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| Megaflamer | Oct 2 2010, 08:16 AM Post #1 | ||||
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Character Template [-----] Basic Character Information Name:Lina Thousaka Age:19 Gender:Female Race:Human Faction : W.I.S.E Rank : none (yet, will add once she joins) Physical Appearance Height:160 cm Weight: 50 kg (roughly 100 pounds) Hair:Long and bright red Eyes:Strange orange eyes that looks like they hold a inner fire Clothing/Accessories: Lina usually wears a t-shirt thats a number too large combined with a pair of perfectly fitting pants, she wears a pair of sneakers on her feet. The only piece of jewellery she has is a necklace fitted with a red stone General Appearance: Lina has a rather petite body build that is heavily dominated by her long red hair. She often appear to be very lax, wearing only what she herself sees as comfortable clothes. the only distinguishing feature she has apart from her hair is a strange birthmark shaped like a fireball located on her right palm. The Character Personality: [Destructive] Lina has an uncanny love for destroying things, often spending a lot of time and effort to build something only for the one moment when she can smash it to pieces. She has an especially strong love for explosions. [careless] She never had what other would call responsibility, often taking a 'whatever' or 'not my problem' mindset for things that do concern her, an example would be going 'whatever' when she breaks something very valuable that happens to belong to someone else [possessive] Once she has something she deems to belong to herself she will go to great lengths to prevent anyone else from having it, this includes people as well as objects. [sadist] She loves inflicting pain on others, especially people she do not like and can spend a lot of time tormenting them. However she do not find any pleasure in tormenting random people she knows nothing about, it has to be either an enemy or a 'friend' she do not like much [Childlike] Due to unfortunate circumstances Linas mind is very close to that of a child Hometown:Tokyo,Japan History:While Lina is from Japan a strange jump in her genetics made her take after her great grandma who was from Scandinavia, needless to say it was a big shock to her parents who both had the characteristics of pure Japanese. her first years was mostly spent tormenting the neighbours cat, her reason for doing this was due to a twisted sense of revenge because said neighbours often treated her with scorn and even sometimes outright hit her. however one day after they had physically harmed her she hit back with pure anger, and judge her surprise when she actually harmed them, in fact she sent a man flying several feet. At this time she was only 4 years old and it was the first sign she showed of having psychic abilities. Sadly she got reported to the police and not soon afterwards she was taken from her parents and was sent to a strange facility where they started to experiment on her. that said it was not all bad, she was allowed a few possessions and she treasured those above all else, especially a red necklace that she refused to take off even during experiments. The scientists soon learned that she cooperated much easier as long as she was allowed to keep it and so everyone but her soon forgot she was wearing it at all. While she showed much promise at first that soon stalled, she seemed to be incapable of going past a certain point, the scientists eventually figured that she needed to be more mature for her power to fully develop. with that experimentation more or less stopped for a few years, during this time she lived a more or less normal life at the facility. She did not hate the researchers or anything, afterall she knew that they were only doing their job, but she did get very bored while living like this and spent most of her days playing with toy-bricks, she would spend entire days and sometimes even weeks building huge structures only to completely smash them when she felt that they were complete. All that came to a stop not far from her ninth birthday when the people in the lab decided to start up the experiments again, only this time they put her in a strange tube where she entered a stasis-like condition, this was only supposed to last a few weeks but unfortunately the day of rebirth occurred and most of the facility got destroyed. But by some twist of fate the parts governing power supply to her tank remained intact due to the whole thing being deep underground. And so she got stuck there, just waiting for someone to discover her. Psychic abilities , and Possessions PSI power name :None PSI power Ability :None Weaponry :None Items :A necklace fitted with a red stone PP Earned: 0 PP total : 36
Slots used :2 Slots applied :2 ~Saving slots: Burst 2*3 Saving slots are used for people who wish to save their slot points for better cores , and PSI abilities . Here is how they work , by using how many slot points they have , they can add 3 multiplied by the number of slots open and add them to a stat category . Using the saving slot , when the user next earns a slot point he can use this again , on another stat category. Techniques Regular Technique Points:22 Used Technique Points:0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Megaflamer, Oct 3 2010, 06:26 PM.
