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The Gratuga clan
Topic Started: Sep 18 2011, 10:30 AM (264 Views)
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Name: Common first names end in 'mino' or 'rika'. End names are always gratuga.
Defining Characteristics: All have great height and strength.
Symbol:
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Home: The land of fire, the village hidden in the leaves.
Kekkeigenkai?:yes (see below)
Element: The gratuga clan possess all five elements, water, fire, earth, wind and lightning style elements, however their most prominent element is their water jutsu.
History:
The Gratuga clan was created by Kimino himself. Kimino had seen throughout the lands pain and suffering, as had many. However, of all the people, he was one who had suffered more than most. He had watched all his family be tortured to death before his eyes. He had been frequently tortured himself. And over the years, he had grown infinitely in everything because of it. He learnt that the only true way to become strong and create your own destiny was by suffering and making those against you suffer even more. He created the Gratuga clan for this purpose.

The members of the Gratuga clan are imbued with a life-lengthening jutsu, giving them many more decades to live than they would have, allowing them to master every element available. They created a simple symbol so people would know who they were. The Japanese kanji for pain is always on their clothes and gear. They are the killers of nations, pure powers rivalling even that of tailed beasts. They are pain incarnate.

The main reason they survived all the time they did, for it only heavily slowed the ageing process, was due to the true clan members' Kekkeigenkai, made up of a dojutsu which allowed them to use their special bloodline jutsu. The dojutsu itself is similar to the Byakugan and Sharingan, legend saying that a master of the clan Kekkeigenkai had used the eye to create the three main eyes known today. It has the ability to the basic chakra system and a few tenketsus, some basic hand signs, even able to even replicate C rank and lower jutsu.

Kekkeigenkai: See below and history
Special Jutsu:
Name: Rinkiango
Available?: clan only
Rank: B rank
Element: any
Hand Seals: no
Classification: Dojutsu
Description: Eyes turn a dark green colour and the world seems to slow down a little.
Effects: Can see basic chakra pathways and can copy C rank and below jutsu.
Range: User

Name: Water style: Water Spear
Available?: Clan only
Rank: B rank
Element: Water
Hand Seals: no
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: The user uses their hands to manipulate the water into the shape of a spear, then covers it in chakra to keep it in that basic shape. It is then thrown towards the enemy, a long line of water attacking them only ending in length when the water supply does or it's ended.
Effects: Cuts enemy, severe blows may sever limbs or even kill a weakened enemy or weak genin.
Range: Mid to Long

Name: Rasenchidorigan
Available?: clan only
Rank: S rank
Element: Wind and Lightning
Hand Seals: None but requires a large amount of chakra and a clone to help combine the chidori and rasengan together.
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: *requires chidori and rasengan* the user creates a clone that makes a chidori (may not need one for the initial rasengan however can use one) the user and the clone then combine the power together and attack the enemy with its devastating power. Very powerful and causes internal injury from the chidori, and terrible outer injury from the immense power of rasengan.
Effects: Heavily injures internal organs and can even destroy limbs. Will almost certainly kill anything that is chunin or lower.
Range: Close range

Name: Fire style: Seven Dragons Of Destruction
Available?: clan only
Rank: A
Element: Fire
Hand Seals: Horse → Tiger → Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger
Classification: Ninjutsu
Description: A devastating attack, fires seven super powered fire ball jutsus at the enemy.
Effects: Causes severe burning and if all hit, weakened opponents may end up dead.
Range: Mid range

(may also create other special clan only water jutsu)

Special Trait: They all carry a small bottle of water. Or at least it seems small, but it is a special ninjutsu used on it to make it light and durable, but hold more water than a large lake.
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A few things:

1. It is physically impossible for someone to have ALL elements(and is also a form of god-modding). I'd suggest making the clan water-oriented, as they seem to all have that trait.

2. There is no way that the clan's master could have made the Byakugan, Sharingan, or Rinnegan, for we already know that these where made by the Rikudo Sennin whom passed the teachings to his children. He also preached kindness and mercy, so he doesn't seem like he could have been related to the clan in the slightest.

3. The Kekkeigenkai, Water Spear, and fire*probably be changed for you cannot have all elements* Are pretty much approved, but I am NEVER going to approve a Rasengan-Chidori combo. No matter how you slice that cake, it'll always be over-powered, since both techniques are ALREADY S-Rank.

4. Possibly flesh out the history a bit? Such as how it was founded, where it's been, etc.?

5. This is just my opinion but this seems like a good clan for Kirigakure, the water-based village, than Konohagakure, but that's just my opinion.
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