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Mao's Invisible Castle
Topic Started: Apr 29 2014, 08:03 AM (1,082 Views)
TheUltimateMaddogg
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Leaving the North Gate of Kaitsu, the students would arrive to a rocky path. Beyond this path was a green hill with a shady looking castle sitting on top of it visible to only them. The girls would simply have to go to the door and invite themselves into the domain of Mao.

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Inside...

A dark silhouette sits in his throne room with young teenage girls in less than appropriate outfits carrying wine, fruits, and some dancing and entertaining him. The surprising factor is that the girls all have smiles on their faces as if they were happy to be with him.

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Rasen
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She feels like she just walked into a fancy version of Jabba's palace. Difference is that with Jabba those people were slaves, but this was apparently a happy arrangement for them. Stupid kids. They don't know what they want. None of them do.

Danielle grits her teeth and stops herself from simply running over there and driving a superkick through that throne. She glimpses over at the guild to see if they're going to approach the throne before doing so herself.
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Mistriousfrog
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Just prior to going in Maya gathered the guild together to say something that weighed on her mind.
"Listen, Before we met the governor there the information I had said he was just a shapeshifter whose game was stuff of legend. But it is different now. If people were planted there in the castle and yet still didn't return there must be something beyond his appearance which drew the girls in. I don't know what, but be careful about eating drinking or in general being exposed to anything."

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Now that they were inside and witnessing the sight of the girls Maya was convinced of it. There was no way a guy could have game this good, even if he could change his appearance at will. As she continued walking up to the throne she hoped to herself there wasn't some sort of mind dulling gas in here, and if there was some secret element she would be exposed to, she really hoped her magic would counteract it.
"Wow... Look at them all."
She exclaimed in genuine wonderment as much as she was putting on an act of positivity. She kept telling herself to remember that fighting wasn't what they were here to do.
Edited by Mistriousfrog, Apr 29 2014, 09:22 AM.
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Upon entering The Castle, Diedre got a dazed, lustful look in her face. "So many good looking Women... and they are all ready for me too..." She slowly walks towards one of the girls, with a lusting look on her face, hoping the others wouldn't see her.
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WhiteFox
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Sarah walked in with the guild and looked around. It seemed like a happy, fun place, if it weren't for the fact that the girls had abandoned their family for a man they didn't even know. And the way they were dressed was a shame as well. Sarah had a look of distaste on her face as she pulled Diedre back. "We are not here to fool around... So, should we talk to the girls? Or Mao himself?"
Edited by WhiteFox, Apr 29 2014, 02:24 PM.
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Devin kept a quiet sound and just looked around at the castle to see the external layout, how many floors up could they most likely survive a fall from, how many windows could be escaped from, doors, and how nicely trimmed the bushes are, must be a gardner somewhere.

The inside was quite vast which didn't disappoint Devin as she looked around, taking note that if she were still a he she would be extremely red faced right now. In fact he wouldn't be able to speak due to how much blood would be re-directed but at the moment, it was just a sight before her. She followed the leader and had one hand on the puppet.
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The Man behind the dark silhouette reveals himself seeing five fresh girls enter his domain. The young teenagers turn to greet them as well.

"Welcome home!" The Girls gleefully yell.

The man appears to be six foot even, an athletic build but not overly massive. His has short styled brown hair, golden brown eyes, neatly trimmed facial hair. Wearing a black dress shirt with the first four buttons open exposing his chest and tight dark blue slacks with dress shoes.

"Welcome to my castle ladies. I see your curiosity has been tempted by the alluring castle walls." The Man says standing to his feet.

"Oh Mao!" One of the teenage girls shouts swooning nearby falling to his feet.

"Sometimes I don't know the strength of my charm. Hehe... Ladies, bring my guests forward, I wish to have a word." Mao orders.

Five of the girls approach the five students holding out their hands to lure them to Mao.

