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I need your help!; That's right, YOU there, with that hair and those eyes...
Topic Started: Apr 9 2013, 06:56 AM (1,353 Views)
Dragoknighte
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That's cool. Also, note that in the What I'd Like To See section I meant you can do as you please, not that I'd like to see Gene go crazy
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Yeah I figured that. Although I could actually make him go crazy at some point...

And yay, thanks Robbers! Exciting stuff! :D
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Name: Path Hayashi

Nickname: Little Green

Appearance: Path is pretty average all around; He stands around 5'7" and weighs a solid 131 pounds [Roughly 170.18 CM, 59.420 kg], has spiky brown hair, average length for a male, with neatly trimmed bangs that hang over his forehead. He has fair skin, minor flaws such as heat bumps on his face and a baby smooth face with not a single inch of facial hair. His eyes are quite average sized though they tend to appear sharp and thin during stressful periods. He has emerald green eyes that sometimes change to blue or brown depending on the season, blue in the spring, brown in the coldest of winters. He is very lean, but with signs of muscles developing though it should be noted he has extremely strong legs. Path has no since of style, never follows latest trends or even know the defenition of the word fashion. He mostly wears overalls, boots, a brown t-shirt, and a white bucket hat unless he is preparing for battle in which he wears a green colored leather mesh set with a fishnet top support. He wears a necklace around his neck, an emerald encrusted eagle that is extremely precious to him.

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Sexual Preference: Straight

Race: Human

Ethnicity: North America [Native American, French, Irish Decent]

Personality: Path is pretty straightfoward about everything. There's no moment where he stops and questions his actions, he will just do whatever comes to mind first. He can come off as arrogant because of this but also easy to talk to because he doesn't become offended. He will normally have a light smile on his face, and speaks in a calm tone with no hint of emotion besides mellow. He's hardly ever upset, likes to poke around in other peoples business, extremely unaware of the term personal space, but also very open of his opinions. He's seems to be a bit of a trouble maker, often revealing people's secrets or spreading rumors that someone likes another person based on their conversation. He has interest in love and will often complement women, but to extremes which usuallly gets him hurt. Path does not think highly or low about himself, he just tends to live life the way it goes. This all changes however if someone touches or takes his prized necklace. Path tends to shut down completely if something happens to his necklace (at points he doesn't realize it's still around his neck and mentally crashes.) If he loses of damages the necklace he will shelter himself away from others completely and begin to sob. He becomes aggresive to those who insult the necklace and won't hold back form hitting them.

Class: Muse

Powers: Path carries around a wooden flute that he plays beautiful music on. With his powers he can rejuvenate his allies spirits, allowing them to fight longer as well as other things.

Song Collection:

-Path of Glory: A high spirited melody, that when played before a selected group, raises physical strength of allies.

-Path of Inspiration: A slower melody, that when played before a selected group, increases confidence and endurance of allies.

-Path of Grace: An extremely fluttery upbeat melody, that increases allies movement speed and nimbleness.

-Path of the Least Desired: A less harmonic tone melody, that weakens enemies physical str.

-Convoluted Path: A slow melody that causes mental stress and confusion to enemies.

-Path of the Forbidden: A melody that slowly drains the spirit of an enemy, note by note, increasing the physical abilities of the Muse and also forbidden from use as it causes enemies pains far worse then death.

Path is also capable of quick hand to hand combat, he is extremely nimble and a master at climbing trees and concealment.

