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| Luna and Silver Moon: The Reviews; Post your thoughts here | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 7 2008, 07:10 AM Post #16 |
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Resident Time Lady
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Legolas needs some girl to teach him archery? Wouldn't he have been trained by his father's military? Oh wait, logic. Sorry, you'd think after doing this for so long I'd have stopped thinking. Good riffs, bad story. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 7 2008, 09:43 PM Post #17 |
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King of Nothing
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I want the Legolas! *Sounds of a scuffle* Sorry my inner fangirl escpaed. She got excited by the fact Legolas was called 'the Legolas'. That was such a stupid mistake. I was nearly crying at the 'archery' lesson which was really a ploy to get Legolas's top off since I've been learning archery for a while now and we start by shooting, then the teacher tells each of us how to improve ect. Stupid ploy to make Legolas take his top off. Great MST though, you definatly want to get some sick bags. They are a must have when you are stuck MSTing, oh and a phycatrist (sorry about the spelling). |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Sep 8 2008, 12:16 AM Post #18 |
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Chasing Shadows
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When I saw the Legolas, I was like 'hey! It's The Doctor without the Doctor!' Sad eh? |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| ~Tio~ | Sep 8 2008, 01:57 PM Post #19 |
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Good work, Din I enjoyed the story. And you're using quite rare charcters for sporkers Well, I'm kinda in a hurry now, so maybe I'll give a more proper review later.Keep up the good work! |
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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 4 2008, 03:49 PM Post #20 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Brilliant new chapter!
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Rhysmel | Oct 4 2008, 08:27 PM Post #21 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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Brilliant MSTing. This story is a lot more sappy than the above average rubber tree. :rolleyes: |
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| Mathonwy | Oct 4 2008, 08:43 PM Post #22 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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I was expecting the rape to be the low point of this chapter, and it did indeed suck on many levels. But EragonsGirlfriend's gifts at describing action are pushing this scene hard ...
Wow - zero-tolerance policing policy from Thranduil there! |
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| Siany-T | Oct 4 2008, 11:27 PM Post #23 |
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King of Nothing
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Ooo a new chapter. *Reads and smashes head off table* ow that hurt more than I was expecting.
For the love of all that is Holy, she did not just.... Eurg.
That girl has a problem with taking clothes off I see, she always rips them off.
Surely you don't mean the She-Demon, Angey? They are lucky you didn't say It's name.
One of many Modern Day Teenager!Legolas quotes.
'Elbowing her in the stomach'. I think the phrase she was actually looking for was 'he offered her his arm' or similar.
I was hoping the ground wasn't actually there and they fell over a cliff but no such luck.
Exactly what I was thinking. 'finally had enough'? So she was enjoying it to begin with then? Oh and another example of modern language being used incorrectly. Even in the narrative the language should not be modern slang.
Rape victims also normally don't like to be touched. They pretty much definatly wouldn't start snuggling up to other males.
I highly doubt Legolas would ask for permission to 'beat him up'. He would either fight him with, you know a sword or something, or have called the Palace Guards to arrest the thing.
Try calling Legolas 'prince boy' to his face. I dare you. Although I do cheer him on the last part. It most certainly is not princely behaviour.
Huh? Oh wait more physco-communication only not itlaicised so we can tell. Great MST Dinedir. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| Fishpaste | Oct 4 2008, 11:49 PM Post #24 |
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Rising Again
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So what is Silvers actual point? He's supposed to be there as a protecter but when It actually needs him, he's at home. Another great chapter! Although I do complain about the wait, this story is far too good to wait for. Urgh, bad rape scene, even worse comfort scene and horrid action. This is either a really good troll or a spectacular sue. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Dinendir | Oct 5 2008, 12:22 PM Post #25 |
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Light of Dawn
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Well in the next chapter he becomes Legolas and Luna's mount/pack pony. Not exactly what you'd expect from a 'protector'. And yeah, sorry for the wait. I'll try and be quicker with the next one. Thanks for the reviews everyone. |
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| Fishpaste | Oct 5 2008, 02:19 PM Post #26 |
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Rising Again
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*sigh* A pony. Really a strong and respected posistion Silver. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Fishpaste | Oct 13 2008, 07:59 PM Post #27 |
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Rising Again
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Yay! Update! Honestly, they're travelling through one of the most hostile places im ME and all they get attacked by are giant bunnies and five orcs? Impossible. Plis Mirkwood was dark and dangerous at that point. Why does Legolas know about the ring? And pleeeaaassseee don't tell me she's going to come with the Fellowship. That would be too much. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Mathonwy | Oct 13 2008, 08:40 PM Post #28 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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I dunno. With EragonsGirlfriend's unique narrative approach - almost totally ignoring the journey to focus on Luna and Leggy's night-time snuggles - this could provide a fascinating new perspective on the quest. Can you imagine them going through Moria? We sleep in a tomb tonight. Boline, or something like that. Creepy! Legolas and I lie entwined in a corner of the room, rubbing our noses together and giggling. "I love you!" gasps Legolas. "I love you!" I reply. "I love you more!" "No, I love YOU more!" We kiss softly and sweetly, while the stars wheel overhead. If there were any stars. Which there aren't, because we're underground. Uh, yeah. The next day we walk a bit further. That night, we sleep in a tree. Cool! "I love you loads!" "I love you loads and loads and loads!" We embrace passionately. I frown suddenly. Where's Gandalf got to? Has he wandered off somewhere? |
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| Dinendir | Oct 13 2008, 09:05 PM Post #29 |
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Don't worry. There's only one chapter left now; the story stops when they're at Rivendell. And Mathonwy- that would be more than I could take. |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 14 2008, 04:04 AM Post #30 |
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Just like every Suethor believes Elrond is a king and therefore he, Thranduil, Celeborn and Galadriel prance about in crowns, they also know that kings live in castles. So Thranduil must live in castle!
You want them to look at a map and figure it out? Please, Rivendell is always a hop, skip and a jump away from Mirkwood. That's why Legolas, Elladan, Elrohir and Haldir are best friends who hang out all the time. [/sarcasm]
AHHH! Sorry, but that is one of the scariest sentences ever since "The Empty Child" and "The Doctor Dances."
At least she mentions her character bathing! Most have these girls joining the Fellowship and trudging along but still smelling wonderful to whoever is supposed to be attracted to them. See Boromir and Jess. He still smells lavendar on her despite the fact she hasn't bathed in weeks, was just rescued by Eomer from Orcs and has been riding. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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I enjoyed the story. And you're using quite rare charcters for sporkers 

1:15 AM Jul 11