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| MackenzieW | Oct 14 2008, 07:35 AM Post #16 |
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Resident Time Lady
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"Best Description of What Sueness Looks Like EVER!" *Everyone returns.* Mac: I think it’s starting to work. Halloween Movie Party, here we come! Jareth: Shh! You know he can hear us in here! Mac: Sorry. Anyway, Oh My Gosh. (Beat) Seriously? A/N: Who would have thought that I would have no time in the summer! O.O Not me! Lol Well anyways here’s the new chapter. Oh yes, I want to say thanks to my reviewers. Mac: I’m trying to figure when these chapters were uploaded. Because I’m pretty sure that by this point, Fanfiction.net had introduced the review reply feature. potterfan2006 - Of course I wanna help you, send over the fic and I’ll help in any way I can- I know you like the other style better but I think I may stay with this one and work with it for a while Hope you like this chapter – it’s overdue I think. galawyn - Hehehe, thanks for the review! Here’s a chapter for ya! . DMH1973 - Not everyone does x.x You can’t image the flames I’ve gotten or seen people get x.x It’s horrible! Sai: Because the fans actually want to recognize their fandom? Remus: Those bastards! Anyways, thank you so much! Ice Queen Estella - Woot woot, I know I rock LOL Thanks for the review and all the kids are in this chapter but not for that long…sorry hun lol Erik: Well, I’d hardly called Elladan, Elrohir and Arwen “kids.” ElvenPwneri - Thanks so much for the kind words. Ya…I take a while to update sorry for that! lol Anyways, I hope you like this chapter. BueatyRoxs06 - Oh thank you so much! You’re SO nice. I think I may cry too. I really hope you enjoy this chapter. SexyKnickersOk – Yup, I’ll be the first to admit that I can always improve but thanks for being nice about it:):):) I hope you keep reading and liking it lol Anyways, that’s it! Have fun reading. *All grumble.* -Sam’s Pov.- “Elrond when will I be able to be with Arwen, Elladan and Elrohir?” I ask. We are at the ball and I haven’t seen them anywhere. Octavius: Perhaps they are avoiding you. Think about it. Currently we’re off to the side, just looking at everyone dancing – it’s a little early for that I think. Sai: Too early for dancing? What? “Well my lady, they are yet again in a private room I set aside for the five of us. I thought it would be a good opportunity for everyone,” He smiles down at me and I resist the urge to give him a kiss. It’s so hard not to show him affection in public. On the dance floor we can be closer, but not kissing or holding hands is really killing me. Erik: Here’s the thing, guys, not everyone in that room is going to be that dense. They are going to put two and two together soon enough. Mac: And gossip travels faster than the speed of light. I simply nod. “I’m a little hungry my Lord, when will dinner be served?” I feel my stomach grumble and I can’t help but giggle. Of course my laugh is lost in the noise of the room. I look around at all the other elves; no matter how hard I try I will never be good enough for them. Mac: You know, falling in love with Elrond doesn’t solve your mental problems AT ALL. You need to still see Gandalf and talk about this lack of self-esteem. Many of them ignore me while others make my life hell. Jareth: The only other elf we’ve seen you interact with is Eselin. By the by, what happened to her? Mac: Must’ve wised up and escaped. The worst are the she-elves. Sai: Well, there’s your problem. You keep referring to them by a derogatory term! Mac: Point Sai. I can understand though, I’m a human and no matter where we are - Earth or Middle Earth – we destroy the land like a plague. Erik: Wow, way to be judgmental on your own species! What about all those green-people, and not just the people who do it because it’s “cool”? The ones who really want to make the world a better place to live? Like Mac—I’ve seen her old Big Help pictures! Mac: There are pictures? WHERE? Elves are in-tune with nature and understand it while we would rather run it over and build something on top of it. Jareth: They paved paradise and put up a parking lot. Mac: Point Jareth. Still I wish that they would judge me on my character, not my race. Sai: Well, talk to them and stop complaining! Elrond grasps my hand and we walk out of the ball room into a smaller yet more stunning room. The whole room is covered in flowers from our garden. I gasp softly as my eyes sparkle with light from above. “My Lord it’s beautiful,” I turn and look up at him. He smiles knowingly and bends down to whisper into my ear, “I thought you would like it my love,” I shiver as he pulls away and smirks. Damn him and his sexy voice – damn him! “Lady Samantha, we meet again!” I look over as Elladan and Elrohir rushes over to me. Gertrude: RUSH! There are two of them so the verb has to agree. “Oh no,” - Narrator’s Pov. - Elrohir runs up to Samantha and takes her in his arms, spinning her around. “I have missed you my lady!” After he puts her down Elladan gives her the same treatment. After being put down Sam tries to walk but ends up bumping into Elrond. “Wow, the room is spinning,” She blinks and her laughter fills the room. “What a beautiful sound,” At that moment Arwen makes her appearance from the shadows. All: Creepy. She walks over to Sam and places a hand gently on her shoulder. “Hello my Lady,” She smiles and bows her head slightly. Sam smiles back at her, “Hello Arwen, how are you doing?” As Arwen and Samantha converse Elrond leads his sons off to a corner of the room. They all sit at a table and begin to talk. After a few minutes Elrond clears his throat to get his sons attention. Sai: But they were talking. “Elladan, Elrohir I want to know what you think of Lady Samantha. Do you like her?” Elrond smiles as he looks upon his love. Remus: Any one need? *Holds up bags. Quatre, Mac and Erik take one each just in case. Sai, Jareth and Octavius decide to chance it* Elladan is the first to comment, “I like her. She’s nice but she doesn’t fit in well here. She is troubled and the other elves can sense this. It makes them weary of her.” Elrond frowns, he noticed the other elves hesitation, “But don’t you think that in time they will get used to her presence?” All: NO. His sons are taken back, their father rarely sounds so unsure. Elrond is wise beyond his years yet here he is trying to turn his face from the truth. Erik (Elrohir): Elladan, I do believe Ada is possessed. Remus (Elladan): I agree. We promised Nana we would take care of this and we cannot turn to Gandalf. Erik (Elrohir): Aye, I am glad Estel is not here to see this. Perhaps we should send for Saruman. Certainly the White Wizard can help him? Jareth (Elrond): ONLY SAMANTHA CAN HEAL ME! HEAL ME, YOU SCHIZO! Erik and Remus: Point Jareth. “Father,” Starts Elrohir. Mac: Didn’t krillball say she had “tones” (sic) of Tolkien books at the end of the last chapter? Octavius: Yes. Mac: You’d think she’d have picked up some Sindarin from it. I mean, those two did. *Points to Remus and Erik.* “They will never accept her for she is human and there is an evil presence that follows her. Do you not see it or are you blinded by love?” All: Blinded by…LUST! Mac: And suffering from The Stupid. Elrond looks at Sam not hearing the end of Elrohir’s sentence. His eyes widen in surprise. How did I not see this before? Surrounding Sam is a cloud of black, it follows her wherever she goes or wherever she moves. Quatre: I think Elrond’s had his eyes opened! Mac: He can see the Sueness! Once she touches an object a black sludge is left behind that soon dissolves. If she touches another being the cloud is absorbed into their skin but thankfully elves can subconsciously push the evil out of their bodies. Sai: Amazing. “By the Valar,” Elrond whispers to himself. Sai: He was wondering how he could be so blind! Before he is able to speak again his servants enter the room and place the food at the table before him. Sam and Arwen join him on either side and Elrohir moves to sit beside Sam. They eat in silence and Elrond is too busy thinking to ask why. He looks up at Sam as his soul freezes. What could cause such a thing? Sam is not evil. Erik: No, she is. There must be an evil presence following her around - a powerful one. All: THE SUETHOR! He sighs as Sam lifts her head to smile at him. He can’t help but return her smile but he is worried. After dinner Elrond kindly excuses himself for a private walk in the gardens. No one thinks anything of it – except for Sam. Mac: Abandonment issues about to come up? Sai: Most likely. Quatre: As long as the evil twin stays hidden. - Sam’s Pov - Why has Elrond been so different? Something is off with him; something has been put onto his shoulders. When he smiled at me during dinner I know that there was something under the surface. He is thinking about something serious. And now he has gone off to a walk in our gardens without me. No one seems to think anything is amiss but I know better. Remus: Because his children don’t know him at all. No, you know him the best. Mac: You