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| The Prince and the Servant; You and the Reviews | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 13 2008, 06:52 AM (1,204 Views) | |
| MackenzieW | Sep 13 2008, 06:52 AM Post #1 |
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Resident Time Lady
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The story can be found here. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Sep 13 2008, 12:24 PM Post #2 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Good MST! I'm hungry for a croissant now you know. |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Fishpaste | Sep 13 2008, 06:55 PM Post #3 |
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Rising Again
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Aww, poor Sai. Good luck! Brilliant MST anyway, what kind of author admits to not knowing much about the universe they're writing in? |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 13 2008, 06:59 PM Post #4 |
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King of Nothing
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Everytime I see the words 'I don't know much about the fandom' then I want to grab the autohr and scream 'well then don't write about it until you do, savvy?' at them. This was no different, and then the un-Elvish names and cliched situations, annoying. Great MST Mac. Great to see Erik back and still wanting to get Angey. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 14 2008, 03:28 AM Post #5 |
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Sorry, Ari. You're close to Canada, right? Just take a trip across the border for some croissants. I'm sure the border patrol has heard it all.
The ones we mock.
Yes, though the writer has been very nice and receptive to criticism. However, there are more "OMG dis is sooo gud! Don't lissen 2 the jealous writrs who flame u!" than people giving good criticism. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Sep 14 2008, 03:30 AM Post #6 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Yeah... mmm...croissant... I want a trip up to Canada now... I need ketchup chips... and good croissants... great, now I'm even hungrier and I just ate! |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 14 2008, 03:55 AM Post #7 |
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Just doing my job. Me, I could explode. I went to Great Adventures today and then my family are at Cracker Barrell afterwards. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Telcontar Rulz | Sep 14 2008, 07:13 AM Post #8 |
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Rising Again
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Great MST. This girl is even worse than PA when it comes to putting the modern world in Midde Earth. Elastics? Running water? At least she accepts concrit, which makes her a sight better than Angey.
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| MackenzieW | Sep 14 2008, 08:28 AM Post #9 |
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Thank you. I know, I thought maybe I was reading it wrong but even in the next chapter, it seems she thinks that Middle-earth had indoor plumbing. I don't even think she realizes elastic is a synthetic material! Or else she is using the wrong translation of another word. But yes, she was very nice when I reviewed her later on (namely over the fact that when she does start giving characters Elven names, they are names already in use in canon--IE some random archer named Elessar). Okay, I'm hijacking my own thread for a bit (sorry, Refia. You can flog me later! ). I started coming to Fanfiction.net mostly for the musical fanfictions. Now, I hardly enter the musical/plays section because it has really gone to the dogs. I'm not foolish enough to think this will do anything, but I want to contact the admins just to get my thoughts off my chest. Anyone know how I can do so? Thanks!Remember, when you are done, please replace the thread as you found it. Thanks! |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 14 2008, 04:35 PM Post #10 |
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King of Nothing
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*Place thread were she found it* I now have a really quiet funny image of cartoon!Legolas walking down to the archery feild (or whatever she called it), whistling away with just his quiver on his back and no bow. Then he gets to the archery feild and realizing he has forgotten his bow, smack himself on the forehead before laughing as he turns around and goes back to get it. I feel sorry for Quatre. Poor guy. Loved the MST though. Another un-elven name Yay. Not. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| Mathonwy | Sep 14 2008, 04:50 PM Post #11 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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What? And the rest of the site hasn't? No idea how to contact the admins at ff.net, I'm afraid. My own belief is that the entire site is now being run by a sinister alien intelligence, with the sole purpose of driving me insane. Back to the MST! I suppose we can give caithzadz a bit of a break, since she's unfamilar with canon (but then why ...?) and is writing in a second language. And it's good to hear that she responds to concrit. However, the torrent of raw Sueage that is Annika is beyond excuses! |
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| Fishpaste | Sep 14 2008, 08:52 PM Post #12 |
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Rising Again
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Poor Quatre *plays funeral music* Annika is almost worse that Rosa in some aspects. Although, maybe not. But she's still pretty bad. Nah, the site is being controlled by the government, they want to drive all the sane people insane through Sues and PWP, PA is one of their top workers. I think there's a contact admin thing on the main page. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 14 2008, 09:50 PM Post #13 |
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King of Nothing
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Annika has a more annoying name than Rosa/Rora. Although she has no annoying animals companions and hasn't been raped so she less annoying there. Really? I thought it was being run by the evil canon characters to drive the good canon characters insane? They control the writers, PA is actually an evil Imperial being trained by Grand Admiral Thrawn. The odd story here or there about the evil characters just slip through their screening process and Voldie sends Death Eaters to 'deal' with them. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 15 2008, 03:10 AM Post #14 |
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Thanks, yes, this does seem very uncanonical. Actually, part of my advice to caithzadz was to change the LOTR names and places and move it to the fairy tales section. It's very Cinderella-esque so it would do better over there. Thanks for the help guys. Hopefully the government-paid aliens will listen to me somewhat if I can find an e-mail. I know there's a support e-mail, but I think I know a place with the admin e-mail from when we campaigned for the American Girl section. When I wrote my e-mail, I'll let you know and post a copy for all of you to read. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Telcontar Rulz | Sep 15 2008, 09:19 AM Post #15 |
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Rising Again
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The author really did drive home the point that Legolas and her OFC are friends. Wait, perhaps this dumb brain just needs it repeated once more. :lol: Good MST, and I hope Erik will be all right after Lucius/Voldemort is done with him.
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This girl is even worse than PA when it comes to putting the modern world in Midde Earth. Elastics? Running water? At least she accepts concrit, which makes her a sight better than Angey.
). I started coming to Fanfiction.net mostly for the musical fanfictions. Now, I hardly enter the musical/plays section because it has really gone to the dogs. I'm not foolish enough to think this will do anything, but I want to contact the admins just to get my thoughts off my chest. Anyone know how I can do so? Thanks!

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