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Topic Started: Sep 24 2008, 06:51 AM (3,491 Views)
AraionaDuBois
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Chasing Shadows
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If you disappear for sometime, I'll send in a rescue party.


Thanks! :)

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I'm sure you were, Sauron. But apparently, it makes these girls more "hotter" to the "hawt" characters if you want them and they have rescue them.


Sauron: so I'm a pawn! A bloody freaking pawn! Oh that does it!
Ari: Sauron, calm down. The next chapter is starting. It'll be a good read.
Sauron: Oh fine.

Yay! Got scared for a moment, thinking it was done! And yay, a new chappie! :):)

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Disclaimer: Tim the Witch-king belongs to Ari.

Ari: Tim! Stop playing poker, you gotta read this chapter!
Tim: *reads disclaimer* Oo...wait, I belong to Ari?
Sauron: No, you belong to me.
Ari: Oi! Shut it you two, I want to read this!

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Mac: Hmm, maybe now’s when she learned what the review reply was for.


Oh thank God! I love the review reply feature... it's brilliant. :)

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Sai: She’s brainwashed.


Stockholm!! :):) Normally I love characters that develop the Stockholm syndrome but this is just too much... granted, he didn't actually kidnap her.. okay I take that back. Strange stupid story...

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Mac: But Sauron didn’t know where Elrond was!


Sauron: If I had known where that wretched Herald of Gil-Galad kept his home, I would have trampled right over it. Alas, I did not. Bloody wanker.
Ari: Save it for therapy.
Sauron: Oi! Don't tell them that! I'm trying to maintain an image.
Ari: Yeah, well throwing in 'bloody wanker' and using 'Oi' doesn't really do much for it to begin with.

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While he still had his powers he stabbed me (I willingly let him) and I turned into a creature of the night, a witch-queen. He cut himself, letting his blood mix with mine and thus giving me more powers then any Nazgûl would ever have.
Sai: If the Nazgul are reading this…
Mac: And they are.
Sai: They are not going to be happy reading that.
Mac: No, they are not. Particularly Tim.
Sai: Who is Tim?
Mac: The Witch-king of Angmar.


Tim: Oh that little...
Ari: Now Tim, save it for the end of the chapter. I want my computer intact so I can finish reading this.
Tim: I. am. going. to. kill...
Ari: Oh go stab a random person with the morgul blade if it makes you feel better. *ten seconds later* I said random! Not my brother! Bloody hell!

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Sai: Well, until Frodo drops Gollum and the One Ring into Mount Doom.


Sauron: You know, I rather face the judgment of the Valar then live forever with that...thing.

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Mac: Oh, I hope it isn’t a poorly written scene we have to throw Quatre out for.


Sauron: Even I might have to leave for that. While I do love a good shag, I don't want it with that creature.

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I glanced at Sauron and saw that he was confused
Erik: Obviously someone wasn’t getting the hint.


Sauron: Oi! I'm not that thick!
Ari: Suuurrreee......
Sauron: Watch it. I know where you sleep.

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Gertrude: Almost twenty chapters in and this young lady still doesn’t know the difference between “than” and “then.” Ach!


Not many do, sadly.


Sauron: Right, can I kill her yet?
Ari: No, wait till Mac finishes with the MST.
Sauron: Oh fine then.
Tim: What about me?
Ari: No! I said you could go stab random people! Anyway, brilliant MST! :) Loved every moment of it! :)
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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MackenzieW
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Oh thank God! I love the review reply feature... it's brilliant.


Oh absolutely, but there are people who don't like it. I once helpfully pointed out to a writer that the feature existed. She wrote back that she knew but she hated the rule so she wasn't going to follow it. I then told her that the rules weren't there so we could choose which one we could follow. I wasn't too popular with her...

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Ari: Save it for therapy.
Sauron: Oi! Don't tell them that! I'm trying to maintain an image.


Erik: Do you see Dr. Stone too?

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Ari: Oh go stab a random person with the morgul blade if it makes you feel better. *ten seconds later* I said random! Not my brother! Bloody hell!


Do you need some kingsfoil? *Holds it up*

Thanks! I've started on our next MST and it's given me an idea for my entry into this month's Mary Sue challenge. ;)
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Caranthol
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I am speechless. This story must be the most ridiculous thing I've eve read after the shining auras and stuff in An Elf's Love. The MST, however, is great.
"Ha! Wonnige Glut! Leuchtender Glanz!
Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße.
Im Feuer mich baden!"
- Siegfried, Act Three, Scene Two.
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AraionaDuBois
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You? Not popular? What ever gave you that idea? :lol: ;) I love ya Mac. You're the greatest.

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Erik: Do you see Dr. Stone too?


Sauron: Yes. Don't tell anyone else, or I will kill you.
Ari: Be nice!
Sauron: Make me.
Ari: :rolleyes:

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Do you need some kingsfoil? *Holds it up*


Thanks for the offer but I've got some on hand. I've got stores of the stuff. It's quite useful. ;)

Awesome! I've started my entry and I actually had to pull out the bottle of VO to continue writing.... *shudder*

Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Fishpaste
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Well, at least she's admitted her evilness?

Great MST, again!
Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke!

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MackenzieW
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I am speechless. This story must be the most ridiculous thing I've eve read after the shining auras and stuff in An Elf's Love. The MST, however, is great.


Oh, the shining auras. Thanks!

