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| MST: More Worlds Than One [REVIEWS]; The reviews go here. | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 12 2008, 12:35 AM Post #46 |
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Chasing Shadows
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That was a good episode... yay! new chapter!!
Ha! Yeah, there's a sword production company south of Mordor. Small little place. Brilliant line. ![]() oh I totally wish Boromir killed her...
Gibberish, I vote for gibberish! Poor MSTers... they must be going through some horrible mental issues with reading this, for lack of a better word, gibberish. Great MST!!! Loved it! |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Siany-T | Oct 12 2008, 12:45 AM Post #47 |
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King of Nothing
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You know, so much of the story is just the movie I skim a lot of it. I read the MST though, it's mega!
Beardy is better than Boromir? Strange, like that sentance. Oh and don't wink at me.
Confirmed? Strange choise of words. Oh no she's going to prove she can fight, isn't she? *Reads more* Yep, *groans*
The red is 'cause that's what she thought he said, she heard the 'n't' bit, Gandalf didn't actually say it! We hope.
I think it's because Legolas is the love interest so he couldn't be Cpatain Obvious, although General Obvious does have a ring to it... |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 12 2008, 04:06 AM Post #48 |
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Resident Time Lady
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At this point, an irate Rosie burst in and started to beat the Sue up. No? Darn.
Or at least use the thesaurus option in Word.
Yes, Pippin:
I've come to the conclusion that Suethors really do believe there is a law against reading over your previous work.
Over here, we call it The Stupid. House has already confirmed it is contagious and incurable. Sadly, it is not fatal.
It's "I turned off Spell Check because those squiggly red lines were getting annoying!" |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Fishpaste | Oct 12 2008, 12:23 PM Post #49 |
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Rising Again
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*snort* Too true. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 12 2008, 06:03 PM Post #50 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Yay! New chapter!
oh my God... is that a first?!?!
We are not amused... :lol: Sorry, it made me think of Queen Victoria...
That would be so flipping cool!!! God, great MST to a horrible fic! I hate it when people use the movie script word for word with their own Sues interjections... ugh. |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Mathonwy | Oct 12 2008, 07:47 PM Post #51 |
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Waiting For Tomorrow
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Doh!
Well, she can try reading this fic. Guaranteed to extinguish all traces of hope and vitality! |
| "From the moment I picked up your book until I laid it down, I was convulsed with laughter. Some day I intend reading it." | |
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| Caranthol | Oct 12 2008, 08:06 PM Post #52 |
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At Journey's End
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Thanks to all reviewers!
Ari, so do I. In this story, for instance, it leads to disjointed dialogue and for the large part it seems that the other characters are ignoring Shadow. I doubt that was Kuragari's intention.
Nice one, Mathonwy! |
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"Ha! Wonnige Glut! Leuchtender Glanz! Strahlend nun offen steht mir die Straße. Im Feuer mich baden!" - Siegfried, Act Three, Scene Two. | |
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| Fishpaste | Oct 12 2008, 08:37 PM Post #53 |
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Rising Again
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Hssssssss, stay away from Aragorn! He is fairly intelligent you know, I'm sure he knows to get out of a mine full of goblins. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 12 2008, 09:14 PM Post #54 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Plus, it doesn't show any signs of creativity. Sure, interject your own character into the fellowship: but make it original. Anyone can create a character and just throw them in there with the movie script. |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Siany-T | Oct 12 2008, 10:30 PM Post #55 |
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King of Nothing
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Plus it is really boring, I can't be bothered to read the story itself. Most of it I know from the movie and the Suethors bit are so stupid. Caranthol's MST is great though.
Lace? Seriously?
Oooh maybe Morgoth will kill her for that.
Well she is a Sue, no wait that means she's messing in my baby. BACK OFF BITCH! *Breathes slowly* Sorry, I get angry at people messing with the Star Wars fandom.
Bad image.
*Laughs* Submberges OUT, I think Kuragari mean Emerges.
*Applauds Eowyn*
The Obvious Army, has a ring to it.
You set my inner fangirl off there! She was getting all flustered about the idea of Legolas in an army uniform.
A Sue touched a dwarf? OMGosh, the world must surely be about to end.
*whimpers* Evil. Twin. Samantha. Not. Good *Starts rocking back and forth* Bad. Memories.
And she rats on others for stating the obvious, hippocrite.
Ahh the good old Manual. Perfect for stupid moments like this.
Ahh Eowyn, you are brilliant. You know that? You are fantastic. Wow sounded very Doctorish then.
Not just any bridge, no, it's THE bridge. With capilitized the and everything.
I believe Kuragari likes using oppiste words, remember the submerges not emerges?
Eep a mini-balrog! |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 12 2008, 10:47 PM Post #56 |
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Another good two chapters!
However Gondor was trying this new fangled system with "feet" and "miles."
We've already learned Kura isn't so great with humor...
It was then that Frodo decided he would be better on his own. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 12 2008, 11:29 PM Post #57 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Woohoo! another chappie! Brill!
Lol! 'eof'? Since I was reading fast, I thought I saw the word oeuf, which is egg in French. I got so confused there for a second... ![]()
I now have 'In the Mood' by Glenn Miller in my head with images of the Doctor, Jack, and Rose dancing... bliss.
Me Out-of-Character Legolas. You Mary-Sue. Brilliant chapter! You're too good! |
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| Siany-T | Oct 12 2008, 11:36 PM Post #58 |
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King of Nothing
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Haha good one Aria. |
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Merlin: Thank you. Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself. Merlin, Series 2 David: Oh and John. My TARDIS... mine. Say sorry. John: Sorry. Tonight's the Night: Doctor Who Special Team Demyx - 'cause that is how I roll! | |
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| AraionaDuBois | Oct 12 2008, 11:40 PM Post #59 |
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Chasing Shadows
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Thanks. Thought of it as soon as I read the word 'Tarzan'.
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Smashed down the light. I will not rest till I'm king. Valinor's empty now. allied the elves and men they shall be damned. A Dark Passage, Blind Guardian. Now truly I am king of the world. Master of fate Damned shall thy house be. Thou shall not question my power Nor shall thou defy me further. The Steadfast, Blind Guardian. | |
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| MackenzieW | Oct 13 2008, 12:33 AM Post #60 |
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Resident Time Lady
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And this is why you shouldn't turn off Spell Check. It wouldn't have caught "ad" for "had" or "sid," but it would've caught "eof." |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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Brilliant line.




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