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| The Four Winds | Apr 15 2013, 10:22 PM Post #31 |
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Alrighty. Don't worry about it. I will get it right one of these times. ^_^ Edit: I also edited his powers down so he has one fire power and one shield power. Edited by The Four Winds, Apr 15 2013, 10:29 PM.
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| princezsupastar | Apr 16 2013, 03:33 AM Post #32 |
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You kind of missed my point. While I once again appreciate the effort, I was hoping you could assign him new, simpler abilities, not edited ones. Think more Xmen-like than anything else. |
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| The Four Winds | Apr 16 2013, 03:43 AM Post #33 |
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Ok. I will try again tomorrow then.
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| Mistriousfrog | Apr 16 2013, 03:44 AM Post #34 |
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The God of Conquest
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Gotta love that tenacity. |
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| Mistriousfrog | Apr 16 2013, 09:20 AM Post #35 |
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The God of Conquest
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Name: Maya Kiki Nickname: Squirt, Shortstuff, Little Girl, the list goes on... role: Student Appearance: Eternally young, Maya looks like a 13 year old girl. She has dyed red hair that drapes down just past her shoulders and bright blue eyes. Her skin is extremely fair and free of any blemishes. Given her appearance of youth she is very short and underdeveloped. However, her magic keeps her in peak physical condition and health at all times so she always looks relatively good. While Maya prefers to where jeans and other pants rather than skirts it isn't as much of an option for her. Apparently it is easier to transform if you have on clothes that are vaguely similar to her other form. Because of this she usually wears skirts. She at least wears dark colours to make up for it though. When she transforms the most noticeable changes are her hair and clothes. Her hair returns to its original bright blonde, shortens and takes on the style of twin tails going down to her shoulders tied with little pink heart beads. Her clothes take on a lot of pink. The skirt shortens and becomes more frilly and her shirt will turn pink and 'cute' and develops big poofy shoulders with matching frills with her skirt. A big heart is cut out on her back. She gets a white cloak with a similar heart cut out. From that heart sprouts two white decorative wings. She gets long white gloves and white stockings. Her shoes get the cute pink treatment too. She hates this form. It is incredibly embarrassing. Gender: Female Age: 20 Sexual Preference: straight Race: Human (though enchanted) Ethnicity: England Personality: She was a typical magic girl once. Keen on friendship and love and all that stuff. After 5 years of fighting off monsters of the week and her 13 year old body never growing, it kind of gets old. Maya is quite nice still, polite and cordial with everyone. Unfortunately it always seems as though there is a dark cloud over her head and she doesn't smile very much. She is very clicky in how she socializes in that she tries to form a close knit, even exclusive group - another trait left over from her time as a magic girl. She is a little stubborn at times but very straight forward about her feelings, if she doesn't like something she isn't at all afraid to tell you and will stick to her guns ferociously. She has the philosophy that there is no problem that won't go away if you find its source and hit it until it agrees to stop causing problems. She is quite intelligent and resourceful though. Though she will undoubtedly complain, she is usually willing to help a friend through almost any problem. The only times when Maya seems genuinely keen are when she is trying something new she has never tried before. But it often ends up boring her within a few minutes. Maya has quite a short temper and gets tired of people and topics easily. Rather than getting angry she will just give up, throw her hands in the air and walk away if pushed though. Her hot button topics that will get her mad are comments about her appearance or cuteness. She hates being called cute. Her other one is people who make light of helping others. After spending so long fighting meaningless battles to protect the helpless and suffering through the consequences of those actions she gets angry, even aggressive when people take it lightly. Class: Magic girl Powers: While in her normal form she is a completely regular human with no special characteristics she is able to transform into her magic girl state to access her special abilities. While in the magic girl state she can do the following: - Super human speed / strength - Flight - Telekinesis - Elemental magic - Her unique magic girl ability - Power to spread joy through raining down hearts from above (She hasn't used this in years though, it just seems too manipulative). - amnesia dust - able to block out the last 30 minutes of memory, it must be sprinkled down on top of people just like the hearts. Her many years of experience and strong magic leave her extremely powerful in her magic girl state. Unfortunately, she can can only hold this form for about 5 minutes before the magic fades and leaves her extremely tired. History: Spoiler: click to toggle Other Interests: She enjoys sweet foods, dislikes bitter. Secretly still kind of likes purple, though wouldn't admit it to anyone. The one thing she enjoys about seeming to be 13 is her ability to put people off with inappropriate humour. Is a big video gamer. Has a hatred of contracts... ...and cats... ...Especially talking cats who trick little girls into signing contracts that bind them to a life of fighting monsters... Extra: Her main goal is to put her past as a magic girl behind her and find something new to do in her life. She has sworn vengence against the magic talking cat that made her sign the contract to become a magic girl. I Would Like To See: She is a bit of a depressing character all and something of a parody on the implications of the magical girl series. I would like to see that come out that she has moments of genuine cuteness especially that all of her magic in transform state should be cute, which is completely against her current personality. I would like to see that in time she embraces her identity and finds peace in it. Edited by Mistriousfrog, Apr 18 2013, 04:06 AM.
