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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 3 2010, 06:16 PM (186 Views) | |
| final-cloud | Aug 3 2010, 06:16 PM Post #1 |
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[OOC Information]: Habbo Name: final-cloud Style of RP Combat: Hit/Connect [IC Information]: Character Appearance: ![]() ![]() Character Name: Ifrit Xious Character Race: Human Character Gender: Male Character Age: 23 Eye Color: Green Hair Color: Brown Character Height: 6'4 Character Weight: 185 [Muscle] Character Clothing: Blacksmith clothing, or Farmer Clothing Character Occupation: Blacksmith Natural Abilities: Very strong Fast Stealthy Character Weaknesses: Cannot block from above Can't block axes Magical Abilities: None Likes: Books Quiet people Blades Fighting Cold Dislikes: Obnoxious people Theives Heat Personality: Ifrit usually keeps ot himself, rarley talks to anyone. He considers himself as a loner, nothing more. When he is out in town, he is usually buying books, clothing etc. Other than that, he is usually hidden. Equipment/Items: Small Dagger Background/History: At age 5, his mother died from a disease, he lived with his father on a farm, where he worked hard everyday. At age 13, his father left, and never came back. Ifrit was on his own, tending the farm, and trying to earn money. When he turned 18. he got tired of working on the farm, packed up his things, and left. He met up with a blacksmith, who trained Ifrit in making weapons. Ifrit knew then, thats what he wanted to do. He is 23 now, ana living in Ascalon, He is the blacksmith there, and gets some business. Edited by final-cloud, Aug 7 2010, 09:48 PM.
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| ScreamingHawk | Aug 3 2010, 06:26 PM Post #2 |
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Review (Before Fixed) Could use some more detail but other than that, Approved. Edited by ScreamingHawk, Aug 3 2010, 06:41 PM.
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| Beebo379 | Aug 3 2010, 06:29 PM Post #3 |
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No healing. -- Period. |
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| IEPICLYWIN | Aug 4 2010, 02:10 PM Post #4 |
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I like it but needs more detail pl0x. |
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| Anthony | Aug 5 2010, 05:10 AM Post #5 |
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Cliche character but thats fine. What the bio needs is a lot of detail, as a magical ability "fire" just isn't good enough. No body will know what you mean by "fire" you have to elaborate. So we know you arn't going to be able to burn the whole forest down with a flick of you're wrist. You're history is, strange to say the least but then again strange people make Rps interesting. You're history is screaming "Ima go kill every freggin' person I see" and as hawk pointed out, you can't go around killing anyone, even if they are thieves. It's a serious Rp so you have to think logically, self defence, threat on something you love, revenge (serious revenge he killed you're brother, you kill him. Not he stole from me so i knifed him). Not just that you saw him stealing. |
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| final-cloud | Aug 7 2010, 02:00 PM Post #6 |
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I redone the whole thing. |
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| Untoldstory | Aug 7 2010, 07:10 PM Post #7 |
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Why do you all think people will roleplay extremely destructive magic with a flick of their wrist. It's a stereotype, if you ask me. |
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| final-cloud | Aug 7 2010, 07:32 PM Post #8 |
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Oh crap, i accidently reported you lol, my bad. I ment to say, ">_> Well, I took the magic out, I kinda don't want it." Mybad man. |
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| Anthony | Aug 8 2010, 04:06 PM Post #9 |
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Kind of because a lot of people get carried away with magic not to say you or anyone in particular but once that happens, the rp has gone to shit. That's all there is to it. It's not a stereotype and I don't think you used the term properly, but it's because a lot of new comvers not all like to have distructive powers. |
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