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| -untitled-; well boredom made me do this >> | |
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| hikki_kairi | Mar 31 2007, 08:31 AM Post #1 |
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Hikari in Darkness
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The bell has rung at Jewel East High School. It was the end of a new day. At the schoolyard, everyone was catching up with their friends, except for one. “Another day, another headache!”, looking down, Jessie passed by the schoolyard. “Damn! This year is the toughest one yet! I just hope it wouldn’t get any tougher!”, she sighed. She walked through the first block near the school. “Well, at least this year is the best one since freshmen year. It’s a good thing I met-“, “Hey Jess! Wait up!”, Damien, Jessie’s best friend, caught up with her. She turned around and smiled. “I was looking for you at the schoolyard. When Lexy told me you went home; I decided to catch up with you. Why were you in a hurry all of a sudden?”, he was trying to catch his breath. “I decided to come home early for once! Why? Is it a crime to go home right away after school, officer?” “No! It’s just that…” “Just what?” “I was afraid something might have happened to you…”, “Oh…thanks for worrying about me! And you shouldn’t be afraid ‘cause I can take care of myself, y’know?” “So now it’s a crime to worry about your best friend!”, “Umm...Yeah!” He chuckled. “Since first period, I really wanted to go home! I wished the English test wasn’t so hard…” “Damien…you’re my first best friend but why do I keep feeling, you’re something more? Since I’ve transferred here, you made me feel at home. Every time I’m with you, it’s like, I’m in paradise. Wha…what am I saying? Snap out of it, Jess!” "...and the Chemistry test wasuber hard. I thought my brain exploaded after class!" "Oh...were you saying something?" "What's with you today, Jess?" "Nothing..." "Nothing? Sounds like a something to me..." "It's really nothing!" "With that tone, it sounds like, it IS something!" Jess paused; it was a sign that she's pissed off. -it's not yet finished T.T but i'll edit this once i'm not lazy- |
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| Dimetrix | Apr 1 2007, 05:49 AM Post #2 |
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剣の心
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Hmm....maybe this is a reflection of what you're experiencing now?I dunno.Some typos here and there,but its nice.Good job. |
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| Misty | Apr 2 2007, 08:30 AM Post #3 |
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+BEAUTIFUL.world
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Nice job. Keep it up. |
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| Ireth of Dorthonion | Apr 2 2007, 12:05 PM Post #4 |
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It ends here...
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Awesomely done, I really like it... I would like to see more |
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