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| Yamamoto Kichirou | Sep 18 2011, 04:57 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Chidori Sharp Spear Available?: Yes Rank: A Element: Raiton Hand Seals: None Classification: Ninjutsu Description: This technique uses Shape Transformation to form the original Chidori into a spear or blade-shape, adapting it for mid-range attacks with a maximum range of 10 metres. Although it's less powerful than the Chidori, its increased range means there is less of a risk to the user. It also has the advantage of being able to be used for surprise attacks and capturing. Effects: When the enemy's body is pierced, the user can alter the spear's shape into multiple additional blades, increasing the number of wounds. The blade can also be swung in order to cut things as well as cause fatal injuries. Range: Short to Mid range Name: Kirin Available?: Yes Rank: S Element: Raiton Hand Seals: Drawing his hands up in the air, then slashes them down, vertically. Classification: Ninjutsu Description: When a thunderstorm is nearby, the user draws lightning directly from thunder clouds to supplement the power of his strike and controls it with chakra. (NOTE: Chidori needs to have been learned too) Effects: A chance of being electrocuted, but really would leave a big burn Range: Long-range Edited by Yamamoto Kichirou, Sep 19 2011, 11:40 AM.
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| MaximumMajin | Sep 18 2011, 05:14 PM Post #2 |
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1.) This one is approved, but why are it's info. in spoilers? 2.) A little better description, please? Otherwise, the effects could use some fixing as well. You may also want to put that it can ONLY be used during a storm or when storm clouds are near, or the user has to somehow generate their own, because clouds don't form when using it! |
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| Yamamoto Kichirou | Sep 18 2011, 05:31 PM Post #3 |
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Alright, edited. |
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| MaximumMajin | Sep 18 2011, 06:05 PM Post #4 |
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Description stills needs to be better. Maybe add that Chidori needs to have been learned too(I'm working on them as I type this) |
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| Yamamoto Kichirou | Sep 18 2011, 06:15 PM Post #5 |
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Alrighty. Edited. |
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| MaximumMajin | Sep 18 2011, 06:17 PM Post #6 |
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lol I meant the Kirin description xD |
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| Yamamoto Kichirou | Sep 18 2011, 06:21 PM Post #7 |
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Oh XD I edited yet again
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| MaximumMajin | Sep 18 2011, 06:38 PM Post #8 |
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KK, accepted and closed. Adding to Database in a bit, unless you want to~ (Put Kirin in the new canon section, but put Spear in the regular section!) oh, and then post an UPDATE post, telling what was added~ Edited by MaximumMajin, Sep 18 2011, 06:39 PM.
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| fitzitz | Sep 19 2011, 06:42 AM Post #9 |
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But first, please could you change these to available as if your character can learn them, so can anyone else as sasuke created these moves so for them to be unique to you, you must be able to use sasuke and have him as one of your characters. |
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