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Topic Started: Sep 24 2008, 06:51 AM (3,496 Views)
AraionaDuBois
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Chasing Shadows
Ah, okie dokie. That's okay then. :) Just figured I'd throw that out there. ;)

I have a twisted mind... oo, congrats Sian! Too bad my idea doesn't come about... :(
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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MackenzieW
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I think I prefer the real other admirer than your options, Ari, though they would make the story more interesting.

You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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AraionaDuBois
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Chasing Shadows
Hehehehe...I've got an image of Arwen trying to seduce Sam now... this isn't good.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Caranthol
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At Journey's End
This story is getting worse and worse... Only your MST makes it readable, Mac. The suddenly appearing evil twin took the cake.

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Is this sludge making a figure? From the pool of black blood and sludge a figure rises.


I wonder if krillball had just watched Terminator.

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Elves are in-tune with nature and understand it while we would rather run it over and build something on top of it.


Elves don't build? How about Vinyamar, Gondolin, Eregion and sundry other places, krillball?

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“What the hell?” I try to stop but my body is unable or unwilling. In no time I am frozen to the spot. That’s when I hear laughing.
Octavius: Sorry, are we too loud again?


Hehe, a good one.
"Ha! Wonnige Glut! Leuchtender Glanz!
Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße.
Im Feuer mich baden!"
- Siegfried, Act Three, Scene Two.
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Siany-T
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Errr Ok, weird chapter except, THE SUE IS DEAD! I hope. Really strange story great MST.

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I look down at my arm and the blade. Should I really do this? I mean I worked so hard to get over this addiction…Elrond told me I could do better.

Wait I thought you'd already descided to cut? Oh and Elrond could do better than you, get it right!

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“But he said he loved,” I sniffle, “Me. He couldn’t lie about something like that!”

He could lie about loving you, it is possible for people to do that you know.

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My whole forearm is covered in cuts. I take the blade and push it into my skin. I pull away but the blade is still imbedded in my skin.
Sai: That’s not right.

She's killing herself and succeeding, it's all perfectly right!

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This continues on for a couple minutes then suddenly everything goes silent. He puts his ear to the door and waits for her to speak once again.

When she doesn't he calls the other elves and they have a ball for a worth while reason, namely the Sue is dead!

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It’s only a door he thinks to himself as he kicks the door open

Go Elrond!

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on the black sludge leaking from her cuts.

Wait, isn't the sludge the Sueness? So the Sueness is leaving her? Horray!

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I’m going to die, I just know it.
*All look at each other. Erik breaks out the popcorn.*

Miracles do happen!

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“But how? She is just a figment of my imagination,”

Hmm judging from this, the evil twin was in fact the Sueness is semi-physical form. And Sam really is the author, confused about the Sueness she is. Or something like that.

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“I hate you!” With that my body tenses then sinks into the bed.
Jareth: Lovely last words. Sounds like Erik’s.
Erik: Bite me.

Yay she's dead! Oh and that bit between Jareth and Eric, made me laugh more than I feel it should, it was just so unexpected.

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I take one last look in the increasingly dark abyss in front of me then close my eyes, maybe forever.
All: WOOT!

OMGosh, the Sue is actually dead? Wait it says 'maybe' that's not so good.
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


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MackenzieW
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Elves don't build? How about Vinyamar, Gondolin, Eregion and sundry other places, krillball?


Please. In the next chapter, krillball misspells Rivendell--which she had spelled correctly in the other chapters.

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When she doesn't he calls the other elves and they have a ball for a worth while reason, namely the Sue is dead!


Hey, we're celebrating.

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Hmm judging from this, the evil twin was in fact the Sueness is semi-physical form.


Oh no, the evil twin was in fact, something less evil than the Sueness.

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Oh and that bit between Jareth and Eric, made me laugh more than I feel it should, it was just so unexpected.


Thanks. Erik and Jareth have an interesting friendship.

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OMGosh, the Sue is actually dead? Wait it says 'maybe' that's not so good.


We still contend she's dead.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Siany-T
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King of Nothing
I'm happy to agree with her being dead, and staying that way! I just fear the worst, the Sue's are knocking the hope from me.
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll!
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MackenzieW
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Right now, it's the only thing keeping us sane.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Siany-T
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Ye, especially with the appreance of Evil twin.
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll!
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AraionaDuBois
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He doesn’t think you’re worth his love. He hates you, you’re nothing to him,’ She says to me. My arm gets blurry as tears flood my vision.


I just have a question: In all serious, and a lot of writers say something like this, have you ever cried and had blurry vision? Maybe I never cry hard enough or something, but I've never experienced blurry vision with crying...

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Finally Elrond has had enough; It’s only a door he thinks to himself as he kicks the door open.


"Holy Merde! It's the guy from the Matrix!" :lol:

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“Oh my god,” I suddenly can’t move. Is this sludge making a figure? From the pool of black blood and sludge a figure rises.


I have sudden images of the Ghosts from Army of Ghosts/Doomsday.... 'member: a footprint doesn't always look like a boot! :lol:

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Jareth: Lovely last words. Sounds like Erik’s.
Erik: Bite me.


Lol! Well, if it was the Kay version... then Erik's last words would have proabably shrieking out Christine's name during... erm.... bedroom things.

Please be dead, please be dead, please be dead, please be dead, please be dead....
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Siany-T
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AraionaDuBois,Oct 15 2008
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I just have a question: In all serious, and a lot of writers say something like this, have you ever cried and had blurry vision? Maybe I never cry hard enough or something, but I've never experienced blurry vision with crying...

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Finally Elrond has had enough; It’s only a door he thinks to himself as he kicks the door open.


"Holy Merde! It's the guy from the Matrix!" :lol:


Please be dead, please be dead, please be dead, please be dead, please be dead....

You know, I have to agree with you. My vision goes blurry but that's 'cause I cry onto my glasses and then it's like rain on a window. My vision doesn't go blurry because of the tears in my eyes.


Elrond: Mr Ander... I mean Sam!


*joins Aria's chant*
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


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AraionaDuBois
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Chasing Shadows
Yes! I'm not the only one! I don't have glasses, so I don't have that problem. Yay for non blurry eye cry people! :lol:

*giggle* Now I have images of Elrond in black leather... oh lord...

*continues the chant*
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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MackenzieW
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You know, I have to agree with you. My vision goes blurry but that's 'cause I cry onto my glasses and then it's like rain on a window. My vision doesn't go blurry because of the tears in my eyes.


I have the same thing because I too wear glasses. And if I take the glasses off, of course my vision is going to be blurry--I'm blind. The one time I remember being blurry during tears without glasses, I was also having an attack so the lack of breathing probably caused that.

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Now I have images of Elrond in black leather... oh lord...


Isn't there a club in OFUM dedicated to Elves in Leather?
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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AraionaDuBois
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Ah...now we need the opinion of a non glasses wearing person. I must solve the blurry eye cry thing!

Yes there is.... There's some pictures of the elves in black leather on Camilla Sandman's site... they're brilliant.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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MackenzieW
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Yes, those pictures are brilliant. I also love the pictures of the Urple Bandit, the Witch-wall and the Nuzgul. Though I think I would adopt a Rohans.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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