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[Approved]Tsuyoi Kaze
Topic Started: Oct 3 2011, 08:51 AM (859 Views)
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At A Glance

Name: Tsuyoi Kaze
Alias: “Storm Reaper”
Affiliation: Marine
Profession: Navigator
Vessel: N/A
Reputation: Commander (中佐, Chūsa)
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hometown: Drum Island

Appearance

Height: 6 feet 1 inches
Weight: 190

Physical Description: Tsuyoi has a manlier look to him, he has a very light skin tone. He has black hair, which goes down past his ears and is always combed down. His eyes are grayish black. His muscle out is not shown very through his clothing, however when he takes off his shirt, he has a rather built up body. He had a scare running down his right arm, from his shoulder to his elbow, it has begun to heal, but can still see it. Marine tattoo on his left shoulder, with his last name under it, Also a tattoo on his left palm of a black cloud.

Clothing & Accessories: Tsuyoi’s clothing is rather stylish and different. He wears Black dress pants, with black sneakers. His Black pants have a medium size cross on the right leg, he also wears a studded belt, and there is also a 4 small belts on his pants, 2 on the left side and 2 on the right side. A white button up dress shirt covers his upper body; He also wears a red tie with a black cross on it. Over the white dress shirt he wears a Jacket; This Jacket is black with white fur on the hood and around the sleeves. Navigator supplies, Tattoo of a marine symbol on his right upper arm.

Picture:
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Biography

Personality:
Tsuyoi’s Personality is a little different from most marines on the force, He doesn’t believe in the justice that the marines set for him. He doesn’t see people as pirate, marines or bounty hunters, he sees them as good guys and bad guys, He will strike you down if he thinks you are a bad guy, he will become your friend if he thinks you a good person, he doesn’t matter if your pirate, marine or bounty hunter. He actually is a very corrupted marine, he pays pirate to do his bidding, but keeps it under the table. He is a very fun loving person, always smiling and laughing at people and things, he hardly ever takes anything serious.

His favorite thing to do in live is to draw maps; he is always making his maps look perfect, or drawing new maps. He is always looking for new maps of islands he has never been too. He doesn’t like any type of seafood; he thinks it taste nasty as all get out. He sometimes gets seasick but it’s not very bad seasickness, just its different for a marine, to have seasickness.

History:
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Combat

Primary Fighting Style

Tsuyoi is a very calm, collective fighter, however while he is calm fighter but he is a reckless one, he just dives into a fight, but he is never angry when he does. He doesn’t fight using angry, he thinks it restricts your movements and make you lose focus.

Weaponry

Weapon Name: Reaper
Grade: Standard Class
Description: The reaper is a 6 feet long Scythe; it is made of regular metal, with a metal blade. The blade is about 5 feet in length. The handle of the reaper has a thin slit in it, this allows the owner to fold the blade up inside the handle, for easier carrying, also makes the reaper look like a staff.
When the scythe is folded into the handle, it has a small locking device at the bottom on the handle, the user flips the locking device and it locks the scythe blade in place inside the handle, to unlock it, you just flip it down.



Adventure Log

Items

Maps of about 50 different islands. Some from East, South, north, and west blue, also some from grandline.
Navigating Supplies.

Stats 427/427 [w/stat boosters 641/641]
Strength: 176 [110+66]
Stamina: 145 [104+41]
Speed: 176 [110+66]
Perception: 144 [103+41]
Will: 80 [53]

Stat Points Earned: 0/395
Beli Earned: 198,336,100/198,336,100

Sources

Traits
Traits 16 Traits


Devil Fruit Name: Ara Ara No Mi [Storm Storm fruit]
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Ability: The Ara Ara no Mi grants the user the power to trigger storms in the weathers around them. The user cannot affect other tangents of weather such as humidity or temperature directly and as such the type of storm they induce is dependent on the climate of their current location. Whenever such a storm is induced, the natural side effects, such as cloud cover, added precipitation or change in air pressure are also triggered. As well as inducing these effects, the user can also quell the effects of stormy weather when they are present. Naturally this fruit makes the user immune to the effects made by stormy weather, meaning they cannot be knocked down by their strong winds or soaked by their precipitation.