"Please, come with us!" They each say.
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Mistriousfrog
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This got creepier by the second. Just what kind of brainwashing was this guy putting them through. Maya was actually beginning to become a little worried that she would end up just like them if she wasn't careful. There had to be a trigger somewhere. Something other than just his supposed charm which drove all these girls mad like this.

Maya's original thought when hearing the mission was to blend in as a member of kaichu city who had heard about the disappearances but it wasn't until the trip here she realized it would be difficult to outright impossible, none of the guild looked Japanese after all. That left simply playing it by ear. Maya's hesitation to draw nearer showed as she almost took a step away from the girls who approached. Shyly she pulled away from their touch and folded her hands against her lap. Importantly her left hand was on top of the right which bore her ring.
"Ih... is this really where people keep disappearing?" she asked timidly while slowly walking forward and trying not to touch anything in case the brainwashing was contagious somehow.
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"Oh, a little shy are we?" Mao notices.

He begins to chuckle.

"How very rude of me... I should give my name before inviting you to speak with me." Mao says.

He clears his throat and looks at Maya.

"I am Mao Mao, the owner of this castle and eventually your heart." Mao introduces.

"Isn't he just the greatest?" The Girl near Maya chimes.

This girl appeared to be 15 years old.
Edited by TheUltimateMaddogg, Apr 29 2014, 08:23 PM.
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Rasen
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Mao's got the whole world in his hands.

Danielle reaches out and grabs the girl's hands when she extended it. No point in fighting just yet. Although, the speaking in unison thing was creepy as hell. Maya was right, they should be careful. His mind isn't nearly as strong as his body. However, time to just play along. "You have a way with words, Mao"
Edited by Rasen, Apr 29 2014, 08:31 PM.
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Sarah didn't like the cut of this guy's jib. But he somehow did have a bit of a charm. She couldn't help but feel an extra urge to take a girl's hand and skip up there with her. But she contained herself. This was bad, and she knew it. She resisted taking a girl's hand and just came closer, showing that she would follow.
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Maya turned away and smiled as though embarrassed and allowed her shoulders to roll around in their sockets as though nervous at the same time. She wasn't terribly impressed with the line. It was far too cheesy. He had the inflection down and everything sure, but better dialogue was needed. Even so, must play the part and ignore the impulse to be tsuntsun.
"That is amazing. You really own everything?" she asked with a hint of excitement. As she spoke Maya thought to herself about the rarity in which breaking out the innocent child routine was actually the most pragmatic option. At least it made it easier to charm people.
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"No need to be nervous my dears. Would you like to take a tour around the castle? Or Perhaps you are exhausted and require a place to sit. I have a few of my top girls preparing dinner for us." Mao proclaims.

"Boo... I hate those three girls the most... how they got to be Mao's top girls, I don't know." The Girl near Sarah complains.

This girl appears to be Seventeen.

The Girl with Daniel pulls her close to Mao. Mao stands in front of Daniel gazing into her eyes.

"You are quite the looker miss, may I inquire your name?" Mao asks running his finger in the sides of Daniel's hair gently.

He smiles at her closely and looks down to see Hayashi Guild armbands.

"Oh... Hayashi Academy?" Mao smirks.
Edited by TheUltimateMaddogg, Apr 29 2014, 09:22 PM.
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Mistriousfrog
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Of all the idiotic... time to improvise. Maya barely missed a beat, even if the trump card was gone, she still had one in the sleeve. For once, looking 13 had a benefit. Maya looked down at her own band quizzically for a moment.
"Wait, that is what these mean?"
Then her eyes lit up as though hit by a revelation.
"Wait. wait! Does that mean you and my sister all have super powers?"
please play along. she thought as she said it. Even if the rest were exposed it didn't mean maya couldn't still pull through with some quick talking.
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Diedre got the message, and played along with it... much to Maya's dismay. Messing up Maya's hair playfully as if Maya really was a little kid, she said "That right Kiddo, your sister and all of us are super heroines! Just like you will be someday, once your powers awaken." She said, with a smirk and chuckle. She was taking full advantage of the fact that Maya had no way to logically deny the teasing, and it felt GOOD!
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