Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Welcome to The Writer's Block: New Chapters. We hope you enjoy your visit.


You're currently viewing our forum as a guest. This means you are limited to certain areas of the board and there are some features you can't use. If you join our community, you'll be able to access member-only sections, and use many member-only features such as customizing your profile, sending personal messages, and voting in polls. Registration is simple, fast, and completely free.


Join our community!


If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features:

Username:   Password:
Add Reply
The watch was marking 7:00; A kidnap story
Topic Started: Apr 30 2007, 06:02 PM (104 Views)
Ireth of Dorthonion
Member Avatar
It ends here...
[ *  *  * ]
How I ended lock in here? I will never know, the watch was marking 4:00.

Three men sorrounded me and my friend, they shoot her in the face, the peope in the streets, screaming and runing, chaos and riot around me. The watch was marking 4:50.

I got my body tied and my mouth covered, my eyes saw black because of the blind fold, the back seats of a car were my location. The radio said that the watch was marking 5:15.

Once of the men carryed me out, I could feel his hands holding me so I didn't fall; the movemnet of his steps as they reached the stairs, the sound of old doors opening and crude wood floor squeeking. One of them said that the watch was marking 5:30.

The next I felt was the crude floor with my body, in a corner, still blind, speechless and unable to move; I heard a wooden closet door close by my side, I was in the wardrove. I couldn't tell the darkness with my comon sences but I felt it. "Why me?"... they said that the watch was marking 5:45.

The minutes passed like hours in my small wooden prission, I could hear the rats running by my sides, some of them biting the ropes but leaving them after they tasted... the countless insects ran trough my legs, arms and face, leaving somtimes a trail. I heard them say that the watch was marking 6:35.

And so it came to be, shoots could be heard from down stairs, shouts and yells from the cops, where to run? where to hide?. Soon they reached the room, the three men and I were ocupating, I in my dark wooden prission, them, outside charging their shotguns they had, shooting back. I am not sure how long did the gunfight took, I just know that my muffled shouts headed the cops to reach me. "What time is it?" a cop said "The watch is marking 6:55" another one replyed.

I got carryed again, this time by the men of law, where to run? where to hide?

And so I was saved from the kidnapers... but who would save me from the law?


The last switch was turned on, the last of the lethal vaccines inside of Ritha Osorio's veins, ending with her life as a drug trafficant and a kidnapper, once she was dead, the watch in her writs was marking 7:00...

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Not one of my bests, but I had to give it a shot ;P
Posted Image
/Spam
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
LaminateStasis
Member Avatar
Architect of Destruction
[ *  *  * ]
an interesting read to be sure, I had to reread the end a few times to get it, but I liked the twist XD

Good job Ireth ^^
Posted Image
Is married to SilentHearts!!![/big]
Hikki_Kairi, Kaira, and Rogue's Older Brother and Rena's Twin.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Ireth of Dorthonion
Member Avatar
It ends here...
[ *  *  * ]
I LOVE twists ^_^ glad ye liked
Posted Image
/Spam
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
« Previous Topic · Non Fan Fiction · Next Topic »
Add Reply

Etavarium Theme created by Zeus00 and converted by Wolt of the ZetaBoards Theme Zone