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sprite comic; the comic started
Topic Started: Nov 30 2007, 04:22 PM (323 Views)
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Fenix
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Yeah... It was kind of small, and I had to put it into Paint to zoom in. Besides that, it looks fairly interesting. Is there going to be a plot?

Maybe this should be in the Self Promotion section?
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not to be rude or anything... but that comic was kind of bland, it had no introduction, no structure and most of all, no character. wen you start with a comic, give it an introduction on what is hapening.
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The fire could need a better sprite if you ask me.
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Regulus
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I think by sprite, you mean, "actually use a sprite." That's a spray paint mock-up. And I kind of have to second Wire Sponge's opinion.
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Moved to the right place for this sort of thing.
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Lord Zymeth
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Sorry, man. I have to say, that was a tad weak, and I have to stick in some constructive critisism. The presentation was kind of... off. The panels aren't even lined up, nor do they have borders, and way too much blank space between them. Also, the Spray-Paint tool fire is just terrible. And you could have at least made the various zombies walk at different paces. Having them all share the EXACT same walking sprite makes it obvious you just pasted the same one several times. And there was no need to make the last two panels that big. There's a lot of wasted space between Megaman and the Zombies.

Oh, and one thing: Is that supposed to be Megaman or an original character? If it is Megaman, just leave him blue... If it's not, please please PLEASE do more to him besides recolor him.
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I barely read the comic myself and I have to say. I may not be good at making comics yet but that comic was really weak. Sorry to seem harsh but I actualy made better comics and I can't even come up with a decent plot or characters (Which is why I always have to cancel them) and like Zymeth said If it's Megaman leave him blue (Unless it is some sort of power up that hasn't been explained yet) or if it's a custom character add more unique features to him (or(her?)) and basicly that's the end of my complaints/comment.

EDIT: I almost forgot this, but NEVER ever use MS Paint tools for making fire try to find a sprite for fire instead, it'll make your comic look better.
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Thats for you to know and me to find out.
It doesn't even load....

Anyways, if you need some custom sprites, just ask me. After all, I used to sprite regularly before I started drawing.

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COmplete custom from the original megaman 8-bit sprites.
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Avi
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So... is the main character supposed to be Megaman, or someone "original?"
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