really hate her, don’t you? Remus: Yes. I do. It seems like hours have passed and still no Elrond. Mac: I wouldn’t trust that. I am horrible at judging time without a watch. Erik: She is. I look over to the door and fake a yawn. “Excuse me!” I smile sleepily as I get up, “I’m sorry but I really must retire. Sai (Elladan): But the ball began an hour ago? Dinner hasn’t even been cleared! Mac (Arwen): What are you doing? Let her go! Good night and tell my Lord thank you for his hospitality,” I hug everyone present then walk out of the room. Octavius: The twins hugged her even knowing the evil black sludge that came off her? If I knew, I wouldn’t touch her with a thirty-foot pole. Mac: If I could rhyme, I’d so adjust “You’re a Mean One, Mr. Grinch” to fit Sam. Oh, and Point Octavius. Unfortunately I have to enter the ball room to get to our garden. The other elves look down upon me as if I am nothing more to them then a deer fly. Jareth: Or they see the black drudge and realize evil has come to Rivendell. Mac: But Vilya protected Rivendell from evil, kept it hidden. It’s why Sauron never found it. I look at the floor unable to hold their gaze any longer. I suddenly feel a pull outside – I must find my love. I look everywhere in the gardens and no Elrond. Sighing I make my way to the forest. My feet feel as though someone is pulling me. Mac (Celebrian): Yes, come closer! I’ll do away with you and then I’ll get my husband back! “What the hell?” I try to stop but my body is unable or unwilling. In no time I am frozen to the spot. That’s when I hear laughing. Octavius: Sorry, are we too loud again? “Oh Elrond I love you so,” My whole body tenses. It’s a women’s voice. Sai: Multiple women—are all the Elrond!Sues out tonight? I panic and want to run to my room but yet again my body said no. I slowly walk towards the voice and then I see it. My eyes glaze over with rage; all I can see is Elrond, with her, another she-elf Sai: Maybe it’s Arwen? Erik: Maybe it’s Eselin? Jareth: Maybe it’s any other ELLETH that lives in Rivendell talking with Lord Elrond. “You betrayed me, I’ll make you pay.” Mac: Possessive and paranoid. Never a good combination. Dr. Gandalf didn’t do such a great job. My voice is lower, the lowest I have ever heard it. The bastard – it was all a lie! That asshole lied to me the whole enter time! He never loved me! “Better late then never!” I scream at them. The image fades as tears enter my eyes. All: Oh. Erik: Just a mirage. I find myself blindly running back to my room. I pump All: into Elrond as I run in the hallway. How did he get here so fast? Quatre: Maybe some of those crazy Elf powers you Suethors like to give them. “Out of my way you horrible little,” I cut myself off as I push him out of the way. “Samantha? What’s wrong?” I hear his footsteps behind me. I twirl around. “Don’t you follow me! Not now, not ever! I’m leaving tonight” All: YAY! I hear his voice as I run to my room once again, “Where will you go?” Erik: Somewhere dangerous. Mordor? Yes, where will I go indeed? I hear a chuckle in my mind. I will go to her; I will go back to her once again. Quatre: NOOOOO! *Mac goes over to the doors.* Mac: Voldemort, you better let these doors open and let Quatre out or you’ll be short another sporker! *Doors open as Quatre runs through. Doors close as others try to escape as well.* “I love you! I’m sorry I ever left you. You were right my friend, my only friend.” I whisper to myself as I get inside my room. I lock the door and search for my old blades. Erik: Because Elrond would be stupid enough…to…Never mind. ‘I told you that I would always be here for you. I am the only one that truly loves you,’ She says to me. I nod and continue on my search. I hear banging on the door but ignore it. “Samantha stop this nonsense! Open this door this instant!” I hear Elrond say. His voice is panicked and high pitched. Remus: Yeah, can’t see that. I find my blade and turn to glare at the door, “No, I will never listen to you ever again!” My voice is cracking with emotion. I raise my blade to my arm and press it into my skin. For some reason I know that this cut will be the most important of my life… Sai: And not the first one? Or the one after that? Or the one… Remus: We. Get. It. Sai: Sorry. Mac: Umm, since Quatre’s not here… Octavius: Lucky bastard. Mac: Pretentious Words from our Author! Others (flatly): Yay. A/N: Muhahahaha This chapter is a little short I think and a lot happened in it but I just couldn’t wait to continue on with the plot I have. Erik: Please, get a new one. I hope you guys liked it…please READ AND REVIEW! Thanks for reading! *Doors open and everyone rushes through it.* |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 15 2008, 06:12 AM Post #17 |
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Resident Time Lady
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"We Think the Sue Actually Dies." *Everyone comes back, Quatre hesitantly.* Mac: Don’t worry. I’m sure it’ll be find. Quatre: Okay. Mac: Black Blood & Sludge All: Eww. A/N: Well here’s a fast update! I don’t know why but I was listening to the new Three Days Grace CD I’ve loved this band from the beginning, they are really growing well and suddenly I had a growing need to write. I looked at my plot that’s written out and I was like - lets do this! Jareth: Respect canon? *All laugh.* lol Anyways, Thanks to my one reviewer (oops I updated too fast maybe? Lol) Audraya Gryffindor – Thanks, I love you reviewing! I hope I updated fast enough for you. Lol Hope ya like this chapter. Mac: Well, that was short. She should update more frequently just so we don’t have to suffer through her thanks. On with the chapter! Having fun reading! -Sam’s Pov.- I look down at my arm and the blade. Should I really do this? I mean I worked so hard to get over this addiction…Elrond told me I could do better. ‘If he lied to you about his love what makes you think that he’s not lying about this? He was making fun of you the whole time. Jareth: No, that was us. He doesn’t think you’re worth his love. He hates you, you’re nothing to him,’ She says to me. My arm gets blurry as tears flood my vision. *Quatre holds up tissue box* “But he said he loved,” I sniffle, “Me. He couldn’t lie about something like that!” I try to calm my breathing as my brain fights a battle. I feel as though someone is trying to pull me into darkness and cutting myself is the open door into the darkness. My soul is fighting against this evil but is loosing. *Mac sighs.* She is winning me over, no she has won now. I can feel myself being pulled into the door willingly. Slowly and harshly I pull the blade against my skin. I hiss in pain, this hurts more then I remember it. I start to speed up as my hand turns into a blur. My whole forearm is covered in cuts. I take the blade and push it into my skin. I pull away but the blade is still imbedded in my skin. Sai: That’s not right. Strange, why are the cuts not bleeding? I cry out in pain and sorrow as I fall back onto my bed. I can only think of one person to blame. “Elrond!” You asshole! Mac: You know, the past few chapters have mercifully been curse-free. Couldn’t we have kept it up? I hate you, you caused me this pain. I hate you; I hate you – I HATE YOU! Erik: We hate you too. Blinking away the tears of pain I look down at my arm. “Holy shit,” -Narrator’s Pov.- Elrond stands outside Sam’s door knocking constantly, “Why doesn’t she answer?” He whispers to himself. He doesn’t know what’s going on. All he knows is that something is wrong. Why does she have this anger for me all of a sudden – what did I do? Quatre: Date someone who is mentally disturbed? Mac: Point Quatre. Suddenly he hears shouting from inside. “Sam? Sam what’s going on sweetheart?” She continues screaming as if she didn’t hear him. This continues on for a couple minutes then suddenly everything goes silent. He puts his ear to the door and waits for her to speak once again. Silence…then, “Elrond!” He pushed himself away from the door like it’s burning him with flames. He stares at the door in amazement and shock. That word was filled with such loathing, such hate. “What did I do?” He asks himself. Then he hears her bed squeak, “Sam?” He goes to the door once again although being more cautious. He then hears her frightened voice, “Holy shit,” Sai: Stop quoting the last thing we read, krillball. Finally Elrond has had enough; It’s only a door he thinks to himself as he kicks the door open. All: ABOUT TIME! He doesn’t know where this strength came from but it is there, pumping through his veins. Mac: He was trained as a soldier, you do know that? “My lady!” They both are ignoring the fact that she cut herself and that there is still a blade in her skin, they are only focusing on the black sludge leaking from her cuts. Quatre: That ain’t right! Mac: There is a medical condition that’ll turn your blood to sludge. KEEP HER WARM, ELROND! Erik: Innuendo-rrific, Mac. Mac: Shut up. -Sam’s Pov.