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| Luna and Silver Moon: The Reviews; Post your thoughts here | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 31 2008, 02:17 PM (766 Views) | |
| Dinendir | Aug 31 2008, 02:17 PM Post #1 |
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Light of Dawn
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The MST is here. |
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| Mathonwy | Aug 31 2008, 03:36 PM Post #2 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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Fabulous! I think we have a near-perfect type specimen Sue here: Stupid hair colour? Check. Arranged-marriage teen angst? Check. Superpowered mystical pet? Check. Mad archery skillz? Check. Random Legolas-lusting ...? Ugh! And the story's pretty bad too. The thing that most worried me? The M-rating. EragonsGirlfriend has trouble portraying a simple conversation - can't wait for her to try writing sex ... |
| "From the moment I picked up your book until I laid it down, I was convulsed with laughter. Some day I intend reading it." | |
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| Fishpaste | Aug 31 2008, 04:14 PM Post #3 |
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Rising Again
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*shudder* I really hope this is a troll... |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Siany-T | Aug 31 2008, 06:27 PM Post #4 |
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King of Nothing
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Bad, bad, very bad story. Could be intresting with the sex scene late ron. Great MSTing. A good start. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Aug 31 2008, 09:16 PM Post #5 |
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Resident Time Lady
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Oh, I remember this story. I believe it was flamed to high heaven. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Queen of the Unknown | Aug 31 2008, 10:32 PM Post #6 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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I remember seeing a discussion for that fic in BB's forum. It was deleted before I got to read it, though. Anyway, your MST is hilarious. Keep it up! |
| See, for us, there is no fight. Which is why winning doesn't enter into it. We go on, no matter what. Our firm has always been here. In one form or another. The Inquisition. The Khmer Rouge. We were there when the very first cave man clubbed his neighbor. See, we're in the hearts and minds of every single living being. And that, friend, is what's making things so difficult for you. See, the world doesn't work in spite of evil, Angel. It works with us. It works because of us. ~Reprise (AtS 2x15) | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Aug 31 2008, 11:51 PM Post #7 |
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Chasing Shadows
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*smacks self in head* THATS why I remember it! While I was reading it I kept going, 'I know this story... why do I know this story...' Good MST.
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Dinendir | Sep 1 2008, 12:15 PM Post #8 |
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Light of Dawn
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Thanks for the kind words I'll try and do another chapter soon, but since I'm starting Sixth Form this week and I already procrastinate like hell...It might be a while.
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| AraionaDuBois | Sep 1 2008, 12:19 PM Post #9 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Is practically everyone starting up now? Isn't School fun? I've been back at Uni for a week now. It's flipping crazy! My work load went from 'so so' to 'HOLY CRAP YOU ARE A JUNIOR NOW!!' I spent last night reading about a hundred or so pages... it was fun!
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 1 2008, 12:33 PM Post #10 |
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King of Nothing
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Aye, we're all going back to school now. Year 11 is calling me. Which means the long awaited chapter two of Yesel's Tale mya take a while, although it's almost done. So don't worry Dinendir you're not the only one. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Sep 1 2008, 12:56 PM Post #11 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Have fun with that. Aw crap, gotta fly in a minute or so... bloody University. Plus, it normally takes me 10 minutes to get there but since my windshield is covered in pine-pitch, and I can't rightly see properly, it takes about 20 minutes... *grumble* Though, I am looking forward to my Gender and Crime class. I do really like that one.
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 1 2008, 01:16 PM Post #12 |
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King of Nothing
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I won't even be on much, clever old me took extra lessons after school so on only two out of five days do I actually leave school on time. Although I hope the site isn't blocked at school 'cause then I can use it at school and just update my MST when I get home. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| Fishpaste | Sep 1 2008, 08:55 PM Post #13 |
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Rising Again
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I'm back at school tommorow and it's my birthday the day after. Typical. At least I'll be the oldest in Yr 11. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Mathonwy | Sep 6 2008, 07:58 PM Post #14 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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Oh no - he's been possessed by a stroppy!teen Suvian demon! Even so, I can't believe how easily he fell for Luna's subtle 'let's remove all our clothes' ploy. Run, Legolas, run! |
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| AraionaDuBois | Sep 7 2008, 02:47 AM Post #15 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Nice new chapter Din! Great riffs, but I told you this already. Anywho, can't wait for more!
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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I'll try and do another chapter soon, but since I'm starting Sixth Form this week and I already procrastinate like hell...It might be a while.
1:15 AM Jul 11