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| Sneaky SLytherins; The Reviews | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 22 2008, 01:34 AM Post #16 |
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Yeah, well, in the story, Remus and my OC Harmony already named their twin girls Lily and Jamie but I figured that Molly was pretty much the only mother figure in Harry's life, so he would name his daughter after her. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Sep 22 2008, 11:43 AM Post #17 |
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Chasing Shadows
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I'm even more confused with the second chapter... WTF was that all about? Good MST though... |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 22 2008, 04:43 PM Post #18 |
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King of Nothing
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That second chapter was confusing and had no point. Really confusing, really really. Great MST though, I like Lucius not denying Draco is a snob. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 22 2008, 11:57 PM Post #19 |
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I honestly don't know what this story is about except that Draco's dating Ginny while admiring Hermione. But there really is no plot. It seems like the author has a crush on a boy and is using Draco to live out what she wants the boy to think of her (AKA the highly sexualized, awesomely dressed, incredibly pretty girl that's masquerading as Hermione Granger). |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 23 2008, 08:23 AM Post #20 |
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King of Nothing
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Yep, because whoever that is, it's certainly not Hermione. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| Mathonwy | Sep 23 2008, 08:33 AM Post #21 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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Hee! Then again, we're dealing with an author who thinks that 'OOC' is something to be proudly announced. Surely writing someone in character would have to be one of the basic requirements of fanfiction? Perhaps sinsrfun10 is just going with the honest approach. In which case, a more honest note would read: 'OOC. Also: inane, cliched and incomprehensible. My descriptive powers are those of a four year old and I think simile is an expression you make with your mouth'.
Well, we've seen that one often enough before - although how exactly Draco became such a major-league lust object in the first place is beyond me. But then, maybe I'm just missing something about the conniving, charmless, rat-faced little turd ... |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 23 2008, 08:55 AM Post #22 |
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No, it's whoever this "Mia" person is.
You would think. However, more authors I've found are willing to bend the characters to suit their story then bend their story to suit the characters. And then most have the nerve to say they really like such and such character, despite the fact they threw out everything that made that character who he or she is!
I like that author's note.
I think it's more to do with Tom Felton than with JK Rowling's description of Draco. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Mathonwy | Sep 23 2008, 01:02 PM Post #23 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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Yeah - too true! The fanon woobification of Draco is very depressing, especially as JK Rowling has made it quite clear that Malfoy Jr. is not hiding a heart of gold underneath that crusty exterior. Oh well, let's not let logic and reality stand in our way, eh? |
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| Siany-T | Sep 23 2008, 05:47 PM Post #24 |
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King of Nothing
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You know I kinda like Draco, but then I like evil people. Plus when he's crying in HBP it's kind of sweet. However he DOES NOT have a heart of gold under that at all. Last chapter was as I expected, it had no real plot, forgot the true way of the books and generally had no point. You made the point I was practically screaming, The Patil Twins where in seperate houses. Padme was in Ravenclaw while Pavarti was in Griffindor. JK makes a point of this to show that although most families end up in the same house sometimes they don't. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 23 2008, 09:50 PM Post #25 |
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After the Patil twins popping up, I'm now thinking that sinsrfun10 didn't read the books. In the fourth movie, Padma got bumped into the Gryffindor house so she and her sister could go to the Yule Ball with Harry and Ron (despite that while Parvati went with Harry, Lavendar Brown went with Ron in the book). And the "I am Lord Voldemort" scene was in the second movie as Chris Columbus was remarkably faithful to the books. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 23 2008, 09:58 PM Post #26 |
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King of Nothing
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You're probably right, she actually said she stole the 'I am Lord Voldemort' from the film. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 23 2008, 10:00 PM Post #27 |
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She doesn't say that. She says she stole it off Jo. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Siany-T | Sep 23 2008, 10:03 PM Post #28 |
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Hmm does she? Must have read it wrong. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| Fishpaste | Sep 24 2008, 09:46 PM Post #29 |
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Rising Again
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I quite liked Tom Felton, he was one of the only two decent actors in the film and he was only 10ish. The other was whoever played Snape. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| MackenzieW | Sep 24 2008, 10:49 PM Post #30 |
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Alan Rickman played Snape. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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