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Faulkner; Warrior; Joins Chapter 16
Topic Started: Jun 27 2007, 05:13 PM (722 Views)
Elite Lord Sigma
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You need to make the line between his head and neck less prominent (change the colors used there). Also, according to Firefly's biography, he's unshaven, so he also needs a messy beard.
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Blader8
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Lets go Hyorinmaru!
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Elite Lord Sigma
Jul 14 2007, 12:28 AM
You need to make the line between his head and neck less prominent (change the colors used there). Also, according to Firefly's biography, he's unshaven, so he also needs a messy beard.

I'll work on those
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Blader8
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There ya go B)
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Blader8
Jul 14 2007, 06:27 AM
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There ya go B)

It looks well kept. Instead it's supposed to look messy.

You had some shading problems on the body So I fixed it as well as the shoulder plates color.

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Blader8
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Mario
Jul 15 2007, 02:26 PM
Blader8
Jul 14 2007, 06:27 AM
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There ya go B)

It looks well kept. Instead it's supposed to look messy.

You had some shading problems on the body So I fixed it as well as the shoulder plates color.

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Well thank you Mario B)
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Blader8
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theres the beard from before compared to another beard, I don't even want to think about putting in Dozla's giant killer one though
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Mario
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Make it an actual beard instead of having it just cover his mouth.
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General_Banzai
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Wait, I just noticed... How is he wearing half a shirt? O_o
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LordUldren
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It's a full shirt, however he only is wearing half because of the shoulderpad. On a collared shirt only the back is attached so you can freely exclude wearing half. Since he isn't wearing the right half that side slouches down to the waste. Try it at home it works.
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It's a good mug, but it's missing some key features in Francisco's description. The mug is not unshaven, for instance, and it doesn't show the scar on his chest. The hair also isn't anything close to long and shaggy.
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Jun 22 2008, 09:41 PM
It's a good mug, but it's missing some key features in Francisco's description. The mug is not unshaven, for instance, and it doesn't show the scar on his chest. The hair also isn't anything close to long and shaggy.

The hair looks shaggy to me...
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Firefly
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It's not long.
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LordUldren
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Take out the unshaven long hair part >> I'll add a scar
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LordUldren
Jun 22 2008, 04:36 PM
Take out the unshaven long hair part >> I'll add a scar

His backstory won't make sense without the long, shaggy hair. He spent the last two years of his life as a lone fugitive, barely getting by stealing from people. Someone like that isn't going to be clean-shaven with neatly trimmed hair. =/
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General_Banzai
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He's got totally overgrown sideburns. Isn't that enough?
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Kenshin
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I bet he could shave. They manage in westerns. You just use a knife.
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What kind of fugitive has overgrown sideburns, but trimmed hair and a clean-shaven face?

Ah well. I still don't think it fits him, but if you guys think it's fine, I can go with it...
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I really have no opinion on its suitability as Francisco's mug. I was just arguing the possibility of a shaven fugitive.
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LordUldren
Jun 22 2008, 03:47 PM
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Gordon? Or shit?
Previously known as Link, so Kenshin doesn't get confused.
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