Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Add Reply
Rai; 'flagged'
Topic Started: Oct 3 2010, 03:46 PM (365 Views)
Rockey
Default Avatar

Character Template



[-----]



Basic Character Information
Name: Rai Quinn
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction : W.I.S.E
Rank :Cadet
Rec points : 0


Physical Appearance
Height: 179 cm
Weight: 85 kg
Hair: brownish red.
Eyes: Dark brown.
Clothing/Accessories: A brown leather jacket with metallic buttons, a black T-shirt underneath and a pair of regular blue jeans and black boots. A pack of cigarretes and a lighter in his pocket, a katana and a sheath and a not working watch with all the pointers aiming at 2.
General Appearance: small lips, sharp brown eyes and swpt back hair with a couple of strands left on the forehead alonge with masculine features. A manly posture with tanned fair skin, a toned masculine body from tip to toe, a clean shave face with a tied hair.


Spoiler: click to toggle


The Character
Personality: Rai really is a mild person in core and occasionally joyful, he likes to be frank, silence and to be in serenity to a degree . he is also honest and confident with an unwavering self esteem. He is fair in his judgment and follow orders to a fault if givin from one he respect the only thing which affects his personality is that Rai is often carried away and swayed by his emotions causing him to question his own commands and ideals.

Hometown: New York.
History: Rai lived a wild live since birth, he has been in trouble since the softness of his fingers and is still is, being abandoned from birth by his mother leaving a half drunk father to take care of him. Rai has quitted school and ran a mock in the streets doing things from small roberies to bullying and blackmailing only to survive. He has been in fights with thugs and those older than him and usually suffered from injuries alonge his life he even found himself alone one day when he came back to his shattered shelter as his fater by the age of 15 has left him on his own.

The worst thing about him is that Rai doesn't remember a single thing of what happened before in his life and for a mysteriouse reason he was found on top of a small hill, Rai isn't even his real name. From the time he opened his eyes in his early twenties up until now Rai has been searching for his real name and history that has been plundered under rubles of time.

Being under a spell of forgetfullness Rai life has been filled with lies, about his parents, home and friends. He would have been fooled by all that but one thing that kept him sane was his watch, which he holds dear to him... perhaps when the arrows in the clock starts to tic again so would his memories comes back but until then he would have to protect and serve those who gave him shelter and provided him a home to come back to the one and only W.I.S.E.

Psychic abilities , and Possessions

PSI power name :Ruler Of Earth
PSI power Ability :Rai has the ability to manipulate rocks, dust, dirt, coal and gravel to use as weapons or defense and even traps. Only natural elements can be used, anything refined is beyond the scope of his power right now.

Weaponry : A single long steel katana

Weight / Dimensions:
• Weight: 0.90 kg (1.98 lbs)
• Length: 0.91 m (3.00 feet)
• Width: 0.07 m (0.23 feet)
• Thickness: 0.03 m (0.10 feet)

sheathed within a red sheath.

Items : Lighter, pack of cigarretes, watch.


PP Earned: 0
PP total : 36


  • Burst: 15
  • Rise: 5
  • Trance: 1
  • Processor : 15

slots : 2
Slots used :2
Slots applied :2

Earth control (2Slot,Burst)The user has the ability to manipulate rocks, dust, dirt, coal and gravel to use as weapons or defense. Only natural elements can be used, anything refined is beyond the scope of this power.

Techniques
Regular Technique Points:29
Used Technique Points: 28



Techniques
Ground: Trapping Hole (Rank 6)
Type: Trap
Range: 20 meters
Stats: N/A
Description: Rai forces a pressure sensitive trap hole in the ground leaving a hollow crust on top which collapse when stepped on into a deep hole or programmed into making the crust collapse when a certain weight limit is reached or after time, Team rocket style. The diameter of the hole is 2 meters and is 2 meters deep.

Ground: Illusion ground (Rank 2)
Type: Trap
Range: 20 meters
Stats: N/A
Description: Rai forces the earth into a different structure of different hardness thus making solid ground looking like sand and sand looking like solid ground this aids in hiding traps laid on the ground.

Ground: Pillar of Defence (Rank 6 )
Type:Defensive
Range: 5 meters
Stats:N/A
Description: Rai forces a pillar of rock to rise from the ground around him for protection against attacks. This can also be used to raise Rai off the ground to reach higher places if done under his feet, thickness 0.5 meter and 2 meters in height and take 10 second to fully rise at 15 burst.