- I hear the door brake down but I still do not move my head. I can not tare my eyes away from the scene in front of me. I feel Elrond’s presence and I momentarily forget about the hate I feel for him. “Elrond, what’s going on?” I stand up and hold my arm away from my body. I’m trembling with fear as the sludge runs down my arm to my fingertips. It gathers there for a few moments before a huge glob of it makes its way to the floor. I scream in disgust and fear. I try to claw it off my arm but it only seems to speed up the process of making it leak out of my skin. All: Bravo. “Oh my god,” I suddenly can’t move. Is this sludge making a figure? From the pool of black blood and sludge a figure rises. Sai: Spooky. I gasp as I try to make out its features. “Who are you?” I whisper in disgust as I walk backwards. I look to Elrond but he seems frozen to the spot – he cannot help me now, no one can help me now. I’m going to die, I just know it. *All look at each other. Erik breaks out the popcorn.* A mouth appears on its face but that is the only feature I can make out, the rest of its body looks like a shadow. A laugh comes out, a laugh that sounds like fingernails on a chalkboard. I wince in pain but I’m unable to move. Abruptly he stops laughing. “I am she as you call me,” I almost do a double take. The once caring and conniving Mac: Conniving yes. Caring? No. voice of she has turned into a horrible low yet shrieking voice at the same time. Once again I wince. “But how? She is just a figment of my imagination,” I try to back up but I feel like I’ve hit a brick wall, unable to move in any direction that can save me. “No, I am real,” The mouth grins then disappears. Soon an arm comes up. I look in horror at the sharp point at the end of it. The figure moves her arm as the end flashes and a realization hits me – Oh my god it’s a blade! It’s going to stab me and I’m going to die! *All look at each other. Erik breaks out the popcorn.* Then I hear her voice in my mind, ‘I thought death was what you wanted my love?’ Sai: Can’t argue with that! Screaming I close my eyes, unable to move or defend myself I am helpless. I open my eyes to see the figure come at me then stab me in the heart. The air rushes out of my lungs and I hear a little high pitched noise come out of my throat. My eyes are now wide open, the pupils dilated in pain and agony. The figure twists the blade and my body moves with it. I have never in my life felt this kind of pain. It’s like something is burning my heart but I cannot get rid of it. The pain gets worse and worse with each second. I look down and I see black lines on my newly exposed flesh. Black has invaded the blood vessels around my heart and it’s spreading through my body at an alarming rate. I can feel evil, darkness and hate rush through my veins. It hurts so much - please someone stop this pain. Mac: Wait, was she stabbed by a Nazgul? Sai: Is she copying this from Frodo’s experience? I look up to see black in my vision – I cannot see anything but darkness. I painfully let out shallow breaths. I can’t seem to get a proper intake or outtake of breath. I stumble and fall back onto my bed. Then Elrond is at my side and I know the figure is gone. When he touches me I can only feel emptiness and then coldness. He betrayed me; this is all his fault…and that is what I tell him. “You betrayed me,” All: Redundant! Each word takes an amorous amount of energy to speak and I have to take a short gasp after each, “I hate you!” With that my body tenses then sinks into the bed. Jareth: Lovely last words. Sounds like Erik’s. Erik: Bite me. “Sam!” I feel his hands on me – I’m so cold. You know everyone says that your life flashes before your eyes when you’re dieing? Well I do not see any images of my life nor do I see anything at all. Mac: Wow. Sucky. All I can hear is a horrible laughter inside my head. All I can feel is fire and pain burning in my veins. All I can do is just except my fate. I take one last look in the increasingly dark abyss in front of me then close my eyes, maybe forever. All: WOOT! A/N: There it is, nice ending huh? Jareth: Yes, yes it is! *Disco ball lowers* lol Anyways, please REVIEW! Cause it’ll make my die Mac: Wait, if we review, YOU’LL die? *All ponder this.* and it’ll take you 2 seconds. Thanks for reading:):):) Erik: Let’s go party! *Everyone leaves.* |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 16 2008, 08:46 AM Post #18 |
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Resident Time Lady
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"Vilya is Really Falling Down on the Job" PS: Shout to Ari included in this. I'm sure she'll spot it *Everyone returns, party hats on and disco ball still twirling.* Mac: Oh, this is so exciting! Erik: I know! Mac: Death. All: WOOT! A/N: Now I know this chapter is a little short but I wanted to get something out and posted. Anyways, thanks for the great reviews guys! They make me feel so loved. potterfan2006 – Oh thanks, this style is starting to grow on me as well And no, this is not the end. There’s still a few more chapters to go!All: What? NOOO! Remus: It could just be everyone mourning how they lost such a speshul girl to pure evil. dancing stars – LOL Yet again, no not the end! Lol Thanks for your review. Ariel – In this chapter I tried to do a better job at keeping it in one pov. Hope you like it. Thanks for reviewing! So ya, here’s the chapter. I hope you enjoy it and please read and review! Thanks! -Narrator’s Pov.- “Sam? Sam!” Elrond is bent over Sam’s lifeless body. He tries to hold back the oncoming tears. He touches her face and kisses her lips trying not to believe the truth. Sai: Or hoping there was some truth in Snow White and Sleeping Beauty. Mac: Point Sai. “Sam, you can not be dead,” He holds her face talking to her, trying to bring her back into the light. He uses the magic flowing through his veins to try to bring her back – nothing works. Quatre: Crazy magic! Mac: Look, Elves had a brand of magic all their own and Elrond’s would’ve been in his healing skills. But that didn’t include bringing the dead back to life. If so, Celebrian would still be there. She stays unmoving and unchanging in his arms. “No, this can not be! NO!” Elrond falls to the ground near the edge of the bed. His slender fingers grasp the bed sheets in horror. He looks over to Sam. It looks as if she is just sleeping. He thinks to himself. She is so beautiful, so peaceful… His tears are running down the sides of his face. Taking a deep breath he screams out the name of his love. All beings around them hear the cry of Elrond. All (beings): SHUT UP! Their garden, once lush and full of life withers away. Mac: This would’ve been a nice metaphor if it had been used before we knew Sam was dead. All the flowers and trees growing die in a matter of minutes. Sai: That was unusually fast. The whole atmosphere of Rivendale Mac: Hold up! Something’s fishy. Erik: What? She misspelled Rivendell. Mac: Yes. In like Chapter 17. She’s been spelling it properly in the earlier chapters. Erik: That’s…odd. She doesn’t thank a beta, so I doubt someone’s been catching it… changes for that matter. Colour seems to dim and everything has a blue and grey tinge to it. Death is not well known there and for some reason Sam’s death effects Middle Earth greatly. All: The HELL? Her beautiful broken body is on display for all those who come into the room. Arwen and the twins are the first to get to the room. They gasp at the scene, Sam - her arm still leaking fresh blood - unmoving on her bed with their father on the ground beside her. Tears are soaking his face and the area around him. They all walk into the room and wince; the negative energy fills the room and seems to flow out the door and window. “Sam?” Arwen will not believe what her eyes are telling her. She walks up to her body. “What happened to you Sam?” She looks into her open eyes, trying to read the emotion she still sees in their depths. Suddenly they stop as they hear her window shatter. A dark cloud of electric dark energy makes its way into the room. Mac: Vilya is really falling down on the job. It moves itself to surround Sam, pushing all the people in the room away from the body. Elrond, now standing, glares at the object. Erik: Oh yes, because it can see him. He points an accusing finger at the foreign object, “Leave that girl in peace!” Erik: And hear him. Nothing happens - until – an insane laughter is heard throughout the room. All the elves in the room cover their ears until the laugher dies down. “You fools!” A deep, booming voice fills the room. “I have her now,” The next words are hissed out in pleasure, “She is mine now – mine!” Remus: Why do these men always fight over the women we’d probably avoid like the plague in real life? Men: I dunno. Out of the dark cloud a hands reaches down and touches Sam’s face softly. The hand then moves down to the wound at her heart. A dark oil like substance drips from the hand inside her body. The cloud laughs again then disappears out the broken window. No one moves or even breaths. By now many elves have gathered outside Sam’s room, outside and inside. Guards have made their way to keep the elves away. Elrond steps forward but stops when he hears something. Jareth: Oh, has our party gotten too loud? *Celebration is playing in the back ground while Mac and Sai throw darts at a drawing of Sam.