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Random Drawings
Topic Started: Aug 12 2009, 12:53 PM (122 Views)
Rena
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I've been in a drawing mood the past few days. I've mainly been doing people in profile. Now I just need to practice drawing bodies so I won't always have floating heads. ^^ Enjoy.

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This one is my lil brother's favorite. He likes the collar xD:
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The top one is supposed to be female and the lower one male:
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Sorry this one is all light. I was just experimenting with the hair:
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I seem to do better drawing females. *Thinks about another male she drew and shudders* Criticism (good or bad) is welcomed.
Twi's better looking, younger twin sister (by like 3 months-OUCH!) Taco's ACTUAL sister.

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Java
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Hmm... let's see here:
For the first one, the face seems a little to thin. But that's all, really. It'd probably look better if the face was a bit wider.
In the second one, I don't have any specific advice, only some general ones. In general, the eyes for the profiles seem too wide. From a side view, I think the eyes should be narrower. I guess for her, the eye should be closer to the nose, but it's not really an issue.
Ah yes, the "spiky-haired-shonen-guy-with-high-collar." Again, nothing really specific, though I think the far side of his collar, the on his right side, seems too long.
Heh, like that the girl looks rather tomboyish. Don't see enough spiky haired girls around, really. Anyway, both look okay, just the same general advice about the width of the eyes. Like the face stripes, though the one on the guy makes him look like he has bogs underneath his eyes. Not sure if that's intentional.
For the last one it's rather hard to tell, but here's what I can tell. It looks fine, but I think the lower part of the face, the part under the nose, seems to be too forward compared to the rest of the head. He hair also looks a little short on her head. Er.. not the hair line, but the outline of the hair. It seems like there should be more space. Also, though this is more of a personal opinion, her hair looks kind of like some sort of plant. :X
Edited by Java, Aug 12 2009, 09:08 PM.
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Rogue
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I think they look good for being random drawings, Rena. I agree on some of Java's points, but over all I liked them. The second one being my fav. :3
Twi, SH, and Katiro's little sis!
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