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MST: More Worlds Than One [REVIEWS]; The reviews go here.
Topic Started: Oct 9 2008, 07:55 PM (1,247 Views)
AraionaDuBois
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That was a good episode... yay! new chapter!!

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Pippin: Huh? But hadn’t he Sting already at Weathertop?
Kraut: Maybe they are made in serial production.


Ha! Yeah, there's a sword production company south of Mordor. Small little place. :) Brilliant line. :)

oh I totally wish Boromir killed her...

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Kätchen: Acception? What language is this anyway, since it surely isn’t English?


Gibberish, I vote for gibberish!

Poor MSTers... they must be going through some horrible mental issues with reading this, for lack of a better word, gibberish. Great MST!!! Loved it!
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Siany-T
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You know, so much of the story is just the movie I skim a lot of it. I read the MST though, it's mega!


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I found Beardy a better name to call him, but I will call him by his true name to you, but he doesn't know that, wink.

Beardy is better than Boromir? Strange, like that sentance. Oh and don't wink at me.

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"Hey, now. Their doing quite well. I think they should be pros." I confirmed.

Confirmed? Strange choise of words. Oh no she's going to prove she can fight, isn't she? *Reads more* Yep, *groans*

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"Don't kill her Boromir." Gandalf pleaded.

The red is 'cause that's what she thought he said, she heard the 'n't' bit, Gandalf didn't actually say it! We hope.


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Boromir was the stater of the obvious.

Faramir: More so than Legolas? I don’t think so.
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Eowyn: Speaking of the people stating obvious…
Kätchen: If Shadow thinks Boromir is Captain Obvious, then Leggy must be the General.


I think it's because Legolas is the love interest so he couldn't be Cpatain Obvious, although General Obvious does have a ring to it...


Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
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MackenzieW
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Faramir (as Sam): To hell with Rosie! Shade, I love you!


At this point, an irate Rosie burst in and started to beat the Sue up.


No?


Darn.

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Pippin: There are more adjectives for good looks than ‘cute’. Buy a dictionary, Kuragari.


Or at least use the thesaurus option in Word.

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Right before we departed from Rivendell, Frodo was given a sword from his uncle Bilbo.

Pippin: Huh? But hadn’t he Sting already at Weathertop?


Yes, Pippin:

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Frodo held up Sting,


I've come to the conclusion that Suethors really do believe there is a law against reading over your previous work.

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"Don't underestimate this woman, Boromir, she has skill." Aragorn warned.

Kraut: Oh, no! Aragorn has caught the Sue-disease!
Faramir: Also known as imbecility.


Over here, we call it The Stupid. House has already confirmed it is contagious and incurable. Sadly, it is not fatal.

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I nodded in acception.

Kätchen: Acception? What language is this anyway, since it surely isn’t English?


It's "I turned off Spell Check because those squiggly red lines were getting annoying!"
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Fishpaste
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It's "I turned off Spell Check because those squiggly red lines were getting annoying!"

*snort* Too true.
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AraionaDuBois
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Yay! New chapter!

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Faramir (clapping): Bravo! She actually noticed someone else than herself or Legolas.


oh my God... is that a first?!?!

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Eowyn (as Gandalf): Oh, shut up! You are not amusing.


We are not amused... :lol: Sorry, it made me think of Queen Victoria...

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Faramir (as Gandalf): Don’t worry about him. With luck he cuts the throat of the Sue in her sleep.


That would be so flipping cool!!!

God, great MST to a horrible fic! I hate it when people use the movie script word for word with their own Sues interjections... ugh.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Mathonwy
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"Mines are no place for a pony. Even one so brave as Bill." Aragorn then hit Bill, who was Sam's horse from the Shire, in the butt and the horse galloped off.

Kraut (as Sam): Umm, Aragorn, shouldn’t you have taken our stuff from Bill’s back first?
Kätchen (as Aragorn): Oh, don’t be such a pedant.

Doh!

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"By George, I think he's got it! Yay Frodo!" I said, hopping up and down.

Kätchen: Isn’t there some sort of medication for hyper-activeness?

Well, she can try reading this fic. Guaranteed to extinguish all traces of hope and vitality!
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Caranthol
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Thanks to all reviewers!

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I hate it when people use the movie script word for word with their own Sues interjections...


Ari, so do I. In this story, for instance, it leads to disjointed dialogue and for the large part it seems that the other characters are ignoring Shadow. I doubt that was Kuragari's intention.

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Well, she can try reading this fic. Guaranteed to extinguish all traces of hope and vitality!


Nice one, Mathonwy!
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Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße.
Im Feuer mich baden!"
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Fishpaste
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Hssssssss, stay away from Aragorn! He is fairly intelligent you know, I'm sure he knows to get out of a mine full of goblins.
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AraionaDuBois
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Plus, it doesn't show any signs of creativity. Sure, interject your own character into the fellowship: but make it original. Anyone can create a character and just throw them in there with the movie script.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Siany-T
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Plus it is really boring, I can't be bothered to read the story itself. Most of it I know from the movie and the Suethors bit are so stupid. Caranthol's MST is great though.


