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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 1 2007, 05:38 PM (389 Views) | |
| targuet man | Dec 1 2007, 05:38 PM Post #1 |
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I used sprites this time but still have to go to paint and zoom the image http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=z...warfixedxr7.png |
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| Cobra_Omega | Dec 1 2007, 05:42 PM Post #2 |
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Omega Warrior
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Hmm. It's better than it was before but my only complaint this time is that the character who fights the zombies is a recolor of Vile and recolors are very frowned upon in the Sprite Comic business. |
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| Naoshi | Dec 1 2007, 05:45 PM Post #3 |
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JKFLGADGDKAGHGAKHGAGHKAD? skjfsdjdgsd! :)
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Give some speech bubbles. And don't keep so much empty spaces in comics. Also I'm not a fan of sprite clashing. edit: You need to make a more original character too. Recolors are just a big no in communities. |
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| targuet man | Dec 1 2007, 05:48 PM Post #4 |
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Dude was this or recolor of mega man and i like vile's sprite |
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| targuet man | Dec 1 2007, 05:55 PM Post #5 |
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ok i will du some finges to the sprite |
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| targuet man | Dec 1 2007, 05:56 PM Post #6 |
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i ment dude |
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| Naoshi | Dec 1 2007, 06:18 PM Post #7 |
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JKFLGADGDKAGHGAKHGAGHKAD? skjfsdjdgsd! :)
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-_-; Edit your posts instead of triple posting. |
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| targuet man | Dec 1 2007, 06:20 PM Post #8 |
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sori
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| GaiaX6 | Dec 1 2007, 09:05 PM Post #9 |
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Dude,use proper grammar. XP |
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| targuet man | Dec 2 2007, 01:26 PM Post #10 |
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have to go to paint and zoom the image http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zombiewar2ph6.png heres the seconde page |
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| anime master | Dec 2 2007, 02:28 PM Post #11 |
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Helicopters and S*it
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...the second page is...okay. But you REALLY need a new character. And to make it big. I could barely read what you were saying. |
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| Wire Sponge | Dec 2 2007, 02:58 PM Post #12 |
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B33R!!!
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it actualy is better, but it still made no sense..."cool, more zombies"? |
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| GaiaX6 | Dec 2 2007, 03:05 PM Post #13 |
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That comic needs proper word ballons and better speech. they also have to be organized a bit as well as a better plot. Zombie bustin' is too cliche'. |
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| targuet man | Dec 2 2007, 03:31 PM Post #14 |
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and wat i´m suposte to do i no killing zombies es cliche but wat else can i du? and ``cool more zombies´´ mins red likes to kill zombies and the next page will be the biografi ove the charaters and sorry for my gramar the truduchion sites are bustet
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| Strider Zero | Dec 2 2007, 03:58 PM Post #15 |
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SHMUPs Strider
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I just viewed your two sprite comics and the other one you made in a thread. They aren't bad for a start. Speech bubbles would be a help and perhapes a non-coloured font. It's a bit small to read also. |
I once killed an alien, his pelt made a nice jacket for a street hobo.
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| GaiaX6 | Dec 2 2007, 04:09 PM Post #16 |
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Well,the plot's good so far..but as far as Character orgionality,I suggest editing Red further. I also notice style mixing because you are using a Castlevania BG,a MMX Vile recolor and a Zombies ate my neighbors styled Zombie sheet. try to keep the sprites in one style please? XP |
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| targuet man | Dec 2 2007, 04:40 PM Post #17 |
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the BG is not from castlevania and i have a faivor to asque to all the guis u wched the second page red nides help and i´m haut ove idias so code enione join the sprite comic
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