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Topic Started: Oct 24 2010, 12:38 AM (380 Views)
Zoulyken
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Basic Character Information
Name: Thor [No Known Last name]
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction : Psyren W.I.S.E Psychicer
Rank : Cadet



Physical Appearance
Height: 6 feet 1 inch
Weight: 170 pounds
Hair: Black, spiked. The hair goes down just to the middle of his ears.
Eyes: His eyes are a very golden/yellow color.
Clothing/Accessories: Thor wears black boot, these boots have a cross on the toe. He has on black pants, with 2 small belts on both sides, also a large cross on his right side of his pants. He wears a white collared long sleeve dress shirt, he has on a red tie with a black cross on it. He has a black jacket over his dress shirt, it has white fur on the collar, and both ends of the sleeves. Has on a black studded belt.
General Appearance: Thor is light skinned human male, He doesn’t seem to have much muscle tone when he wears clothing however, he is very very buff when his shirt is off. He has a scar over his left eye, He has no facial hair.


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The Character

Personality:
Thor is a very laid back and fun kind of guy. He is super smart and some would call him a genius, but he really doesn’t show this, no one knows why. He doesn’t really care about anyone or anything and when he does seem to care, he is either playing or care but no one can ever tell. He likes to sleep, eat and Fight. Fighting is probably the third best thing he is at after sleep and eat [in that order]. When he fights, he comes a completely different person, not the lazy, laid back, fun guy but a more, awake, outgoing, aggressive person. [Note: Hoping to find the Right Personality when I begin RP, I always pick one but then I seem to always change it]

Hometown: Dallas, Texas
History:
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Psychic abilities , and Possessions

PSI power name : Random PSI- Inner Beast, Raiju aka Thunder Animal.
PSI power Ability : Inner Beast; the user gains the ability to materialize their inner Beast in a physical shape around themselves, at first only the legs or head can be brought out but at higher levels the entire Animal will appear. Raiju is a white and blue wolf with lighting surrounding its body. The wolf has sharp teeth and sharp claws.

Weaponry : Bamboo, a very special made of Bamboo and metal. There is steel wire which runs through the inside of this bamboo staff. This makes the Bamboo staff very flexible and strong.
Items : None


PP Earned: 0
PP total : 36


  • Burst: 15
  • Rise: 3
  • Trance: 3
  • Processor : 15

slots : 2
Slots used : 2
Slots applied : ~If one wish they can get an Random PSI slot , meaning an mod or admin will pick a random PSI on the supreme list of fan fiction PSI abilities .2 slot. The slot amount of the power varies from 1-3, if you are very lucky you might get a 4 slot





Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 29
Used Technique Points: 8



Techniques
Thunder Legs Rank- 8
Type: Support
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Thor causes psychic energy to become solid and he forms legs of his inner beast around his legs. These legs have very sharp claws at the end, Thus giving the user the power to cut and slash at his enemies.


Development History
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Edited by Zoulyken, Oct 30 2010, 07:48 PM.
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Megaflamer
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Random Time!

....'now throwing'....'Ding!'....'the result has arrived'

my arent we the lucky one.

Inner Beast
(3 slots,burst) the user gains the ability to materialize their inner Beast in a physical shape around themselves, at first only the legs or head can be brought out but at higher levels the entire Animal will appear

pick your own variation, dragon is already taken btw.
Robert AnderssonThreat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan •
Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15

Lina ThousakaRank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan•
Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1
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Brago
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Hair: Black, spiked.

How long is his hair, I had a vision of Mrs. Doublefinger.

Eyes: this eyes are very weird style, they seem to change color. They can range from, green, blue, black, red, orange and so on.

this should be His

Personality...... I think its fine, demeanor is one way and his nature is another. normal really

On May 15th, 2008, one week after his 19th birthday, Thor unlocked his PSI, known at first what it was, he soon learned about it and before the summer of 2008, Thor had became mostly good at it and his weird power.

might have to omit this or change it. Present resistance don't tap into their PSI till visiting PSYREN. You can say how you found the card or you can rp that in your first thread.

