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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 14 2011, 10:55 PM (128 Views) | |
| Post #1 Apr 14 2011, 10:55 PM | AdminBlaine |
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Clan Name: Rospilar Kekkei Genkai: Smoker's Joy- With this they can immediately make anyone high that they can see, it manifests in the eyes making them green and the pupils purple. Jutsu: D Ranks Blinding Smog Jutsu This Jutsu when activated in much akin to a ninja's smoke bomb, it will cover an area with a ten meter radius and will blind those that are not the user for two posts after they leave the smoke. Scooby Snack Jutsu The user of this jutsu spits out tiny seeds or stems which act like miniature throwing stars. Infected Lung Jutsu This jutsu releases a mist into the air that when breathed in automatically makes anyone except the user cough and wheeze giving away their hiding spot, or opening them to an attack. Smoke Step Jutsu When activated this jutsu allows the user to walk across smoke as if they were walking on normal ground. Symbol: Clan History: |
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| Post #2 Apr 15 2011, 07:32 AM | Zanza Nara |
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"Kekkei Genkai: Smoker's Joy- With this they can immediately make anyone high that they can see, it manifests in the eyes making them green and the pupils purple. Jutsu:" Wrong. In this case your Kekkei Genkai would be the element known as Smoke Release . Now heres where you come in. What is Smoke release? The most obvious thinking would be that it is an advance element that you get when you combine fire and air. However if you can support it do it a different way. What you have now is a bad jutsu. "Blinding Smog Jutsu This Jutsu when activated in much akin to a ninja's smoke bomb, it will cover an area with a ten meter radius and will blind those that are not the user for two posts after they leave the smoke." First off where is the smoke coming from? Your hands? your mouth? a magic fountain in the ground? Secondly how does smoke blind them? Go stick your head over a fire smoke in your eyes makes them water so maybe 1 post to wipe away the tears but not completely blind them. However i do understand not being able to see through smoke since if its thick enough you cant. Scooby Snack Jutsu The user of this jutsu spits out tiny seeds or stems which act like miniature throwing stars. 2 things... 1 considering the description i don't get the name. XD 2 What does this have to do with smoke release? Infected Lung Jutsu This jutsu releases a mist into the air that when breathed in automatically makes anyone except the user cough and wheeze giving away their hiding spot, or opening them to an attack. 1 - This is easily beaten with a think called a mask.... 2 - Mist isn't a form of smoke. Mist is water vapor in the air in other words water release NOT SMOKE. Smoke Step Jutsu When activated this jutsu allows the user to walk across smoke as if they were walking on normal ground. Only your smoke that you've spawned. and it has to be thick enough it cant be seen through. P.S. Why does your clan have only D rank jutsu? And yes i will be looking at the other clan apps and if i see something wrong i will PM you |
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