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[Approved]Jake Austin
Topic Started: Jan 15 2012, 11:52 PM (423 Views)
Oblivion
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Account Name: Lightforce

At A Glance

Name: Jake Austin
Alias: "Blue Beret"
Affiliation: Pirate
Profession: MMA
Vessel: N/A
Reputation: :beli: 0
Bounties Issued


Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hometown: Isle of Winam, North Blue

Appearance

Height: 6'4"
Weight: 210
Physical Description:

Clothing & Accessories: Jake wears a blue beret that matches his medium long blue hair and light blue eyes. He was a darker blue color compared to the beret for an under shirt that has the sleeves going up to his elbows. Over the under shirt he wears a white shirt with black designs covering most of the left side of the shirt. The black designs also go around the lower part of the sleeves pertaining to the white shirt. He wears black boxers under the blue jeans he has. As for his feet, Jake wears white socks with some black designs at the top of it covered by low top sneakers that are a mixture of white, black, and blue color.

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Biography

Personality: Jake is the type of pirate that will not harm civilians. Not just will he not attack civilians, but he is also not the type of person to pick a fight with someone unless something happens, such as that person harming someone he knows, or them picking a fight with him. Yes he does have a calm nature. However, when someone harms someone he cares about his power will become unlimited. Another thing about Jake is that he does not like to run away once he starts to fight since most likely than not he is fighting to protect something or someone. To him it does not matter who the enemy is, whoever dares to mess with someone he cares about he will fight that enemy until they are defeated.

Furthermore, Jake loves to have adventures and go to places where other people would not dare approach. To him being a pirate is about sailing the seas with your own freedom and enjoying what life has to offer. For this reason, when he comes across pirates that either harm innocent people and/or kill their own crewmates he becomes enraged and will fight that enemy until he defeats them.

Some people would consider him a dreamer since he believes that he will be the person who finds the great treasure One Piece and becomes the Pirate King. Does he mind if people laugh at him for saying that he will become the Pirate King, no he does not. When people laugh at him he either ignores them or asks them what is stopping him from becoming Pirate King. In a way saying why couldn’t’ he become the pirate king and other pirates could.

History: Jake was born on the island of Micqueot located in the North Blue. While living on this island he was raised by his mother and father who struggled to provide for him. However, Jake understood the situation that the three of them lived in and never asked for anything. Jake simply lived with what his parents could offer and thanked them for everything they did for him.

Eventually by the time he reached the age of eight his dad left out to sea to become a pirate and sail the world. This moment in Jake’s life was sad, after all he was raised with his father by his side and now he will parted away from him. At the same time, it was understandable that his father decided to leave since it was his dream to sail the seas. After that day, Jake decided to become a pirate himself and started to train for it.

He started to train by meeting up privately with a man named Harley Race. Race was a man who owned a MMA studio on Micqueot. Jake received lessons in MMA through Race who trained him during the night time. Night time was the best time for Jake to train because it helped him keep it a secret. Jake had to perform a bunch of different exercises to learn MMA and to keep himself in shape. Some of the exercises include running for miles to build up his stamina, wall climbing along with push-ups to build his strength, punching and kicking bags to help develop his accuracy and speed with his strikes, and he also did things in yoga and flexibility to allow him to become more agile.

The training was kept a secret from his mother until he turn twelve years old. When he told her though, his mother said that she already knew about him wanted to become a pirate, after all it was in his blood. His father’s male ancestors were all pirates and left at some point their families behind to sail the seas. Jake was fascinated to learn that all his ancestors were actually past pirates. Learning about the history of his father’s ancestors just encouraged him more in becoming a pirate because he also wants to continue the tradition. Before he leaves the island his mother gives him a blue beret to carry with him until he returns back to Micqueot as a successful pirate.

Combat

Primary Fighting Style

  • Mix Martial Arts: Mix Martial Arts involves both striking and grappling techniques, both standing and on the ground, including boxing, wrestling, Brazilian jiu-jitsu, muay Thai, kickboxing, karate, judo and other styles like karate, taekwondo and Kaspar Matsulevits Combat JiuJitsu.


Weaponry
None

Adventure Log

Items


Stats
Strength: 8
Stamina: 8
Speed: 8
Perception: 8
Will: 4

Stat Points Earned: 0/0
Beli Earned: 500,000/500,000

Sources

Traits
Patience (3 Traits)

Devil Fruit Name: N/a
Devil Fruit Type: N/a
Devil Fruit Ability: N/a

Techniques:

General Techniques: 16/16
Max Rank: 4

Croc Shot - R4
Branched From: 4
Type: Offense
Range: Melee
Stats: N/a
Description: A heel kick to the chin of the opponent.

Retour Fist - R4
Branched From: 4
Type: Offense
Range: Melee
Stats: N/a
Description: Jake performs a 360 spin and extends his right arm to hit his opponent with the back of his fist. This can be done the other way around too.

Coup Secondaries - R4
Branched From: 4
Type: Offense
Range: Melee
Stats: N/a
Description: He jumps into the air and performs a side kick. The kick is focus on the middle chest, but if he cannot hit it then he will focus on another part of the body and try to strike it.

Bauch Kick - R4
Branched From: 4
Type: Offense
Range: Melee
Stats: N/a
Description: Jake kicks his opponent in the abdomen region.
Edited by Oblivion, Jan 18 2012, 03:28 AM.
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Strider Xan
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You have list Doctor doctor as a profession however you become an adventuring pirate at the age of 12, with leave the question of when in the last 5 years did you receive doctor training and by who. A profession is more than just having simple survival skills in that trade, it means that your character is skilled enough to actually make a living out of being a professional in that field. In terms of medicine, calling your character a doctor means they know more than simple first aid.





Your primary fighting style is way too broad. It's called primary for a reason. By virtue of technique tiers, wants tech ranks reach the 30's and up, your techniques will probably display some hint at other fighting styles but they should find their base in some foundation. "Mixed martial arts" is much too broad.




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  • Keep it simple. Techniques may be complex, but should typically involve only one or two actions. A single technique should not include a combo, where many actions, each hinging on the success of the one before, occur in succession. Combos are possible, but should either be achieved by freeform hits or a sequence of techniques.


All of your techniques currently break this guideline.
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You still have yet to explain your doctor profession in anyway, especially considering your necessary devotion to martial arts to be a mixed martial artist. Whether or not you choose to keep Doctor as a profession, you will definitely need to add Mixed Martial Artist as a profession too.




Your techs are fine now.
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Congratulations!

Your character profile has been fully approved. Check the signature template to represent this newly approved character in your signature.

All the best!
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