequences Fighting Style: Again, GaoMazinGar needs a pilot to actually move. But when activated, his fighting style is somewhat brutal on the enemy. GaoMazinGar’s attacks just keep coming and coming, an endless volley of attacks. He mostly uses his fists and kicks in battle, but he’ll sometimes use his special moves a lot. Origin/History: A few years after Kouji Kabuto’s epic battle between himself and Mazinkaiser against the forces of the sinister Dr. Hell, World War III breaks loose. The Mechanical Beasts run rampant across the planet, crushing all living things in its path. But these beasts, that used to be under the control of Dr. Hell, evolved. They became stronger, faster, and even better than before. Mankind’s military might aren’t even a match for the Mechanical Beasts. But one force stands against them. The only force strong enough to destroy a mechanical beast with their mighty fists: The Mazinger Army. They are the defenders of justice, of the innocent, of the world itself. Created from the alloys of eons past, this army of machines consists of the most known machines in existence, Mazinkaiser being the strongest of them all. The mightiest warrior the human race has ever created, Mazinkaiser can become a god or devil. Swinging his might Kaiser Blade, he cuts through the steel bodies of the terrible beasts that plunder the land. Mazinkaiser is humankind’s knight in shining armor. During a gigantic battle between an army of Mechanical Beasts and part of the Mazinger Army, a meteor falls from the heavens and in the middle of the battle. What happens after that is a complete mystery, as the existence of both parties have been wiped from the face of the earth. They now only live on in memories. Data files show that it came from space, though there were strange bacteria that surrounded the area. There were also small, vortex like fragments all around the impact creator, which is the size of Tokyo. This led scientists to believe that it was not just from an alien origin, but of a dimensional origin. But, there was no proof that there were any alternate dimensions or that any existed. Anyone foolish enough to present the idea were cast out of the population and left to die thanks to their theories. After the “Crusher Incident”, the war got even worse. Different countries began to fight each other for resources like animals competing for food. Crime rates increase, employment declines, and death rates rise. The World’s nations all declare war against each other, the victor controlling the entire world. The world had turned into the primitive mind set that was developed eons in the past: kill or be killed. Unity was through straight through the window. The Mazinger Army is hardly able to sustain itself thanks to all of the workers leaving. The once valiant fighters of justice were nothing more than a forgotten memory to the world. Though, they still existed, still remaining in sanity. But things just keep on getting worse. The Mikene Empire, a race of part human, part beast, part machine type, arrive on earth. They join forces with the Mechanical Beasts and destroy most of mankind. Since the world was at war with itself, they ultimately lost. The war between nations is called off and the Mazinger Army returns to battle. One year after the “Crusher Incident”, the event repeats itself. Again part of the Mazinger army battles the machine monsters in an epic battle for control of the war when suddenly, a meteor, just like the one before it, strikes into the earth. Most of the forces are wiped out on both sides, hardly anyone left standing. Mazinkaiser rushes to the scene, preparing to destroy this new foe. But when Kouji and Mazinkaiser get there, all they see are corpses of machines and a strange lion like robot. The two machines clash, both thinking the other is an enemy. The battle rages on, until it is interrupted by a strange occurrence. One of the Mechanical Beasts in the area begins to change form. It was becoming more organic. Something a Mechanical Beast could ever do. Along with its organic changes, it became smarter and even stronger. The beast attacks the two machines. Setting aside their differences, Mazinkaiser and the lion machine take action against the new Mechanical Beast. They not only destroy the beast with ease, but they discover something else strange. Mazinkaiser has the ability to fuse with another machine, that being the lion Mechanoid. This lion is dubbed Trinity Galeon. Together, Mazinkaiser and Trinity Galeon take back the control of the war for the humans. Using Mazinkaiser’s new ability, Trinity Galeon and Mazinkaiser combine to form Kaiser GaiGar. The new formation takes down the machine monsters even faster now, their population slowly beginning to decrease. But as the population of the Mechanical Beasts decreased, the strange phenomenon that was changing the beasts more organic began to spread. Scientists would later find out that it was a special bacterium that was causing this change. Made up of Alloy Z, the same alloy that makes up most of the Mazinger Army, the bacteria is properly called Bacteria Z. But this bacteria didn’t just affect machines, it affect human life. An epidemic arose in most countries as humans began to change into cyborg like beings, growing to the size of kaiju. And once again, the world was plunged into darkness. But