* Sorry. Sam opens her eyes and lets out a long raspy breath. Erik: What? Mac: Calm down. Some bodies still move and appear to breathe after death. Loose air and gases escaping. Erik: Ahh. *Party continues.* It sounds as if someone has punctured one of her lungs. Soon her eyes close, it’s too much effort to keep them open. Her lips try to form words but the pain it causes her is too much. Sai: Wait, is she died or almost dead? Mac: I tell you, muscle spasms. Sai: Ahh. Elrond brings himself out of his trance and rushes to her side. He holds a hand on her forehead, “She’s burning up – Arwen, get a bed prepared for her. Jareth: Mackenzie…Bodies don’t get a fever after death, do they? Mac: Not unless they had one when they died. Elladan, Elrohir clear a path for me,” He barks out orders as he picks Sam up in his arms. He holds his horrified gasp inside when she opens her eyes – they are turning black. She’s turning into a nazgul! Quatre: Which one of us called that? Sai: Mac did. *Mackenzie puts her hands up* He ends up just standing there looking into her darkening eyes. The Dark Lord sought her out to turn her. There is only one thought going through his mind – why? Jareth: We’re wondering the same thing. Erik: Point Jareth. He soon brakes out of his thoughts and walks with her to the informatory Quatre: What is that? The information booth? Mac: Infirmary. with his sons leading the way (while making sure there is a clear path for them). As soon as Sam is on a bed he starts his work. Using the magic flowing within him he tries to heal Sam – with no results. “No, this cannot be!” He mutters to himself. He looks up at his children, “It’s hopeless.” Mac: Well, I’m sure you have kingsfoil…oh wait, everything died. Never mind. Jareth: Get Aragorn. The guards stationed outside the door look in while his children muffle their gasps. Since when does the Lord of Rivendale give up so easily? “Father,” Arwen moves closer to him, “Go into her mind, and see what is troubling her. You know as well as I that if a person mentally does not want to come back, their body will listen. Maybe she feels death is better then life?” He frowns, “But this death is not a true death. She will serve the Dark Lord! She will never be free again!” Mac: But I hear the Nazgul have a lot of fun! They even went to Montreal! “Maybe that is her true wish father. To be controlled and not be free,” Elladan said. “No I cannot believe that,” Elrond glares at his son. He soon sighs trying to figure out what to do. “Usually I would never go into someone’s mind like this but,” Another sigh, “I feel I must.” Everyone is the room steps back to give him room. Sitting on the edge of the bed Elrond puts a hand to Sam’s head. His face is set in determination – he will find out what is going out with his love. Soon his face relaxes and doesn’t change, he is in her mind. Octavius: That must be one scary place. Quatre: Point Octavius. -Elrond’s Pov.- All I can hear is a horrible laughter. There is so much darkness. Things are whirling around me but it seems that there is a path. I walk aimlessly trying to find the answers I seek. Suddenly I am pushed to the ground. I roll over and look up. My eyes cannot believe what they are seeing. Remus: That is one horrible rhythm. “No,” Another laugh, “No! This can not be!” In an instant I fear for my life and I know that I have never been so scared in my life. All: Seriously? Yes, I am scared, terrified. What will I do, what will happen to my beautiful Sam? “Fool!” All: THANK YOU…err…DISEMBODIED VOICE! Mac: Huh, no notes. Erik: Thank Jonas! *All rush out.* |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 17 2008, 07:51 AM Post #19 |
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Resident Time Lady
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"The Nazgul Would Like to Take This Time to Say They Are On Strike." *Everyone returns.* Erik: We can keep hoping right? Mac: I don’t think so. Sai: But…But…You’re the optimist! Mac: I blame the badfic. Pure Evil. Sai: We know. Mac: That’s the chapter title. Remus: Appropriate. A/N: Wow it’s been a long time since I’ve updated. Well as some of you may or may not know, I was in the hospital for quite a few weeks All: Aww. Mac: I do feel bad. That sucks. and I was unable to write. Erik: Clearly. I have been very busy these past view weeks and I lost my way to cope – I couldn’t write. Mac: You were too weak to lift a pen? Weren’t allowed paper? Well now everything is starting to settle down so I’ve started writing again. All (flatly): Yay. I want to thank everyone who has stayed with me during this fic because I know I do not update often enough. Thanks to my reviewers I have continued on with this fic! IwishSan – Awwww, but it’s so fun to make him suffer lol. Erik: HIM or US? Don’t worry, this fic is coming to an end All: REALLY? so you’ll see what happens soon . All: YAY! SexyKnickers – Oh thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it. I hope this chapter is still “good” lol. potterfan2006 - Thank you! Here’s your update, sorry it took so long to get here. DMH1973 – LOL You’ll see! Hope you enjoy this chapter. Fair Maiden – Muhahaha, I have another cliffy in this chapter too. Jareth: Great. Hehe, I love being mean to chapters, Mac: You mean readers. so some reason it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside . Erik: That’s not right. LOL I tried to make that part scary, but I’m sorry to not put a warning lol. Octavius: A warning? Do books come with a warning? Do you see a disclaimer in “Frankenstein” at certain points saying, “This part might scare you! M. Shelley?” Sai: Point Octavius. I hope you enjoyed the lunch . -Elrond’s Pov.- “It’s you. You’ve been doing all of this all along?” My eyes hold unsaid questions and anger. I still cannot believe what my eyes are seeing. All: WHAT? “Who else would do this Elrond? Who else could? You’ve known all along but you wouldn’t allow yourself to face the truth. No one else has the power I do. I am Lord of all the land in Middle Earth.” Mac: ERU? I suddenly feel something that I promised myself I would never feel again – hate, I hate the man standing in front of me. No, he is not a man but a creature, an inhuman and unfeeling creature. The Dark Lord – Lord Sauron. Mac: He’s a Maia! Couldn’t look that up in your “tones” of Tolkien books? I hate him for what he has done to my world, to the living creatures on Middle Earth and for what he has done to my Samantha. He’s tortured and made her life a living hell for his own personal gain. Erik: But why? All Sauron wants is his ring back. He laughs once again. My stomach lurches forward while I stand up. Unmoving we both stare at each other. I am the first to speak. “Why?” Quatre (Sauron): Why not? Another horrible laugh. I take a deep breath and stand my ground. “That is something that you will learn on my terms,” The eyes looking at me narrow and I fight the urge to shutter. *Mac just puts her head in her hands.* Remus: Please, get someone else to look over this, krillball. I can clearly see his evil face. The area around his black eyes is sunken in and his lips are cracked, swollen and are bleeding black ooze. All: Eww. I can not see the rest of his body for it is covered with a heavy black cloak. Another realization comes over me while I stare into the evils of evil. I am terribly frightened. I’m not used to this feeling – the rapid breathing, the shaking, the knot in my stomach – I’ve been in worse situations then this and I have not felt this kind of fear. Although, the life of another loved one has never been in this much danger. Mac: Not even Celebrian? Or Aragorn? I’m sure Sauron would not be pleased to know Isildur’s heir was out there. A chuckled fills the air, “What about your late wife?” Jareth: He reads minds. Remus: The evil guy gets it right! A snarl escapes my lips, how dare he? “You knowing nothing,” I rarely hear myself being so harsh, but I do not regret my tone. He laughs stepping closer to me. “I know everything. You know you failed to save Celebrian and now you are letting Sam slip away from you as well,” Stepping closer to him I growl. I nearly gag at the stench that Sauron admits. Mac: EMITS! EMITS! He smells like old eggs and rotting flesh that’s been lying out in the sun for too many days. “I will not let her die!” I clench my clothes to keep from hitting him. Erik: Oh no, do. “Oh she won’t Elrond, you can count on that.” He grins seeming to know more then me. “You see I need her to live. You are not the only one who loves her in this world. I love Samantha as well,” Mac: Great. Just freakin’ great. Sauron loves the Sue. WHY? -Narrator’s Pov.