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sprite comic
Topic Started: Dec 1 2007, 05:38 PM (389 Views)
targuet man
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I used sprites this time but still have to go to paint and zoom the image

http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=z...warfixedxr7.png
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Cobra_Omega
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Hmm. It's better than it was before but my only complaint this time is that the character who fights the zombies is a recolor of Vile and recolors are very frowned upon in the Sprite Comic business.
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Naoshi
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JKFLGADGDKAGHGAKHGAGHKAD? skjfsdjdgsd! :)
Give some speech bubbles. And don't keep so much empty spaces in comics.

Also I'm not a fan of sprite clashing.


edit: You need to make a more original character too. Recolors are just a big no in communities.
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targuet man
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Dude was this or recolor of mega man and i like vile's sprite
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targuet man
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ok i will du some finges to the sprite
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targuet man
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i ment dude
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Naoshi
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JKFLGADGDKAGHGAKHGAGHKAD? skjfsdjdgsd! :)
-_-; Edit your posts instead of triple posting.
Metal Man of Wily's Warriors (Status: Dead)
Hornet Man of Cyborg Resistance (Status: Rebooting)
Enker of Seven Mercenaries (Status: Rebooting)
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targuet man
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sori ^///^
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GaiaX6
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And we got another one..
targuet man,Dec 1 2007
06:20 PM
sori ^///^

Dude,use proper grammar. XP
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targuet man
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have to go to paint and zoom the image


http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zombiewar2ph6.png

heres the seconde page
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anime master
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...the second page is...okay.

But you REALLY need a new character. And to make it big. I could barely read what you were saying.
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B33R!!!
targuet man,Dec 2 2007
01:26 PM

it actualy is better, but it still made no sense..."cool, more zombies"?
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Segata Sanshiro...SEGATA SANSHIROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
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GaiaX6
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And we got another one..
That comic needs proper word ballons and better speech. they also have to be organized a bit as well as a better plot. Zombie bustin' is too cliche'.
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targuet man
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and wat i´m suposte to do i no killing zombies es cliche but wat else can i du? and ``cool more zombies´´ mins red likes to kill zombies and the next page will be the biografi ove the charaters and sorry for my gramar the truduchion sites are bustet >:(
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Strider Zero
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I just viewed your two sprite comics and the other one you made in a thread. They aren't bad for a start. Speech bubbles would be a help and perhapes a non-coloured font. It's a bit small to read also.
I once killed an alien, his pelt made a nice jacket for a street hobo.

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GaiaX6
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And we got another one..
targuet man,Dec 2 2007
03:31 PM
and what am I suposed to do now?  No Zombie Bustin' leaves me confused and i don't know what cliche means but what else can i do? and ``cool more zombies´´ means red likes to kill zombies and the next page will have the bio of the charaters and sorry for my gramar but the transilation sites are busted >:(

Well,the plot's good so far..but as far as Character orgionality,I suggest editing Red further. I also notice style mixing because you are using a Castlevania BG,a MMX Vile recolor and a Zombies ate my neighbors styled Zombie sheet. try to keep the sprites in one style please? XP
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targuet man
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the BG is not from castlevania and i have a faivor to asque to all the guis u wched the second page red nides help and i´m haut ove idias so code enione join the sprite comic ^///^
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