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Nahla De Valliere; The One Second Swordsman
Topic Started: Dec 18 2012, 04:18 AM (222 Views)
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General Information
Name:
Nahla De Valliere (Nah-lah Dee Val-ee-air)

Alias:
One Second Swordsman

Age:
224 (24 alive)

Race:
Shinigami

Appearance:
Has bright emerald green eyes that are big enough to almost be cartoonish yet still somehow manage to work for her. Her hair is a strawberry blonde and is short on all sides except for twintails each tied with thin blue ribbons.
She is short and almost meek looking due to not being very muscly. Despite the fact the she actually became a Shinigami when she was 24, she is still confused with a 16 year old due to her young looking face, tiny size and almost nonexistent bust all of which she is very self conscious of.
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Apparel:
For the most part she wears the standard division 5 outfit. She hates the design of the cuirass though and refuses to wear it on the grounds that "it makes her feel like she is playing dressup rather than being an elite warrior trying to balance the scales of reality." Perhaps an excuse forsimply not liking it, but she has complained enough to get her captain to compromise and let her wear a less obvious piece of armour underneath her Hakama so that in terms of protection it is roughly the same effect.

To tie her twintails she wears blue hair ribbons and has small silver hairpin of a clock face on the right side. Has been known to stuff the chest of her robes on occasion. Due to performing her almost signature overreaction explosive Hadou when people get on her nerves she wears a large yellow smiley face sticker on the back of her left hand at all times so that she will see it and remember to calm down. This rarely proves effective as she only notices it after blowing them up.

History:
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Personality:
Spunky and impulsive, Nahla does not particularly like being kept waiting. She has an unfortunate tendency to act rashly and with poor judgement. Nahla is a kind person at heart but that kindness is infortunately often buried under a thick layer of self gratification and arrogance. Even more though, the arrogance is to hide the poor self esteem that stemmed from her early failures and dislike of her physical features.

She tends to look down upon non-shinigami as lesser beings thinking of the order she belongs to as being almost an upper class of beings compared to all the other races. She isn't terribly shy about letting this be known either.

Even though she isn't terribly great at taking a joke, she is a relatively good friend and is not shy to offer and equally request assistance from her fellow Shinigami. She is quick to react violently if pushed though rarely in a way that will cause more than momentary discomfort. Her preferred method of punishment is to use a weak explosive Hadou (about equivalent to 3 in strength) on the one responsible or beat them with the blunt side of her Zanpakuto. This especially applies to any distasteful comments about her body... or lack thereof...

Shinigami Information

Division:
Division 5

Rank:
Lieutenant

Spirit Information
Zanpakutou Name:
Chronia

Spirit Appearance:
Chronia takes the form of a humungous, grey, three headed snake. The snake's head are those of a man, a bull and a lion. Only the human head has actually spoken or really reacted to Nahla in any way whatsoever.

Spirit Personality:
The best way to describe Chronia is patient. It is perfectly content to wait as long as necessary in a completely stoic way until the conditions are right for what it wants to happen. Because of this he often frustrates Nahla with complete silence, even seeming to ignore her.

Inner World: At first glance it is merely a vast desert that slopes around into a single point. Once examined enough the point is actually a pit through which the sand eternally drains. It is at the bottom of this pit that the form of Chronia waits, being forever lifted by the sand but never reaching the top of the pit.

Zanpakutou Information
Sealed Appearance:
Even sealed Chronia is an oddity among Zanpakuto. It is pretty regular in design as a katana but instead of being a single blade like most, there is a single handle with two blades come out the same side and run parallel to one another. One is longer than the other but they are of equal width. The sword is smaller than most of the other lieutentant level Zanpakuto to compensate for the second blade.

Shikai Command:
Chronia, Wind Up!

Release Method:
Her preferred method of releasing is to hold the blade above her head with both hands. After yelling her command she pulls the blade back down and splits it in two to create her dual wield style as the blades transform.

Shikai Appearance:
The double blade splits in half seperating the two halves into two seperate weapons. The blades transform into arrows that appear like a minute and hour hand of a clock. The sides of the hands remain sharp even becoming double edged and symetrical. The hour hand is naturally shorter but it is also wider, it is about the length of a dagger while the minute hand is longer and thinner. The metallic sheen usually given off by zanpakuto is replaced by a very dull even monochrome grey on the swords.

Shikai Powers:
The Chronia blades have the power of time but at this point in time the control is still very limited. With enough training she may unlock new abilities but currently she has only two with them:

Tick - slows time to one third speed for a single second. Naturally this is activate by simply saying "Tick." Nahla is both the only one aware of the time dilation and the only one unnaffected by it.

Tock - Freezes time completely Nahla included for 10 seconds. In this state she is the only one conscious. Unless another person hears her say "Tock" and knows of the ability they will be completely unaware that time was frozen. In general this ability is ideal for a quick planning session but that is about it because even though she is conscious, she is incabable of moving while time is frozen.

She can take other people with her if she has physical contact when she activates the abilites but it takes three times as much energy to do so.

With her current level of spirit energy she can use any combination of these 6 times in total before her shikai automatically reseals itself.

Bankai Information
Undiscovered

Kidou Information

Hadou:
Is only capable of performing the first 17, only the first 13 without any chant though.

Bakudo:
Prefers Bakudo and as such is able to perform up to 40, all wthout the chant.

Other Information
- Has a talent for adapting in battle and can use multiple different styles profficiently which has led her to become semi-skilled in all four basic shinigami fighting styles, but only her Hohou style can compete with a Shinigami of lieutenant or higher as she tends to favour speed and precision.
Edited by Mistriousfrog, Dec 24 2012, 09:32 PM.
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You seem to have completely forgotten the basic information that goes on top of this, bro.
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Yeah, I know that. I just wanted to figure out the kind of fighter I wanted before I dealt with the character stuff.
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Alrighty then. You should also know that I had accidentally missed a section of the shinigami template when it was first posted up, so you'll need to change things just a wee bit. Don't worry, all you need to do is add the missing section, and remove the "zanpakutou name," since it'd be redundant to have it listed twice.
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okay, thanks.
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This looks like it's almost ready, so I want to lay down a couple things to work on. I know you don't have a great deal of Bleach knowledge, but I'm here to help. :)

First issue would be your age. 63 is, frankly, pretty young for a lieutenant shinigami. I would recommend making her at least a hundred at bare minimum.

Second is the apparel. There's nothing really wrong with it... Yet. You'll probably want to wait until Carlos fills out the rest of the division 5 info thread.

Everything else looks good so far.
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No worries, I suppose I can handle that. My intention with 63 was to be a late bloomer prodigy who only came into her power in the last decade or so, but given a Shinigami's lifespan a century or two would make that a lot more significant in retrospect.
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Oh yeah, I almost forgot. Race:Caucasian. What? That shoul say shinigami, dude. :P
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...

Okay that one has no excuse. Please forgive the idiocy...
Edited by Mistriousfrog, Dec 20 2012, 09:07 PM.
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Finally finished.
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Right, I am approving this, but I want you to know that I want that slaying of an adjuchas to be a one time deal, right? To be frank, I'm not sure that she could have even been strong enough to pierce its flesh back at that time, and I don't want to see that sort of thing going on. Right. This is approved. Welcome to the 5th division, Nahla De Valliere.
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