History: Path was born to a wealthy family in Nebraska under his former name James Michael Jr.; At a young age he showed high interest in music, so much that he would neglect his school studies in order to practice his love of music. His father James Michael Senior, was a famous owner of a beef stick franchise that was worldwide in sales earning him and his associates top dollar daily. Path would be raised as his successor, should anything happen to him but Path showed no interest in his business nor did he show interest in money.His father scolded him and beat him for his consistent negative views to the business, while his mother attempted to convince him to change his views to avoid beatings. His mother would plea and beg for him to show interest in his fathers business but Path would not change no matter how much he was beaten. In his pre teen era, he spent majority of his time outside in trees away from his family playing music and watching nature as it was, finding happiness in his solidarity. A young girl around his age caught wind of him playing one day and became extremely interested in his music as well as Path himself. Path had officially dropped his name and adopted his new name Path Hayashi, after reading a fantasy manga under the title Hayashi Academy. Seeing the students in the manga develop the way they did he decided he would seek his own path to happiness. He would become blissfully unaware of the young girl often following him around his hangout spots as she amired him from afar unable to approach him due to her love for him. Path would return to his hangout daily finding notes and food with the young girl confessing her love for him and how she admired his musical talents. Soon he would go to look for his mysterious guest, jumping from tree to tree, but never finding her. It would eventually be a year, until he finally meets to young woman who felt she was brave enough to confess her love to him. She approached him as he was sitting in his favorite tree and presented him with an emerald encrusted eagle, inspired by his music and eyes. He graciously accepted the gift and invited the young girl into his tree where they hung out for years to come. On Path's sevententh birthday he would come to find his favorite tree and best friend both missing from his daily visit. He searched high and low for the young woman but was unable to find her. He returned to his home to find his father sitting on a couch with a brand new table. His father had watched him for years and finally decided to get rid of Path's tree, in the process he scared his friend away having her never return near his property. Path became so angry that he attacked his father, to the point of almost killing him. Path spent some time in prison, roughly 1 1/2 years. At nights he played soothing music to the other prisoners and was well liked. Path would be released for good behavior but had no where to go. Walking the cold streets he saw his old friend, but was surprised to find she had been married to a young rich man and could not bear to be around him due to her true feelings for Path but being faithful she decides to ditch Path leaving him completely alone.

Other Interests: Tree hopping, Bird Watching, Reading Manga, Playing Music. He dislikes money and greedy people.

Extra: He sleeps completely nude.

I Would Like To See: I would like to see Path come to get over his feelings for the young girl and move on. Also serious development with his music, because he is self taught.
Edited by TheUltimateMaddogg, Apr 9 2013, 12:37 PM.
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princezsupastar
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If anyone wants to make a second character, be my guest.

(If anyone wants to take on making one of the henchmen, a fire-starter would be super useful)

No illusionists though, that's my big baddy when I get around to making her.
Edited by princezsupastar, Apr 12 2013, 04:14 PM.
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Name: Terent Solice

Nickname: (No one really gave him one so N/A, unless he gets one during the story. :3 )

Appearance: Stands at exactly six feet tall and has a very skeleton like build, hiding a good amount of strength he has. Has a friendly face, but is somewhat overshadowed by his extremely bushy and thick dark brown hair. Has same slight scruff on his chin and slightly hairy over the arms and legs. His waist is 3 feet up, meaning that his upper and lower body is completely the same height and has size 13 feet. Very white due to being inside most of the time and trying to avoid others. Has grey eyes that are usually bloodshot. He wears a light grey t-shirt under a long sleeve button down plaid shirt, black pants, normal height white socks and comfortable silver colored running shoes. He usually only wears this and has five pairs of everything, but also has four pairs of grey shorts, nice and comfy white t-shirts, and an orange hawiian styled pair of swim trunks.

Gender: male

Age: 17

Sexual Preference: Women (Heterosexual)

Race: human.

Ethnicity: Extremely white, so Irish, mixed with some British, and Scottish, but a normal voice.

Personality: Terent likes to be with people but usually doesn't talk and doesn't command much attention from them. When he does talk though, tends to like talking about people's history, games, puzzles, imagination, feelings, powers, morality, death, and consciences. Very nervous speaker in groups and has a hard time remembering names. He tends to have a very timid nature and is very hard to rile up, but has learned from past experiences to believe in the worst of people.
Likes to point out peoples characteristics, but only to them. Doesn't like lying and tries to avoid it and dislikes talking about someone behind their back and will openly tell them how he feels. For the most part has a large sense of morality and the ability to think of what it would be like in the other person's shoes.
He is touch and pain sensitive, making it hard to control himself when in pain and is the reason he tries to avoid fights. He does get very angry when people antagonize his friends undeservedly or is being a real jerk to people for absolutely no reason accept to enjoy it and ensure dominion over others. Is very hard for him to calm down and he becomes very destructive when angry.

Class: Mid ranger

Powers:
-Can cause pain in others. (Needs to touch the person for now)

History: Terent started out like a normal introvert in school and life, not going out often, but trusting the people he went out with. He just stayed in the background during most of his life, observing the world. This worked fine until his junior year when he found that he could cause pain in others during a confrontation with a basketball player. This worried him and he tried to avoid people in general. For a few days this was fine, but the basketball team held a grudge and cornered him in the gym, where they meant to burn him in the court since they blamed him for his losses. He beat them, but it resulted in causing a huge burst of flame, burning the building and losing consciousness.He escaped and passed out. After waking up in an ally way, he found a newspaper with a report that all twenty people in the area, whose homes were burned down in the accident, were fine and no one was harmed permanently. But it also blamed him for the fire and was now wanted by the law to be placed directly into jail. Since then he has been on the run and came to the school seeking direction, help, and a new start.