Ground: Spike of Torture (Rank 6)
Type:Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Stats:N/A
Description: Rai forces a sharp spike made from rock to rise from an earth surface toward his enemy.

Ground: frag rock (Rank 6)
Type:Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Stats:N/A
Description: Rai forces a rock to press itself inside building up pressure until it shatters into fragments similar to a frag gernade. The explosion could be programed to be upon impact, timed or delayed.

Ground: Rock bullet (Rank 2 )
Type:Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Stats:N/A
Description:Rai forces a golf sized rock to shoot out from the ground toward a target, the effects are similar to that of a dart launcher.



Development History
Gains/Losses:
Edit Log:
Spoiler: click to toggle

Edited by Rockey, Oct 4 2010, 10:47 AM.
Rai QuinRank Cadet- • Faction W.I.S.E- • Guild New World Order- • Psi Ruler Of Earth- • PP earned: 0• L: Future Japan•
Stats - # Burst: 15 # Rise: 5 # Trance:1 # Processor: 15
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Megaflamer
Member Avatar
Emperor of Fire
*specify age, no unknowns.

*a bit more on hair and eyes

*same for general appearance

*timid and frank? and on top of it confident with unwavering self esteem??? thats usually the farthest one can get from being timid. honest but favours sick mind games?!? fair but a sadist?

pick a personality do not take a trait here and there and mash em together.


*erm that history really dont say much, make it a proper one, and even if he himself do not remember it it should be in there nonetheless

* specify material and length of the katana, do it have any special abilities?

*ill leave techs for the next time.

Robert AnderssonThreat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan •
Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15

Lina ThousakaRank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan•
Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Brago
Member Avatar
Trainee Mod
not very important but give your power a name and describe it in your own words. Kinda personalize it
Rei HeizenThreat0% • Faction Future Resistance • Guild - • Psi Zero-cool • PP earned:10 • L:Psyren Japan •
Stats - 17 Burst: 17 Rise: 6 Trance: 6 Processor:

KairynRankCadet • Faction W.I.S.E • Guild New World Order • Psi Kazeshini • PP earned: • L:Psyren Japan •
Stats - 15 Burst: 5 Rise: 1 Trance: 15 Processor:
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Rockey
Default Avatar

Fixed, edited, Done.

I think.
Rai QuinRank Cadet- • Faction W.I.S.E- • Guild New World Order- • Psi Ruler Of Earth- • PP earned: 0• L: Future Japan•
Stats - # Burst: 15 # Rise: 5 # Trance:1 # Processor: 15
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Megaflamer
Member Avatar
Emperor of Fire
*still, timid and confident dont really go that well together in personality

*personality and history is a bit mismatched but that can be overlooked due to the memory loss

*trap hole is a bit too fast, make it 2 metres deep and make it so that it is already a pre dug hole with a think earth crust on top that gives out due to your program

*you should add the speed of defence pillar, taking around 10 sec to raise should be enough

*make rock bullet slower, even a slow bullet goes at around 200 kmh and that is too fast for your rock, at least for nnow
Edited by Megaflamer, Oct 4 2010, 10:42 AM.
Robert AnderssonThreat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan •
Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15

Lina ThousakaRank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan•
Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Rockey
Default Avatar

The Tech section is now edited along with the removal of timid.
Rai QuinRank Cadet- • Faction W.I.S.E- • Guild New World Order- • Psi Ruler Of Earth- • PP earned: 0• L: Future Japan•
Stats - # Burst: 15 # Rise: 5 # Trance:1 # Processor: 15
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Megaflamer
Member Avatar
Emperor of Fire
Your profile has been

Flagged for approval




Posted Image
Robert AnderssonThreat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan •
Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15

Lina ThousakaRank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan•
Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Brago
Member Avatar
Trainee Mod
Welcome to WISE
Your topic has been





Approved ;)




You can now use your created character to rp and join Ooc activities and contests, dont forget to put your char info in your profile, more info can be found Here
Rei HeizenThreat0% • Faction Future Resistance • Guild - • Psi Zero-cool • PP earned:10 • L:Psyren Japan •
Stats - 17 Burst: 17 Rise: 6 Trance: 6 Processor:

KairynRankCadet • Faction W.I.S.E • Guild New World Order • Psi Kazeshini • PP earned: • L:Psyren Japan •
Stats - 15 Burst: 5 Rise: 1 Trance: 15 Processor:
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
« Previous Topic · W.I.S.E Psychicers · Next Topic »
Add Reply


[ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]
width="" height="" frameborder="0" scrolling="auto"> //