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| The Pride of Boromir: The Reviews; What did you think? | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 12 2008, 07:26 PM (2,927 Views) | |
| Fishpaste | Nov 21 2008, 05:30 PM Post #46 |
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No. Just no. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| jules14 | Nov 21 2008, 10:00 PM Post #47 |
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I feel ya, Fishpaste. That about sums up what I feel about Luinil´s piece of shit. |
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| MackenzieW | Nov 22 2008, 03:57 AM Post #48 |
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Alright, Jules. You give me the word and I will start the ball rolling on getting Luinil put in her place. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Fishpaste | Nov 22 2008, 06:45 PM Post #49 |
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Soon I hope. |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| jules14 | Nov 22 2008, 11:22 PM Post #50 |
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Now! Everything is saved; you can give Luinil what she deserves now. |
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| Fishpaste | Nov 22 2008, 11:24 PM Post #51 |
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Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah *pants* |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| jules14 | Nov 23 2008, 12:09 AM Post #52 |
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Guess what? I flamed that story! I actually flamed it! I was surprised; I thought Luinil would block anonymous reviews. But she didn´t, so I finally got the chance to (hopefully) deliver a stunning blow to her sex-crazed ego. Unfortunately, anonymous reviews can be deleted, so I doubt my review will be up on the page very long. I decided to copy it here, because *I* at least want to remember it. "My God. There are just no words for this chapter...or for this horrific nightmare you call a story. How can you murder a character as you´re doing and STILL call yourself a fan of the story? Denethor. Is. Not. A. Rapist. Or. A. Pedophile. Get that into your thick head right now. He is a sad, scornful, screwed-up guy who deserves pity. Then again, you probably haven´t even picked up the books. But how in God´s name could you get the idea of Denethor as an incestuous rapist and pedophile even from the movie?! He was insane, not evil! Your Aragorn/Boromir interactions are almost as sickening. The "little fledgeling" dynamic is creepy and not arousing at all. Morever, why is Boromir not horrified at Aragorn´s pedophilia, especially after what he supposedly did with Denethor? And why is Aragorn patronizing poor Boromir like this? The spanking--God, if you don´t realize yourself how wrong it is to have one grown man spanking another as a punishment, you need serious help. Hell, I think you need serious help anyway. Have you considered changing the names of these characters and making this original fiction? Because these hormone-sodden creatures you´re writing about act nothing like their canon counterparts. They´re a disgrace to movie canon, let alone book canon. Oh, and guess what? I found out that you plagiarized Larrkin´s "As the Journey Begins". So you´re getting reported, and you deserve it. I hope that before you delete this review and your bratty little bootlickers rush to your defense, you actually come down off your high horse and realize what an offensive, disgusting piece of shit this is." |
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| Fishpaste | Nov 23 2008, 12:31 AM Post #53 |
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Woah Jules, nice one! |
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Books contain knowledge. Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. Corruption is a crime. Crime never pays. So, if I keep reading, Im gonna go broke! Proud member of the society for the Protection of Neglected Commas (SPNC) | |
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| Caranthol | Nov 23 2008, 01:17 AM Post #54 |
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*applauds* Bravo, Jules! Both for the MST and for the flame. You voiced my, and many others' thoughts so well that there's nothing to add. I hope Luinil's piece of s**t disappears quickly from internet. |
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| MackenzieW | Nov 23 2008, 07:54 AM Post #55 |
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I sent a PM to Larrkin to inform her of the plagiarism:
So, we'll see what she says and what happens. PS: Jules, bravo response, but did you respond on lotradultfanfiction or another site? |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| jules14 | Nov 23 2008, 12:23 PM Post #56 |
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Thanks. I posted on lotradultfanfiction; as far as I know, Luinil only has her plagiarized piece of garbage posted on one other site, and that one doesn´t allow access to NC-17 stories if you´re not a member. Believe me, I didn´t say half what I wanted to say in that review; I couldn´t. Because Luinil´s massacre of Denethor is seriously JUST LIKE Phantom´s Ange´s massacre of Boromir in "An Elf´s Love" version 1. The one difference is that unlike in AEL, Boromir´s handsome prince doesn´t rescue him from the rape. I remember in the PPC of "An Elf´s Love," one of the agents pointed a CAD at Boromir and because he was so out of character, it died. I would love to see what happens if someone uses a CAD on Denethor in "Pride of Boromir"; it would probably explode or perhaps melt. |
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| MackenzieW | Nov 24 2008, 02:19 AM Post #57 |
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I got a lovely response from Larrkin:
I don't know if she's referring to my reviews here or if she mistook me for you, Jules. Regarding it, maybe I just didn't see it when I went to copy the address. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| jules14 | Nov 24 2008, 11:32 AM Post #58 |
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I´m awfully sorry if I hurt Larrkin´s feelings in any way by that review. I know she´s got slash and spanking in her story, but as it´s actually well-written and Denethor is not turned into a rapist in it, I wasn´t going to flame it or even criticize it. Anyway, Larrkin, from the little I read of her story, seemed mature enough to write about homosexuality, unlike Luinil, who is basically a squee-ing fanbrat (you can tell that from her author´s notes) who is drooling over the actors getting it on. So, Larrkin, if you´re here, I´m extremely sorry; I was targeting Luinil, not you. |
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| MackenzieW | Nov 24 2008, 09:42 PM Post #59 |
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I don't think you necessarily hurt her feelings but she was nice to acknowledge that her story wasn't our cup of tea without resorting to calling us "homophobic." You are right, Larrkin's story is one we would most likely just overlook because we don't like the themes but acknowledge it is well-written. Some of my comments here were about stories like Luinil's and other sexual kink stories I've read that just twist characters to fill the author's sexual fantasies. I am sorry that she can't start action against Luinil's intellectual theft, though. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| MackenzieW | Nov 29 2008, 10:02 AM Post #60 |
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Wow, Jules, your review made her want to stop writing. Of course, then her "fans" come to her side and try to convince her to continue. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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