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| athenarena | Feb 13 2011, 11:26 PM Post #1 |
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Master of the Rings
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Story can be found here. |
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I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P. I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that! Creative Insight | |
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| MackenzieW | Feb 13 2011, 11:35 PM Post #2 |
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Erik: Huh. You guys picked it up very quick.
Erik: Or not. Mac: Logic didn't fly out quickly because logic never existed!
Oh no. What is she really? Good job, Rena! |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| athenarena | Feb 13 2011, 11:37 PM Post #3 |
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Ellen: SiME taught us quickly.
Lancelot: Thanks for that! *siddles up to Mac but is knocked out fast* Balian: Sorry about that.
I do not want to know. Thanks Mac! |
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I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P. I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that! Creative Insight | |
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| Ariel | Feb 13 2011, 11:49 PM Post #4 |
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Professional Nutcase
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Erm, I don't use disclaimers. I figure it's a given.
Erm, you couldn't do that. First off, there's the fact that you have't imbibed enough water to make up for the amount you jusr sweated off. Secondly, you would pass out before you'd ran a full day.
Nevermind the fact that she would need a pair of Hermes' winged sandals to get from Moria to Lothlorien without getting eaten by wolves.
Their hospitality is astounding.
How did Galadrial know that? When Balian was murdered, it was several years before anyone even realized where the ring was, save Gandalf.
Look you idiot, there is only one river anywhere near Rohan, and that is the River Isen. That leads to the ocean. There is no river that stretches from Lorien to Rohan. That would take you to Gondor. |
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| athenarena | Feb 13 2011, 11:50 PM Post #5 |
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Thanks Ariel for the review. |
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I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P. I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that! Creative Insight | |
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| Refia | Feb 14 2011, 11:21 AM Post #6 |
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Paying Tribute to the Past
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I've added this to the library! ![]()
I'll have you know that I seldomly to never use disclaimers. <_<
Logic does not exist. ![]()
Indeed, Balian. Differences are put aside for Sues.
Don't forget to be thorough!
A Sue trait. ![]()
Prayers don't do anything against Sues.
Nice one!
Bear with it, you're almost done.
Poor sporkers! Welcome to the world of MSTs!
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| MackenzieW | Feb 21 2011, 10:52 PM Post #7 |
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Not true. I give you exhibit A, Erik.
That's why I usually use the Pulitzer.
I've done that. Though I usually use a Southern drawl.
We already had it. It was quite lovely. *Points to Logic's grave*
That's why I'm convinced that the Suethors believe Elrond sent out an invite to his council. Good job, Rena! |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Amarth | Feb 21 2011, 11:03 PM Post #8 |
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Rising Again
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Oh, good. As long she is nowhere near Argonath.
It was Edward! Lame, I know, but I just coudn't resist.
Can anyone divine the meaning of that sentence without adding a "n" in it? Had what? Who had what?
What is a dead "Kilana"? What is the difference between being just dead and being a dead "Kilana"?
Wrong interpunction. Crappy attempt at poetic language is already well-sporked.
At least she didn't stiffen.
You decided to give up on grammar, formatting and spelling and just spork the plot, didn't you?
Capital Out Of Nowhere.
Badfic corrupted the finest of knights. Pass me those salts when you're finished with them.
If she turns out to be a redhead, prodigy with bow and sword AND gets magical talents later on...I'm not very fond of Salvatore's Miss "Wisdom" Cheese, but she doesn't deserve this.
Is it just me or does the last line sound rather...dodgy?
That is, Ellen's pain (and perhaps pain of the rest of sporking team), not Kilana's. |
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| athenarena | Feb 22 2011, 12:05 AM Post #9 |
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To save myself Amarth (and this only being my first MST) I have been sticking with the plot. I am sorry about that and will start adding in grammar, formmatting and spelling in bits from now on. I just wanted to ensure I did not headdesk so much.
Oh, you have not seen the movie King Arthur have you? What Balian is referring to is that Lancelot gets drunk freely every single night -pretty much- at Hadrian's Wall in the movie. So Balian is saying Lancelot asks for a bad headache every night. Hope you enjoyed the sporking! |
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I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P. I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that! Creative Insight | |
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| Amarth | Feb 22 2011, 12:29 AM Post #10 |
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Rising Again
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Naw, perhaps you should keep it as it is. From what I've read so far, it would take too much of anal-retentiveness to point out every mistake, and badfic itself would become unreadable. And then it wouldn't be a MST anymore, but grammar textbook. I don't think I saw that version. But you have to admit it could be interpreted in various ways... |
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"I dance the dance of the fool and pray you find me mad for if you lay hands upon the root you'll know me, without illusion and find me guilty of the truth."-Malkav's Words "LEGOLAS! YOU ARE HEIR TO THE THRONE OF MIRKWOOD! YOU CANNOT AFFORD TO HAVE YOUR WAY WITH RANDOM GIRLS IN CLOSETS!"-Glorfindel, "Never Leave Fanfiction Lying Around" by crazyroninchic "Dear Harry, If Voldemort kills us, we turn into sparkly vampires. Can we panic NOW? Sincerely, Ron" “Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the universe.E- Albert Einstein My Tolkien fanfic recs Anime and manga fanfic recs Book and game fanfic recs ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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| athenarena | Feb 22 2011, 12:32 AM Post #11 |
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The boys would not last. Oh, ok. The plot is the funniest as it is so stupid. There is no plot, it is like hello black gaping hole here.