- The Dark Lord stands in front of his prey. He wants to destroy the Elven lord by taking away his love, his Samantha. He didn’t even mean for his love to fall into Elrond’s hands, but it now makes everything more interesting for him. *All facepalm* Of course it will take more work to twist Sam to his bidding but it is nothing he can’t do. “You what!” Elrond looks up in horror. He moves back a little as if pushed back by some invisible force. “You cannot possibly love her – you cannot love anything! You live for power and destruction. You’re a monster!” All: Pretty much. Smiling the Dark Lord shakes his head. “The people of Middle Earth made that little piece of information up. Mac: Gee, wonder why? You see I can love and I do love. I love Sam, a beautifully evil creature.” Quatre: You are absolutely correct, Sauron. Elrond shouts out, “She is not evil,” He could never love someone that had the potential to be evil. A low growl comes from Sauron. “Do not interrupt me; it is not a wise thing to do. As I was saying, Sam is beautifully evil; she just doesn’t know it yet. I remember the first time I sensed her presence. Quatre: That sounds wrong. It sent shivers down my throughout my being. I followed the power and found Sam, sitting innocently on her bed,” Sai: How old was she? He paused for a moment. Just long enough to grin at Elrond. “I then knew I had to have her. I spent the next few years poisoning her mind. I became ‘her’ and in the end I brought her here to become my queen.” Jareth: So, you made yourself her evil twin? What if she successfully killed herself before you got to her? And why go forward through time…or in this case, cross dimensions…to find her? “Sadly you found her and began to undo all my hard work. I needed to bring her back from the light. That’s why I did what I have just done. Sam is fading from your land and is coming into mine where I can continue poisoning her soul and turning her into a nazgûl, a witch-queen.” Jareth (Witch-King): I am NOT marrying that! Octavius (Sauron): I AM! Jareth (Witch-King): We’re revolting. His voice rises in volume until he is screaming his words. The space around them echo’s his voice and Elrond cannot help but shutter in fear. Mac: Shutter: to close or provide with shutters. Shudder: to tremble with a sudden convulsive movement as from fear. Spell Check wouldn’t pick it up. Elrond’s mouth is set in a firm line. “You can not possible do that,” His mouth twitches in anger. How could he possible turn his loving Sam into a nazgûl? “I won’t believe you Sauron,” Remus (Puts his hands over his ears): I can’t hear you, la la la la! His eyes burn with rage and fear. Another time he will fail and a lover will suffer because of it. Sauron turns, “Believe what you will Elrond,” He starts to walk away then he stops, “She is mine now and there is nothing you can do about it. Go back to your realm now and see the proof for yourself. She is fading willingly from your grasp,” Elrond closes his eyes and bows his head. Soon a harsh laugh fills his ears. By the time Elrond opens his eyes the Dark Lord is gone. Sighing he walks away. Quatre: Umm, where to? You’re in Sam’s mind! “Sauron, you will not turn my love into some horrible creature – I will stop you,” He listens to his voice being carried away in the vast empty-ness. Mac: One, emptiness. Octavius: Two, HA! HA! Sam has no brain! Then he whispers to himself, as if to give himself strength, “I will stop you,” Quatre: dun dun DUN! Oh, and Pretentious words from our author. A/N: Muhahahaha That was a fun chapter to write! (sorry it’s a little short) Please read and review – it always makes me write faster . Remus: No one review! All: DEAL! *Everyone leaves.* |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 18 2008, 04:14 AM Post #20 |
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Resident Time Lady
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"Introducing Tama, Witch-Queen." *Everyone returns* Mac: So…Anyone know what’s going on? Others: Nope. Mac: Good. It’s not just me. Giving In A/N: Well an update finally! Sorry yet again guys, I feel so horrible not updating a lot. I have been like living on the hospital and the doctor’s office for a few months. Mac: I wonder what is wrong? My mind has been on other things…my cat also may have cancer. Quatre: The poor cat. Things are in the air but I made myself write this chapter. I feel a lot better now though. Thank you to all who read my story! IwishSan – lol Well I did what my hands told me to do. All: I hope you don’t hate me too much after this chapter…stay with it though. Things will get better!! Erik: Really? SexyKnickers – I know what you mean…I wish I ad a guy like that! All: Like Sauron? potterfan2006 – Why thank you SO much for being so nice, sadly I left again for a bit but I am back! Now please don’t be angry Sai: Like they can hurt you over the ninternet. and enjoy the chapter! Lol I really hope you like it hun. DMH1973 – I agree! And he will…in time (keep it a secret though, know one knows ;D) Erik: That Elrond will somehow save Sam? Oops, did I give the ending away? My bad. Mac: Point Erik. Richard Starkey – Why thank you VERY much! You’re too kind. Katie – Well I finally updated for ya! Ariel – Well what can I say…I love drama! Lol It’s ok hun, thank you so much for reviewing. Here’s da All: DA? chapter peoples! Narrator’s Pov. Elrond’s eyes snap open to look into the dark eyes of his love. Sam’s face shows pain and agony. She struggles to keep her eyes open, glaring at the man she once loved. “You.” Her voice is high-pitched, sounding like a bird trying to talk. All in the room winces at the sound but none make any movement. Mac: Then how do they wince without moving? “How could you!” She tries to push him away from her but any movement causes her body to twitch in uncontrollable pain. “I trusted you!” She closes her eyes and lets her head fall to the side. Mac: Frodo didn’t have this strength after being stabbed. She would not speak again, for those few words took what energy was left her in body. Elrond’s face is set – he will save his love. Remus: You know, there are stories where present tense works. I don’t think this one is it. He goes to pick her up but finds that he hands simply go through her body. “What is Valar’s name?” Erik: Umm…Valar? Mac: Well, which one? There are fourteen of them! His children walk closer, trying to comfort their father but he just tenses even more. “Out of the room! Everyone out now.” His voice is not full of anger or sadness, it is completely empty. He feels no emotion, only emptiness and a numbing feeling Octavius: Hello, Department of Redundancies Department? that seems to be spreading from his heart throughout his body. Those in the room do not question him, do not say anything further – they simply take one last look at the fading girl then walk out of the room. Arwen gently closes the door behind her. “Sam.” Her voice is soft as she clutches her heart. Her brothers run to her side and catch her before she falls to the ground. Sai: She’s seriously worried and passing out over THAT? Panicking they take her to her room and sit by her side on her bed, waiting for her to wake. Guards stand erect at Sam’s and Arwen’s door protecting the royal elves from the hoards of worried faces. All in the city have flooded to the palace for they are scared. Remus: They don’t recall a palace being there! All the plants have died, the streams have turned black and they all know evil is in the air, it’s suffocating them. Jareth: Sauron turning Sam into the “Witch-Queen” is doing all of that to Rivendell? Please. Mac: Dear krillball, look up Vilya. Love, Elrond. Another soft voice, “Sam, it will be ok. Just come back to the light, come back to me.” He concentrates while trying to hold her hand. Nothing works and he feels hopelessness. “My love…not another. You cannot give in!” Erik: No, do! Sam opens her eyes, and tears the colour of black Remus: Isn’t the color of black…black? slowly run down her cheeks. Suddenly she screams. It sounds like a combination of Sauron’s scream and the scream of a nazgûl and Elrond cannot help but cover his ears. She sits up and stares at down at Elrond. Her eyes hold a look in them that he knows he will never forget. It was as if she was blaming him for all the pain she had ever known in her life. Then it changed for a split second and with wide eyes Sam talked to him in his mind. Elrond…help me! Sai: Great, now she’s telepathic. Her voice was that of a scared child’s. It was her normal voice, asking for help. She fell back and reached out to grasp his hand but soon her eyes turn completely black as she falls into the ground, disappearing from his eyes. “Sam?” Silence…not even a bird dares to chirp. “Sam?” He stands and goes to the window trying to find his love. His eyes overlook his broken city. Everything seemed dull without his love by his side. Mac: What is the next step beyond ridiculous? “I will get you back – I promise you this.” A guard enters the room just in time to see his lord collapse to the ground in emotional agony. Rivendale Mac: SERIOUSLY! will take years to grow back into its full glory. The ones who knew Sam the best never will rest until she is back with them. At night Arwen and Elrond are haunted with visions of Sam being tortured and being bent to Sauron’s will. They had no hope until a certain ring barrier knocks on their front door… All: RUN FRODO! RUN! A/N: The end… All: YAY! LOL Jokes! All: NOOO! Damn you! Just wanted to let you guys know that I will be skipping over