Thunder Legs Rank- 15
Type: Support
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Thor causes psychic energy to become solid and he forms legs of his inner beast around his legs. These legs have very sharp claws at the end, Thus giving the user the power to cut and slash at his enemies. These legs also have a small electric current running all around them, when an enemy is kicked with these legs they become shocks and if hit enough times the enemy may start to become num or maybe even paralyzed for a short period of time.

State how long the numbness and paralysis last and maybe the chances for this to occur.

Track Rank- 10
Type: Support
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Thor Causes Psychic energy to become solid and forms a head of his inner beast. He can form this either around him or in front of him. This head is used for finding stuff then attacking. The head is able to smell, hear and see very well, thus making it perfect for finding people or creatures.

This power seems to be a way to get around rise, as this ups the senses. This can be debated with the admins.
Rei HeizenThreat0% • Faction Future Resistance • Guild - • Psi Zero-cool • PP earned:10 • L:Psyren Japan •
Stats - 17 Burst: 17 Rise: 6 Trance: 6 Processor:

KairynRankCadet • Faction W.I.S.E • Guild New World Order • Psi Kazeshini • PP earned: • L:Psyren Japan •
Stats - 15 Burst: 5 Rise: 1 Trance: 15 Processor:
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actually they can get psi beforehand, tho it will be very weak til they have visited the place (or had a sl or two outside of it)


Edit. and nonononono, if you want any additional effects you will need to upgrade one slot (half for weak effects), inner beast is by nature physical. a 4 slotter is called Inner legend btw (or was that the 5 slotter?)
Edited by Megaflamer, Oct 30 2010, 04:51 PM.
Robert AnderssonThreat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan •
Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15

Lina ThousakaRank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan•
Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1
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*you are supposed to put your personal usage of the power in the 'psi power ability' section. for a copy and paste of the description you put it underneath the random psi description

*thunder legs could be lower rank without any errors, i recommend setting it at 6 or 8 and branch later if you feel like you want to

*as for personality, if you answer your own topic later with the desired changes everything is fine

*pick a eye colour, dont try to get em all. of course shifting between two coulors is just fine (tho that is the limit without a psi with eye side effects)

*and if you dont have a last name just dont type one out, tho if he himself just cant remember it you have to put it there.

*specify the level of the metal in the staff

*you dont learn strong psi instantly, you can be good at using it but it will still be really weak til you rp a bit.
Robert AnderssonThreat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan •
Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15

Lina ThousakaRank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan•
Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1
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not that bad of an error but you might want to remove the 'code' words at the beginning and end of your app.

*as for the psi description i meant that you should tell us exactly how your beast looks like
Robert AnderssonThreat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan •
Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15

Lina ThousakaRank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan•
Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1
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I hope everything is fixed now.
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too lazy to nitpick all those small errors that really do not affect the char as a whole.

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Robert AnderssonThreat - 0% • Faction - Present Psychicer • Guild - none • Psi - Revolver Frenzy• PP earned: 0 • L: Present Japan •
Stats - # Burst: 14 # Rise:5 # Trance:5 # Processor:15

Lina ThousakaRank - none as of yet • Faction - W.I.S.E • Guild - none • Psi - none • PP earned:0 • L: Somewhere in future japan•
Stats - # Burst:16 # Rise:24 # Trance:1 # Processor:1
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Bout time huh Zoul..........lol Anyway congrats and have fun


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Rei HeizenThreat0% • Faction Future Resistance • Guild - • Psi Zero-cool • PP earned:10 • L:Psyren Japan •
Stats - 17 Burst: 17 Rise: 6 Trance: 6 Processor:

KairynRankCadet • Faction W.I.S.E • Guild New World Order • Psi Kazeshini • PP earned: • L:Psyren Japan •
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