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the Storm
Topic Started: Jun 4 2007, 08:43 PM (53 Views)
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The Storm
As I lie quietly in my little dorm,
I hear the upcoming thunder of a brewing storm.
I lie in my bed as quiet as a mouse.
I hear a blood-curdling scream from the neighbor’s house.
I look out the windows; the lightning comes with a flash
All of a sudden I hear a gun shot and a loud crash.
I quietly go downstairs and walk slowly out the door.
I notice the smell of rain as it suddenly starts to pour.
I run up to the front porch and I am soaking wet.
Then suddenly I come face to face with someone I have never met.
I stare into the ugly eyes of a tortured soul’s face.
I feel the urge to run at an incredible pace.
I couldn’t move or scream, standing frozen right then and there.
Then I smelled the fresh blood and saw a body that had been handled without care.
I then feel a cold, smooth object rub against me with a click.
I feel my heart beating louder and louder with every tick.
My fragile life flashed before my very eyes.
Just like how the lightning flashed in the night’s sky.
I hear the loud bang and feel myself fall to the ground.
The pain is unbearable and searing, but I don’t make a sound.
As I lie silently upon the floor of my neighbor’s dorm,
I hear the quiet sounds of the passing storm.




i wrote this my freshman year to try to battle my friend in poetry.. i apparently lost because it was "too dark" - my friends judged. i thought it was bad ass at the time.
[size=7]I am wedded to calamity, and his name is twilightsown. <3[/size]
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