a lot of time in the next few chapters. I will be focusing on Sam though…you’ll see in the end lol Erik: Lay off your “lol” option, please. Now to continue on… Sam’s Pov. Pain…all I can feel is pain. I can not open my eyes or even think. It feels like I’m burning alive. My limbs are being ripped apart, stretched to the limit. I scream and my own voice scares me for it sounds nothing like me. Metal crunching and twisting but oddly it doesn’t hurt my ears. Stop this pain! Hours go by, days and the pain doesn’t stop, it won’t go away. It is never ending…the whole time there is one thing on my mind…it’s all Elrond’s fault. He betrayed me, led me to this fate. I hate him. The hate I feel sometimes makes me forget about the pain. It takes over my body and mind… Who did I hate? Whose fault is this? Who am I? Where have I been? Quatre: Great. Now the Sue has amnesia. Mac: It’s like the only psychological condition she HASN’T had yet. Sai: Point Mac. Pain…I know that I was in pain but it is gone now. My eyes slowly open. “My love, you have awakened.” A shadow figure is seen before my eyes. “Who are you?” I hear my voice for the first time. It is low yet somehow seductive. I find myself standing and I take a step forward. I feel weightless as if I’m somehow floating. Mac: She’s dead and gone to hell. Remus: I’ll buy it. “I am Sauron my love, how do you not remember me?” He steps closer to me and after a few seconds his form changes. A beautiful creature stands before me. His eyes glow red and are framed by his long black hair. Erik: He just has red eyes and black hair? Jareth: Creepy. Erik: I know. Considering my face and all… His skin is a pale white while his nails, more correctly claws, are as black as his hair. He wears a simple black cloak, like that of a wizard. Sai: Gandalf wore more than a cloak. I notice the look in his eyes and my heart melts. He looks so concerned and I can feel his love for me radiating off his body. “Sauron?” The name doesn’t ring a bell yet it comforts me. “Who am I?” I walk to him and frown. We are standing in front of each other just staring into the others eyes. “You are my witch-queen and rule beside me. Your name is Tama which means darkness though none but I know your name. Mac: Creepy sign number one. Others will call you evil, queen or witch-queen.” He stops and gently lifts his hand to my face, letting a claw run down my cheek. I feel it rip the skin, and something wet runs down my face. Mac: Creepy sign number two. I open my mouth to ask a question but he holds a finger to my mouth. He snaps his fingers and a mirror appears in front of me. I gaze into it and see myself. My hair is a dark red, Mac: They are always red-heads. Why? Remus: I don’t know. my eyes are completely black. For some reason I was expecting to see white, how strange. I look to where he cut me; I feel little pain as I stare at the cut. Black sludge seeps from the cut. “You feel almost no pain from any attack, your blood is poisonous to anyone but you or me and you heal extremely fast.” Jareth (Sauron): Now, you’re a complete Sue. Congrats. Mac: Point Jareth. By the time he is done my cut has disappeared and I wipe the blood away with the back of my hand. The mirror smashes to the floor but I do not jump. I turn to Sauron and grin. “Tama.” It sounds familiar and I feel so comfortable around the man in front of me. “I am more powerful then you and we will soon rule this world together, ridding ourselves of those who stand in our way. I am a powerful wizard and so are you.” Mac: Maia. He’s a Maia. The wizards are Istari. Erik: So much for those “tones” of books on Tolkien. He holds out his hand to me and I gladly take it. Yes, this feels right. Suddenly a creature enters the room. A word pops into my head, an orc. “My queen.” He bows then walks up to me. “Who were you talking to?” Erik: A very grammar-conscious orc. “Can you not see your lord Sauron?” I ask. Remus: In reality, Sam was really in some asylum. She was talking to the nurse, who was just about to up the dosage. Erik: Point Remus. He shakes his head and points out the window. “There is our lord, but soon he shall be whole again.” I turn to see a huge eye surrounded by flames. I feel the same love coming from the eye as I do from the man beside me. Mac: Creepy sign number three. “Sauron?” I turn to look at him. “Tama, for now you are the only one who can see me like this, who can feel me.” He squeezes my hand and smiles. “You must be delusional my queen.” *All applaud.* Jareth: How come the orcs are always the creatures with the most sense when it comes to Sues? My head snaps back to the orc. How dare he speak to me like that? I let go of Sauron’s hand and grab the orc’s head with both hands. “Thank you for the information.” My voice raises and I watch as his eyes close in pain. I sense other orc’s and creatures come to watch the show. “But now you die.” Quatre: Evil!Sue is evil. Erik: Point Quatre. My voice roared in an uncaring way. I squeezed his head, breaking the skull, I shivered at his pain filled scream, it feels so good to hurt him. For some reason I want to cause others pain in place of my own…though I did not feel pain at the moment. Once again how strange. I throw his dead body against a wall. I glared at those in front of me. “Take his body away and let this be a lesson to all of you. Do not cross me or you will suffer a fate worse then his.” Growling the area around me glows red with anger and I can tell my eyes are piercing the beings in front of me for they shiver and moan in pain. All: COMMAS ARE YOUR FRIENDS! Quickly the body was taken away and I was left alone. I turned when I heard the sound of laughter and clapping. “Well done my love.” Sauron bowed. “I could not have done it better myself.” I found myself blushing at his praise. I feel so connected to him…I was the only one to see him in many years, he was mine and I was his. I feel my love growing for him but I would never tell anyone and I will only tell him when I think it is right. “Were we-“ I paused. “Are we together?” Octavius: He told you you’re his queen, duh. He nodded. “Yes but I will not do anything to you until you are ready and willing.” Sai (Sauron): And I have a body. I find myself walking to the window, looking at the beautifully dead scenery before me. My lord is behind me with his hand on my shoulder. The eye turns to me and seems to burn brighter for a few moments before turning to look down at his troops. This is my home and I will spend my time here training so that I can fulfill my lord’s wish. “We shall take over this world.” My flat voice rings out over the area and our soldiers turn to look at me. They all stop and stare at the sight of me. I close my eyes and feel power flowing within my veins. I laugh and soon Sauron’s laugher joins with mine and somehow I feel the fear of others and it excitements me. “I shall crush all those who get in our way.” I promise him. This is a new aria of pain, blood and darkness for all time. All: Quatre: Pretentious Words from our Author! A/N: Well that’s the chapter…did you guys like it? All: Uh… I am loving all this evil-ness! LOL PLEASE read and REVIEW! Thanks . Erik: I move we get out of here before we all go insane. Jareth: I second that motion. Mac: Motion carries. Let’s go! *All run out.* |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 19 2008, 04:46 AM Post #21 |
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Resident Time Lady
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"Evil Sam is Evil" Disclaimer: Tim the Witch-king belongs to Ari. *Everyone troops back in.* Erik: Mackenzie, what month is it? Mac: October. Erik: And what holiday will we be celebrating? Mac: Halloween. Erik: Then why are you listening to Christmas music already? Mac: It helps me get through this. Jareth: Makes sense to me. Quatre: Oh, you have to play “The Little Drummer Boy/Peace on Earth” for Jareth! Mac: Later. An Evil Love. A/N: I got into the writing spirit XD Here’s another chapter for you guys! Please R&R! Mac: Hmm, maybe now’s when she learned what the review reply was for. “Close your eyes and relax your breathing – yes that’s it. Now lift your hands and concentrate. Think of all the power you have, all the life in your being and try to move it to your hands.” It has been a few weeks since my awaking. I still do not remember anything from before yet my Lord Sauron has filled me in on the details I don’t know. Sai: I wonder what type of back story he comes up with for Sam. He has been quite caring towards me. No one can see or hear him but I have heard stories of his past.True, he is unkind and completely evil and horrible to everyone around him and he dreams of only one thing, to rule Middle Earth, Quatre: And yet you still love him? Sai: She’s brainwashed. yet there is love in his heart for me. I have noticed that I have pleased my Lord greatly over the past few days for I find my heart in the same place as his. All: Umm…what? For some unknown reason I want others to feel pain, a pain that I know I must have felt at one point but cannot remember. I told Sauron of this and I saw a grin form on his lips. He