Other Interests: likes to eat goldfish, likes video-games, puzzles, and talking with people one on one.

Extra: Has a hard time trusting people, even though he wants to.

I Would Like To See: Flip out once for a good reason, develop (and maybe a relationship :?), expand his powers, redeeming himself in the views of others (Since they might look on him causing destructions of homes as a bad person.)
Edited by The Four Winds, Apr 17 2013, 07:10 PM.
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Work in Progress Minion

Name: Joseph Hisenburg

Nickname: Johnny

Appearance: Breaking this down methodically, won't be much fun to read.
Height: 5'5" (165cm)
Weight: 180lb (82kg)
Hair Color: Black
Hair Type: Straight
Hair Length: Long (goes down to the base of the neck)
Hair Style: Slicked back (using minimal amounts of gel)
Facial Hair: None
Eyebrow Thickness: Thin
Eye Color: Brown (more of a hazel color really)
Skin Color: Pale(like, blood is somewhat visible pale. You know what I mean.)
Body Type: Muscular, but not ripped. Bigger upper body than lower body
Face Type: Angular, with an especially pointy jaw and nose
Notable Features: a burn scar moving up from the chest to the bottom of the face on his right side. Also, his top right canine is a fake made of shiny metal. The tooth was lost during a fishing trip and had to be replaced.

Apparel: Four colors make up the entirety of Joseph's signature outfit. Going from the top down, first is a black domino mask covering the area around his eyes, glued into place with spirit gum(an alcohol based adhesive made of toxic materials). Then he wears a black blazer with a red underside. Below that is a green tinted white shirt. Johnny wears mismatching fingerless gloves, the right one is red, the left is green. On the back of each glove is a golden disk, labeled Fire Dragon and Wind Dragon respectively. The white-green trend continues with the suit pants worn. Finally the ensemble is finished with a pair of white dress shoes.

When not wearing the above outfit, Joseph will dress comfortably, but with a bit of flair when in public. When alone, it doesn't really matter what it is as long as it gets the job done.

Gender: Male

Age: 23

Sexual Preference: Straight

Race: Human

Ethnicity: Anglo-Germanic

Personality: Might as well finish this. Since I cannot be all super prose-y and stay in line with my perception of reality, this'll be attacked like the appearance.

Character Traits:
  • Honest
  • Perceptive
  • Empathic
  • Loyal
  • Straightforward
  • Humorous (especially when drunk)
  • Emotional (but not in the cry constantly sense of the word. He just feels quite strongly about things)
  • Caring
  • Tough


Class: I don't know what to call it.

Powers: From the left hand, wind forms, from the right, fire. He can control it. The wind is manipulation of preexisting currents, fire is directly drained from his energy reserves.

History: Will be PM'd to Star once I think up something.

Other Interests: Likes: forensic science, writing
Dislikes: Golf, daytime television, the word "whatever"

Extra: Johnny cannot swim

I Would Like To See: Don't really care.
Edited by Dragoknighte, May 5 2013, 05:27 PM.
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To Four Winds; I like the guy and I appreciate the effort you've gone to, but as he's too much like Tyler I can't accept him. Having a smaller amount of students, I would rather their personalities be vastly diverse, and they're quite similar. But thank you anyway.
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Ah.... Figured. ^_^;; Would it be alright if I changed around the history and personality then? I am fine either way. It is your story to make. :3
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Name: Alichilles (Al-ee-key-lees) Mikos

Nickname: Alice, Achillis, Titan

Appearance: Alichilles is a well built woman, standing 5'7" weighing 130 pounds of pure solid muscle aside from her breast which would be the only fatty portion on her body. She has long straight Carmine (Red) hair that reaches down to her shoulders, with her left side bang hanging over her left eye stylishly, leaving the left side covered and the right exposed. She has aggressive looking eyes, brown in color. Her nose is very petite but sharp, and her lips are full. Her skin color is slightly tanned but glows fairly during the winter months. Her body and arms have many hidden scars from previous battles, and the left side of her face has an unsightly burn hidden beneath her bang. She tends to wear leather body suits exposing her well ripped body and displaying her natural curves. She has a fairly above average sized bust, with insanely nice curves complementing her athelitic body. In battle she dons a white plated armor suit and an eye patch over her left side, with a bandanna to hold her hair in place.

Gender: Female

Age: 32

Sexual Preference: Bisexual

Role: Teacher

Race: Human, rumored to be a Demigod.

