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| Yamamoto Kichirou | Sep 19 2011, 02:01 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Supīdoai Available?: Yes Rank: N/A Element: Raiton Hand Seals: Bear -> Bird -> Monkey -> Rabbit -> Ox -> Ram Classification: Dojutsu Description: This Dojutsu helps improve a little bit of your speed and Raiton techniques only. The Dojutsu's name literally means, "Speed Eye", so in other words, this technique just helps improve your speed. Half of your chakra will move to your feet and legs, which can help also improve your speed. Effects: Improving speed Range: N/A Other: Spoiler: click to toggle Name: Lightning Release: Shocking gloves Available?: Yes Rank: B Element: Raiton Hand Seals: Ox -> Bird -> Rabbit -> Mouse -> Monkey -> Tiger -> Ram Classification: Ninjutsu Description: Once performing Hand Seals, electricity will form on the user's hand, forming a glove-like shape. The lightning will be a yellow-like color, along with the lightning gloves looking like finger less gloves. (NOTE, FINGER LESS GLOVES MUST BE NEEDED) Effects: Leaving a burn and a chance of inflicting a cut. The more the enemy will be touched by it, a chance will come to see if they might be electrocuted. Range: Self-Range Edited by Yamamoto Kichirou, Sep 20 2011, 04:44 PM.
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| MaximumMajin | Sep 19 2011, 02:39 PM Post #2 |
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A few things, but first specifics: Dojutsu: 1. Please, provide a better description as to what it does. How does it give the boost? Why is it a Genjutsu and not a regular technique? Etc. 2. Effect requires elaboration. What does it increase? How does it increase it? 3. The range would be "self" or "user" *Miss-spelled ANBU* Ninjutsu: Same problems as the Dojutsu. Both: Tell me, why should they be restricted to those levels? They seem like basic techniques to me. |
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| Yamamoto Kichirou | Sep 19 2011, 03:10 PM Post #3 |
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Sorry, still new to making jutsus. But anyway, fixed. |
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| MaximumMajin | Sep 19 2011, 05:28 PM Post #4 |
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Doesn't seem like the second one was changed in any way. Although, the first one is better, it isn't QUITE better. Why does the dojutsu increase your speed? How does it? |
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| Yamamoto Kichirou | Sep 20 2011, 01:32 PM Post #5 |
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Hmm. I made an edit with both the descriptions. |
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| MaximumMajin | Sep 20 2011, 01:38 PM Post #6 |
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KK, Feel free to add them to the database yourself unless you want me to~ |
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