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We ended up at this very dark and dreary lace

Lace? Seriously?

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"Oh, holy mother of goblins!" I gulped.

Pippin (gulps): She worships the evil!
Kätchen: Only she is doing even that badly. Morgoth was a ‘he’

Oooh maybe Morgoth will kill her for that.

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"Get off him!" Sam yelled, running towards the creature, but before even I knew it, I ran ahead of Sam, my sword out and ready to attack. I swiftly cut over five of the creature's tentacles.

Eowyn: Were they made of paper, then?
Kätchen: Maybe she has a light-sabre.

Well she is a Sue, no wait that means she's messing in my baby. BACK OFF BITCH! *Breathes slowly* Sorry, I get angry at people messing with the Star Wars fandom.
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I was now close to Frodo's tentacle.

All (look uneasy.)
Eowyn: I hope that isn’t an euphemism.

Bad image.

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I turned to see Legolas running to me. He shot arrows at the
Sian:  Sue? Please.
creature's head.
Sian: Dam!


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submerges out of the water

*Laughs* Submberges OUT, I think Kuragari mean Emerges.

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Many that live deserve death.

Eowyn: Like Shadow.

*Applauds Eowyn*

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Merry was also the stater of the obvious.

Kätchen: Well, he may be the Lieutenant Obvious, then.
Pippin: Wow, they have a pretty army before long if this goes on.

The Obvious Army, has a ring to it.

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"You're world is so different from ours." Legolas replied.

Kätchen (springs to attention): Herr General!

You set my inner fangirl off there! She was getting all flustered about the idea of Legolas in an army uniform.

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Kraut (raising an eyebrow): The Sue comforts a dwarf? The time of miracles is not over.

A Sue touched a dwarf? OMGosh, the world must surely be about to end.

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Eowyn (as Gandalf): That’s it, Shadow, it’s of no use to deny anymore! You are a servant of Sauron!
Kätchen (as Shadow): It was not me! Honestly! It was my evil twin!

*whimpers* Evil. Twin. Samantha. Not. Good *Starts rocking back and forth* Bad. Memories.

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I think that is the cave troll!

Pippin: No shit, Sherlock

And she rats on others for stating the obvious, hippocrite.

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He pulls me, as if he were Tarzan, to safety.

Kraut: And banged his chest, yelling on the top of his lungs.
Pippin: “The Manual of Overblown and Stupid Rescue Techniques”, page ninety-two

Ahh the good old Manual. Perfect for stupid moments like this.

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Legolas holds his bow out, ready, right in front of me,

Eowyn (hopefully): An arrow-tip against Shadow’s chest?

but soon lowers it.

Eowyn: Darn

Ahh Eowyn, you are brilliant. You know that? You are fantastic. Wow sounded very Doctorish then.
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We race across a bridge, THE bridge,

Not just any bridge, no, it's THE bridge. With capilitized the and everything.

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"No! No!" Boromir urges.

Pippin (with a sigh): Kuragari, it is ‘forbids’ or something like that. The exact opposite of ‘urge’ in any case.

I believe Kuragari likes using oppiste words, remember the submerges not emerges?

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I run back to Argorn

Eep a mini-balrog!
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


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MackenzieW
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Another good two chapters!

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Kätchen (deadpan): They use the ‘orkic’ system in Middle-Earth to measure distance.


However Gondor was trying this new fangled system with "feet" and "miles."

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(Bored looks from the audience.)
Faramir: And that was supposed to be a joke?


We've already learned Kura isn't so great with humor...

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I kneeled to look at my friend's face. "I know you can finish this! I have faith! I'm with you the whole way!"


It was then that Frodo decided he would be better on his own.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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AraionaDuBois
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Woohoo! another chappie! Brill!

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We ad been walking for a while when Gimli spots a door to the sid eof us.


Lol! 'eof'? Since I was reading fast, I thought I saw the word oeuf, which is egg in French. I got so confused there for a second... :)

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Faramir (as the troll): Shall we dance?


I now have 'In the Mood' by Glenn Miller in my head with images of the Doctor, Jack, and Rose dancing... bliss.

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He pulls me, as if he were Tarzan, to safety.


Me Out-of-Character Legolas. You Mary-Sue.

Brilliant chapter! You're too good!
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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Siany-T
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Me Out-of-Character Legolas. You Mary-Sue.

Haha good one Aria.
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
Merlin, Series 2


David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry.
John: Sorry.
Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special


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AraionaDuBois
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Thanks. :) Thought of it as soon as I read the word 'Tarzan'.
Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian.

Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian.
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MackenzieW
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We ad been walking for a while when Gimli spots a door to the sid eof us.


And this is why you shouldn't turn off Spell Check. It wouldn't have caught "ad" for "had" or "sid," but it would've caught "eof."
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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