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| janlukky | Jul 5 2010, 09:08 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Squall Leonhart Nickname: leon Age: 17 Height: 177cm (5'9") Weight:120 Gender: M Personality:he is introverted, brooding, cold, and taciturn teenager who pushes away those who would otherwise be considered his friends. Though withdrawn, Squall does not shrink from what he considers his duty. As much as he resents assuming leadership, he is the first to ensure that what is necessary gets done. Squall's clear mind and sense of responsibility lead others to trust and follow him. He doesn't believe in relying on others, as friends and family. He rarely talks to other people and tends to keep to himself. he keeps with him at home a gunblade so you may see him practicing at home other times it is carried with him due to his background. Appearance:Squall is most often seen wearing a distinctive black leather bomber jacket with fur trim on the collar and a low-cut white shirt underneath. With this he wears black pants along with three interconnecting belts hanging off the waist as well as black boots and gloves. He has a silver chain necklace with a Griever pendant on the end and matching ring. The only time he isn't wearing this particular outfit is when he's wearing his SeeD uniform, which he only does if he's required to. History:In the past he is a missionary until he retired. He can't remember his parents, and his sister was taken away when he was young, making him afraid of losing the feelings of comfort they provided. To avoid these things he has traveled afar form his former home of Balamb Garden. He eventually comes to rethink his choice in life, and accept the support and friendships of his comrades. However, he does not change fully - he is still a silent and focused individual, though he does warm up to others and become more social. He has lost his former memory, today he is just a ordinary trainer, who knows his path may change yet again. and yet he has fighting skills yet untapped. When he came to Acteos he found an abandoned pokemon egg, so he took it with him and raised it. The egg turns out to be a Shinx whom he kept till this day. There are also times he thought of releasing it back to the wild and he did try but it always came back to him. So now he became close friends to the Shinx whom he has now named Ellone as a memory of someone like a sister to Squall. He currently lives in Hiroki Town. Other Info: N/A Starter Pokemon: Shinx Lvl 1 http://www.pokebip.com/pokemon/pokedex/images/sugimori/403.pnghttp://pokemon.marriland.com/diamond_pearl/pokedex/403 this pokemon has been with him since he moved and was raised since it was an egg so it is a close friend to Leon Pokemon Gender: Female Pokemon Attacks: Tackle Power: 35 Accuracy: 95 Type: Normal Physical A physical attack in which the user charges and slams into the foe with its whole body. Leer Power -- Accuracy: 100 Type: Normal Status The foe is given an intimidating leer with sharp eyes. The target's Defense stat is reduced. Edited by ErikSinister, Jul 6 2010, 10:02 PM.
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| ErikSinister | Jul 6 2010, 12:30 AM Post #2 |
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Even though its just a test paragraphs need to be longer, 3 sentences is not a paragraph. |
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| janlukky | Jul 6 2010, 03:11 AM Post #3 |
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i will try this fixed |
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| ErikSinister | Jul 6 2010, 04:08 AM Post #4 |
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still need 1 more paragrah on history bro |
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| janlukky | Jul 6 2010, 04:42 AM Post #5 |
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sighs* i am not a guy ...... try this |
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| ErikSinister | Jul 6 2010, 04:45 AM Post #6 |
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two more sentences and sorry the character is a guy so it threw me off, also your attacks need the power and accuracy like on my bio or the others in the archive Last para for history seems hasty, but 1/2 Edited by ErikSinister, Jul 6 2010, 05:05 AM.
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| janlukky | Jul 6 2010, 05:24 AM Post #7 |
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1/2 ? |
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| ErikSinister | Jul 6 2010, 06:10 AM Post #8 |
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have to get two mods approval or 1 admin drag will basically see i approved and move it to the archives |
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| Dragoon | Jul 6 2010, 06:33 PM Post #9 |
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Chat Display - Dragoon989
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Pretty much what Erik said
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