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[Approved]Carrot Jones; A Marine
Topic Started: Jun 26 2012, 12:52 AM (391 Views)
Seven

Account Name: Seven

At A Glance

Name: Carrot Jones
Alias: None
Affiliation: Marines
Profession: None
Vessel: None
Reputation: Seaman


Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Hometown: LogueTown

Appearance

Height: 5’8”
Weight: 140 lbs
Physical Description: The most noticeable thing about Carrot is his straight bright red hair, making his name a suitable fit. He can appear either friendly and lighthearted or sternly serious depending on the situation at hand. He stands at about an average height, not too tall and not too short, and has just barely enough muscle attached to him to separate him from someone defined as scrawny.
Clothing & Accessories: Carrot dresses in the typical white and blue marine suit, as well as sticking with wearing the tradition marine cap, though they have the choice not to. If his Den Den Mushi which also serves as his pet and weapon counts as an accessory, then that can almost always be found hitching a ride on his shoulders or head.

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Biography

Personality: Carrot is an energetic man, quick to jump on anything that seems like it will be interesting to do. He has a constant thirst for adventure, which fuels him to explore and travel. His behavior can seem childish in nature, but he can usually behave seriously when the situation calls for it. He has a good sense of humor, and is quick to poke fun at both himself and his comrades, jokingly criticizing them without actual ill intent. He gets along very well with animals, and they will usually behave kindly towards him. Its rare for him to be attacked by an animal, even if it is trained or in the wild. He is easily influenced by others personality wise, and occasionally adapts his behavior to those around him.

History: Unlike most wannabe protagonists, Carrot has no significant or interesting history. The only thing that drove him to join the Marines is that he’s always had a strong longing for adventure, and now that he’s all grown up wants to put some of his dreams into action and set sail for a life of exciting battle and spectacular sights. For a while, he had to think about whether he wanted to be a Marine or a Pirate, since all he really wanted was an excuse to have an adventure. In the end, he decided he’d rather be on the “good” side than live a life of crime.
Carrot has also always had a way with animals. Since he was a kid, he could approach a wild animal without it running off, often times resulting in the animal behaving acceptingly towards him or show signs of trust. About a year ago, he found a wandering Den Den Mushi, and decided to raise it as a pet. It soon became his best friend, almost always hitching a ride on either his shoulder or his head. How the snail made the transition from a pet to Carrot’s primary weapon is uncertain.

Combat

Primary Fighting Style
Carrot fights in a unique and unorthodox way, widely questioned as a legitimate fighting style. He uses his pet, Shield, a den den mushi with an unusually large amount of stamina, as his primary weapon, using it as both a shield to fend from attacks, and as a projectile, throwing it at his opponent with all the force he can muster. In the future, he plans to replace the snail’s shell with some sort of dial, or possibly replace a portion of it with seastone.

Weaponry
Weapon Name: Single Shot Flintlock Pistol
Grade: Standard
Description: A small handheld pistol that can fire a single bullet before having to cooldown via a reload post. Can fire up to 10 bullets per SL
Price: Free (One of the potential 2 free Standard Sized Standard Class Weapons)


Adventure Log

Items
Shield, Carrot's Pet Snail [See Below]

Stats
Strength: 9 (8 + 1)
Stamina: 8
Speed: 8
Perception: 9 (8 + 1)
Will: 4

Stat Points Earned: 0/0
Beli Earned: 500,000/500,000

Sources

Traits
Stat Altering Traits (2)
Assistance Related Traits (1)


Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A

Techniques: 4/16

Den Den Cannon – R4
Branched From: None
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Stats: None
Carrot thrusts his pet snail at his opponent with a twist in his throw as the snail curls deep into its shell. If performed successfully, the snail will hit its target with maximum force, and rebound off his opponent as Carrot gets into position to catch him.
Edited by Seven, Jun 27 2012, 04:12 PM.
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Strider Xan
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The character is fine over all, little to edit, but a lot to add. A whole other character to be honest. Your NPC Shield, needs a character profile, specifically the "Individual NPC" Template found here. No need to make a new thread for it, just post it here. Additionally, the template for weapons is as follows:

Weapon Name:
Grade:
Description:
Price: :beli:
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Seven

Errr, I did make a profile for my NPC. It was in the "Shield, Carrot's Pet Snail" spoiler under the "Items" section since I wasn't really sure where to put it. I'll post his profile in a separate post if that's how it should be done.

-Changed the flintlock pistol to fit the Weapon Template
-Removed NPC description from Items and placed in separate post
Edited by Seven, Jun 27 2012, 04:13 PM.
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Seven

Account Name: Seven
RPC Name: Carrot Jones

At A Glance

Name: Shield
Alias: N/A
Affiliation: Marines
Profession: N/A
Vessel: N/A
Reputation: N/A


Age: 6
Gender: Male
Race: Den Den Mushi
Hometown: LogueTown

Appearance

Height: 8”
Weight: 10 lbs
Physical Description: Shield has rough orange skin, with two perky stalks for eyes. He has a battered blue shell on his back, which seems like it has been to Hell and back. It has scrapes, dents, and cuts all over it, but still looks as firm and stable as ever.
Clothing & Accessories: Last time I checked, snails didn’t wear clothes.

Picture: /

Biography

Personality: Shield is a generally relaxed snail, with nothing on his mind except the current situation. He shares a love of adventure with his owner, and is willing to travel all across the seas for some excitement. He is willing to risk his life for any situation, since he doesn’t seem to care if he’s gravely injured, or even dies, and doesn’t mind being used as a weapon by his owner.

History: Shield was born into service of the Marines, as a tool for communicating. Once, during a fierce battle, he fell out of his owner’s pocket and was left behind. He slowly crawled around, without a general direction in mind, and was picked up by Carrot Jones, his current owner. He and Carrot developed a friendship together and have been through many adventures, somehow resulting in Shield becoming Carrot’s primary weapon. He doesn’t really mind, since taking damage is his only impressive ability.

Combat

Primary Fighting Style
Shield is less of a fighter and more of a weapon. He is used by his owner as a protective device, and a projectile. His only real “style” would be the ability to take massive amounts of damage without suffering mortal injuries, which he is fairly good at, along with the potential for some strong defensive techniques.

Weaponry
None

Adventure Log

Items
None

Stats
Strength:1
Stamina: 16
Speed: 2
Perception: 1
Will: 3

Stat Points Earned: 0/0

Traits
None

Devil Fruit Name: N/A
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A

Techniques: 3/12

Harden - R3
Branched From: None
Type: Supportive
Range: Self
Stats: +3 Stamina, (-2 Speed during cooldown)
Shield tenses all the muscles in his body, trying to keep his structure as firm as possible. While in this state, his stamina is given a small boost. This technique has a cooldown of 1 post before it can be used again, and during the cooldown his body will be too exhausted to move, dragging his speed down 2 points.
Edited by Seven, Jun 27 2012, 04:58 PM.
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Congratulations!

Your character profile has been fully approved. Check the signature template to represent this newly approved character in your signature.

All the best!
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