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| Rockey | Oct 3 2010, 03:46 PM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Basic Character Information Name: Rai Quinn Age: 32 Gender: Male Race: Human Faction : W.I.S.E Rank :Cadet Rec points : 0 Physical Appearance Height: 179 cm Weight: 85 kg Hair: brownish red. Eyes: Dark brown. Clothing/Accessories: A brown leather jacket with metallic buttons, a black T-shirt underneath and a pair of regular blue jeans and black boots. A pack of cigarretes and a lighter in his pocket, a katana and a sheath and a not working watch with all the pointers aiming at 2. General Appearance: small lips, sharp brown eyes and swpt back hair with a couple of strands left on the forehead alonge with masculine features. A manly posture with tanned fair skin, a toned masculine body from tip to toe, a clean shave face with a tied hair. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Rai really is a mild person in core and occasionally joyful, he likes to be frank, silence and to be in serenity to a degree . he is also honest and confident with an unwavering self esteem. He is fair in his judgment and follow orders to a fault if givin from one he respect the only thing which affects his personality is that Rai is often carried away and swayed by his emotions causing him to question his own commands and ideals. Hometown: New York. History: Rai lived a wild live since birth, he has been in trouble since the softness of his fingers and is still is, being abandoned from birth by his mother leaving a half drunk father to take care of him. Rai has quitted school and ran a mock in the streets doing things from small roberies to bullying and blackmailing only to survive. He has been in fights with thugs and those older than him and usually suffered from injuries alonge his life he even found himself alone one day when he came back to his shattered shelter as his fater by the age of 15 has left him on his own. The worst thing about him is that Rai doesn't remember a single thing of what happened before in his life and for a mysteriouse reason he was found on top of a small hill, Rai isn't even his real name. From the time he opened his eyes in his early twenties up until now Rai has been searching for his real name and history that has been plundered under rubles of time. Being under a spell of forgetfullness Rai life has been filled with lies, about his parents, home and friends. He would have been fooled by all that but one thing that kept him sane was his watch, which he holds dear to him... perhaps when the arrows in the clock starts to tic again so would his memories comes back but until then he would have to protect and serve those who gave him shelter and provided him a home to come back to the one and only W.I.S.E. Psychic abilities , and Possessions PSI power name :Ruler Of Earth PSI power Ability :Rai has the ability to manipulate rocks, dust, dirt, coal and gravel to use as weapons or defense and even traps. Only natural elements can be used, anything refined is beyond the scope of his power right now. Weaponry : A single long steel katana Weight / Dimensions: • Weight: 0.90 kg (1.98 lbs) • Length: 0.91 m (3.00 feet) • Width: 0.07 m (0.23 feet) • Thickness: 0.03 m (0.10 feet) sheathed within a red sheath. Items : Lighter, pack of cigarretes, watch. PP Earned: 0 PP total : 36
Slots used :2 Slots applied :2 Earth control (2Slot,Burst)The user has the ability to manipulate rocks, dust, dirt, coal and gravel to use as weapons or defense. Only natural elements can be used, anything refined is beyond the scope of this power. Techniques Regular Technique Points:29 Used Technique Points: 28
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle Edited by Rockey, Oct 4 2010, 10:47 AM.
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Rai Quin • Rank Cadet- • Faction W.I.S.E- • Guild New World Order- • Psi Ruler Of Earth- • PP earned: 0• L: Future Japan• Stats - # Burst: 15 # Rise: 5 # Trance:1 # Processor: 15 | |||||||||||||||
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| Megaflamer | Oct 4 2010, 09:54 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||
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*specify age, no unknowns. *a bit more on hair and eyes *same for general appearance *timid and frank? and on top of it confident with unwavering self esteem??? thats usually the farthest one can get from being timid. honest but favours sick mind games?!? fair but a sadist? pick a personality do not take a trait here and there and mash em together. *erm that history really dont say much, make it a proper one, and even if he himself do not remember it it should be in there nonetheless * specify material and length of the katana, do it have any special abilities? *ill leave techs for the next time. |
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Robert Andersson • Threat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan • Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15 Lina Thousaka • Rank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan• Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1 | |||||||||||||||
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| Brago | Oct 4 2010, 10:19 AM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||
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not very important but give your power a name and describe it in your own words. Kinda personalize it | ||||||||||||||
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Rei Heizen • Threat0% • Faction Future Resistance • Guild - • Psi Zero-cool • PP earned:10 • L:Psyren Japan • Stats - 17 Burst: 17 Rise: 6 Trance: 6 Processor: Kairyn • RankCadet • Faction W.I.S.E • Guild New World Order • Psi Kazeshini • PP earned: • L:Psyren Japan • Stats - 15 Burst: 5 Rise: 1 Trance: 15 Processor: | |||||||||||||||
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| Rockey | Oct 4 2010, 10:20 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||
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Fixed, edited, Done. I think. |
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Rai Quin • Rank Cadet- • Faction W.I.S.E- • Guild New World Order- • Psi Ruler Of Earth- • PP earned: 0• L: Future Japan• Stats - # Burst: 15 # Rise: 5 # Trance:1 # Processor: 15 | |||||||||||||||
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| Megaflamer | Oct 4 2010, 10:32 AM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||
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*still, timid and confident dont really go that well together in personality *personality and history is a bit mismatched but that can be overlooked due to the memory loss *trap hole is a bit too fast, make it 2 metres deep and make it so that it is already a pre dug hole with a think earth crust on top that gives out due to your program *you should add the speed of defence pillar, taking around 10 sec to raise should be enough *make rock bullet slower, even a slow bullet goes at around 200 kmh and that is too fast for your rock, at least for nnow Edited by Megaflamer, Oct 4 2010, 10:42 AM.
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Robert Andersson • Threat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan • Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15 Lina Thousaka • Rank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan• Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1 | |||||||||||||||
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| Rockey | Oct 4 2010, 10:49 AM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||
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The Tech section is now edited along with the removal of timid. | ||||||||||||||
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Rai Quin • Rank Cadet- • Faction W.I.S.E- • Guild New World Order- • Psi Ruler Of Earth- • PP earned: 0• L: Future Japan• Stats - # Burst: 15 # Rise: 5 # Trance:1 # Processor: 15 | |||||||||||||||
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| Megaflamer | Oct 4 2010, 10:56 AM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||
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Robert Andersson • Threat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan • Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15 Lina Thousaka • Rank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan• Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1 | |||||||||||||||
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| Brago | Oct 4 2010, 11:21 AM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||
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Welcome to WISE Your topic has been Approved You can now use your created character to rp and join Ooc activities and contests, dont forget to put your char info in your profile, more info can be found Here |
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Rei Heizen • Threat0% • Faction Future Resistance • Guild - • Psi Zero-cool • PP earned:10 • L:Psyren Japan • Stats - 17 Burst: 17 Rise: 6 Trance: 6 Processor: Kairyn • RankCadet • Faction W.I.S.E • Guild New World Order • Psi Kazeshini • PP earned: • L:Psyren Japan • Stats - 15 Burst: 5 Rise: 1 Trance: 15 Processor: | |||||||||||||||
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