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Love me Forever reviews; And release all of it.
Topic Started: Feb 13 2011, 11:26 PM (1,038 Views)
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(Eomer) It looked down at the sleeping woman in his arms.


If you're looking to strikeout your words like I do, the proper code is:



Otherwise, what an illogical, vapid chapter!

Good job on the MST.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

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When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
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A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Thank you Mac, Amarth, Refie, Ulti, for all your reviews. They have been wonderful and so helpful

THANK YOU MAC! I was wondering how to do it so I had not other way :).
I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P.

I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that!


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You're welcome. I had difficulty doing it in the beginning as well. And then I went through the code help under the smilies. Took a few times, but I finally got it.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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I could not find it so I used the brackets.

Wait until you see what is in the next chapter :headwall:
I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P.

I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that!


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Oh Jonas. :ph43r:
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Oh Jonas is right. Ulti has already heard me ranting and raving about it.
I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P.

I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that!


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Ari used to hear some of my rants. I'm sure they were quite comical. :D
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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They were. I was practically screaming at the top of my lungs. Get the booze ready, seriously.
I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P.

I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that!


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We'll restock the cooler.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Have two.
I am currently taking donations, for Everton FC. I am afraid that our chairman has forgotten to cough up. So if you could hand me a penny and I will dance for you :P.

I am the monkey and you hold the box, so be nice with that. I don't want to dance like that!


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Two? Oh Jonas, Remus, fetch the decoy cooler.
You are the music while the music lasts--T.S. Eliot

"Stop the damn texting and pick up a book!"--Grandmama, "The Addams Family" (Musical)

"Tomorrow will be better for as long as America keeps alive the ideals of freedom and a better life." —Walt Disney

"I wake in the loneliness of sunrise
When the deep purple heaven turns blue
And start to pray
As I pray each day
That I’ll hear some word from you

I lie in the loneliness of evening
Looking out on a silver-flaked sea
And ask the moon
Oh how soon, how soon
Will my love come home to me"--"Loneliness of Evening," Cinderella


"Thank you, Lord
You have brought us
Safe to shore
Be our strength and protection ever more.
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire
A Thiarna dean trocaire
A Chriost dean trocaire"--Heartland, as performed by Celtic Thunder


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Lancelot: *heavily sarcastic* I commend you on your description and your reliance on people remembering everything from the books/movies. Get off your lazy ass, learn proper English and describe. You should have added Théodred. You should have added where they came from, how many men etc.
Balian: Ah my friend but that would require more brainpower than the Suethors have. They are too busy lusting over their counterparts to think properly and actually write. We are lucky this makes some sense part of the time.


Too true, Balian, too true.

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Balian: (as Théodred) you must finish my work and dispatch her to Hell at once. She must burn so we can sleep at night. I am sorry I did not kill the Sue, think well of me cousin. Finish the job and kill her.


Awww, we forgive you Théodred. :wub:

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Lancelot: and with such sweet sorrow, Eomer parts with his logic, sanity and canon by agreeing to it. We will mourn the loss greatly while trying to save your sister from a bashing from the Sue.


Amen.

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Ellen: Well duh. When did Eomer swallow the stupid pill?
Lancelot: I think the Suethor hid it in his mead. That is a lot of blood unfortunately not enough.
Ellen: It is not a third of her body’s blood which would kill her but a blow like that would definitely do brain damage.
Balian: Nothing to damage. There is no brain in Sue.


You get the Stupid just from getting near a Sue if you're a canon character. :nod: And too true, Balian!

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Lancelot: WTF? That last sentence makes no sentence and makes it sound extremely dodgy. My head is reeling.


Just nod and move along and ignore it. :nod: Need an aspirin?

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Galahad: WHAT?! Have you lost your senses?! That woman was going to kill you and you act like nothing happened. Where is the real Eomer being kept? We need to kill this impostor.
Ellen: Sign of Mary Sue, forgiven of everything, no matter how bad in the blink of an eye. The logical thing for Kilana to have done was to wait until she got information before attacking. Also, isn’t she supposed to have oh I don’t know a freaking concussion from that hit?!
Galahad: Thank god for alcohol. *swigs absinthe*.


Logic, how we miss thee. :cry2:

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Lancelot: They were hoping Théodred had died so he would not have to meet the Sue again.


That would have been a mercy, indeed.

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Galahad: Théodred was now more thankful than ever he was dying as he could leave this fic with not plot and littered with English mistakes. He was sorry to be leaving his family in the clutches of the harpy, I mean Sue but he did not want to be anywhere near her sickly perfection any longer.


