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The Pride of Boromir: The Reviews; What did you think?
Topic Started: Nov 12 2008, 07:26 PM (2,928 Views)
Calenlass
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This fic reminds me of this:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2564938/1/As_the_Journey_Begins

Someone's been plagiarizing...

Guess we can only check the posting dates, etc.
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Siany-T
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Hehe, I now understand where the Swears come from, this Puppet Pals is incredibly funny.
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Caranthol
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Someone's been plagiarizing...


Calenlass, you must be right. Heck, after a short skimming over it seems that only the perspective has been changed, basically it's the same beginning chapter. I wonder which way the plagiarizing goes.
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MackenzieW
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I think the one Calen found is the better written. But we can check posting dates--deleterius has a link to Pride of Boromir.

ETA: Here's the link to The Pride of Boromir on lotr adultfanfiction. According to the site, she posted this in 2007. According to Fanfiction.net, Larrkin published "As the Journey Begins" in 2005. I think we should let someone know of the plagiarism.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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jules14
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Whoa; Luinil´s a plagiarist too! Definitely let someone know, but wait until I get all the chapters of Luinil´s monstrosity. I don´t want it deleted before I finish MSTing it.
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MackenzieW
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Just let me know when you've copied all of Luinil's story. I'm not sure how lotr adultfanfiction handles plagiarism reports, so I'm going to PM Larrkin on fanfiction.net with a copy of the link. But I'll hold off till you give me the okay.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Calenlass
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Larrkin does writer better. I just...find the idea of discipline fics...odd.
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Ithil 'ael eria athan Aear
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MackenzieW
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Well, it's in the same field as all sexual kink fics to me--it should remain something personal, not put out on the internet.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Siany-T
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I agree with you there Mac, there are something you shouldn't unleash on the world.
Merlin: Thank you.
Arthur: For what? For lying to my father to save your worthless hide? If you ever put me in that situation again, Merlin, I will clap you irons myself.
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John: Sorry.
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Calenlass
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Couldn't agree more.

Larrkin's not a bad writer, mind you. But disicpline fics aren't my cup of tea, and the one that irks me is that Arwen's been entirely cut out--not one mention of her anywhere.
Man pelich cened buin rain amar?
Amman in gwael 'lain nallar?
Ithil 'ael eria athan Aear
I chîr tellin a choled le na mar
Sui cheledh geleb nadath thiathar
Calad buin nen, cîr thind gwannar
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MackenzieW
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When it comes to those stories, I never know if they like the story for the plot or for the sexual release...

I know it sucks when someone overlooks some great canon characters. There was one story I read that was pretty good except the author continually ignored Eowyn. I exchanged some PMs with her where she explained that she felt she couldn't write Eowyn properly. I told her that was fine, but to not pretend she didn't exist at all. If Eomer and Faramir are there, Eowyn is going to be mentioned or present as well.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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jules14
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Just wanted to let everyone know that my MST of the second chapter of "The Pride of Boromir" is complete. It was a long and arduous task.
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MackenzieW
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What possesses someone to think a noble warrior like Aragorn who is 87 years old would spank another noble warrior, younger though he be, as a form of discipline? They are both adults for God's sake! Everything Aragorn made Boromir confess could've been done in a tense stand-off, during a sword fight, during a wrestling match--anything but SPANKING HIM LIKE A NAUGHTY TODDLER! Humiliation does not equal romance, Luinil...or Larrkin. I only skimmed Larrkin enough to agree that Luinil plagiarized.

I'm glad you guys had that remote. I think Boromir had enough trauma without finding out what Luinil thinks this Denathor did to Denethor's eldest son.

Oh, nice shout out to Aurora Stephens, worst mother ever.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


I'm writing a novel!

A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies!

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I'm on Book Country!
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jules14
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Mackenzie, I know. If Luinil wanted violence, she could have had Aragorn and Boromir fight a duel or a wrestling match. In fact, a wrestling match could have been kinky enough, if that´s what the idiot was going for. But no; of course Aragorn, who´s acting more like an orc than a king, has to slap Boromir´s ass as though he´s a naughty little kid (which he´s certainly not!). And Boromir, of course, is portrayed with none of his usual strength and courage. Here, he´s a whiny weakling who actually CRIED because of the pain in his ass! Excuse me? Did Luinil forget that Boromir continued to fight the Uruk-hai while practically a pincushion? She doesn´t even need to read the books to know how brave and strong Boromir was!

Oh, don´t even get me started on Luinil´s portrayal of Denethor. Not only is it horrible, but it makes absolutely no sense. Aragorn says that "once Faramir was born, he turned his attentions away from [Boromir]". Which means that...Finduilas was STILL ALIVE while this was supposedly going on! So where the hell was she while Boromir was apparently suffering as a child? Why didn´t SHE show Boromir the love that his father supposedly didn´t? Actually, knowing Luinil, I don´t think I want her to answer that question. Probably Luinil thinks that Denethor raped her and murdered her, before throwing her body into the fountain in the courtyard.

Sorry for the long rant. Everything about Luinil´s plagiarized story infuriates me.

By the way, I got my pen drive to work finally! So I´ll be able to post completed versions of the next three chapters. I´ll let you know when I´ve got the chapters copied and saved, so you can report the story for plagiarism.
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Calenlass
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:blink: :sick:

I got through by only reading the bold part.

I don't understand how anyone would find this titillating. Or arousing, for that matter.

I've got nothing against discipline. But this--*dumps bleach over head and goes and reads some good fic on SoA*
Man pelich cened buin rain amar?
Amman in gwael 'lain nallar?
Ithil 'ael eria athan Aear
I chîr tellin a choled le na mar
Sui cheledh geleb nadath thiathar
Calad buin nen, cîr thind gwannar
Nan Annûn
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