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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 6 2007, 03:33 AM (1,239 Views) | |
| aj57 | Mar 6 2007, 03:33 AM Post #1 |
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Disclaimer: Shed Productions made the characters, wrote the original stories, and have full copyright to them. We are using these characters simply for non-profit, entertainment value. The same goes for any other known copyrighted character/storyline where a cross over fiction is written. I am happy to accept feedback openly by readers. (BOARD NOTE we would recommend if any length i.e. more than a couple of points, it is done privately away from the story itself). Part 1 “Would you two get a room!” Claire and Trish both yelled at them. This was how most evenings over at Helen and Nikki’s would end up – the two of them practically tearing the clothes off each other. Even though they had been living together for over two years and were due to get married in a couple of weeks, they still could hardly contain themselves at times, even when they had friends over. Looking sheepish, they apologized to their guests, but Claire and Trish had got the hint and said their goodnights. Even though Claire was originally Helen’s friend and Trish had a history with Nikki, they had become quite good friends over the years and since they lived quite close to each other, often drove together when they visited Helen and Nikki. This night had been Claire’s turn to drive. On the way home, Claire hatched a plan. “You know, we should have a hen party for these two, but knowing the way they drink, it would have to be at least two days before the wedding. I think they need to start showing some self-control and I think I have a way to make them do it, leaving them gasping for it on their wedding night.” “Do tell,” Trish was intrigued. “You’ll have to talk to Nikki and I’ll talk to Helen. We’ll each tell them how the other wants to honour the tradition of not seeing each other right before the wedding. You can offer that Nikki stay with you and I will ask Helen to stay with me.” “With you so far,” Trish responded. “Okay, now the hard part. We have to convince them that after the hen party and for the next day and night they are not allowed to touch each other (or themselves) to heighten the thrill of their wedding night.” “Easier said than done with these two.” Trish said. “Oh, it gets better. I’ll arrange some ‘entertainment’ for the hen party, but let that be a surprise.” “But you’re going to tell me, though,” Trish pleaded. “No, I don’t think so,” Claire declared with a grin. “Spoilsport,” Trish pouted. “So, according to this plan, they’ll spend the night of the hen party, the following day and night at our respective places?” Trish inquired. “That’s right. Otherwise, they’d never be able to keep their hands off each other, as you and I have witnessed many times.” “When do we tell them then?” Trish asked nervously. “The sooner the better I think. We’ll tell them how romantic it will be.” “I think we’ll have a harder time convincing Nikki,” Trish said. “I don’t think it’ll be much easier for Helen,” Claire responded. The next day, Claire arranged to meet Helen for lunch. She explained that she wanted to throw a hen party for them both on the Thursday evening before their Saturday nuptials, allowing them the day in-between to recover. Helen readily agreed. “Trish was mentioning how Nikki was really old-fashioned at heart and wanted your wedding night to be everything it should.” Claire tried to sound nonchalant. “Yes?” Helen looked at Claire questioningly. What was Claire getting at? “I’m sure you agree with that.” “Of course!” Helen exclaimed. “Then what Trish and I propose is that you stay with me and Nikki stays with Trish after the hen party and for the next day and night.” Claire was looking to see Helen’s expression. From the look on her face, you’d think Claire had suggested Nikki go to the moon for a month! “So, two nights apart before the wedding?” Helen asked. “That’s right. Not that you’d be in much shape to do anything after the hen party.” Claire suggested. Little do you know, after what I have planned, you two will be climbing the walls. But you both need to learn restraint, she thought, feeling quite justified. “I suppose”, Helen finally responded reluctantly. “After all, I want the wedding night to be as special as Nikki does.” Helen wondered to herself how the hell Nikki thought she’d manage without for two nights, but she wasn’t going to be the one to put a wrench in the works. “Right then, leave all the arrangements to me. Oh, by the way, although Trish and I will be making sure you can’t touch each other, you’ll have to promise me you won’t touch yourself.” “What kind of perv do you take me for?” Helen asked in mock horror. “I know exactly what kind. Remember, I’ve known you since university.” Claire winked. That night at their club, Trish spent most of the evening trying to summon up the courage to approach Nikki. During a rare quiet moment, Trish sidled up to Nikki, who was propped against the bar enjoying watching the punters having a good time. “Nik, a quick word?” “Sure Trish, what’s up?” “Claire is having a hen party for you two a week from Thursday.” “Sounds good – do you want a list of the people I want you to invite?” “Yeah, that would be great.” Trish was trying very hard not to fidget. “Claire was also mentioning what an old-fashioned girl Helen’s turning out to be. There’s something Helen’s been wanting to discuss with you, but she’s not sure how you’d take it.” “She knows she can talk to me about anything.” Nikki responded, somewhat irritated. After all we’ve been through, what is it that Helen can’t talk to me about? “Well, she really wants your wedding night to be amazing.” “I do too.” Nikki replied indignantly. God give me strength. “Anyway,” Trish continued, “the thing is, she thinks it would be a good idea if you spent a little bit of time apart before the actual wedding.” Trish braced herself. “How much time?” No histrionics yet, thought a relieved Trish. “From the hen night, the next day and night, when you’d probably be hung over anyway, and see each other again at the wedding. You can stay with me and Helen could stay with Claire.” Trish practically winced in anticipation of Nikki’s response. “Just think Nikki, it’s only two nights and you’ll probably be too drunk the first night and hung over the second, so no problem really. From what Claire tells me, this is really important to Helen.” She knew that would clinch it. “All right, if that’s what she wants, you know I can’t deny that woman anything, even if it means denying pleasuring her for two days.” Nikki finally responded. I know, and what I wouldn’t give to have someone feel that way about me, Trish thought wistfully. “Right, so that’s settled. Give me your list of invitees as soon as possible. And by the way, you wouldn’t want to go and spoil things by pleasuring yourself.” Trish didn’t even want to look at Nikki at this point. “What kind of girl do you think I am?” Nikki smirked. “I know what kind of girl you are.” With that, Trish gave Nikki a chaste kiss on the cheek and walked off. Whew, that went better than I thought. |
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| aj57 | Mar 6 2007, 03:40 AM Post #2 |
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sorry, i don't know how i did it, but i have posted the same thing twice! also, it looks like there's an attachment, but there really isn't one. i was actually trying to preview what i did, but as Helen says "for some strange reason" it ended up posting twice. and the italics haven't translated from the word version onto this. Other than that...i hope you enjoy my first foray (i'm sure that comes as a shock!) into fan fiction.
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| zena | Mar 6 2007, 04:17 AM Post #3 |
I said SIT IN THAT CHAIR
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Love it, keep it coming.
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