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Topic Started: Sep 24 2008, 06:51 AM (3,498 Views)
Fishpaste
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Hey, what a great story! I'm always up for some Elrond action coupled with romantic angst. Can't wait to see what happens next...


*jaw drops* Bard?
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MackenzieW
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I recognized her old screenname so I went to look up her review and that was exactly my reaction, HATI. I know she said she had tried to help the author earlier, but she didn't say she favorable reviewed it! We'll have to ask her about it next time she's online. <_<
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Fishpaste
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You can have that pleasure!
Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke!

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MackenzieW
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I copied the review into a forum post. Well let her explain on her own.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Siany-T
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New chapter!

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Erik: Seriously? Not Gandalf? Not Erestor? Not Glorfindel? Not Celebrian? Not that king whose name escapes me?

Gil-Galad? Heck even Thranduil would be a better friend to Elrond than that Sue ever would be. And Sauron would be abetter friend than that Sue should ever be.


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Mac: Oh I hope this doesn’t mean she’s going to cut herself again.

Hmmm maybe she is and has gone to the 'Room of Random Items to Cut Yourself With'.

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Quatre: NOT THE EVIL TWIN!

I share that sentiment Quatre.

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A lone tear falls from her eye

Oh look the lone tear again.
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


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HATI, Bard was on and explained it. Looks like we both missed her usual sarcasm.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

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I'm on Book Country!
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Mathonwy
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Eliriel – Well I agree with you…my beginning chapters sucked but I have come a long way from there.

Agreed - the new chapters blow! :)

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She allows her body to take over as she moves her lips with his. She almost winces at the force in which she kisses him. There will surely be bruises later.

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Er, Sam - that's a headbutt, not a kiss. Go back and study the diagrams again!
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*sigh of relief* It's hard to see sarcasm over the ninternet.
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Ah, gotta love Bard's sense of humour.... :) :lol:
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Agreed - the new chapters blow!


I love this, Math!

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Er, Sam - that's a headbutt, not a kiss. Go back and study the diagrams again!


Well, let's give some leeway, she's probably never kissed anyone before.

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It's hard to see sarcasm over the ninternet.


Yes, it is. Though I usually read all her things with a layer of sarcasm.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

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I'm on Book Country!
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Fishpaste
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Probably a wise thing to do.
Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke!

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A/N: Well I just came back from being at my cottage (with no technology or internet/phone at all – I nearly died!)
Erik: HORRORS!


Ugh... you know, there was a time called the '90's' and people survived without cell phones. Did you know that 10 years ago, in 1998, most residents of the North Country did not have internet? Gasp! le horror! Ugh... we survived without all these things not even twenty years ago, I hate how we've become so dependent... kids these days have it so lucky. You know, I wonder if any kid really goes out to play anymore. They're all indoors watching telly, on the computer, or playing video games. It's a shame, really... okay, sorry, I'm done rambling on that. It's one of those things that bugs the hell outta me.

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Mac: And no, the answer doesn’t designate you a pessimistic or optimistic.


Pessimism is the way to go. It can save your life, you know. :) Really. If you're coming up to a train track with a train coming, an optimist will say 'oh I can beat the train!' SPLAT! Dead. A pessimist will say: 'nope, not going to make it'. Train goes buy and pessimist lives...:) Right. Done rambling. Really.

Ugh... loved the MST but hated, HATED, HATED that damn chapter. I doubt she used the books. She proabably looked it all up on wiki. It felt like a verbatim retelling of events. Horrible.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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I remember a time before the internet. I also remember a time when I had time to do other things like read while waiting for AOL to load anything. I don't know. On warm days, I have to watch out for kids when driving.

Okay. Yeah, this chapter was just...yeah. Wait till the next two!
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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We'd go play outside while we waited for the internet to load up. Then mum would yell outside and see if we wanted to come in cos it was loaded. Normally, we were to far away to hear her and she'd end up going on. Three hours later we'd come in and the internet would be closed. Ah, memories.

Ugh... there's no words for that chapter... looking forward to more of your amazing chapters of this horrid story! :)
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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For the past few weeks I’ve been very busy. Right now everything in my life is falling into place. I haven’t cut myself even though I’ve thought about it many times. I’m now learning what it’s like to live a “normal” life.
Quatre: Well, normal for Middle-earth. It probably won’t help when you go back to Earth.

Yes, this is going to cause a few problems when she gets back to reality.

SAM: (babbling) ... and it's great I'm really happy and my immortal boyfriend is so hot and I've made lots of friends with elves and hobbits and we live in a beautiful palace in the mountains and ...

THERAPIST: Uh, yeah. Good. Right. *scribbles on notepad, "increase dosage to 40 mg"*

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Pessimism is the way to go.

It's true. The lovely thing about pessimism - all your surprises are nice ones!
"From the moment I picked up your book until I laid it down, I was convulsed with laughter. Some day I intend reading it."
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