Oh! I completely admit it, I just wanted you to understand what point of view I was coming from when I wrote that. I sent you a private message. |
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I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P. I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that! Creative Insight | |
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| UltimateEvilLord1 | Feb 22 2011, 10:23 PM Post #12 |
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I loved it! The spork, not the fic. ![]() God, I hope we survive this...your spork has made it readable so far. Keep up the good work, and don't loose whatever remnants of sanity you have! *sends survival kit to the sporkers* |
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| MackenzieW | Feb 25 2011, 01:42 AM Post #13 |
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You may want to double check your capitalization. As you can see, certain words aren't capitalized that should be.
Quatre: Would you like my flowchart? Lancelot: And our Suethor falls even further in the stupidity ladder. How can you not keep logic between two freaking sentences? I mean do we have to hit you very hard on the head so you can see the mistakes in front of yours eyes?! Please. I've seen contradictions within the same sentence!
It's better than the usual Suethor fare--CLOTHING. Good job on an oh-so-Sueish chapter. |
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You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot "Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical) "Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney "I wake in the loneliness of sunrise When the deep purple heaven turns blue And start to pray As I pray each day That I’ll hear some word from you I lie in the loneliness of evening Looking out on a silver-flaked sea And ask the moon Oh how soon, how soon Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella "Thank you, Lord You have brought us Safe to shore Be our strength and protection ever more. A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire A Thiarna dean trocaire A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder I'm writing a novel! A Guide to Fanfiction for Dummies! My Little Corner I'm on Book Country! | |
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| Refia | Feb 28 2011, 03:49 PM Post #14 |
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Paying Tribute to the Past
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Cheers!
And to spoon her to death. ![]()
Indeed. Because, newsflash: Gimli doesn't have a daughter. And even if he did, it wouldn't be a Sue!
Gimli was so happy, too, being ignored by almost every Suethor out there. ![]()
Amen.
Lancelot, abandon hope when you enter the theatre. ![]()
Yeah, listen to Galahad, Lancelot.
Too true!
Thank heavens! ![]()
I think they take turns in having the brain. <_< Once they're done with their chapter they hand the brain over to the next Suethor.
Your sympathy is much appreciated. ![]()
Take three guesses. :rolleyes: I'll do the next chapter soon. (I hope. :wasntme:) |
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| Amarth | Mar 1 2011, 09:45 PM Post #15 |
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Sure thing. No report about the attack, no message for your King and father, though you might not survive, no inquiry about whether any of your men survived, let's just pine after the useless bint.
And, let me guess, there will be no death due to haemorrhage, no permanent brain damage (though that might be due to, as Balian said, Sue not being in posession of one), or, heaven forbid, scarring, even though your average, "imperfect" human being can be seriouly endangered by a mere hit to the head...
Alas, like logic, Canon Eomer is already long-dead and buried. Poor thing simply exploded from sheer pressure of being torn between being turned into a bumbling sidekick, male chauvinistic pig and mindless lusting idiot, among others.
Now THAT sounds like something from PWP.
Welcome to the club. Shall we start a Holy Crusade?
I envy his constitution. And whatever his stomach is lined with.
"Mine must be, lyke, the obviously biggest one, without, lyke, competition." Good job! You are getting better! |
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"I dance the dance of the fool and pray you find me mad for if you lay hands upon the root you'll know me, without illusion and find me guilty of the truth."-Malkav's Words "LEGOLAS! YOU ARE HEIR TO THE THRONE OF MIRKWOOD! YOU CANNOT AFFORD TO HAVE YOUR WAY WITH RANDOM GIRLS IN CLOSETS!"-Glorfindel, "Never Leave Fanfiction Lying Around" by crazyroninchic "Dear Harry, If Voldemort kills us, we turn into sparkly vampires. Can we panic NOW? Sincerely, Ron" “Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the universe.E- Albert Einstein My Tolkien fanfic recs Anime and manga fanfic recs Book and game fanfic recs ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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