said that I was taken away from him and held captive by one of the name of Lord Elrond. He tortured me, raped me even trying to turn me from my lord. *All facepalm* I do not remember anything for when Sauron’s forces came to save me, Elrond had almost killed me before orcs stopped him thus - saving me. Mac: But Sauron didn’t know where Elrond was! Remus: Mackenzie, leave it alone. Our plans are to take back the one ring Remus: Capital! then make Elrond pay for his usage of me. Currently I am receiving lessons on learning to use my powers again. According to Sauron I was once a wizard that fell in love with him and in turn Sauron fell in love with me. Mac: Once again, Sauron is a Maia. The wizards are Istari! While he still had his powers he stabbed me (I willingly let him) and I turned into a creature of the night, a witch-queen. He cut himself, letting his blood mix with mine and thus giving me more powers then any Nazgûl would ever have. Sai: If the Nazgul are reading this… Mac: And they are. Sai: They are not going to be happy reading that. Mac: No, they are not. Particularly Tim. Sai: Who is Tim? Mac: The Witch-king of Angmar. I am not more powerful then Sauron but I can almost match if – if I learn have to properly control my powers. Remus: Woah, something wasn’t written properly in that sentence. I have strength of over a thousand men; I can wield fire and the elements to my advantage. Not only this but I will live forever with my Lord Sauron. Sai: Well, until Frodo drops Gollum and the One Ring into Mount Doom. Mac: Point Sai. I have come to care deeply for the man in front of me. He makes me feel like a powerful women that should be worshiped. Mac: Huh, it can be spelled that way? Sai: Women for a signal sixteen-year-old? Mac: What? Oh no, that’s just ridiculous. I mean worshipped. Notice I use two p’s. Sai: Oh. He has shown me kindness that he has never shown anyone else. I am grateful to him for saving me and I dare-say I have grown to love him and his evil mind. I have not told him or even shown him any gestures that could not be named as friendly. I shall show him my feelings in time. Mac: Oh, I hope it isn’t a poorly written scene we have to throw Quatre out for. Erik: For my stomach’s sake, I hope so as well. I’m snapped back to the present when I feel my body twitch; I open my eyes to see flames dance across my hands. “I did it!” It had taken weeks to get to this point. I had never been able to physically get anything onto my hands. Remus: I don’t think she worded that properly either. Mac: Yeah. I was happy to say the least. “Good.” I looked up to Sauron and saw something I have never seen on his features before – he seemed proud of me. “No try to manipulate the flame to your will, look with your eyes but imagine it moving as you see fit.” I had the flames change into a shape of a woman holding a young baby, Remus: Mandatory aww in three…two…one… All: Aww. I glanced at Sauron and saw that he was confused Erik: Obviously someone wasn’t getting the hint. but his stare turned into a gleeful smirk when I had an army of orcs come and kill the pathetic humans. The flames slowly died then disappeared into my hands. “Pleased my Lord?” He gathered me in his arms. “Excellent my dear.” He let his hands stroke my hair softly, playing with the soft ripples. Sai (to Mac): May I? Mac: Go ahead. *Sai strokes Mackenzie’s hair.* Sai: Don’t see it ripple. I turned and looked up at him. “Sauron, I have something I feel I must share with you.” I looked down at my hands, unable to face my lord. I have shameful thoughts. I should be thinking about helping my Lord reach his goal, not waste his time with thoughts of love. His cold fingertips touch my chin and gently lift it so he can look into my eyes. “What is it Tama?” His voice shows no emotion but I can tell he is worried. “You know you can tell me anything.” Instead of telling him, I show him with my eyes. I look into his eyes lovingly and move my face closer to his. Octavius: Okay, I know I’ve been silent for some time, but I can’t figure this out. Mac: How he’s pretty much a mirage but can still touch her? Octavius: Yeah. Mac: Don’t know. Logic, she doesn’t exist. Remember? Octavius: Right. I try to send him my thoughts of love. He seems to get the hint. I close my eyes and I soon feel his cool lips against mine. A memory surfaces in my mind of kissing a man I love like this. My arms wrap around him as I deepen the kiss, relying on my memory to guide me. Remus: I hope not. You bruised yourself kissing Elrond. I pull back breathless. “I have come to remember my love for you.” I pause and look at him, my hand gently cupping his cheek. “I love you and wish for nothing more then Gertrude: Almost twenty chapters in and this young lady still doesn’t know the difference between “than” and “then.” Ach! to serve you and help you get what you rightfully deserve.” He smirks evilly, no doubt thinking about how we will concur Mac: Concur: to accord in opinion, to agree. Conquer: to acquire by force of arms; win in war. Middle Earth together. “I have never heard anything that has pleased me so.” He uses his nails to stroke my cheek and I shiver with delight. “How should we celebrate?” He asks me. I cannot help but grin as a quirk an eyebrow. “Bring me some orc’s to play with – I’ll give you a show.” His grin matches mine as he snaps his fingers. All: Oh man… Jareth: Though she is more interesting now that she’s evil. All: Yeah. “It’ll be my pleasure Tama.” He whispers. And this is how the months pass; our love grows as does my power. Soon I shall be ready to make my first appearance. Quatre: dun dun DUN! Mac: Huh, no author’s notes. Let’s go! *All leave.* |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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*Everyone returns. Sai: I wonder when this ends. Mac: Who knows? Erik: Let’s just get started. Mac: Deal. Helm’s Deep. Quatre: Well, she said she was skipping a lot of time. A/N: Ack – you people need to beat me! Erik: Okay…Anyone got a whip? It’s been so long! Well here’s another update and thank you to everyone who reads this fic, even if you don’t review…though it would be so cool if you did. lol Here’s a special thanks to my reviewers. DMH1973 – I will, all in good time. I got this all planned out in my head. Richard Starkey -Yays! Thank you SO much for reviewing and I hope you like this chapter – I think it is evil..er lol potterfan2006 – Thank you for the kind words. Believe me, I am a romantic at heart – all will work out in the end! IwishSan – I know I am so cruel…but it is so much fun to torture the poor elf. Fair Maiden – I personally loved that whole ‘black sludge’ part. I had so much fun writing it. All shall work out in the end. I hope you like this chapter. Homunculus – Oh I new reviewer. Thanks for the reviews and I hope you stay around to read this chapter. Ok so thank you again. And PLEASE everyone R&R, it really does make my day – even the flamers cause I love getting a good laugh. ;)….. Mac: Okay, but just remember: YOU SUCK! That’s a flame. I don’t like this story because…is constructive criticism. The orcs are just behind me, ready to move at my orders. In front of me I see my love Sauron. My hood is thrown over my head, so like the other Nazgûl no one can see my face. Mac: I’m sure the Nazgul wear the robes because they are living dead. I lift it slightly to smile at my love and bow my head – I am doing this for him. Our army is traveling to Helm’s Deep. Remus: I don’t recall the Ringwraiths being at the Battle of Helm’s Deep. Mac: That’s because they weren’t there. Helm’s Deep was fought between Rohan and Isengard. It was Saruman’s battle, not Sauron’s. My soldiers think we are going to win, to crush our enemies but I know different. Sauron and I had a venison *All fall over laughing. After a while, they sit back up.* Mac: Venison: the flesh of a deer or similar animal as used for food. I don’t know what you meant to say, krillball. session yesterday to help see our outcome. It seems like our enemies are meant to win this battle, “We’ll lift their spirits only to crush them painfully.” I said to him – we both chuckled. Jareth: Spoiler—you won’t. The black, snake like creature rose from the ground and took into the air. The other Nazgûl flew behind me, only the King of the Nazgûl was able to at my side – he would lead this army with me. I looked over at him and grinned as he let out a roar so high-pitched I could barely hear it. Below us the army marched forward, their voices already filled with bloodlust. ‘Good.’ I heard a voice inside my head, his lovely voice. ‘They shall do well. Do not forget my love, make your mark. I want you to be the one to put fear into their hearts; All (Rohirrim): It’s that SCHIZO SUE! RUN AWAY! you shall not fall from battle.’ ‘I shall not fail my love.’ Pulling on the ropes wrapped around my wrists, my Ringwraith flew higher into the sky. Sai: She was flying one of her comrades? Mac: Krillball, Ringwraith is the translation of Nazgul. It has been days since we started our journey though no one shows signs of it, we have yet to make camp and those too weak to make the journey are killed. We fly slowly, so that those on foot do not fall too far behind. I have seen the look the King of the Nazgûl has been giving me. He is threatened; no longer does he sit upon his thrown alone. Erik: I’d imagine Tim would be pissed. I am the Queen of all Nazgûl and first in my loves heart. I growl at him, he has been staring far too long now. Soon we shall reach Helm’s Deep and change our enemy’s lives forever. We are close now, I can smell the fear in the air – they know we are coming and are ready for us. It is at this point I decide to leave my flying beast to walk on the ground. I and I alone shall start this fight and I have always been one to make an entrance. Remus (Aragorn): Well, this should be easy. Legolas, take her out! Jareth (Legolas): Will do. My Ringwraith flies back into the sky, screaming in lust for the blood of the innocent. As we walk, our footsteps create a roar and sends ripples of fear to our enemies. Thunder and lighting follow behind our army and rain soon starts to fall. As soon as we are close enough I stop, the whole army falling silent behind me. I look around to see who we are to fight against. Boys, men and elves - I see a dwarf standing alongside an elf, ‘How interesting.’ I throw my hood back, the first look these pathetic creatures get of me. Octavius: And then they dissolved in laughter. A dark light flows from me and these humans look upon me with fear while the elves look at me with disgust. They can see my ears. “A she-elf, it cannot be!” One elf utters. Sai: I would think an elf would know to call her an elleth. My head snaps towards him, ah the one called Haldir. He shall die by my hands tonight. Mac: Haldir DIDN’T die at Helm’s Deep. Apparently one of those “tones” of books on Tolkien was NOT The Two Towers. My ears pick up the noises of an arrow being fired and I catch it before it pierces my heart, I snap the wood in two as if it were an arrow. Quatre: I thought it was an arrow. My eyebrow lifts in amusement. “Very well.” My voice seems to echo around us, “Let it begin.” With that the orcs run past me, eager to taste the man-flesh they see in front of them. I let them run, I have other important matters to attend to – like killing Haldir. Octavius: What did Haldir ever do to you? I take out my bow and arrow and stand back, letting the arrows fly. For the first hour or so it proceeds as only a battle could. Then our warriors come with a bomb to break their wall, turning the battle in our favor for a while. Sai: Once again, someone else who makes a battle scene absolutely boring. I hear a man scream for an elf to bring down the carriers of the bomb but it is useless. An arrow flies towards his head and I chuckle, letting my fire ball incinerate the arrow in the air. The elf looks towards me and shoots again at my soldiers, more arrows turning into dust. I see the look of horror and failure upon his face as the bomb explodes. Men and orcs alike fly back with the force of the bomb but I stay standing, a mere bomb cannot harm me. Mac (Church Lady): Well isn’t that special? Then time seems to still for a moment, the battle cries falling into silence. We have broken through their last defense. All too soon the men flee into their fortress, thinking it will save them. My orcs advance upon them and kill the cowards as they run. It is not my concern anymore, the one I have been searching for has lived far too long. Mac: And he keeps on living! My cape as long been discarded upon the rotting corpses so now my mental *All laugh.* shines through the blood stains. I am covered in metal designed especially for my body. There is not one arrow or sword that could pierce my skin while I wear this. I walk slowly towards my target; he is far too busy fighting to notice me. My men take one look at me, bow and run away – they know that this one is mine. Haldir seems to be confused and turns to see me. Octavius (Haldir): Crap. Another person who has only seen the movies. I DON’T DIE! “You.” The words seem forced. “You traitor.” He raised his sword at me. Quatre: How does Haldir know who Sam is? I smirk and also raised my sword, “Say what you wish Haldir but this traitor shall grant you your doom.” Our swords meet and sparks fly. He is fighting for his life and I am fighting for my amusement. My smirk never leaves my face, not even when he cuts my cheek. I scream and nearly throw my sword at him; the force easily knocked his sword out of his grasp. In the distance I hear someone scream for him as I walk up to him and grab his throat with one of my hands. He is shocked at my strength when he finds he cannot break free. Another scream as a man rushed to aid Haldir but it was too late. “The elves that survive shall report our findings; you will not be allowed to have an easy death she-elf. You betrayed our kind, our world!” “Aw, your final word – does that make you feel better now?” I chuckled and start to slowly squeeze, his air is being cut off. “By the way, my name isn’t she-elf.” I lean in closer to him and whisper into his ear. “It’s Tama, tell that to your maker when you see him.” With that my hand heats up, burning his flesh. Erik: Haldir got a more dignified death in the movie. Mac: Point Erik. He screams in pain and blood runs over my hand, his death would have been slower if not for that one man. Remus: Aragorn? Mac: Yep. “Haldir no!” He came from in front of me but just before he reached Haldir I placed my other hand on his shoulder and his body was set aflame. “No!” I dropped the now dieing elf and the human looked down at him. Haldir seemed to smile for a moment before his body shuddered and his last breath was taken. His eyes were blank, still, his body slowly being eaten away by the flames. All that was left was his sword and a pile of ashes. Mac: And so passes Haldir, Marchwarden of Lorien. Erik: We shall take a moment. *Complete silence.* “You!” He raises his sword but I stand there smiling. He seems to have a presence around him, he is no mere human. Mac: Well, he is descended from Elros, Elrond’s twin brother. This interests me enough to let him live – for now. “It is not yet your time to die human.” My Ringwraith flies over to me and I jump upon his back. “We will meet again. Do not forget - my name is Tama.” I can almost see my name and image being imprinted on his mind. He will never forget what I have done and he will not rest until his friend’s death is avenged – too bad for him then. All: YAY! Octavius: Go, Aragorn! My laughter fills the air as I fly higher into the air, looking for more men to kill. A few more hours pass and I see the sun coming up. “It is time to leave.” I whisper to myself. I call all the Nazgûl to me and we fly away, leaving our troops to their death. Sai: Nice. As we fly over the hill I put on my hood, glaring at Gandalf as he watched us fly above him. Knowing that we should be his last concern he turns his head back towards the bloody battle. Jareth (Gandalf): I’ll let the Nazgul deal with her. Ungrateful bint. We fly away back to our home, the soul Mac: SOLE! survivors of the battle. Octavius: Well, for the evil side. While the idiots behind me are worried about their Lord’s reaction, I cannot wait to tell him of what I did; of just how many I killed. Boys, men, elves – they all failed and fell at my hands. I looked down to the blood still dripping from my hand and bring my hand up to my lips. My tongue moves out to give my middle finger a slow lick. *All make sounds of disgust and look away.* Mac: That’s not right! My eyes close to savior the taste – Sauron shall be pleased. Mac: The Nazgul aren’t vampires! Quatre: That’s it! Sai: Let’s go. *All leave.* The prisoners trooped back into their room, where Voldemort met them. “Congratulations, your first anniversary story is finished!” he announced. The gang merely stared at him. “That wasn’t much of an ending,” Quatre replied. “Sam was still evil and they were only in the middle of the Two Towers.” “Well, the story hasn’t been updated in over a year. I’m declaring it dead.” “Woo-hoo?” Mackenzie replied, flatly. “Don’t bother,” Jareth told her. He turned to Voldemort. “Look, we’re tired. Just tell us the standings.” “Fine,” Voldemort said. “In last place is the Doctor with two points. House is next with five. Tied in front of him are Octavius and Erik, both with six points. “Now, it’s a bit interesting as everyone else but one is tied with seven: Remus, Sai, Quatre and Jareth. Which means…” “I won?” Mackenzie asked. “I won!” “Yes, you were back on your game again,” Voldemort responded. “Now, what would you like, blonde one?” “Once again, not the only blonde person here. But I want a vacation! I hear New England is lovely this time of the year,” Mackenzie said. “Please?” Voldemort nodded. “DONE!” he replied. He clapped his hands, sending the hourglasses back to zero. “Enjoy your trip. When you come back, I’ll be sure to have the perfect story waiting for you.” But not even that could deter how happy the small group was as they anxiously began packing. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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