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| POOHEAD189 | Apr 17 2013, 08:06 AM Post #36 |
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Name: Takeshi Masaru Nickname: (If any) Appearance: An inch shy of six feet, Takeshi isn't necessarily muscular, but he is very fit and defined, with little fat on his body. He has peach colored skin, dark eyes, and brown spikey hair. He can look quite intimidating when angered. Takeshi isn't unhandsom, but his sterness keeps him from being considered a looker. He has a gruff voice that is easily recognizable. Gender: Male Age: 18 Sexual Preference: Straight Race: 1/2 Asian, 1/2 Caucasian (has diluted dragon blood) Ethnicity: 1/2 Asian, 1/2 Caucasian. Born in America (or any country like it) Personality: Independent and confident, Takeshi is generally quiet. When he speaks however, he is blunt, and is not afraid to point out certain facts that could be considered rude. He does not much care for social hierarchy, and does not feel social pressures. He does not enjoy it when others have control over him. He can be very fierce and intimidating to his enemies and to people with weak constitutions. He treats his friends well enough if he has them, and gives everyone slight respect. However, he does not see anyone above him in status, respecting positions of power, but treating them as equals or like they have the authority of a homeless man. He thinks about a move before he makes it, and is quite analytical, despite his gruff and blunt exterior. He enjoys fighting, and deep down loves the violence of combat. He is very judgemental, and very serious, with incredible willpower. He believes people who delve into anything hedonistic are weak, and few can truly gain his full respect. Deep down though, he can be softer than people realize. Class:Ronin Powers: Swordsmanship and Karate, and Enhancing abilities with Ki. Can also create shockwaves with his sword of pure energy. History: (Think of Shi'Ran as China and Andred as Britain) Takeshi was born in a loving family. Son of the great warrior Kuranai Masaru, better known among the populace as "Lightning Blade." 23 years pre- academy, Kuranai was presented before the Emperor of a province in Shi’Ran, for single handedly defeating a band of roving maruaders, saving the empire. By the emperors side was his personal Nurse Maid. She was a beauty, well known for her Andred Heritage, kindness and delicate hands. When her eyes met Kurania's, they fell in love instantly. However, in order for them to be together, they knew they had to run. That night they fled, harried by the emperors guards, and Kurania's rival, General Hashigaru. In a fierce struggle, Kuranai took Hashigaru's eye. They escaped, and found a new life in the Southland with Kurania's father, the man who taught him everything he knew. Kurania and his Andred wife then had a child, Takeshi. For three years they lived in peace. That is until, under the cover of night, Gneral Hashimaru surrounded the farm, and attacked. Kuranai and Takeshi's grandfather fought bravely, killing hundreds of soldiers. But it was not enough, and they were overwhelmed. Kuranai and his wife were killed, but Takeshi's grandfather managed to escape with Takeshi. How he managed to escape is unknown. He fled to the northwest, to a solitary, yet large village in the great forest, and Takeshi was taught the way off the Sword and the Fist by his grandfather. He mainly only spoke to his grandfather. His grandfather knew his destiny did not rely in such a place. To further test his skills, he was sent to Hayashi Academi. He had always lived with inner demons, and in order to release them, he needed justice done to the general, and the emperor. "Live for your family, live for your friends, live for the bounty of the earth, and live for your honor" his grandfather told him as he departed. Takeshi nodded, but his head was filled with vengeance as well as justice, and he looked away, towards the horizon. His eyes flashing fiercely. He travelled, honing his swordsmanship, and looking for strength. Other Interests: Enjoys Hard Rock music, and bathing in lakes or rivers. Extra: Owns a single edged and thick bladed Katana, with a 3 foot blade. He wields it with ease, using only one hand if needed. I Would Like To See: I would like to see him rile things up, be badass, and be his own person. |
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| The Four Winds | Apr 17 2013, 05:25 PM Post #37 |
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Alrighty, edited again. Hope this works.
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| princezsupastar | Apr 17 2013, 06:45 PM Post #38 |
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...you did? He's still got that demon thing going on, that's what I can't work with. Remember this is more X-men like than anything else, I want simplish powers/abilities. (That's what I meant be abilities, the actual power not how it works). |
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| The Four Winds | Apr 17 2013, 06:47 PM Post #39 |
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Oh. Well give me a few moments then. |
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| princezsupastar | Apr 30 2013, 03:21 PM Post #40 |
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Hey Drago, not sure if you're finished with Joseph or not, if so I'm gonna need a bit more with the personality. Still need one more female student, I know Char was working on one but I'm not sure what's happening with that. Also 4winds I edited your characters powers slightly, in that he causes shock waves (similar to a taser) to inflict pain. I'll be posting up a list of everyone's powers, limitations of those powers and weapons to make sure it's all clear soon. I haven't actually begin writing but I have a general idea for the first chapter in my head. Once I have all this wrapped up it shouldn't take me too long to start. :) |
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| TheUltimateMaddogg | Apr 30 2013, 03:57 PM Post #41 |
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Fuck The Polite
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I can makes another if you want
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| Charnobyl | Apr 30 2013, 04:55 PM Post #42 |
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Chan eil.
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I don't have time to complete her. More pressing things came up so go ahead if you want Robert. |
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| Dragoknighte | Apr 30 2013, 10:15 PM Post #43 |
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Yes I'm pretty much done with Joseph. I'd come up with some backstory, but I can't. Maybe it's because of stress, or lack of creative energies or simple laziness, but I can't think of anything. Plus I forget. Also, do I need to expand the personality? It's just Char in a different body. No differences whatsoever. |
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| princezsupastar | May 1 2013, 12:40 AM Post #44 |
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I don't know Char as well as some of you, so yeah, I'm going to need a bit more. |
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| The Four Winds | May 1 2013, 05:19 PM Post #45 |
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Sweet. And thanks for letting me rework the character so many times. I need to work a lot on toning down my characters. ^_^;; |
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