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Topic Started: Sep 24 2008, 06:51 AM (3,480 Views)
MackenzieW
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Story can be found here.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Rhysmel
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QUOTE (MackenzieW @ Sep 24 2008, 06:50 AM)
All (singing): Day-o! Do say day-o! Daylight come and me wanna go home!


Is that the Banana Boat song? That has got to be the first time I've seen Harry Belafonte lyrics in a MST.

Brilliant MST of a sucky story. How many chapters did the author write? Suethors have got some patience and resilience. And absolutely no trace of originality.

Oddly enough, while dear ol' krillball doesn't condone suicide, she is okay with pedofila? What is with the world?!

And I'm so sorry that I posted in the middle of the MST, I forgot where I was. And I can't delete it. Damn, sometimes, I'm so stupid, that I make Rosa look nice.
I've reported it already, so I hope it can be fixed.
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Telcontar Rulz
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She tried to commit suicide with scissors? That would bloody hurt. Brilliant MST though; I loved Jareth's comment about Dell.

Don't worry, Rhysmel. I deleted the post for you. :)
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Mathonwy
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Ah, the ironic genius of krillball6! She writes a Sue, who is yet Not A Sue. She writes a story that 'contains mature subject matter', yet is infantile. She takes a strong stand against suicide, yet all her readers will be reaching for the nearest noose ... All hail krillball6!

More chapters to come? Gosh. My vision starts to go burly with tears! :D
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AraionaDuBois
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May I interject my own public service announcement? Remember folks! It's down the road, not across the street! Kill yourself right! :lol:

Anywho, good MST for a horrible fic. Good Lord that writing was crap. Loved the Day-O line. Now I've got that song stuck in my head cos I used to sing that in chorus.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Siany-T
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Hey Mac, like the new DP.


Oh lookie it's a Sue! No matter what the author says. She killed herself slitting her wrists? She should have stabbed herself. Oh and like everyone I love the Day-O line. Brilliant MST as always.
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Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
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Fishpaste
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*snort* The thing was my line! How dare the Suethor steal it. *shrugs* Ah well, another great MST of another pathectic attempt at a story. And I thought Tracey's suicide was bad...
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MackenzieW
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Is that the Banana Boat song? That has got to be the first time I've seen Harry Belafonte lyrics in a MST.

Brilliant MST of a sucky story. How many chapters did the author write? Suethors have got some patience and resilience. And absolutely no trace of originality.


Yep, that was the Banana Boat song. My sister and I randomly sing it and when I saw the day-no, it was so close I had to. Thanks. Krillball wrote 22 chapters of this and it's not marked "Complete" but it also hasn't been updated since March (though I can't recall if it was this year or last).

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All hail krillball6!


Yes, all hail! :rolleyes:

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May I interject my own public service announcement? Remember folks! It's down the road, not across the street!


You do not know how much my friend wanted me to put that line in. He's been wanting for me to do that since Morwen the Horribly Written Emo Elf-Thingy (That Got Eaten By Mac's Hard Drive) tried to off herself by drowning because Faramir did the canonical thing (falling in love with Eowyn).

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Hey Mac, like the new DP.


Umm...wha?

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And I thought Tracey's suicide was bad...


At least hers kinda made sense even if it was for a shit reason as well. And later on, we get important exposition that would've helped understand Sam's decision to end her life rather than the author not using her childish writing that just starts pretty much in the middle of the action.

Anyway, thanks to all my reviewers!
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Siany-T
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Sorry, DP means your Avatar, it's MSN slang.
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


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MackenzieW
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Oh, I'm an AIM girl. We call 'em buddy icons.

Thanks, it's from the site Movies in 15 Minutes. I have a few I want to use in the upcoming weeks or so. I have to double check to make sure I'm not hallucinating, but I recall one with V and the caption OMG That's Arwen's daddy?!
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

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I'm on Book Country!
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Siany-T
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Ooo nice, I keep changing mine between various Potter Puff ones.
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll!
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MackenzieW
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Yeah, I believe I gave the link to the website in Tel's MELH reviews thread since I quoted from Troy in 15 Minutes when Achilles guested.

I love the Potter Puffs. My old screen saver was a bunch of them. And then my hard drive ate it.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

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Siany-T
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I'll have a look, aww poor you. They're brilliant and then there's the ones people did themselves and the Pirate Puffs are pretty cool too.
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll!
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MackenzieW
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Oh do, she's brill! I'm upset that her book isn't available here in the States.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

My Little Corner

I'm on Book Country!
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AraionaDuBois
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Potter puffs? Is this something I'm going to have to go look up some time? It looks, erm, interesting.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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