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| Java | Sep 30 2007, 04:15 PM Post #1 |
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Well, I was planning on finishing Cale's and posting this with that, but since I've been rather busy as of late, I'll just post it now. Posted Image I hope Ireth's happy with this one. I think she looks older this time, though I've never been particularly good with drawing different teenage ages. As always, constructive criticism would be helpful. |
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| LaminateStasis | Sep 30 2007, 06:44 PM Post #2 |
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The left eye seems really far away from the nose, giving that side of the face a bit of a warped look. I like the body however, it seems very anatomically correct, which is really neat. Just focus on your eyes in the future. |
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| bizness86 | Sep 30 2007, 08:29 PM Post #3 |
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The Retired Dungeon Master
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Java, I know I'll say this repetitively, but your drawing has dramatically improved since the days of Spriter's Hangout, and this is a VERY pleasant to the witness. I've honestly calmed down with my Flash and such since then, so looking at your working almost inspires me to at least darw something (though I end up not...) Your shading is demi-godly (mm hmm, I know you like that word :P) and the body is well done. The thing you would want to do with the face is to bring all of its features a little more to the center (as in bring everyhting a little nearer to the nose, or at least the mouth; as a matter a fact, the only thing that would probably need to come closer to the nose is the mouth, and her left [my right] eye). Very good job, Java. |
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| Java | Sep 30 2007, 08:34 PM Post #4 |
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Yarg, I just noticed that eye. I don't really see anything wrong with it, but I've grown used to it, so I probably just can't tell. Thought I can see that it looks a little too far from the nose. But I think that's because I didn't add a good indicator of the where the left side of the nose was. Drawing the eyes in the proper positions in a 3/4 perspective has always been a weakness. I usually can't get the shift right. |
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| bizness86 | Sep 30 2007, 08:46 PM Post #5 |
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actually, I correct myself and state that I don't think the eye is that bad. My only thing would be the mouth and that's just personal preference; your style is yours. You did excellent. |
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| Hawkdragon | Sep 30 2007, 09:53 PM Post #6 |
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I don't think it's so much the eye, but the pupil. if that was shifted so it was looking more to her "left" our right it might look more balanced out. The fact that its up against the edge of her face that we can see gives her a chameleon look, looking two ways at once. Or she has a lazy eye, same diff. EDIT: I lied a bit. Her nose does need to be tweaked. A bit to the right. The bridge should split the spot between the eyes. Like if I cover either half of her face, it'll look fine. But it's like the pieces don't mesh right. Am I making sense here? |
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| Ireth of Dorthonion | Oct 1 2007, 03:50 AM Post #7 |
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Her body looks perfect! 8D I love the way you made her!! Yet I'll have to point out the eye too... but more than the eye, it's the nose and the eye's pupil, if she's supposed to be looking at the raven both of her pupils have to be focused on the object. Also, same as Hawk said, the nose trail goes right between the eyes. Great job on her though!!! I love the pic!!! |
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