Don't worry, Théodred, we understand.

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Ellen: eh horses do not really do that. For the animal to do that, it must first have been broken in and learnt to trust humans. He only nuzzles the hand when he is looking for a treat. You have not properly distinguished if this is a horse used to humans, a horse used to a select number of humans such as Eomer’s horse or if this horse is wild.


Come now, you expect logic in this? :huh:

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Lancelot: The Suethor can get away with it because none of her minions will know the logical stuff like us so we suffer in agony while they pour mindless praise on her, inflating her ego.


Pretty much. *sigh*

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Lancelot: Where is the PPC when you need it? We have an obvious case of a Sue and she is allowed to canon slaughter Eomer. We need back-up here people.
Ellen: Just imagine yourself killing her very slowly, very gruesomely every time you get mad at her, I find it helps me a lot.


I find that for me it doesn. :wasntme: Every time I do and open my eyes again to see it didn't really happen, I cry. :cry2:

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Ellen: When did Eomer become a knight like Balian? He is a warrior not a knight. God, you have the internet do the fecking research on the time period! Men did not act like that in Saxon, Hun and Germanic cultures from which I believe the Rohirrim come from. Lazy writer, get off your fat ass, stop staring at Eomer and do proper work.
Lancelot: That will only happen in your dreams, never in reality.


Unfortunately... :(

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Galahad: *on phone* dammit! The Department of Redundancy Department is overloaded. I cannot get through to them.


Seems to happen a lot lately!

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Galahad: Yes, onto a sword. Fall back onto a sword. Just die Sue, die!


Resistance is futile, Galahad. :(

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All sporkers: ILLEGAL AUTHOR’S NOTE.
Lancelot: And we do not forgive you. In fact we abhor you for not doing your research! My god it is mentioned in the book and hinted at in the movie! Gain a separate brain, read the book and learn something.


Lancelot, Lancelot, Lancelot... You do not ask pigs to fly either, do you? :rolleyes:

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Balian: Then how did she splash herself? Come on Suethor, can you not keep it together for two sentences?!


Few Suethors can. :nod:

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Ellen: That sounds so dodgy! Stop turning Eomer into a pervert *gagged again but continues ranting at the screen*
Balian: Looks like you have a new job Lancelot.


Aww, that's not very nice. :P Let her rage.

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*microphone cackles before Hitler comes on* No you cannot, we have taken away the suicide revolver.


Why don't you organize a Blitzkrieg on Sueland? <_<

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Balian: Are you seriously going to do this for the entire spork?!
Galahad: Yes! We must honour the true Eomer not the OOC Eomer here.


Hey, it's a noble goal, so go ahead.

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All sporkers: Of course he could not.


Good heavens, he's lost forever. :facepalm:

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Lancelot: Which Eomer misheard because you cannot hear properly at that level of sound and promptly left. He was in the bath for over an hour to get rid of the traces of the Sue.


No way an hour would be enough!

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Balian: Eomer sounds like a lovesick boy, not a Third Marshal of the Riddermark! My god, she has made him mushy. Poor guy, I will send him lots of mead and wine to make up for the canon slaughter of his character.
Ellen: *shakes head and is visibly angry* Eomer does not act like that. I think Galahad was onto something when he changed the name to it. This is only recognizable as Eomer by the freaking name!


That's common in Sue fics. :nod:

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Balian: Sleep is on vacation, I am his brother Death. How may I be of service to you?
Galahad: *As Eomer.* Release me from the Sue.
Balian: *As Death.* Granted. *kills Eomer*. It is a mercy killing it has to be done; poor guy has to be allowed some peace.


Quite frankly I don't think Death would wanna be in this story in any shape or form.

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Lancelot: *smirks but as he opens his mouth is quickly gagged*
Balian: No reference to sex at all. I do not think I could take. We have to be democratic and gag whoever is trying to corrupt us or damage our eyedrums.


Come now, no riff you make would be as damaging as the fic itself.

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Galahad: That is supposed to be split woman. New person, new line. We learnt that from her *points at Ellen* rants earlier on in this sporking. I punish you with 12 canes on each hand for each offence. So that is …
Ellen: 48 hits. I thought you guys could not count.


It's amazing what you learn when sporking. ;)

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Galahad: She had been abandoned with the Sue for hours and could not no exit.
Ellen: The Sue had stolen her real brother and she could not find him anywhere.


We need Mac here with Quatre and his tissuebox.

