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MST: More Worlds Than One [REVIEWS]; The reviews go here.
Topic Started: Oct 9 2008, 07:55 PM (1,243 Views)
Caranthol
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At Journey's End
Well, what was it like?
"Ha! Wonnige Glut! Leuchtender Glanz!
Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße.
Im Feuer mich baden!"
- Siegfried, Act Three, Scene Two.
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Telcontar Rulz
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Rising Again
Nooo! Not another 'speshul-sorceress-born-to-save-Middle-Earth'! Middle Earth has enough of those!

Good MST though. I like the comment about the leash and the Mary Sue. I can so imagine one of them on all fours with her tongue hanging out.
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MackenzieW
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Good lord, if she can't even spell Manhattan then she probably has never been there, wishing she lived there. What type of graveyard was she running around in? I'm sure it would've been gated and not as big as she made it seem.

Anyway, good MST. So far, the story is quite boring.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Caranthol
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At Journey's End
Thanks for the reviews! Well, the things get a little more interesting in a chapter or so. I wonder why Kuragari labeled this as a humor story, I didn't even smile save in those points that were unintentionally comical.
"Ha! Wonnige Glut! Leuchtender Glanz!
Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße.
Im Feuer mich baden!"
- Siegfried, Act Three, Scene Two.
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MackenzieW
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I decided to go to Kuragari's profile to check out the reviews for this thing. I'm glad to say they are mostly negative. However, I found this little gem on her bio:

Okay, so I'd like to say one thing: If you don't like my story, DON'T READ IT!!! If you want to send me bad messages, sure, but sending them anonymously is just plain STUPID!!! If you can't face up to your own words, then you don't deserve the right to have an opinion at ALL! So here's the deal, if you don't like my story, you don't have to read it. If you want to send a rude comment to one of them, send them so I can abuse what you would suggest is your "great stories!"

Thank you, all my loyal and kind readers for being non-abusive and respectable. At least I won't have "to go wash my eyes out with bleach," but I will have to wash my brain with poisonous liquids so I can get over these idiot people who can't live up to their own words.

-Just another newbie writer.-

-Kuragari91


Once again, how are we to know if we don't like your story if we don't read it. And are you saying that we don't have the right to tell you we don't like it? Also, if you don't want anonymous messages, disable them, stupid. Did you stop to think that maybe it's not people hiding behind the anonymous function, but people without accounts who were so moved to review? Probably not. And that's nice, these people don't deserve an opinion. Lovely. Oh, and you are a revenge flamer. How mature. You may not have to wash your eyes out with bleach, but I do. Oh, and do take the poisonous liquids. If these people are pushing you to it, please do.

Sorry, but that just go me upset. I'm thinking of telling her that too, but she'll probably flame me back.

PS: Excellent MST of her second chapter!
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

My Little Corner

I'm on Book Country!
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AraionaDuBois
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Excellent MST! I finished the first chapter and went to review, and then saw there was a second! Made me very happy, you know! Mac, I'd say go ahead and flame the idiot. She deserves it.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Telcontar Rulz
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Second chapter was great :). Well, the story was not great, but your MST was.

On an off-topic note, I found a review for this story written by Shero/Angey. Are the Suethor's plotting to drive us canon lovers mad?
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AraionaDuBois
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oh Lord... There has to be some big sinister thing behind the scenes of this. Maybe this is Sauron's plot? Oh my God... Sauron and Melkor must have orchestrated this from the Void...
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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MackenzieW
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Of course Angey would review this. It would be right up her alley and bird of a feather.

Another good chapter! I put it to the Suethors: if you think you are being funny, you're not. Trust me.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

My Little Corner

I'm on Book Country!
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Caranthol
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Thanks to all! Mac, your review for this atrocity was just to the point. Here's a gem, Angey's review:

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Awesome story!!

I love the plot. I wonder why Boromir waz staring at Shade.

UPDATE!


I haven't read that far yet but obviously Boromir will be the evil rapist yet again. Poor guy!
"Ha! Wonnige Glut! Leuchtender Glanz!
Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße.
Im Feuer mich baden!"
- Siegfried, Act Three, Scene Two.
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MackenzieW
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No wonder in the author's note in Jules' MST of "An Elf's Love," she says she's seen Boromir written the way she wrote him!

Thanks!
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

My Little Corner

I'm on Book Country!
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AraionaDuBois
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oh God. She can't even spell was correctly. Lord help us all. Brilliant chapter! :D Best one yet, actually. Now I've got 'baby light my fire' stuck in my head.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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AraionaDuBois
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Loved the next chapter! :) Loved the 'My name is Easterling, Khamûl the Easterling.' line and, well, that whole riff... perfect. :)
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Dinendir
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Loved the MST. But the story is just atrocious. I mean,

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Frodo leapt to the ground on his back


WTF?
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Telcontar Rulz
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All nine were there.

Pippin: No, they were not. There were five of them. Or is this after that movie thing again?
Kraut: Yeah.


Not to be nit-picky, but the films only showed five Nazgul on Weathertop as well. ;) Kuragi-whats-her-face simply has a bad memory.

It seems that I'm one of the few who actually accept PJ's decision to replace Glorfindel with Arwen. *ducks rotten tomatoes*

Loved the MST though. How did Eowyn find out about martinis? :D

Honestly, the Suethor's spelling mistakes were funnier than her jokes. The 'bad'? How can anyone who's old enough to go onto the internet not know how to spell 'bed'?
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