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| The Prince and the Servant; You and the Reviews | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 13 2008, 06:52 AM (1,210 Views) | |
| Siany-T | Sep 15 2008, 06:05 PM Post #16 |
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King of Nothing
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Hmm Legolas and Annika are friends? I never would have got that from the story. *Starts laughing* Gotta love sarcasm. Is how Legolas talking to her making anyone else think of a little boy who has found a rabbit or something is taking home as a pet? Pity the giant, evil spiders didn't eat her. Poor Eric, he's been through a lot as it is. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| Fishpaste | Sep 15 2008, 06:57 PM Post #17 |
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Rising Again
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What, they're FRIENDS?!? Does the author think we're as thick as they are? Legolas must have super hot hands... |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 16 2008, 12:09 AM Post #18 |
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King of Nothing
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Maybe he carries a hand warmer in his pocket. Woudl fit with all this non-ME stuff like indoor plumbing and elastic. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 16 2008, 12:11 AM Post #19 |
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Actually, all this does is prove my theory that there needs to be a dialogue boot camp. New writers need to learn that dialogue isn't there to serve your characters, but there to serve your readers.
That completely fits. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 16 2008, 12:24 AM Post #20 |
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I sent my e-mail to the Fanfiction.net administrators. As promised, here's a copy of what I sent.
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Queen of the Unknown | Sep 16 2008, 03:33 AM Post #21 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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That's a nice letter, and I hope the admins listen. It sucks when you're a musical theatre freak and you can't find a fic for your favorite plays between all the Jonas romances. Thankfully all of my absolute favorites have their own category, but still. And I would comment on OH MY GOSH, THEY'RE FRIENDS!1eleven1, but that would be beating a dead horse, so instead I'll comment on the LegolasLegolasLegolasLegolas. Weirdest divider ever. |
| See, for us, there is no fight. Which is why winning doesn't enter into it. We go on, no matter what. Our firm has always been here. In one form or another. The Inquisition. The Khmer Rouge. We were there when the very first cave man clubbed his neighbor. See, we're in the hearts and minds of every single living being. And that, friend, is what's making things so difficult for you. See, the world doesn't work in spite of evil, Angel. It works with us. It works because of us. ~Reprise (AtS 2x15) | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 16 2008, 03:43 AM Post #22 |
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Thanks, Queen, I do hope the admins listen and do something to clean up the site. Yes, it is a weird divider. And will give birth to one of my mini-balrogs. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 16 2008, 06:41 AM Post #23 |
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Okay guys, I didn't notice this until I posted this chapter, but caithzadz spawned 2 mini-balrogs. We only have permission to keep Aragoran and Legoals. So, we have one for adoption! Who wants Thraundil? |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Fishpaste | Sep 16 2008, 04:27 PM Post #24 |
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Rising Again
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I'll take Thraundil, Elromd would love the company! I like the messge, far more sophisticated (sp?) than what I would have sent. I wonder if they'll change anything. Yay! Update! I quite like this MS. There are no redeeming features so it's nice and easy to hate her. *happy sigh* And I think everyopne's missing the point of the names, they're not elvish, they're ELFISH. Although the idea of Luthien scrubbing floors is plain wrong. And I honestly thought she had put in Aragorn for a while. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 16 2008, 10:42 PM Post #25 |
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Thank you! *Hands HATI Thraundil's leash* Congrats on your new mini-balrog! Thanks for the comments on the letter. It was hard to not go into a rant and keep it as polite as possible. They haven't gotten back to me so I don't know. I may not know unless I sign in one day and there's a message regarding a crack-down in the section. I was wondering why Aragorn was there too until I realized that no Suethor ever refers to him by his regal name. Heck, I've seen my share of King Aragorn in stories. That's when I realized it and pointed out to caithzadz that Elves don't repeat names. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 16 2008, 10:47 PM Post #26 |
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King of Nothing
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Darn, Fishie beat me. Oh well I think six posisbly seven mini-rancors, 3 mini-weevils and a mini-Aragog is enough. Nice letter Mac. Polite but true. Latest chapter. She reusing names of other elves. Oh dear. So now Luthien is cleaning floors, while she's dead. Quick someone fetch Beren! Same about the Aragorn thing. I was going 'why is Aragorn there, while Legolas is getting fitted for clothes at that?' and then clicked at the end she was just using names. Although there may have been two Legolas's. Oh and Annika must have the Doctor's pockets if she can fit what I persume are clothes into them. Like the Doctor has in The Runaway Bride, "They're bigger on the inside." |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 17 2008, 02:21 AM Post #27 |
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Enough? I think you have a zoo!
Yes, there was. There was one in the First Age. And now there's one swarmed by Mary Sues.
I was thinking the same thing. Then I realized no Suethor ever addresses Aragorn by his regal name. I've seen plenty references to King Aragorn in the stories. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 17 2008, 08:39 AM Post #28 |
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Look at what appeared in Fanfiction.net's news announcements:
This may have been in the works, but kinda weird timing, don'cha think? |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Fishpaste | Sep 17 2008, 05:35 PM Post #29 |
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Rising Again
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Yay! *hands Thraundil bacon* Awww, you're cute...for a fiery demon thing anyway. Wow. FF.Net listens? Wicked! You can change the world!!!
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 17 2008, 06:22 PM Post #30 |
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King of Nothing
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Yep, I have a minis zoo. Wow, change the world! |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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