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| the hen night | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 6 2007, 03:31 AM (50,188 Views) | |
| aj57 | Mar 6 2007, 03:31 AM Post #1 |
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Disclaimer: Shed Productions made the characters, wrote the original stories, and have full copyright to them. We are using these characters simply for non-profit, entertainment value. The same goes for any other known copyrighted character/storyline where a cross over fiction is written. I am happy to accept feedback openly by readers. (BOARD NOTE we would recommend if any length i.e. more than a couple of points, it is done privately away from the story itself). Part 1 “Would you two get a room!” Claire and Trish both yelled at them. This was how most evenings over at Helen and Nikki’s would end up – the two of them practically tearing the clothes off each other. Even though they had been living together for over two years and were due to get married in a couple of weeks, they still could hardly contain themselves at times, even when they had friends over. Looking sheepish, they apologized to their guests, but Claire and Trish had got the hint and said their goodnights. Even though Claire was originally Helen’s friend and Trish had a history with Nikki, they had become quite good friends over the years and since they lived quite close to each other, often drove together when they visited Helen and Nikki. This night had been Claire’s turn to drive. On the way home, Claire hatched a plan. “You know, we should have a hen party for these two, but knowing the way they drink, it would have to be at least two days before the wedding. I think they need to start showing some self-control and I think I have a way to make them do it, leaving them gasping for it on their wedding night.” “Do tell,” Trish was intrigued. “You’ll have to talk to Nikki and I’ll talk to Helen. We’ll each tell them how the other wants to honour the tradition of not seeing each other right before the wedding. You can offer that Nikki stay with you and I will ask Helen to stay with me.” “With you so far,” Trish responded. “Okay, now the hard part. We have to convince them that after the hen party and for the next day and night they are not allowed to touch each other (or themselves) to heighten the thrill of their wedding night.” “Easier said than done with these two.” Trish said. “Oh, it gets better. I’ll arrange some ‘entertainment’ for the hen party, but let that be a surprise.” “But you’re going to tell me, though,” Trish pleaded. “No, I don’t think so,” Claire declared with a grin. “Spoilsport,” Trish pouted. “So, according to this plan, they’ll spend the night of the hen party, the following day and night at our respective places?” Trish inquired. “That’s right. Otherwise, they’d never be able to keep their hands off each other, as you and I have witnessed many times.” “When do we tell them then?” Trish asked nervously. “The sooner the better I think. We’ll tell them how romantic it will be.” “I think we’ll have a harder time convincing Nikki,” Trish said. “I don’t think it’ll be much easier for Helen,” Claire responded. The next day, Claire arranged to meet Helen for lunch. She explained that she wanted to throw a hen party for them both on the Thursday evening before their Saturday nuptials, allowing them the day in-between to recover. Helen readily agreed. “Trish was mentioning how Nikki was really old-fashioned at heart and wanted your wedding night to be everything it should.” Claire tried to sound nonchalant. “Yes?” Helen looked at Claire questioningly. What was Claire getting at? “I’m sure you agree with that.” “Of course!” Helen exclaimed. “Then what Trish and I propose is that you stay with me and Nikki stays with Trish after the hen party and for the next day and night.” Claire was looking to see Helen’s expression. From the look on her face, you’d think Claire had suggested Nikki go to the moon for a month! “So, two nights apart before the wedding?” Helen asked. “That’s right. Not that you’d be in much shape to do anything after the hen party.” Claire suggested. Little do you know, after what I have planned, you two will be climbing the walls. But you both need to learn restraint, she thought, feeling quite justified. “I suppose”, Helen finally responded reluctantly. “After all, I want the wedding night to be as special as Nikki does.” Helen wondered to herself how the hell Nikki thought she’d manage without for two nights, but she wasn’t going to be the one to put a wrench in the works. “Right then, leave all the arrangements to me. Oh, by the way, although Trish and I will be making sure you can’t touch each other, you’ll have to promise me you won’t touch yourself.” “What kind of perv do you take me for?” Helen asked in mock horror. “I know exactly what kind. Remember, I’ve known you since university.” Claire winked. That night at their club, Trish spent most of the evening trying to summon up the courage to approach Nikki. During a rare quiet moment, Trish sidled up to Nikki, who was propped against the bar enjoying watching the punters having a good time. “Nik, a quick word?” “Sure Trish, what’s up?” “Claire is having a hen party for you two a week from Thursday.” “Sounds good – do you want a list of the people I want you to invite?” “Yeah, that would be great.” Trish was trying very hard not to fidget. “Claire was also mentioning what an old-fashioned girl Helen’s turning out to be. There’s something Helen’s been wanting to discuss with you, but she’s not sure how you’d take it.” “She knows she can talk to me about anything.” Nikki responded, somewhat irritated. After all we’ve been through, what is it that Helen can’t talk to me about? “Well, she really wants your wedding night to be amazing.” “I do too.” Nikki replied indignantly. God give me strength. “Anyway,” Trish continued, “the thing is, she thinks it would be a good idea if you spent a little bit of time apart before the actual wedding.” Trish braced herself. “How much time?” No histrionics yet, thought a relieved Trish. “From the hen night, the next day and night, when you’d probably be hung over anyway, and see each other again at the wedding. You can stay with me and Helen could stay with Claire.” Trish practically winced in anticipation of Nikki’s response. “Just think Nikki, it’s only two nights and you’ll probably be too drunk the first night and hung over the second, so no problem really. From what Claire tells me, this is really important to Helen.” She knew that would clinch it. “All right, if that’s what she wants, you know I can’t deny that woman anything, even if it means denying pleasuring her for two days.” Nikki finally responded. I know, and what I wouldn’t give to have someone feel that way about me, Trish thought wistfully. “Right, so that’s settled. Give me your list of invitees as soon as possible. And by the way, you wouldn’t want to go and spoil things by pleasuring yourself.” Trish didn’t even want to look at Nikki at this point. “What kind of girl do you think I am?” Nikki smirked. “I know what kind of girl you are.” With that, Trish gave Nikki a chaste kiss on the cheek and walked off. Whew, that went better than I thought. |
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| Baileysqueen | Mar 6 2007, 11:12 AM Post #2 |
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I thought i could fight them, i was Stupid.