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Ellen: That makes absolutely no logical sense. YOU CANNOT SEE MOUTHED WORDS FROM THAT FAR AWAY. THE GOLDEN HALLS ARE TOO HIGH UP AND TOO FAR FROM THE GATE. YOU STUPID SUETHOR! *snarls*. *Knights all edge slightly*. It was not that hard to see in the freaking movie!
Balian: We are done. You need to calm down now.


No, no, let her rage! :D It's entertaining.

And yay, I caught up! :D
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Ellen: That makes no sense whatsoever. When you are heavy breathed you are either panting or wheezing. However, you are never breathing at the rate of your heart even at either. *Lancelot gags her*
Lancelot: You are only trying to hurt yourself. We know none of her writing makes sense, it never does but you are going to cause an aneurysm. *Ellen is shocked* Yes, I know what that word means.

He's a smart one, isn't he?

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Lancelot: Yes! Run into a pile of spears or impale yourself on some swords. But please! Kill yourself!/b]

"Fall back! Fall Back!"

Galahad: Yes, onto a sword. Fall back onto a sword. Just die Sue, die!

Bloodthirsty much? And as early as fourth chapter...

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Balian: How likely is it that this is a self-insert? *Ellen makes a hand gesture saying more likely but not sure.* So, should you not just force two dictionaries and two thesauruses down the Suethor’s throat to fully get your point across.

If only it was that easy...

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Balian: We are the PPC and we are here to destroy you. Please pick up your belongings and follow us. We promise it won’t hurt.

Us.

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She knew that voice, and quickly wiped away the remaining water and tears from her face.

Heaven forbid that that we look even slightly imperfect in the general vicinity of our lust object.

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Gently he reached up and wiped them away; his fingers accidentally becoming entangled in her long hair.

Well, she didn't brush it for days. Disentangling it will be a pain. :evil:

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The wind caught her hair and blew it across her face as she mouthed words to him. He nodded in understanding before he rode off with those loyal to him.

But since all that hair was across her face, he couldn't see it. He nodded to himself, understanding that he was under the thrall of a witch most vile, enchantment removed with her hair covering her bewitching visage, and went on getting as far away from her as possible.

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The doors fly open and all flee while Ellen storms out. The Knights will be ignoring her for the next few hours until her temper calms down.

They have gotten wiser than they were before.

Here's your sporking survival kit. And here is slivovitz, for temporary oblivion. *hands them over*
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Galahad: And Eowyn becomes the next victim of the Stupid. How long before we lose her canon character?
Balian: I do not think she will last the chapter in character to be honest. Look how quickly her brother went.


I think that that is a very good estimation. :nod:

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Balian: Proud that he is no where near you. Gimli is getting a knot in his stomach every mile he gets closer and closer to you.


Poor sod. He doesn't deserve this.

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Lancelot: Rohan can celebrate. The Sue is leaving. *lowers disco ball and takes out the alcohol*


I hate to break it to you, guys, but I'm pretty sure she'll come back later.

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Lancelot: And somewhere in the distance you can hear canon Eomer screaming in agony for this.
Galahad: Are you sure that is not us?


I think both, actually.

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Ellen: I think I speak for all when I say WTF?! HORSES CANNOT SPEAK YOU DIMWAT! THERE IS FANTASY AND THERE IS I AM SURE FAR UP MY OWN ASS THAT I DO NOT REALISE WHAT I AM DOING BUT I WANT ENDLESS PRAISE FOR IT!


*winces* Yeowch, sounds painful. >.<

Still, I love the rant. Rants are awesome to read. ^_^

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Balian:*while shaking head and staring at Ellen who is shaking in her seat in anger, gagged* Firstly I had to calm you down. Secondly, of course it is Gandalf. The Sue is not speshful enough to have a freaking talking horse but she brings in the most respected Istari into this. I mean, seriously does the Suethor have a flowchart next to her and is ticking of the Mary Sue traits?


Though Galahad made a good point against this, you can't help but wonder...

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Galahad: A telepathic Sue? What next? Another pet, a dog, another horse?


A Dragon? Or, heavens forbid, a bloody hipogryph?!

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Galahad: Which reminds me, we have to go on another look about for that suicide revolver. We do need it in here thank you very much!


Cut open the cushions of the seats? :dunno:

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*mini-balrog shows up* Ellen: Hello Wormtounge let us get you some bacon.


You going to put him up for adoption?

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Balian: Wait, wait is that a horse or a human? It is one or the other; even the dumbest of the dumb know that!


Maybe it's a centaur?

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Lancelot: Your lack of logic should astound me. It could have been anyone but no it has to be your Sue. It could have been a messenger from the King stating that Eomer was not banned. It could have been something or someone way more important than your Sue.


