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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 19 2008, 05:15 AM Post #256 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Thanks!
Sauron: so I'm a pawn! A bloody freaking pawn! Oh that does it! Ari: Sauron, calm down. The next chapter is starting. It'll be a good read. Sauron: Oh fine. Yay! Got scared for a moment, thinking it was done! And yay, a new chappie! :):)
Ari: Tim! Stop playing poker, you gotta read this chapter! Tim: *reads disclaimer* Oo...wait, I belong to Ari? Sauron: No, you belong to me. Ari: Oi! Shut it you two, I want to read this!
Oh thank God! I love the review reply feature... it's brilliant. ![]()
Stockholm!! :):) Normally I love characters that develop the Stockholm syndrome but this is just too much... granted, he didn't actually kidnap her.. okay I take that back. Strange stupid story...
Sauron: If I had known where that wretched Herald of Gil-Galad kept his home, I would have trampled right over it. Alas, I did not. Bloody wanker. Ari: Save it for therapy. Sauron: Oi! Don't tell them that! I'm trying to maintain an image. Ari: Yeah, well throwing in 'bloody wanker' and using 'Oi' doesn't really do much for it to begin with.
Tim: Oh that little... Ari: Now Tim, save it for the end of the chapter. I want my computer intact so I can finish reading this. Tim: I. am. going. to. kill... Ari: Oh go stab a random person with the morgul blade if it makes you feel better. *ten seconds later* I said random! Not my brother! Bloody hell!
Sauron: You know, I rather face the judgment of the Valar then live forever with that...thing.
Sauron: Even I might have to leave for that. While I do love a good shag, I don't want it with that creature.
Sauron: Oi! I'm not that thick! Ari: Suuurrreee...... Sauron: Watch it. I know where you sleep.
Not many do, sadly. Sauron: Right, can I kill her yet? Ari: No, wait till Mac finishes with the MST. Sauron: Oh fine then. Tim: What about me? Ari: No! I said you could go stab random people! Anyway, brilliant MST! Loved every moment of it!
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 19 2008, 06:02 AM Post #257 |
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Oh absolutely, but there are people who don't like it. I once helpfully pointed out to a writer that the feature existed. She wrote back that she knew but she hated the rule so she wasn't going to follow it. I then told her that the rules weren't there so we could choose which one we could follow. I wasn't too popular with her...
Erik: Do you see Dr. Stone too?
Do you need some kingsfoil? *Holds it up* Thanks! I've started on our next MST and it's given me an idea for my entry into this month's Mary Sue challenge.
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Caranthol | Oct 19 2008, 09:11 AM Post #258 |
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At Journey's End
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I am speechless. This story must be the most ridiculous thing I've eve read after the shining auras and stuff in An Elf's Love. The MST, however, is great. |
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"Ha! Wonnige Glut! Leuchtender Glanz! Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße. Im Feuer mich baden!" - Siegfried, Act Three, Scene Two. | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 19 2008, 12:58 PM Post #259 |
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Chasing Shadows
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You? Not popular? What ever gave you that idea? :lol: I love ya Mac. You're the greatest.
Sauron: Yes. Don't tell anyone else, or I will kill you. Ari: Be nice! Sauron: Make me. Ari: :rolleyes:
Thanks for the offer but I've got some on hand. I've got stores of the stuff. It's quite useful. Awesome! I've started my entry and I actually had to pull out the bottle of VO to continue writing.... *shudder* |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Fishpaste | Oct 19 2008, 05:42 PM Post #260 |
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Rising Again
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Well, at least she's admitted her evilness? Great MST, again! |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 19 2008, 08:33 PM Post #261 |
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Oh, the shining auras. Thanks!
Oh, don't be like that, Sauron. Most of us go to Dr. Stone.
I'm working on mine, trying to keep in mind it has to be cliche and Mary Sueish, so I need to make sure my writing is bad.
Yes, I guess it's a step in the right direction. Thanks! |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 19 2008, 09:11 PM Post #262 |
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Chasing Shadows
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I almost forgot about the shining auras... *sigh* Sauron just gets touchy about people knowing he's seen help. I'm glad he sees Dr. Stone. Sauron: You're coming with me next time! Ari: As if. Ugh... Mine makes me want to puke...I'm a monster! Creating a monster! AHHH!! |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 19 2008, 09:23 PM Post #263 |
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Calm down. Take a deep breath. And maybe a break from Sauron. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Fishpaste | Oct 19 2008, 09:29 PM Post #264 |
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Rising Again
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Mine won't write! I just can't come up with the perfect description. I will find it! |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 19 2008, 09:30 PM Post #265 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Right... I told Sauron to go pillage or something. He took offense, but then left so... house to myself! (Don't really count the Nazgul... they're all drunk off their arse playing cards...they don't bother me at all) |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Siany-T | Oct 19 2008, 10:27 PM Post #266 |
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King of Nothing
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Sorry Mac, only just read the latest chapters!
Would it freak anyone out if I said I wouldn't mind a guy like Sauron? I mean sure he's evil and all but hey at least he know what he wants!
Heck Frodo was more important than her and this didn't happen! Stupid Sue...
Refuse to hope...
*sigh* knew it was futile.
Stop writing!
She did have it though, she kept forgetting where things were in Rivendell. … Ye compared to Eric even Darth Vader's face isn't creepy...
Thankfully... And actually so does Harry Potter, Dumbledore ect.
That sounds so wrong...
This is defiantaly my ending!
Very creepy...
Again, would it freak anyone out if I said I like causing other people pain?
Well, whatever floats your boat.
I thought old Aria was all about the pain, blood and darkness?
Yay for Tim, getting a mention.
That's cause Mac doesn't have (thankfully) Sue hair. Story getting worse, your MST is brilliant as ever. Oh and I am slowly writing my Sue, very cliched. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 20 2008, 01:41 AM Post #267 |
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Resident Time Lady
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Sometimes the bad guys are better than the good ones.
True, but she always remembered who she was.
Oh, it is mine as well. Thanks for the review! |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Fishpaste | Oct 20 2008, 06:05 PM Post #268 |
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Rising Again
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We have a new Aria? What was wrong with the old one. Idiot Suethor, give Aria back! Wooooo! It's over! and sam accepted her rightful place as evil. And Aragorn was the hero.
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Mathonwy | Oct 20 2008, 08:39 PM Post #269 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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Dear me, so much to catch up with ... yuck! Well, that was pleasant. I was feeling sorry for Sauron by the end. Poor dear, he'd have been better off going down with Numenor when it sank.
Yes, you can just smell the chaos of battle there. Too bad we'll never see her epic descriptions of the siege of Gondor! |
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| Caranthol | Oct 20 2008, 09:52 PM Post #270 |
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At Journey's End
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I guess I can almost see it, it would be something like this: "The archers shot a bit. It was quite a battle. Then the Witch-King broke the gate. Too bad he was killed." And that's it. |
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"Ha! Wonnige Glut! Leuchtender Glanz! Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße. Im Feuer mich baden!" - Siegfried, Act Three, Scene Two. | |
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