Techniques : 10/320 [MR: 80]

Devil Fruit Techniques


Haki Techniques


Weapon Techniques

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http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_Explore/topic/4634070/1/#new <<< using Tsuyoi from OPEX
Edited by Zoulyken, Jan 3 2012, 02:51 AM.
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Devil Fruit Name: Ara Ara No Mi [Storm Storm fruit]
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Ability: The Ara Ara no Mi grants the user the power to trigger storms in the weathers around them. The user cannot affect other tangents of weather such as humidity ortemperature directly and as such the type of storm they induce is dependent on the climate of their current location. Whenever such a storm is induced, the natural side affects, such as cloud cover, added precipitation or change in air pressure are also triggered. As well as inducing these effects, the user can also quell the effects of stormy weather when they are present. Naturally this fruit makes the user immune to the effects made by stormy weather, meaning they cannot be knocked down by their strong winds or soaked by their precipitation.

Ara Ara No Mi
Type: Natural Ability
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
This fruit allows the eater to create storms over an island-wide radius about themselves. How specific and extreme the storms are depend on the user's will:
  • Will is 10 or less: The user can trigger a windy day. On Winter islands, there will be hail. On Fall/Autumn island there will be snow. On Spring Island there will be rain.
  • Will is 50 or less: The user can trigger a freak stormy day. Under these conditions ill-equipped locals will find it as hard to move in the storms as a normal human would in the sea (1/2 normal speed). Lightning strikes can occur once per thread, with the same technical power as the user's will. can be stuck down against largest metallic structures of the area. On Winter islands, there will be hail. On Fall/Autumn island there will be snow. On Spring Island there will be rain.
  • Will is 100 or less: The user can trigger a catastrophically stormy day. Under these conditions such storms have the power to tear through towns and viligaes as named real-world hurricanes and tornadoes. Storms used at this magnitude can toss around objects that fall within the user's strength-class. Ill-equipped locals will find it very hard to move in the storms (1/3 normal speed). Lightning strikes can occur three times per thread, with the same technical power as the user's will. On Winter islands, there will be hail. On Fall/Autumn island there will be snow. On Spring Island there will be rain.
  • Will is greater than 100: The user can trigger Grandline-like storms and patterns. Under these conditions such storms have the power to put assunder towns and vilages like physical beings because of there supernatural climates. Storms used at this magnitude can be complex in there make up, so that they toss around objects that fall within the user's strength-class through a given course than in an irratice spiral. Ill-equipped locals will find it extremely hard to move in the storms as a normal human would in the sea (1/4 normal speed). Lightning strikes can occur once per post, with the same technical power as the user's will. On Winter islands, there will be hail. On Fall/Autumn island there will be snow. On Spring Island there will be rain.
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Vessel: Marine Standard Battleship - Since you're only a Commander Level marine, you need to pay to procure such a ship (see the Market Place.) You can pay for one now if you like, or holding out until you're a Commodore level unit, where it's given for free whenever you need to travel.

Weaponry: Reaper - Fill out the weapon template if you wouldn't mind, so that "regular metal" has a weapon grade.

Combat: Fighting Style - Needs some rephrasing. At the moment I can't tell if he calculates his opponent, then runs in all guns blazing, or if it's a toss up between him calculating his foe or simply fighting it out to the bitter end. Plus add a little bit about his DF and Scythe since it's clear he's making them both battle-ready.

Technique Ranks have currently been reviewed, as such some of your techniques need revising:

Lightning Scythe - The lightning bolt coming down is from your df, and your DF makes you immune to the affects of your storms, so in this case, to technique is about storing the lightning in your scythe. The problem I have with the move, is not that you store the lightning in your scythe long enough to use, but that you don't "do" anything to make it happen.
Lightning would hit your scythe by your DF powers alone, but away from a bolt zapping you for an extended period of time, you haven't explained in the tech what Dmitri does to prolong the lightning in his scythe. A feature of the scythe could store electricity, or you could explain why the lightning jostles in your scythe for more than a moment, or explain a maneouvre/technique to keep it there, but you'll need to pick something.
Unless this becoms a weapon technique, the move would be rank 40-5.

Additionally, it would take on the property of shockwave, dispersing the lightning through another attack (i.e., think of this tech as Dmitri's Gear Second, upping the power of another scythe tech from X to X+40)

Shock Wave - Through what I just said, this isn't a stand alone tech, so it would go.

Wind Slash - This tech is fine.
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finished!
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