Ethnicity: Greek

Personality:

Alichilles is a daughter of war and training. She spends all of free time wasting away at various training modules perfecting her craft. She does not like to sit still and talk to people, and will often call people out of their names with vulgar swear words. Her favorite swear phrase is "Shit bag" and will mostly comment on a day being "Shitty" even if she enjoyed herself. She has a constant frown on her face during school hours, often yawning or yelling out of boredom, slamming her fist through desks also seems to a nasty habit of hers. She is a chain smoker, heavy drinker, and violent woman, who take each of these items passed the extremes. When Alichilles is shit faced drunk her personality changes drastically, she becomes lonely and attention seeking, wanting someone to hold her and talk to her. She becomes shy and apologetic, often making ammends for her past actions and crying.

On a regular basis she is a brute, hard headed, and not willing to listen to reason. She challenges authority often, and explodes in violent anger at the smallest incidents. She hates vegetables and claims meat is the only source of food you require. If she likes you she tends to invite you to train with her, but when you refuse she prepares to beat you till you agree. She sleep walks often as well, and violently attacks people during her sleep.

Class: Weapon Specialist

Powers: Alichilles can rapidly equip any weapon at any given time using a bit of magic to change the weapons out. She summons a weapon directly in her hand is proficient in any due to her long periods of training. She commonly uses Spears and Axes but will use Katanas, Sniper Rifles, and even crossbows depending on the situation.

Alichilles is also very powerful; She has the physical strength to cut down trees with the palm of her hand and has very high tolerance to pain.

History: Alichilles was born in Ithaca, Greece during a brief civil skirmish between two of the larger families on the island for reign and control of their government. Her parents identity remains a mystery as she was found in the middle of the battlefield by two opposing soldiers [One a male, the other a female]. The opposing soldiers decided to stop fighting and take care of the baby, seeing that this human life was more important than taking each others. They would come to raise this child together and fall in love using this as inspiration for everyone to stop the fighting completely. Their attempts fell on deaf ears, because they were later slaughtered in the room of their crying baby. One soldier found the crying girl and attempted to take her life but with the fathers last breath he was able to save the girl by stabbing the soldier. The baby would soon be taken in by the Royal family of Ithaca and be raised as a servant to the King's family. When Alichilles turned five, she was put to work along with the other servants. From sun up to sun down she worked on small tasks until she aged gaining more tasks like washing clothes and cooking meals for the family. At the age of 14, rebels from the opposing side invaded the castle slaughtering servants, guards and members of the royal family. Alichilles had been targeted for an attack as well but was saved by the king himself allowing her to escape unharmed. The Queen and Alichilles retreated to a holding cabin north of the castle, where they stayed protected by her remaining guards for several months. During these months Alichilles began to pick up duties to protect the queen above all and was trained by the higher ranked guards in the arts of the sword, spear, and axe being prepared to fight for the queen at the cost of her own life. The rebels would soon find the Queen's hiding, and started their attack. Alichilles managed to ward off most of the fighters that came her way but grew wary due to the constant amount of fighting. She would be the last of soldiers left to defend the Queen, telling the Queen to escape from country to protect her own life. The Rebels captured and totured Alichilles in order to extort information out of her about the Queen's disappearance but Alichilles woud not concede. Her left eye was viciously burned with her own sword after being heated in a furnace; The rebels attempted to burn her second eye but Alichilles raged in anger and fear and summoned thousands of weapons to her side. One by one, with her thousands of weapons she began slaughtering the rebel faction. She freed herself and took out the entire faction alone saving Ithaca. Unable to withhold the trauma of her life she fled from Ithaca and began traveling on her own, training her body and skills to be protected at all times. She would always find herself in the middle of battles and fought to destroy both sides to prevent history from repeating itself. She became a legend in Greece, feared and respected by many.

Other Interests: She enjoys training and fighting. Drinking, smoking cigarettes excessively. She hates fancy settings, and books.

Extra: She has nightmares constantly about dying, fears dying, doesn't allow for anyone she cares for to die.

I Would Like To See: Her become more human.
Edited by TheUltimateMaddogg, Apr 14 2013, 03:24 AM.
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I think the girl I wrote earlier could still work if I real back the tsuntsun.



Name:
Suna Masio (soon-ah mars-ee-oh)

Nickname:
Ghost

Appearance:
Shoulder length brown hair usually without much styling leaving it messy and tangled and with a cowlick at the front which she can't seem to get rid of. She has one blue eye and one green. Her skin is pale from a lack of sunlight. On the back of her neck is a rather large birthmark which she hides under her hair at all times. She is slightly below average height and thin as a stick. Has an almost washboard figure.