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Robert Andersson • Threat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan • Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15 Lina Thousaka • Rank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan• Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1 | |||||
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| Nick | Oct 2 2010, 12:36 PM Post #2 | ||||
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No problems with the character as far as I can see, just a few things that should be modified, but doesn't really matter. Grammar Nazi-ing;; "the only piece of jewelery she has is a necklace fitted with a red stone" "she has an especially strong love for explosions." These should both be capitalized, but that isn't really important /quote The [/quote] at the end should be removed |
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Amy Mist • Threat 0 - • Present Psychicer - • No Guild - • Body Weaponry - • 0 PP earned: • L: • Stats - # Burst: 15 # Rise: 5 # Trance: 1 # Processor: 15 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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| Megaflamer | Oct 2 2010, 12:40 PM Post #3 | ||||
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ops, forgot the quote at the end. ....try typing in a dark room on a black keyboard and we shall see how good your spelling is ![]() anyways, fixed it for the sake of my English classes XD |
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Robert Andersson • Threat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan • Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15 Lina Thousaka • Rank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan• Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1 | |||||
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| Nick | Oct 2 2010, 12:45 PM Post #4 | ||||
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I do type in dark rooms with a very black keyboard. Anyways, Your profile has been Flagged for approval
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Amy Mist • Threat 0 - • Present Psychicer - • No Guild - • Body Weaponry - • 0 PP earned: • L: • Stats - # Burst: 15 # Rise: 5 # Trance: 1 # Processor: 15 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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| Daisuke72 | Oct 3 2010, 05:54 PM Post #5 | ||||
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Woah , a few things here , W.I.S.E Psychicers don't get the calling card to Psyren , they dwell in the past unaware of their future . Another thing , her History is meh , I don't understand how it goes with her personality . When did she learn how to use PSI? Her rank is Cadet , one would think unless she oins the W.I.S.E on her first sl. Can be a little bit more descriptive on the eyes rather then color. You people best be trolling with no trance and no processor , I highly suggest in the future you fill those in a bit . No techniques? |
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Daisuke Genryusai Shigekumi • Rank - Cadet• Faction -W.I.S.E Psychicer • Guild - • Psi -n/a • PP earned: 0 • Stats - # Burst: 10 # Rise:12 # Trance:10 # Processor:10 Picture of Daisuke
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| Megaflamer | Oct 3 2010, 06:28 PM Post #6 | ||||
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i was planning on having her go to the future and stay there...permanently. tho i can change the history to a version where she is trapped in a science facility and is rescued by wise and so joins them....actually now that i think about it that sounds awesome! 'runs off to change it' yea she has no trance or processor, but she also has no power as of yet and it is to emulate her inexperience with complex psi. i will put pp there as she gains experience. yea no techs, all she has going for her is physical strength and basic tele at the moment. techs will come once she has her power |
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Robert Andersson • Threat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan • Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15 Lina Thousaka • Rank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan• Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1 | |||||
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| Daisuke72 | Oct 3 2010, 06:46 PM Post #7 | ||||
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Eh okay , anyway did you edit? | ||||
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Daisuke Genryusai Shigekumi • Rank - Cadet• Faction -W.I.S.E Psychicer • Guild - • Psi -n/a • PP earned: 0 • Stats - # Burst: 10 # Rise:12 # Trance:10 # Processor:10 Picture of Daisuke
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| Daisuke72 | Oct 3 2010, 06:47 PM Post #8 | ||||
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Your topic has been Approved You can now use your created character to rp and join Ooc activities and contests . |
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Daisuke Genryusai Shigekumi • Rank - Cadet• Faction -W.I.S.E Psychicer • Guild - • Psi -n/a • PP earned: 0 • Stats - # Burst: 10 # Rise:12 # Trance:10 # Processor:10 Picture of Daisuke
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