That could have been the case only in a decent fic, though.

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Ellen: With Sues you never know. They always find a way to resurrect themselves.


Or they become undead vampires. :headwall:

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Lancelot: That is too bloody convenient. Dagonet is our healer due to Romans not bothering much to heal us but he is not a skilled surgeon! Stop fixing plot holes with more plot holes!
Ellen: Also, based on this time I think it is, a skilled surgeon would be somebody who could amputate limbs well as they understand nothing about dirt or germs or anything of that nature.


And certainly not in Rohan, where they, brave as they may be, do sleep, to put it bluntly, between horse shit.

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Galahad: *sarcastically* Of course that is his first response. Not, am I going crazy, look around for the PERSON who said it, think he said it but to turn to the horse and say “you talk.” *normal* Realism just joined logic in the grave while the Suethor danced over it drunk. Speaking of which, I need to drink more.


I'm surprised logic nor realism opted for cremation.

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All sporkers: Dammit. Can she not die?!


Of course she can't. She's a Sue.

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Ellen: Said the wind. Seriously thing, if you want make sense, you say who said what. If I did that in English, I would be destroyed by my teacher. You lazy excuse for a human why must you forsake your education?!


What makes you believe she had any kind of education? :huh:

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Ellen: Three words: naked Brad Pitt.


Yeah, I may be a boy, but even I know that that was just eye candy for the squealing fangirls. :nod:

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Ellen: And we are done!


And so am I! :D

I reviewed, see, Rena? I told you I would!
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Lancelot: How many more after this?
Ellen: If the internet was correct, there is just one more although it could be updated at any point.

:cheer:

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Galahad: And Eowyn becomes the next victim of the Stupid. How long before we lose her canon character?
Balian: I do not think she will last the chapter in character to be honest. Look how quickly her brother went.

:nod:

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Lancelot: Neither did he but Saruman had ordered her to kill the greater evil that was hogging Sauron’s limelight and save Middle Earth for now.
Galahad: It was selfless and selfish; the Sue had been giving Sauron and Saruman nightmares for days. Sleep was all they wanted so Wormtongue had to do the dirty and kill her.

:clapping:

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Galahad: Did they even how locks?

Erm...I think you made a typo.

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She began to pack her stuff, she was leaving that night.

Lancelot: Rohan can celebrate. The Sue is leaving. *lowers disco ball and takes out the alcohol*

Great! Adelaide is leaving, too! Let's ask our tormentors if we can party together!

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He let out a sigh; "Yes Kilana I can speak" he said in a very strong voice, "My name is Firvain, in the language of the Elves means Dark Spirit."

Well, my Sindarin dictionary says nothing about it. Usually, "dark" would be "mor", or "doll', "dur", "morn". "-vain"is only used as plural form of suffix "-van". "Fir" is plural form of "mortal". I'm not familiar with Grey Company Elvish, though. What link did she put in her profile?

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"Yes, you are also in denial about your feelings for Lord Eomer it. I can sense these things Kilana."

Galahad: A telepathic Sue? What next? Another pet, a dog, another horse?

Sorry, Galahad...but this doesn't seem like a telepathic Sue...it's a telepathic HORSE.
Hence, it's more likely that Sue is schizophrenic.

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Eomer it ran out of his tent just in his pants, shirt and boots.

Completely dressed? Tsk. She's getting sloppy.

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Her eyes were still closed, and her breathing heavy. Eomer it placed a gentle kiss upon her forehead and one more on her lips. "You must sleep now; you have had a long journey."

He actually stops after such kiss? Just like that? If I was this 'Kilana', I would wonder about his masculinity.

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"Sleep now, sleep I will watch over you."

Galahad: Somebody likes their Twilight and the stalker antics of Edward.

Point.

Well, only one more to go. Since it wasn't updated for over a year, I doubt it will be continued.
Good luck with the epic!

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and pray you find me mad
for if you lay hands upon the root
you'll know me, without illusion
and find me guilty of the truth."
-Malkav's Words

"LEGOLAS! YOU ARE HEIR TO THE THRONE OF MIRKWOOD! YOU CANNOT AFFORD TO HAVE YOUR WAY WITH RANDOM GIRLS IN CLOSETS!"-Glorfindel, "Never Leave Fanfiction Lying Around" by crazyroninchic

"Dear Harry,

If Voldemort kills us, we turn into sparkly vampires. Can we panic NOW?

Sincerely, Ron"


“Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the universe.E- Albert Einstein

My Tolkien fanfic recs

Anime and manga fanfic recs

Book and game fanfic recs

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