the Mazinger Army continues fighting these beasts know too well of what they are really killing, minus Kouji Kabuto. They planet their base at Mt. Fuji and continue operations there. During a battle between Kaiser GaiGar and a Mechanical Beast, the fused robot began to activate a special function. A function called “FINAL FUSION”. Approval is called, and Kaiser GaiGar fuses with five other machines called GaoMachines. Together, they fuse to become the ultimate warrior of justice. The ultimate form of bravery. They become, GaoMazinGar, the machine that just couldn’t become a god or devil, but transcend that power altogether. Something not even a God or Devil could control. GaoMazinGar goes amongst the different countries, liberating them of their mechanical oppressors. But, when GaoMazinGar reaches the last line, he faces the ultimate form of evil. And this time, GaoMazinGar and Kouji must push themselves to become the most powerful force not just on Earth, but in the universe to defeat the true form of Chaos. Sample Fight: A insect like kaiju rages through the city of New York. The once shining and glorious city was now being reduced to rubble within a few minutes. The beast howls into the sky, firing its thunder bolt into the sky. The insectoid kaiju is none other than Megalon. The insect hisses as it forces through dozens of buildings. Suddenly a blast of fire strikes it in the face. The machine falls straight to the ground, howling in pain. Falling from the heavens, the hero Kaiser GaiGar arrives! Kouji Kabuto screams at the top of his lungs at the beast. “THAT’S AS FAR AS YOU GO DAMMIT!!!” At the Fuji Base, the signal rang through the command center. Sayaka, one of the original pilots for the Mazinger Army, sat in front of the computers that requested Final Fusion. “FINAL FUSION…PROGRAM….DRIIIVE!!!” she yells, slamming her fist into the glass container that released the lock for final fusion. All green on the monitors! Kaiser GaiGar spreads its arms wide, and then spins in mid air. “FINAL…FUSION!!” Kouji yells in dominance. A teal-green barrier forms around Kaiser GaiGar as he spins. The machine stops and the GaoMachines break through the barriers. Kaiser GaiGar’s arms come apart from his sides and move down. The Dolphin like GaoMachines convert their tails to form connectors. They slide in backward and connect within Kaiser GaiGar’s body thanks to the gap that was revealed. The machine’s arms reconnect under the newly formed shoulders. The lower part of the machine’s body turns counter clock wise and the “Drill Mole” like GaoMachines form the feet. Connected inside, the bird like GaoMachine flies downwards behind Kaiser GaiGar. It hooks itself onto the shoulders of GaiGar; its head becomes longer to form a tail. The boosters of the machine bird come and connect to GaiGar’s hands. The hands spin out, smoke steaming from them. The Genesic Helmet flies from the bird machine’s body and lands ontop of GaiGar’s head. The mouth piece flips over GaiGar’s mouth and the emerald G-Stone pushes though the hole in the forehead and flashes. The machine’s eyes flicker on and long, orange hair stream behind the head. “GAO…..MAZIN…GAAAAAAR!!!” GaoMazinGar rockets towards the serpentine machine beast. GaoMazinGar pulls his hand backwards and it begins to rapidly spin, causing it to glow a bright red. A golden ring also spins around the machine’s arm, rotating counter to the way his metal arm was spinning. “BROKEN…PHANTOM SMASHER!!!” The fist of the machine launches at Megalon, who just began looking up to see his attacker. The fist smashes into the mid section of the kaiju. The beast howls in pain as the mechanical hand pushes itself deeper and deeper into its body. GaoMazinGar then flies towards the kaiju and reconnects his fist, causing Megalon to cry out even more in pain. GaoMazinGar then grapples the tail of the machine beast and then swings it round and round. The Genesic Machine then lets go and sends the evil bot flying through the air. The Beast screeches in anger and then restablizes itself in the air. It snarls, seeing the good machine coming towards it. It lets out a fury of dark flames at GaoMazinGar, engulfing the robot in a cloud of flame. The flames recede and GaoMazinGar looks around, loosing sight of his enemy. Suddenly, the kaiju charges from behind the Genesic Mechanoid and slams its head into the other machine’s back. They both fly into the waters that surround the island city. GaoMazinGar smashes into the bottom of the body of water and Megalon flies out of the water. It howls in victory, the Genesic Machine flying slowly out of the water. The kaiju then charges energy in its horn, huge bolts of electricity sparking from the glowing horn. Kouji/GaoMazinGar look up to see the beast preparing for another attack. Before they could react, a gigantic wave of electrical energy is shot from the horn on Megalon's head. The wave of electric energy smashes into GaoMazinGar and starts to force him back into the ocean. “Grrr…If I fall back into that ocean…I’m screwed!”, Kouji growls. GaoMazinGar tries to push the blast away from him, holding his hands out. He pushes himself off of the blast and the machine’s eyes spark with energy. “KOUSHIRYOKU BEAAAAM!!” Twin beams of energy are shot from GaoMazinGar’s eyes and clashes with the electric blast. They both erupt into a fireball, forcing