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Sauron: Yes. Don't tell anyone else, or I will kill you.
Ari: Be nice!
Sauron: Make me.


Oh, don't be like that, Sauron. Most of us go to Dr. Stone.

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Awesome! I've started my entry and I actually had to pull out the bottle of VO to continue writing.... *shudder*


I'm working on mine, trying to keep in mind it has to be cliche and Mary Sueish, so I need to make sure my writing is bad.

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Well, at least she's admitted her evilness?

Great MST, again!


Yes, I guess it's a step in the right direction. Thanks!
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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AraionaDuBois
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I almost forgot about the shining auras... *sigh*

Sauron just gets touchy about people knowing he's seen help. I'm glad he sees Dr. Stone.
Sauron: You're coming with me next time!
Ari: As if.

Ugh... Mine makes me want to puke...I'm a monster! Creating a monster! AHHH!!

Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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MackenzieW
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Calm down. Take a deep breath. And maybe a break from Sauron.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

My Little Corner

I'm on Book Country!
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Fishpaste
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Rising Again
Mine won't write! I just can't come up with the perfect description. I will find it!
Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke!

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AraionaDuBois
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Right... I told Sauron to go pillage or something. He took offense, but then left so... house to myself! (Don't really count the Nazgul... they're all drunk off their arse playing cards...they don't bother me at all)
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Siany-T
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Sorry Mac, only just read the latest chapters!

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SexyKnickers – I know what you mean…I wish I ad a guy like that!
All: Like Sauron?

Would it freak anyone out if I said I wouldn't mind a guy like Sauron? I mean sure he's evil and all but hey at least he know what he wants!

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All the plants have died, the streams have turned black and they all know evil is in the air, it’s suffocating them.
Jareth: Sauron turning Sam into the “Witch-Queen” is doing all of that to Rivendell? Please.

Heck Frodo was more important than her and this didn't happen! Stupid Sue...

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A/N: The end…
All: YAY!

Refuse to hope...

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LOL Jokes!
All: NOOO! Damn you!

*sigh* knew it was futile.

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Stop this pain!

Stop writing!

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Quatre: Great. Now the Sue has amnesia.
Mac: It’s like the only psychological condition she HASN’T had yet.
Sai: Point Mac

She did have it though, she kept forgetting where things were in Rivendell.

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Erik: He just has red eyes and black hair?
Jareth: Creepy.
Erik: I know. Considering my face and all

Ye compared to Eric even Darth Vader's face isn't creepy...

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Sai: Gandalf wore more than a cloak.

Thankfully...
And actually so does Harry Potter, Dumbledore ect.

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I can feel his love for me radiating off his body

That sounds so wrong...

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Remus: In reality, Sam was really in some asylum. She was talking to the nurse, who was just about to up the dosage.
Erik: Point Remus.

This is defiantaly my ending!

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I feel the same love coming from the eye as I do from the man beside me.
Mac: Creepy sign number three

Very creepy...

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For some reason I want to cause others pain in place of my own…though I did not feel pain at the moment. Once again how strange.

Again, would it freak anyone out if I said I like causing other people pain?

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beautifully dead scenery

Well, whatever floats your boat.

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This is a new aria of pain, blood and darkness

I thought old Aria was all about the pain, blood and darkness?

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Sai: If the Nazgul are reading this…
Mac: And they are.
Sai: They are not going to be happy reading that.
Mac: No, they are not. Particularly Tim.
Sai: Who is Tim?
Mac: The Witch-king of Angmar.

Yay for Tim, getting a mention.

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Sai (to Mac): May I?
Mac: Go ahead.
*Sai strokes Mackenzie’s hair.*
Sai: Don’t see it ripple.

That's cause Mac doesn't have (thankfully) Sue hair.

Story getting worse, your MST is brilliant as ever.

Oh and I am slowly writing my Sue, very cliched.

Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


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John: Sorry.
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MackenzieW
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Would it freak anyone out if I said I wouldn't mind a guy like Sauron?


Sometimes the bad guys are better than the good ones.

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She did have it though, she kept forgetting where things were in Rivendell.


True, but she always remembered who she was.

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This is defiantaly my ending!


Oh, it is mine as well.

Thanks for the review!
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

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Fishpaste
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We have a new Aria? What was wrong with the old one. Idiot Suethor, give Aria back!

Wooooo! It's over! and sam accepted her rightful place as evil. And Aragorn was the hero. :)
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Mathonwy
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Dear me, so much to catch up with ... yuck!

Well, that was pleasant. I was feeling sorry for Sauron by the end. Poor dear, he'd have been better off going down with Numenor when it sank.

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I take out my bow and arrow and stand back, letting the arrows fly. For the first hour or so it proceeds as only a battle could. Then our warriors come with a bomb to break their wall, turning the battle in our favor for a while.
Sai: Once again, someone else who makes a battle scene absolutely boring.

Yes, you can just smell the chaos of battle there. Too bad we'll never see her epic descriptions of the siege of Gondor!
"From the moment I picked up your book until I laid it down, I was convulsed with laughter. Some day I intend reading it."
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Caranthol
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I guess I can almost see it, it would be something like this:

"The archers shot a bit. It was quite a battle. Then the Witch-King broke the gate. Too bad he was killed."

And that's it.
"Ha! Wonnige Glut! Leuchtender Glanz!
Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße.
Im Feuer mich baden!"
- Siegfried, Act Three, Scene Two.
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