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[Approved]Lucifer Holloway
Topic Started: Oct 5 2011, 08:40 PM (1,105 Views)
Majora

Account Name: Majora

At A Glance

Name: Lucifer Holloway
Alias: Dark Angel
Affiliation: Neutral
Profession: Bounty Hunter
Vessel: N/A
Reputation: N/A

Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hometown: Gecko Archipelago

Appearance

Height: 8 feet
Weight: 400 lb
Physical Description: Lucifer is tall and slender. He has smooth silky black hair which cascades down to his shoulders. He has a milky white complexion which many would assume was due to make up. Dark brown eyes protrude from either eye socket which give off a slight glimmer when he is angry or upset. A tattoo of a golden sun is imprinted on his left shoulder while a silver moon can be found on his right.
Clothing & Accessories:
He wears a white low cut sleeveless under shirt underneath a black sleeveless trench coat that is held in the front by two black belts with silver buckles and it exposes his under shirt as well as his simple black pants, dark brown belt with ornate silver buckle. His trench coat has a rather high, straight collar, reaching as high as his chin. He wears only one black, fingerless glove on his left hand. The glove itself was at one time obviously longer, but has burned and tore to its small size over time. Lucifer wears simple black combat boots. He wears several different necklaces, one a silver cross, one a silver angel wing, some black beads, a few assorted dark colored necklaces. On his left wrist, he bears a black leather bracelet as well as a loose sliver chain.


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Combat

Primary Fighting Style

Lucifer is against using Starfang unless he deems his opponent worthy of facing the legendary blade. Otherwise he will typically use another weapon which is readily available in his vicinity or fight it out with his fists. However, Lucifer is most accustomed to fencing and any other style of fighting would be giving himself a handicap.

Weaponry

Weapon Name: Starfang - $600,000,000
Grade: Legendary
Description: The stoic blacksmith famed throughout the Grand line, Mikhael Dryden, crafted this peerless weapon out of a metal that fell from the heavens. The world has possibly never seen its like, or ever will again. Legend has it that the metal this weapon is forged out of was found in a meteorite that had fallen from the sky. The rapier its self has a golden hilt with a lions head at the tip. The blade is a bright white; almost blinding to look at it directly. Dark blue veins run down the length of the sword; which glow eerily if danger approaches. The sword is unmatched in sharpness, being able to cut through even the hardiest of material. The blade its self spans a length of two meters and is light as a feather. To top it off, Starfang is coated entirely in sea stone.



Adventure Log

Items

Logpose - $5,000,000


Stats with stat boosters 774/774 [w/o stat boosters 564/564]
Strength: 162 (142 + 20)
Stamina: 172 (132 + 40)
Speed: 215 (140 + 75)
Perception: 225 (150 + 75)
Will: 97 [71]

Stat Points Earned: 0/532
Beli Earned: 5,000,000/610,000,000

Sources

Traits

Traits 18 Traits


Techniques: 288/388
Starfang



Haki




Misc


Edited by Majora, Oct 22 2011, 01:30 PM.
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Strider Xan
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It's a free trait and stands as a free trait if the character qualifies for Conqueror's Haki. As the rules state, you only get the roll for this colour of Haki as the character is approved and not a moment before.




Techniques

Asteroid Field - This technique would be at least rank 200.

Space Runner - I don't see how the technique speeds you up at all but its commendable technique away from that. As for temperatures and other such gauges, you should stick to rank rather than calling numbers, meaning the technique grants you the currently described immunities against techniques of lower rank.
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Majora

Alright, edited.
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Again, I have to say that Space Runner doesn't make you faster. Character's can't simply say "I'm not running at max speed" and your technique doesn't produce either a new method of movement (i.e. you are still running) and it does not enhance your body in any way. (I.e. like a Zoan transformation) so the boost has no recognisable beginning.

Other than that the tech is fine.
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Majora

Edited ~~
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Congratulations!

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All the best!
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