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| Elite Lord Sigma | Jul 14 2007, 12:28 AM Post #21 |
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You need to make the line between his head and neck less prominent (change the colors used there). Also, according to Firefly's biography, he's unshaven, so he also needs a messy beard. |
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| Blader8 | Jul 14 2007, 01:12 AM Post #22 |
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Lets go Hyorinmaru!
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I'll work on those |
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| Blader8 | Jul 14 2007, 01:27 AM Post #23 |
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Lets go Hyorinmaru!
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| Mario | Jul 15 2007, 02:26 PM Post #24 |
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It looks well kept. Instead it's supposed to look messy. You had some shading problems on the body So I fixed it as well as the shoulder plates color.
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| Blader8 | Jul 15 2007, 02:54 PM Post #25 |
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Lets go Hyorinmaru!
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Well thank you Mario
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| Blader8 | Jul 15 2007, 03:21 PM Post #26 |
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Lets go Hyorinmaru!
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![]() theres the beard from before compared to another beard, I don't even want to think about putting in Dozla's giant killer one though |
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| Mario | Jul 15 2007, 03:55 PM Post #27 |
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Make it an actual beard instead of having it just cover his mouth. |
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| LordUldren | Jun 22 2008, 03:47 PM Post #28 |
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| General_Banzai | Jun 22 2008, 03:53 PM Post #29 |
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Wait, I just noticed... How is he wearing half a shirt? O_o |
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| LordUldren | Jun 22 2008, 03:59 PM Post #30 |
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It's a full shirt, however he only is wearing half because of the shoulderpad. On a collared shirt only the back is attached so you can freely exclude wearing half. Since he isn't wearing the right half that side slouches down to the waste. Try it at home it works. |
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| Firefly | Jun 22 2008, 04:41 PM Post #31 |
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It's a good mug, but it's missing some key features in Francisco's description. The mug is not unshaven, for instance, and it doesn't show the scar on his chest. The hair also isn't anything close to long and shaggy. |
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| General_Banzai | Jun 22 2008, 04:43 PM Post #32 |
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The hair looks shaggy to me... |
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| Firefly | Jun 22 2008, 05:19 PM Post #33 |
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It's not long. |
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| LordUldren | Jun 22 2008, 05:36 PM Post #34 |
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Take out the unshaven long hair part >> I'll add a scar |
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| Firefly | Jun 22 2008, 07:14 PM Post #35 |
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His backstory won't make sense without the long, shaggy hair. He spent the last two years of his life as a lone fugitive, barely getting by stealing from people. Someone like that isn't going to be clean-shaven with neatly trimmed hair. =/ |
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| General_Banzai | Jun 22 2008, 07:27 PM Post #36 |
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He's got totally overgrown sideburns. Isn't that enough? |
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| Kenshin | Jun 22 2008, 07:33 PM Post #37 |
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I bet he could shave. They manage in westerns. You just use a knife. |
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| Firefly | Jun 22 2008, 07:51 PM Post #38 |
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What kind of fugitive has overgrown sideburns, but trimmed hair and a clean-shaven face? Ah well. I still don't think it fits him, but if you guys think it's fine, I can go with it... |
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| Kenshin | Jun 22 2008, 08:12 PM Post #39 |
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I really have no opinion on its suitability as Francisco's mug. I was just arguing the possibility of a shaven fugitive. |
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| Doga | Jun 8 2011, 02:47 PM Post #40 |
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Doga to the extreme
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Gordon? Or shit? |
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