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Oo this sounds like its gonna be an interesting adventure! x |
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| Lisa289 | Mar 6 2007, 02:15 PM Post #3 |
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Great start! |
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| SexySimone | Mar 6 2007, 03:18 PM Post #4 |
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Looking forward to the next part. Thanks
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| aj57 | Mar 6 2007, 05:48 PM Post #5 |
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thanks guys. i've just typed up some more (at the office) and will try to send it now. Part 2 Claire was quite pleased with how the hen party was going. It was almost 9:00 and the guests had started arriving around 8:00. The wine and liquor were flowing, as was the conversation and the laughter. Although the party was at Claire’s place, Trish had helped with the decorations and catering and everyone was relaxed and enjoying themselves. To make her plan even more successful, Claire had talked Helen into coming to her place for lunch and Trish had taken the evening off and picked up Nikki at around 3:00 in the afternoon, effectively separating Helen and Nikki since just after noon. Absence makes the heart grow fonder, thought Claire. In getting dressed for the party, Helen had thought that since she and Nikki were to be effectively “celibate” until their wedding night, perhaps she should dress demurely, but then reconsidered. After all, if she dressed seductively, it was actually Nikki who would be suffering, although seeing the look in Nikki’s eyes would probably have an effect on her too. “Bugger that”, she thought. That was a chance she was prepared to take. This pre-wedding separation was Nikki’s idea and if she couldn’t handle it, then she had no-one to blame but herself. The decision having been made, Helen had taken her time with her makeup and wore a halter dress, showing her assets to their best advantage. It was summer and she left her legs bare, as they were tanned golden bronze. She wore Nikki’s favourite perfume and put it in all the places she knew Nikki would love to touch and kiss her. “But not tonight,” she thought, smiling to herself. Nikki had experienced the same difficulty in deciding what to wear. After her fourth change of clothes, Trish remarked that she hadn’t taken this much time deciding what to wear to the wedding itself. “I don’t want to make things too difficult for Helen tonight.” She declared softly. “But then, Nikki, darling, wasn’t it Helen who wanted it this way. I think you should show her what she’ll be missing for the next couple of days, but what will be waiting for her on Saturday night.” She knew she should feel guilty, but somehow all she could do was laugh to herself. “You’re right dammit.” With that, Nikki had gone back to the selection of clothes she had brought to Trish’s place and pulled out all the stops. Nikki and Trish had been the first ones to arrive at Claire’s place and when Helen and Nikki first caught sight of each other, they both gasped. Claire and Trish looked at each other helplessly. I’ve never seen such unbridled desire in anyone’s eyes before, Claire thought. I hope they can hold it together. “Now, now girls, get hold of yourselves,” Claire had warned. “The night is young and we have guests arriving any minute. Why don’t you help us finish setting up the buffet. Anything to get their minds off each other. Helen and Nikki had helped set the table. When Helen was in the kitchen to retrieve something, Nikki made it a point to be in the dining room. Any close contact and they’d have been finished!! Luckily, it hadn’t been long until the other guests started arriving and greetings and liquor were forthcoming. After Claire made sure everyone had a drink and the guests knew where to help themselves to food, the party games were started. Helen and Nikki were made to sit in two chairs in the middle of the living room, while the others sat in sofas, chairs and even the floor around them. Gifts were opened (some of which were “toys” that Helen had never seen before and caused her to blush quite a few times, but Nikki seem unperturbed). I wonder how many of these she has used before. Helen thought to herself. God, why does that thought turn me on so much and how can Nikki be so cool At 9:30 the doorbell rang and Claire got up to answer it. |
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| zena | Mar 6 2007, 07:16 PM Post #6 |
I said SIT IN THAT CHAIR
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This is good stuff I love it keep it coming.
