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| My Summary is done!! ^w^; "Ocarina and the Jewels of Time." | |
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| Koneko | Aug 17 2008, 08:28 PM Post #1 |
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“Orcarina And The Jewels of Time ” “Destined to become the next Flower Guardian, Orcarina Momotsuki has always been different. With a sacred symbol, the Wings of Sakura, on her chest, she has trained all her life for her first test; obtaining the Staff of Sakura from the Ikkyo Ryotoku Forest. But Orcarina’s story does not end there. The keeper of the Jewels of Time, Chronoselia, has been kidnapped by the evil villainess, Xiao Mao. In an effort to keep the Jewels of Time from the forces of evil, Chronoselia shattered the Jewels into five shards. Little does Orcarina know that her destiny is being guided down a path that intertwines not only Chronoselia’s fate, but with the lives of many others. Can a girl who just turned sixteen rid the world of evil? Or will she fall in defeat? Only time will tell.” Onyx: Jewel of the Past: Click here Garnet: Jewel of the Present Click here Opal: Jewel of the Future: Click here Turquoise: Jewel of Misfortcune to Come: Click here Diamond: Jewel of Hope: Click here There, what do you think meow?? Oh and I couldn't have done this without RTH's and my parent's help--Thanks lots meow!! ^^ |
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| Athanar | Aug 17 2008, 09:28 PM Post #2 |
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-keep the Jewel of Time from the forces of evil, Jewels. Not Jewel. -destiny is guiding down a path Better would be "destiny is being guided down a path". -just turn sixteen just turned sixteen Not trying to pick it apart, but those are a couple of errors, and each error makes it look less professional. The more professional it looks, the more likely it is to win. Just trying to help, Kitkat. ^^ I want you to win, and this sounds good! |
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| Redette | Aug 17 2008, 09:48 PM Post #3 |
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IMHO, the way that has been changed now, I think destiny should be replaced with the word fate. So...
IDK. Destiny just sounds weird to me now, but fate doesn't seem that much better. Also:
Don't those two mean the same thing? "What's to come" and the "future" mean the exact same thing, right? I think it doesn't make any sense to have two jewels that do the same thing. |
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| Koneko | Aug 17 2008, 10:01 PM Post #4 |
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It sounds the same, but it's different--The Jewel of What's to Come shows what dangers will happen like...Hmm, how do it put it? Like Yin and Good and Bad. What about be another name for it then? I decided to call it "Jewel of Misfortcune to Come." |
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