Due to being slightly self conscious about her figure she has a tendency to dress in multiple layers. She dresses quite conservatively and prefers to wear in dark colours as it leaves her blending into the background more.


Gender:
Female

Age:
19

Sexual Preference:
straight

Race:
Human

Ethnicity:
Ireland

Role:
Student

Personality:
Suna has never been good with people. It isn't that she has unlikeable traits, merely that she is incredibly timid and shy. She would never initiate a conversation with others and tends to cling to those few who she has known long enough to get past her knee jerk reaction to avoid. If she is ever in a situation where she has to talk to others that she would first hide behind a person she knows, stutter or trip over her own words leaving her unable to speak properly and as a last resort, turn invisible and run away.

Despite the crippling shyness Suna does have a lot of positive traits. She is passionate and eager to help those that have broken down the wall. She is incredibly loyal and when she sees a friend hurt by another is one of the few times when she loses all sense of self consciousness and will fight for them without hesitation. She is a problem solver; always able to come up with a solution to a problem if it is presented to her and so long as she can avoid people she will try an solve problems she can see.

When she is alone with those who she trusts she becomes far less tense or nervous. In fact she becomes quite brash at times. Her behaviour while in a comfortable state would leave one never believing that she was so timid at other times.

Most of her interests have left her very introverted ad she is unlikely to ever be a person to call a social gathering. She tends to spend time in her room reading, watching television or various other activities that allow her to not to have to leave the safety of her own home, only leaving if strong-armed into it by a friend or if she has somewhere to be.

Class:
Ghost

Powers:
- Can turn invisible at will
- Can phase through things at will.

History:
Suna was always a timid child. Even during her early school life she tended not to make friends but rather kept to herself. She sat in the corner watching the others, never sure how to talk to people or to make friends. It wasn't that she wanted to be alone, she just didn't know how to be around other people. Her single mother was the only one she was able to talk freely about it too as they were quite close.

It was during highschool that she discovered her abilities. At a school dance that she had done her best to avoid going to but had been strongarmed by her small group of friends. She had intended to simply sit on the sidelines the entire time, avoid attention and hopefully not embarrass herself. It didn't work out as one of the boys began walking towards her. She didn't know what to do and sat shivering for a moment until he was knocked over and lost sight of her. She continued shivering an suddenly a cold sensation washed over her. For some reason it felt oddly comfortable for her though. As the boy stood up and looked around for Suna he seemed to look right through her and wandered off. Suna had no idea what had happened at the time but remembered that sensation. Later she was able to use it on command at home and found herself unable to see herself in the mirror. Suffice to say, she was scared. She had never heard of anyone actually having abilities like this.

After speaking with her mother about it and doing some research she was able to find out about a school where she could learn to understand these abilities. As usual she was nervous about it but her mother was rather insistent about her going. She hoped that by being with others, especially others with strange abilities like herself she might be able to break out of her shell.

They didn't have much money so just to get there Suna was forced to use her invisibility to sneak aboard a plane. What little she had remaining was all used in food an transport but she was able to make it.

Other Interests:
Likes sweet foods, Dislikes spicy foods. Has two main hobbies. First is reading fiction novels. Especially fantasy or romantic novels though wouldn't admit it. Second, equally hidden from others is to become invisible and simply watch people. Become a social observer to how 'normal' people act.

Extra:
Is a super lightweight drinker and drops all her self consciousness almost immediately.
Is very timid and will turn invisible at the first signs of danger or embarrassment to herself. However, will hop into danger if it is threatening someone else.

I Would Like To See:
One pre-existing relationship (prferably someone extroverted and confident) who she will be very attached, even clingy at times at the beginning
Through the urging of this friend she gradually overcomes her shyness with others and is able to have normal interaction with them.
Edited by Mistriousfrog, Apr 13 2013, 05:02 PM.
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Also should have pointed out that I'd love to know what role your character is fitting into - student, teacher, headmaster, henchman, etc.
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oh, definitely student for mine.
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Edited the character a bit. Hope it works for you. ^_^;; (Student by the way. :3)
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Re-edited.
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I know you've re-edited for me several times now, and I hate to be a pain in the ass because you've done so much, but I'm really not sure what I can do with him. Honestly, I'm looking for simpler abilities than the new ones you gave him, I'm not so sure I even quite understand them, therefore I would have issues writing him. :(
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