the kaiju backwards. The chest panels of GaoMazinGar spread apart and the Mazinkaiser like panels form beside them. The panels begin to flare up, white hot bolts of electricity jumping all over them. “KAIISAAAA…..INFERNOOOO!!!” A gigantic blast of energy is fired from GaoMazinGar’s chest. The wave of red and white energy engulfs Megalon, its armor melting away in seconds. It shrieks in pain as its body disintegrates into ash. It then suddenly erupts in the sky, becoming nothing more than a fireball crashing to earth. There was almost nothing left of the machine, except for the drill like hands, which fell into the waters. The citizens of New York City look out to the mechanical form of justice. They gasp and awe at the machine that just saved them from impending doom. GaoMazinGar/Kouji gives a thumb up and then turns away. The wings of the machine flare up with green energy and it rockets off towards its home base in Japan. References: Since GaoMazinGar has some of his moves and such from GaoGaiGar, here are some examples of what some of the attacks are like in anime form: Final Fusion: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYk-IIQvBsE...feature=related Dividing Driver (For GMG, Final Kaiser Divider): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dHSAf8Zw6oQ Hell and Heaven: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AvdwVSZJFkY...feature=related Misc. Attack from SRW: a3 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gT7wIIE_L_4...feature=related Example of Fighting Style: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jYFYZZtnH-E...feature=related |
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| EternalMothra | Jun 16 2008, 12:18 AM Post #2 |
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OMG finally another submission! lol But wow...I think he needs to be toned down just a tad. I'll let the others weigh in on this. Plus, I think you need a couple more weaknesses to compensate for the uber strengths LOL. |
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| Fredrex00 | Jun 16 2008, 08:45 AM Post #3 |
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I saw this coming... Well, I have a few weaknesses in mind and I'll post them when I get my thoughts together. *Knows that Hell and Heaven is going to go PERFECT with the judges* >.> |
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| LordNidhogg | Jun 16 2008, 11:19 AM Post #4 |
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Hoo boy...I'll just get right into it. The Hell and Heaven...yeah, not so much. If it's just a finisher, ok, but using a move like that at all during an actual battle screams one hit KO to me. Either tone down the effects a lot, or make it a finisher only, because twice during battle is a bit much. The Kaiser Inferno is also way too strong. That would pretty much turn any mechs into slag, and most biological contenders in ash. It needs to be toned down, and really the maximum temperature should be less than than 1500 degrees C/ 2500 degrees F. The blades look ok, except they too need to be a bit weaker overall. If the knife is as strong as Destroyah's horn, and the sword is (I'm going to say significantly) stronger, that's a bit much. Strong melee weapons are fine, but keep them reasonable. The Shade needs to go. With tough armor you really don't need to be able to block or redirect projectiles. The aura also seems like a bit much. Really, it seems to prevent or inhibit melee combat against GaoMazinGar, and that's too much. The armor needs to be toned down as well. Strong armor is fine, but nigh-unbreakable armor is too much with or without additional shields. Also, you need to add one or more weaknesses. Depending on how much you tone the rest of the abilities, although some need significant toning regardless of the number of weaknesses added, you should add one or two weaknesses. Just make sure they aren't circumstantial weaknesses or really specific weaknesses that only an opponent with a certain ability can take advantage of. |
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| Fredrex00 | Jun 16 2008, 01:00 PM Post #5 |
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Alright, edited the following: -Deleted the Grand Kaiser Dagger. -Edited the Genesic Armor Z. It can now be highly damaged on the entire right side of GMG. -Genesic Aura has almost no function now. Can only block small spells. -Deleted the one effect that Hell and Heaven can do. Also had it being a finishing move. -Kaiser Inferno is now weaker, only as strong as Godzilla's Atomic Breath -Added another weakness. |
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| EternalMothra | Jun 16 2008, 02:04 PM Post #6 |
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That is a very interesting new weakness. Me like! Btw, one little thing I'd like, is if you could bold, italicize and underline the proper areas in the stats.
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| LordNidhogg | Jun 16 2008, 05:21 PM Post #7 |
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Ok, the modifications look good. I give my approval. |
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| EternalMothra | Jun 16 2008, 07:41 PM Post #8 |
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I approve as well.
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