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| SexySimone | Mar 6 2007, 07:53 PM Post #7 |
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I love this story! Waiting patiently for the next part.
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| aj57 | Mar 6 2007, 09:02 PM Post #8 |
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just typed up another tidbit. i'm not sure if you want small bits more often, or if i should save them up. let me know. however, i'm pretty much making this up as i go along. Part 3 Helen and Nikki were feeling much more relaxed. The sexual tension had subsided considerably since they had first seen each other a couple of hours before. They had even been able to hold hands and exchange the odd peck on the cheek. There was a relaxed camaraderie in the room. Even though some of the guests had been Helen’s friends initially and some had been Nikki’s and there were even a few couples they had made friends with since they had got together, everyone was getting along famously. Gossip and bawdy humour abounded. It made Nikki especially happy to think that Helen’s friends had all embraced their relationship from the very beginning. It had meant a lot to Helen. She felt quite contented as she looked around the room. Nikki leaned over to Helen and nuzzled her neck. “Life is good.” She whispered as she kissed Helen just below the ear. Helen turned to face Nikki and drew her fingers down her lover’s cheek. “Yes it is, sweetheart.” She kissed Nikki tenderly and they both sensed the right time to withdraw before there was any escalation of emotions. Trish had noticed this exchange and felt quite proud of her friends. They seemed to be keeping things in check very nicely. “Maybe this evening won’t be so hard on them after all,” she thought to herself. “Right, let’s get this party started!!” Claire shouted as she came back into the room. |
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| zena | Mar 6 2007, 09:33 PM Post #9 |
I said SIT IN THAT CHAIR
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I'll take it any way I can get it.lol Just keep it coming good stuff.
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| Lisa289 | Mar 7 2007, 02:13 PM Post #10 |
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Two great updates there. I think I have an idea about what Claire has planned...... |
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| amorgan18 | Mar 7 2007, 08:14 PM Post #11 |
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I'm really liking this fic! update soon!
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| aj57 | Mar 8 2007, 09:09 PM Post #12 |
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I've finally found a way to make the italics work (yay) and so i'm posting this small scene while i can. Part 4 “Now, we all know Nikki and Helen met and fell in love under unusual circumstances.” Claire addressed the gathering. “Unusual – bloody unbelievable more like,” came a slightly slurred response from one of the guests. “Yeah, more like the stuff of Harlequin romance. Young, straight-laced, idealistic wing governor meets fiery-tempered, passionate con, whose smouldering looks made her knees weak and awakened secret yearnings,” someone else offered. “I can just see the cover, Nikki standing on a hill, wearing her gardening gear, with a trowel in her hand staring into the distance, and Helen wearing a low cut blouse and skirt about six inches long lying at Nikki’s feet with her arms around her leg, staring up adoringly. “With handcuffs at the ready,” added another voice. “Hey, I like the sound of that.” Nikki laughed, which earned her a punch in the arm from her lover. “That’s enough from the peanut gallery.” Claire interjected. “Anyway, moving right along, I don’t know if Helen chased Nikki or Nikki chased Helen, or combinations of the two, but we’re all here because they finally caught each other.” There was a murmur of acknowledgment from the group. “I actually think it was Nikki’s green thumb that really got Helen’s attention.” Someone shouted. “Is that what Helen meant when she said she was amazed by what Nikki could do with her fingers.” An anonymous voice declared resulting in uproarious laughter from the others and a sly grin on Nikki’s face. “Hey, I never told anyone that!” Helen replied indignantly. Although I have thought it on more than a few occasions. “And as for you,” she was looking at Nikki. “I don’t know what you’re looking so smug for.” “What did I do?” Nikki asked innocently. “If I can continue?” Claire asked. “I have invited a couple of people to help me tell you the love story of Nikki and Helen.” Helen and Nikki stared at each other nervously. At that point, two women came into the room. When they came into sight, a stunned silence fell over the group. The guests of honour were gobsmacked.. These two women were the spitting image of Helen and Nikki! |
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| zena | Mar 8 2007, 10:00 PM Post #13 |
I said SIT IN THAT CHAIR
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Hey you can't leave it like that, my mouth is hanging open. more please so good.
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| zena | Mar 8 2007, 10:02 PM Post #14 |
I said SIT IN THAT CHAIR
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Lisa did you guess this?
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| SexySimone | Mar 8 2007, 10:15 PM Post #15 |
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G2 landing
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Please update us soon!! I am on the edge of my seat waiting.
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