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[Approved]Lucifer Holloway
Topic Started: Oct 5 2011, 08:40 PM (1,104 Views)
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Account Name: Majora

At A Glance

Name: Lucifer Holloway
Alias: Dark Angel
Affiliation: Neutral
Profession: Bounty Hunter
Vessel: N/A
Reputation: N/A

Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hometown: Gecko Archipelago

Appearance

Height: 8 feet
Weight: 400 lb
Physical Description: Lucifer is tall and slender. He has smooth silky black hair which cascades down to his shoulders. He has a milky white complexion which many would assume was due to make up. Dark brown eyes protrude from either eye socket which give off a slight glimmer when he is angry or upset. A tattoo of a golden sun is imprinted on his left shoulder while a silver moon can be found on his right.
Clothing & Accessories:
He wears a white low cut sleeveless under shirt underneath a black sleeveless trench coat that is held in the front by two black belts with silver buckles and it exposes his under shirt as well as his simple black pants, dark brown belt with ornate silver buckle. His trench coat has a rather high, straight collar, reaching as high as his chin. He wears only one black, fingerless glove on his left hand. The glove itself was at one time obviously longer, but has burned and tore to its small size over time. Lucifer wears simple black combat boots. He wears several different necklaces, one a silver cross, one a silver angel wing, some black beads, a few assorted dark colored necklaces. On his left wrist, he bears a black leather bracelet as well as a loose sliver chain.


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Biography

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History




Combat

Primary Fighting Style

Lucifer is against using Starfang unless he deems his opponent worthy of facing the legendary blade. Otherwise he will typically use another weapon which is readily available in his vicinity or fight it out with his fists. However, Lucifer is most accustomed to fencing and any other style of fighting would be giving himself a handicap.

Weaponry

Weapon Name: Starfang - $600,000,000
Grade: Legendary
Description: The stoic blacksmith famed throughout the Grand line, Mikhael Dryden, crafted this peerless weapon out of a metal that fell from the heavens. The world has possibly never seen its like, or ever will again. Legend has it that the metal this weapon is forged out of was found in a meteorite that had fallen from the sky. The rapier its self has a golden hilt with a lions head at the tip. The blade is a bright white; almost blinding to look at it directly. Dark blue veins run down the length of the sword; which glow eerily if danger approaches. The sword is unmatched in sharpness, being able to cut through even the hardiest of material. The blade its self spans a length of two meters and is light as a feather. To top it off, Starfang is coated entirely in sea stone.



Adventure Log

Items

Logpose - $5,000,000


Stats with stat boosters 774/774 [w/o stat boosters 564/564]
Strength: 162 (142 + 20)
Stamina: 172 (132 + 40)
Speed: 215 (140 + 75)
Perception: 225 (150 + 75)
Will: 97 [71]

Stat Points Earned: 0/532
Beli Earned: 5,000,000/610,000,000

Sources

Traits

Traits 18 Traits


Techniques: 288/388
Starfang



Haki




Misc


Edited by Majora, Oct 22 2011, 01:30 PM.
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Majora

Link to character from Treasure Island: http://s4.zetaboards.com/Treasure_Island/topic/7984630/1/#new
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A little FYI

  • Your Profession doesn't have to be Bounty Hunter, that is covered by your affiliation. You can make it your profession if you choose, but just so you know...
  • You don't pick what Reputation you desire, you list your character's achievements and by the net result you get your title. As a bounty hunter your current character hasn't hunted any bounties, furthermore the character it is based off is a pirate, having no such bounties hunted either. As such your title would be "Bounty Hunter".
  • A Shinigami fruit by name alone is pretty alarming. I'm intrigued to here want mythical animal you're basing it off of.
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Sorry about that, I kept the profession as bounty hunter since I haven't decided yet what I'd like him to be. As for his reputation I kinda got that mixed up with being able to begin with more stats and beli. Anyway, the devil fruit is meant to turn him into the grim reaper. More of a mythical being than a mythical animal, like Sengoku's Buddha fruit. I haven't fully decided what the benefits are but I'll add them up soon and we can decide the boundaries of it from there. Or I might scrap it altogether, not entirely sure what I'd like to do with this char yet :p
Edited by Majora, Oct 11 2011, 01:08 AM.
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Mythic Zoans are the only form of mythic fruit available, and like Sengoku's Daibutsu fruit, the Zoans of myth are all animals which are mythical but are claimed to be beings of this world. In the case of Sengoku's Buddha fruit, it's based of the giant buddha statues which are fabelled to come alive to administer peace and justice, not Buddha himself. Shinigami aren't fabelled as earthly beings at all on the other hand, and are usually cited as being from another dimension, no different than pulling in an idea from another anime.

It doesn't translate,

If you want a mythic Zoan, best bet is to google or wiki for mythical animals. There's a good tonne of legends about this or that animal which is said to reside in this or that lake/mountain.

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Majora

Done
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[I'm not going to get at you over rapidly vamping your stats in the edit you made today - the char came from your site so that's your perogative if you wanna do that.]

Weaponry - You obviously know the weapon comes to :beli: 600,000,000, so just put the price on your weapon and deduct the money from your char.

Logpose - Again, 5 mill for the 'pose, same deal.




Technique Ranks have currently been reviewed, as such some of your techniques need revising:

Stars Might - Technique rank doesn't dictate what you can cut through, your strength does. Since that is all there is to this technique, at the moment it isn't a technique.

Meteor Shower - Losing the part about Heat Seeking, the tech would be fine at rank 80-90.

Northern Wind - This technique isn't valid. Barring a weapon tech, support tech or devil fruit, you can't emmit heat-seeking freezing air blades.

Blazing Sun - Same again about the Heat-seeking, and the burning effect without decent support tech.

Atmospheric Shield - The move definitely needs a lot more limitation, by the very nature of your charcter attempting the move with untrained bare hands or with a fencing blade. I'll accept reflecting projectile techniques of lower rank, but by virtue of this encompassing all projectile technique ever, you'll be limited to one technique for each of yours, meaning you can remake this tech as many times as you like, but for each SL, you will use on valid rank version to nullify your opponent's use of a particular projectile technique.

Oh - and none of these techniques branch by the way.
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Edited.
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Sorry - I remembered putting somewhere about traits but it didn't seem to have posted.

Character's get a maximum of 15 earned traits. With the 3 starter traiters, standard characters have a maximum of 18.




Techniques

Meteor Shower - Again, material cutting is dictated by your strength, not the technique. And the tech was 80-90, not 120.

Galactic Cyclone is a mixture of several elements. This isn't cool as a single technique. I don't catch how the technique ups your speed and strength, secondly you can't have a damaging supportive technique.
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Alright edited ~~

If everything else is fine, can I do the role for the haki? I doubt I'll get it since it's only 1% but if so does it count as a trait slot or not since it's free? As in does it go towards the 18 traits?
Edited by Majora, Oct 18 2011, 11:39 PM.
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